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高中英语 Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines教师用书 外研版必修

高中英语 Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines教师用书 外研版必修

Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines在“数字化时代”的今天,通过网络或手机获取新闻信息已成为许多网民的一个越来越普及的日常活动。

网络这种媒体形态一方面最大程度地尊重读者的阅读习惯,另一方面又结合了互联网快速、方便的特性,因此,它在社会生活中的普及将成为一种趋势。

Newspaper,TV and radio have been our major resources to know what's going onaround the world. But modern technologykeeps bringing new ways of communicatingthat go beyond these traditional media.First we have the Internet. By simplyclicking the mouse,we can have access towebsites and get the updated information weneed. And the latest mobile news servicemeans our cellphone can be another channelto connect with the world.Cellphone newspapers are a booming industry in China.Nowadays the major media all provide the electronic editions to more than cellphone users in the country.While the digital version sent to the mobile phone makes it easy for us to keep up with the latest news.Contents coming up with this convenience cannot compete with that of the printed media. Because of limited length and space,there are not detailed,in­depth reports on the cellphone newspaper. So keep updated with your mobile and grab a newspaper for more.1.update vt. 更新2.mean vt. 意思是;意味着3.booming adj. 急速发展的4.keep up with 紧跟;跟上5.content n. 内容6.convenience n. 方便,便利7.compete v. 竞争8.in­depth adj. 深入的,全面1.What resources do people use to know what's going on around the world?2.What are the disadvantages of cellphone newspapers?【答案】 1.Newspaper,TV,radio,computer and cellphone.2.There are not detailed,in­depth reports on the cellphone newspaper as a result of limited length and space.Section ⅠIntroduction & Reading and Vocabulary -Preparing根据提示写出下列单词1.n.(新闻报道等的)标题2.n. 经济3.n. 政治4.n. 轨道vt. 绕轨道飞行5.n. 飞行;班机6.n. 祝贺7.adv. 在船(飞机、火车、公共汽车)上8.vt. 欢迎9.adj. 历史性的10.n. 成就;功业;伟绩【答案】 1.headline 2.economy 3.politics4.orbit 5.flight 6.congratulation 7.aboard8.welcome 9.historical 10.achievement看单词学构词:­al为常见的形容词后缀,名词后加­al可构成形容词。

高中英语Module5NewspapersandMagazinesSectionWriting新闻报

高中英语Module5NewspapersandMagazinesSectionWriting新闻报

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________
第四步:句式升级造亮点 1.用名词短语作同位语合并句 1 和句 2
On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.
6.当他们该离开了的时候,老人们感谢他们的好意。(when 引导时 间状语从句) When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.
7.这是如此美好的一天,他们将会永远记得。(and 连接两个并列 分句)
二、增分佳句 A.导语常用句式
1.On Sunday, September 28, 2008, three Chinese astronauts landed safely back on the earth. 2008 年 9 月 28 日,星期天,三名中国宇航员安全地返回地球。

2015年秋高中英语 Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines Secti

2015年秋高中英语 Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines Secti
2015年秋高中英语 Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines Section Two Grammar 2课件 外 研版必修
报纸的定义和功能
报纸是一种印刷出版物,被用来传递新闻和信息。它们可以提供当前事件、 专业文章、评论、广告和其他相关内容。
报纸的分类
大报
大报通常是一份全国性报纸,通常有大量页面, 覆盖广泛的新闻和专栏。
小报
小报通常比大报小,更注重本地新闻和娱乐内 容。
商业报纸
商业报纸主要关注经济和商业方面的新闻和分 析。
专业报纸
专业报纸是针对特定行业或领域的读者,提供 专业知识和深度报道。
报纸的历史和发展
1
公告牌时代
最早的报纸可以追溯到公告牌和手写传单的时代,用来传递政治、商业和社会信 息。
2
印刷术的出现
印刷术的发明使得报纸的传播更加容易和广泛,成为主要的信息来源。
3
数字时代
随着互联网的普及,数字报纸应运而生,成为人们获取新闻和信息的主要途径。
报纸的优点和缺点
1 优点
报纸提供深度报道和分析,让读者更好地了 解事件。它们也提供多种新闻类别,满足不 同读者的需求。
2 缺点
报纸的信息可能过时,无法及时反映发展的 事件。此外,纸质报纸也对环境造成了影响。
报纸的阅读技巧
标题浏览
浏览报纸的标题可以快速了解 新闻内容,并选择感兴趣的文 章。
阅读副标题
副标题可以提供更多的背景信 息,帮助您决定是否要阅读完 整的文章。
注意前言和结论
前言和结论通常概括了整个文 章的要点,可以帮助您更好地 理解文章。
报纸的未来趋势
数字化新闻
移动阅读
个性化新闻

高中英语Module5NewspapersandMagazinesSectionOtherParts

高中英语Module5NewspapersandMagazinesSectionOtherParts

replace vt.代替;取代;把……放回原处
replace ... with/by ...
The Times is the most famous of the quality newspapers. It began in 1785. It ⑬politician /ˌpɒlə' tIʃn/n.政治家 is read by important people such as ⑭lawyer n.律师 politicians⑬,lawyers⑭ and businessmen. ⑮found /fɑʊnd/vt.创立;建立 The Sun, founded in 1964⑮, is the most founded in 1964是过去分词短 successful of the popular newspapers. 语作定语。 Around ⑯ four million people read it ⑯around prep.大约 every day and it sells more than any other daily newspaper.
be doing ... when ... “正在 做 …… 这 时……”。
I was walking along _th__e_r_i_v_e_r_w__h_e_n I heard
a boy crying for help. 我正沿着河边走,突然 听到了一个男童的呼 救声。
然,他大吃一惊。
先背熟
答案:1~4 DBAA
一、这样记单词
记得准·写得对
Ⅰ.基础词汇
1. astronomer n.
天文学家
2. autograph n. 3. part n. 4. produce vt.

高一英语外研社Module5NewspapersandMagazines知识精讲

高一英语外研社Module5NewspapersandMagazines知识精讲

高一英语外研社Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines【本讲教育信息】一.教课内容:Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines教课目的:经过学习本模块来熟习新闻的构造,认识新闻的特色,进而学会一些有关的词句。

单词:headline photograph celebrity economy politicsphotographer cosmonaut navigator universesailor orbit capsule flight congratulationsabroadwelcome historical achievement replace alienamateur astronomer autograph delighted spaceshiptelescope actor backstage part beliefdisbelief evidence cultural financial reviewroyal found produceaeronautfan politician短语:in total now that believe in be similar to 重点词语:in total now that believe in词语重点概括:1. The flight is a“complete success”.success n.We all know that failure is the mother of success.The show is a great success.Wish you a success.He was not a success as a teacher.Of her plays, three were successes and one was a failure.successful adj. (be successful in )successfully adv.succeed v.2. Professor Wen Jiabao telephoned the Control Center to offer his congratulations.congratulation n.Congratulations on your success.I offer you my hearty congratulations.---It’ s your birthday. Congratulations!---Thank you.congratulate v.congratulate sb. on sth./ doingHe congratulated us on getting married.I congratulate you on your great invention.congratulate/ celebrate v.People would get together to celebrate their harvest.3.When Yang took off from Jiuquan in northwest China at 9 am yesterday,China became the third nation to send a man into space.take off1)The plane takes off at 8 in the morning.The plane took off very smoothly.2) Take your coat off.3)You should take your toys off the table.4)I ’ d like to take off home tomorrow.5)I ’ d like to take three days off.4.In total, these astronauts have spent more than 26,000 days in space.in total = in allWe have learned 2000 English words in total/all so far.The cost of the various repairs amounts in total to over $100.total adj./ n./ v.What’ s the total population of China?He is a total stranger.The cost totaled up to $1000.5.Amateur astronomer David Bates was looking at the moon throughhis telescope last night when he got a big surprise.1) be doing when⋯I was cooking the other day when someone knocked at the door.We were having our English lesson when a boy made a face to makethe others laugh.I was watching TV when he came in.2) surprise n.To my surprise, he came later than usual.His success was a great surprise.What a surprise to see you here.6.Since no one else saw the aliens, not many people believe Mr. Bates.You don’ t believe in aliens, do you?believe/ believe in1) When I saw it, I just could not believe my eyes.I find it impossible to believe a single word you say.I believe that they will win the match, won’ t they?2)You can believe in him, he is an honest man.We believe in Marxism.belief n.7. We ’ d be delighted to have you work with us.delight v.I ’m very delighted with the result.delight n.8. Nowthat I have madethis first visit,I hope I can come manymore times.Now (that)⋯conj.= sinceNow (that) you have finished the work, you are free to do what you like.Now that you mention it, I do remember.9.Which of the following can be replaced by the word because?replace v.She replaced the book on the shelf after she finished reading it.He has replaced Mr. Brown as President.take the place ofNothing can take the place of the family he has lost.10.Do you think the word as and since sound more or less formalthan because?more or lessI have more or less succeeded and they haven’ t.It took me more or less a whole day to paint the ceiling.It ’ s an hour ’s journey, more or less.法知学1.状从句1)as/ when/ whileMother was worried because little Alice was ill, especially as/when/ while father was away in France.2) He looked behind from time to time as he went.As time goes on, it’ s getting warmer and warmer.3)She thought I was talking about her daughter, while in fact, Iwas talking about my daughter.4)He was about to leave when the telephone rang.5) the time⋯/ the moment⋯ / by the time⋯/ next time⋯/ the first time ⋯/ the last time⋯/ immediately⋯Be sure to call on me next time you come to town.By the time he was 14, Einstein had learned advanced mathematics all by himself.She rushed into the room immediately/ the moment she heard the noise.He left me a good impression the first time I met him.2. as/ because/ since/ now that/ considering that⋯/seeing that⋯I do it because I like it.He couldn ’t have seen me, because I was not there.Seeing that quite a few people were absent, we decided to put the meeting off.Now that/ Since you are all here, let’ s try and reach a decision.As she was ill, she didn’t come to the party.Considering that they are just beginners, they are doing quite a goodjob.【模】一.翻1.共, _________________2.既然 _________________3.相信_________________4.和⋯⋯相像 _________________5.⋯⋯ 圈 _________________6.拍⋯⋯的照片 _________________7.起 _________________8.数百万的 _________________9.出⋯⋯的信息 _________________10.在月球上 _________________11.着 ________________12.很高做⋯⋯ _________________13.等候 _________________14.走出 ________________15.把⋯⋯分红⋯⋯ ___________________16.增添 _________________17.迎到某地 _________________18.是某人第一次做⋯⋯ __________________19.或多或少 __________________20.在⋯⋯开始 ________________二.活用1.The __________( 条 )were full of news of the bank robbery.2.________( 祝 )on your success.puter is one of the greatest scientific ________(成就 )4.Tom is an _______( 余的 )singer.5. Most people in this country don’t think highly of ______(政治家)三.单项选空1. ---Hi, Mike.I ’ ve just got an A in the examination.---________A. Can you ready?B. Celebrate you!C. Congratulations!D. With pleasure.2.----How come a simple meal like this costs so much?----We have _______in your bill the costs of the teapot you broke just.A. increasedB. includedC. obtainedD. charged3.Dixon turned out to be a tiresome cook, and by the end of the weekwe had ________ decided to take turns at the job and give him somethingelse to doA. more or lessB. by and byC. now and thenD. once in a while4. In _______, the northerners are keen on dumplings while the southernersare fond of rice.A. commonB. totalC. generalD. particular5. The companyhad invited 50 guests to the party, but only half_____ showed up.A. more thanB. less thanC. as manyD. as much6.The boys respected their father ________, although he was strict,he was fair.A. thatB. forC. becauseD. since7.---Don ’ t you believe me?---______, I ’ ll believe _______ you say.A. No; whateverB. Yes; no matter whatC. No; no matter whatD. Yes; whatever8.---Congratulations to you! I hear you got the first in the English SpeechContest---_________A. Don ’t mention it. I think that’s only my past .B. Thanks. But I think I could have done better.C. There ’s nothing to cheer for.D. No. it’s a piece of cake.9. He _____great delight in laughing at others .A. takesB. putsC. givesD. makes10.________that my head had cleared, my brain was also beginning towork much better.A. ForB. NowC. SinceD. So11. Bill may ______find it hard to get on well with them.A. certainlyB. likelyC. possiblyD. probably12. It is the first time that she has been here, _______?A. isn ’t itB. hasn ’t itC. isn ’t sheD. hasn ’ t she13. WangGang_______his leg when he __________ in a football match against another school.A. broke; playedB. was breaking ; was playingC. broke ; was playingD. was breaking; played14. This book ________ 20 articles, ________ 3 written by my father.A. contains; includesB. includes; containingC. contains; includingD. includes; contains15. You ’d better ________ the good apples ________ the bad ones.A. divide; intoB. separate; fromC. select; amongD. choose; between四.完型填空Anna arrived far too early. Usually she left things to the last minute,1 today was a very special occasion. It was almost2 by getting there an hour beforehand that she3 to cause the plane to arrive sooner.4__ raced through her mind. “Do I look all right?Will he notice that I ’m wearing a 5trouser suit?Will he even6me?” After all,it was a year almost to the day since she had 7seen Joe. She fished a 8 out of her handbagand inspected her face. Too much make-up? Joe had 9 made any comment butshe knewthat he did not approve of (同意)heavy make-up—“ gilding the lily ”, he 10 it. It was funny how much importance she attached to11 a good impression on him. After all,friends do not judge each other by12.All the same, it was the first meeting after a long separation, and she wantedeverything to13right.Looking out of the window, Joe14 a first glimpse, through a break inthe15 , of the town far below. Certainly it was very flattering thatthey had16him to be the guest lecturer at their Autumn Congress yetagain. The Chairman of the Organizing Committee, as a matter of courtesy(礼貌),had17to meet him at the airport, as he had done on previous occasions. This time,18, it was not necessary,19because Joe wasquite familiar with the city, but mainly because Anna had said that shecould 20the afternoon off in order to come and meet him.1.A. and B. but C. for D. as2.A. because B. since C. as if D. when3.A. thought B. liked C. had D. hoped4.A. Idea B. Facts C. Thoughts D. Matters5.A. new B. strange C. latest D. single6.A. like B. recognize C. terrify D. tell7.A. before B. recently C. last D. most8.A. purse B. handkerchief C. mirror D. book9. A. never B. almost C. often D. regularly10.A. told B. called C. saw D. thought11.A. offering B. taking C. having D. making12.A. appearance B. clothes C. make-up D. looking13.A. come across B. turn up C. go off D. get out14.A. caught B. left C. enjoyed D. met15.A. air B. rain C. train D. clouds16.A. employed B. invited C. told D. informed17.A. offered B. arrived C. intended D. attempted18.A. therefore B. however C. instead D. as well19.A. luckily B. really C. partly D. separately20.A. put B. make C. take D. leave五.阅读理解Haikou: A shark was killed after being dragged to shore at Yalong Berthbeach in Sanya, South China ’s Hainan Province, on Sunday afternoon.It was the first time a shark had been caught in the beach area, a popular tourist site in Hainan.Local fishermen said they caught the 3-meter-long,l-ton shark by chance when they were fishing in seawater 1,000 meters deep near the beach.Police temporarily(临时) protected the shark while oceanographers decided whether it was a species belonging to State protection.Fishermen later killed and sold the shark after oceanographers confirmed that it was a whale shark and therefore not under State protection.The shark was believed to have drifted into the area from the deep seadue to strong waves caused last week by Typhoon Imbudo. It had no open injuries but experts said they believed it suffered from internal(内部的) bleeding.Local police officer Fu Chenggeng said beachgoers should not feelthreatened by sharks because the fish never attack human beings on their own initiative.Fu said he had never heard of any shark attacks at the Sanya beach since he first started work there eight years ago.However, police said they would improve the security system to safeguard tourists ’ safety on the beach.1. A possible title of the article should be.A. Tourists in DangerB. Killing Whale SharkC. Shark Caught in Beach AreaD. Whale Shark in Danger2. From the article it can be learned.A. the shark was caught because of obvious injuriesB. the number of the whale shark may be smallC. Typhoon Imbudo may have brought the shark to the areaD. it ’s not unusual to see a shark on the beach3. The underlined word“confirmed”probably means.A. saidB. believedC. thoughtD. made sure六. 短文改错The moment I entered my room this morning, I 1.couldn ’t believe that my house had been broken. After I 2.check my personal belongings, I found with great sadness 3.that seven hundreds U.S. dollars and one diamond necklace 4 .had stolen. This necklace is one of my favorite 5.and cherished gifts from my dear grandmother, which 6.passed away when I was very little. I don’t know a bout7.exactly how the thief entered my house, so I saw that8.a piece of glass in left windows had been broken, and I9.am sure the thief may have entered or left from there.10.答案一.翻1. in total2. now that3. believe in4. be similar to5. make an orbit of6. take a photograph of7. take off8. millions and millions of9. send a message of10. on the moon11. land at12. be delighted to13. wait for 14. get out of15. divide into16. add to⋯17. welcome to⋯18. It’ s the first time that sb. have done19. more or less20. at the start of二.活用1. headlines 4. amateur2. Congratulations5. politicians3. achievements三.填空:1—5 CBACC 6 — 10 CDBAB11—15 CACCB四.完型填空:1—5 BCDCA 6 — 10 BCCAB11—15 DACAD16 — 20 BABCC五.理解1.C2.C3.D六.短文改:1.正确2. broken后加into3. check改checked4. hundreds改hundred5. had后加been6. which改who7.去掉about8. so改but9. in后加the10. may改must。

Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines-高中英语必修2

Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines-高中英语必修2

Even better,researchers at源自the University of
Tubingen in Germany found that when our social
media connections read these happy stories,they

题 in turn become happier,and thus more likely to
Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines
In a new study,researchers tracked the
online reach of about 7,000 articles from The

题 New York Times over a threemonth period.

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also share happy stories. Happiness,as it turns

文 out,is contagious(会蔓延的). The other side of


this research is that negative stories are also
contagious. When people read negative posts or
stories shared by their friends , they are more
likely to also share negative posts.
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Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines
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高中英语 Module 5 Newspapers and MagazinesIntroduction and reading课件 外研版必修2

高中英语 Module 5 Newspapers and MagazinesIntroduction and reading课件 外研版必修2

Let’s enjoy the excellent moment of Yang Liwei and Shenzhபைடு நூலகம்u V.
Discuss these questions in groups of four. 1. Do you remember the news about
3. The other man aboard the Space T Station is a Russian cosmonaut.
4. China received messages of congratulations from all over the world. T
5. Sean O’Keefe works for the United Nations. F
Part1 Part2 Part3
Listen to the tape and decide if the sentences are true or false.
1. The taikonaut was in space for twentyone hours. F
2. One of the astronauts aboard the International Space Station was born in China. F
Use proper words to fill the blank.
3.front page
4. headline
2.front cover 1. article
5.photograph
Read the following words and divide them into these groups.
Introduction and reading

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高中英语-Module-5-Newspapers-and-Magazines-Task-Writin
of information about my favourite pop star/sport/computer games.
7/10
A possible version:
My favourite newspaper is 21st Century, it can supply the latest information, and it is full of knowledge and interest. From it we can learn lively and inal English.
10/10
Task
Write about your favourite newspaper or magazine
1/10
Skills building 1: Stating opinions and preparing materials
2/10
1.Work in groups to discuss about your favorite newspaper or magazine. You can make a list of the newspapers and magazines that you often read. You also can make a note how often you read them, then choose the one you are most interested in as your favourite.
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There are as many as 8 columns, with rich contents, such as sports and games, pop stars, computer games and colorful pictures.
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Module 5 Newspapers and MagazinesSection Ⅴ Writing-新闻报道一、基本结构新闻报道是对最近发生的事情的报道,其目的是为人们提供最新的信息。

新闻报道的结构一般分为四个部分:标题、导语、主体、结语。

1.标题:标题是新闻的题目,是编辑对最有新闻价值的内容的浓缩、概括。

为了撷取新闻要点、诠释新闻意义、吸引读者阅读,好的标题应该简洁明了。

2.导语:导语是消息开头的第一句话或第一段,它扼要地揭示出新闻的核心内容。

3.主体:主体是新闻的主要部分,它用充足的事实表现主题,是对导语内容的进一步展开和阐述。

4.结语:一般是最后一句话或者一段话,通常对全文内容作概括性的总结,有时作者根据报道在结语中提出令人深思的问题。

二、增分佳句A.导语常用句式1.On Sunday, September 28, 2008, three Chinese astronauts landed safely back on the earth.2008年9月28日,星期天,三名中国宇航员安全地返回地球。

2.A big fire broke out in the forest in the southwest of the United States late in November, 1992.1992年11月末,美国西南部的森林发生了一场大火。

3.“Saving the Earth” Conference, held in Dalian, came to a close last Saturday.在大连举行的“拯救地球”大会上周六落下了帷幕。

B.主体常用句式1.The government sent 3,000 firefighters and policemen there to help them move to a safe place.政府派了3 000名消防人员和警察到那儿去帮助他们搬到安全的地方。

2.The fire lasted over three weeks, causing a damage of at least twenty million dollars.大火持续了三个多星期,造成至少两千万美元的损失。

C.结语常用句式1.In a word, it is necessary for us to learn to protect ourselves.总之,我们学会保护自己是有必要的。

2.I feel sad. If we all do something for them, things will be sure to get better.我感到伤心。

如果我们都为他们做些什么,事情一定会变得更好。

3.I believe we can certainly overcome the disaster with the public and the government working together.我相信,由于公众和政府的共同努力,我们一定能够战胜灾难。

[题目要求]5月1日,高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和Zhang Hua 去阳光敬老院 (Sunshine Nursing Home) 开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫卫生、与老人聊天等)。

假如你是校英语报的记者,请按下列要点用英语写一则 100词左右的新闻报道。

1.时间、地点、人物、活动;2.老人们的反应;3.简短评论。

注意:报道的标题和记者姓名已给出(不计入总词数)。

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ByChenJie, SchoolNewspaper第一步:审题构思很关键一、审题1.确定体裁:本文为新闻报道,属于应用文;2.确定人称:本文的主要人称为第三人称;3.确定时态:新闻报道主要用一般过去时。

二、构思第一部分,报道事实。

第二部分,老人的反应。

第三部分,简短评论。

第二步:核心词汇想周全1.respectfully 恭敬地2.do_voluntary_work/volunteer_to_help_others做志愿者工作3.welcome_sb._warmly/give_a_warm_welcome_to_sb./give_sb.a_warm_welcome 热烈欢迎某人4.present_sb._with_sth./present_sth._to_sb./present_sb.sth. 给某人献某物5.clean_the_windows 清洗窗户6.sweep/clean_the_floor 扫地7.chat_with_sb./have_a_chat_with_sb. 与某人聊天8.thank_sb._for_one’s_kindness/be_grateful_to_sb._for_one’s_kindness 感谢某人的好意9.bring_joy/happiness_to_sb./make_sb._happy给某人带来快乐10.enrich_one’s_life 充实某人的生活第三步:由词扩句雏形现1.Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 是高二(3)班的学生。

(主系表结构)Li_Yue_and_Zhang_Hua_are_students_from_Class_Three,_Grade_Two.2.5月1 日,他们去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动。

(and连接两个并列谓语)On_May_Day,_they_went_to_Sunshine_Nursing_Home_and_did_some_voluntary_work.3.他们一到达就受到了热烈的欢迎,而且他们恭敬地给老人献了鲜花和水果。

(and连接两个并列分句)Upon_their_arrival,_Li_Yue_and_Zhang_Hua_were_warmly_welcomed,_and_respectf ully,_they_presented_the_elderly_with_flowers_and_fruits.4.然后,他们立即开始工作,清洗窗户并扫地。

(现在分词作伴随状语)Then,_they_started_working_at_once,_cleaning_the_windows_and_sweeping_the_f loor.5.一切都做完了,他们坐在院子里和老人聊天。

(after引导时间状语从句)After_everything_had_been_done,_they_sat_in_the_yard_chatting_with_the_elde rly_people.6.当他们该离开了的时候,老人们感谢他们的好意。

(when引导时间状语从句)When_it_was_time_for_the_volunteers_to_leave,_the_elderly_people_thanked_th em_for_their_kindness.7.这是如此美好的一天,他们将会永远记得。

(and连接两个并列分句)It_was_a_very_beautiful_day_and_they_would_remember_it_forever.8.他们所做的给别人带来了快乐并且也充实了自己的生活。

(what引导主语从句) What_they_did_has_brought_joy_to_others_and_enriched_their_own_lives.第四步:句式升级造亮点1.用名词短语作同位语合并句1和句2On_May_Day,_Li_Yue_and_Zhang_Hua,_students_from_Class_Three,_Grade_Two,_wen t_to_Sunshine_Nursing_Home_and_did_some_voluntary_work.2.用独立主格结构改写句5Everything_done,_they_sat_in_the_yard_chatting_with_the_elderly_people.3.用such ...that ...结构改写句7It_was_such_a_beautiful_day_that_they_would_remember_it_forever.第五步:过渡衔接联成篇Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly On_May_Day,_Li_Yue_and_Zhang_Hua,_students_from_Class_Three,_Grade_Two,_wen t_to_Sunshine_Nursing_Home_and_did_some_voluntary_work._Upon_their_arrival,_Li_ Yue_and_Zhang_Hua_were_warmly_welcomed,_and_respectfully,_they_presented_the_el derly_with_flowers_and_fruits._Then,_they_started_working_at_once,_cleaning_the _windows_and_sweeping_the_floor._Everything_done,_they_sat_in_the_yard_chatting _with_the_elderly_people.When_it_was_time_for_the_volunteers_to_leave,_the_elderly_people_thanked_th em_for_their_kindness._It_was_such_a_beautiful_day_that_they_would_remember_it_ forever.Li_Yue_and_Zhang_Hua_were_very_happy._What_they_did_has_brought_joy_to_othe rs_and_enriched_their_own_lives.ByChenJie, SchoolNewspaper。

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