2020近三年中考英语北京满分作文解析
2020年北京市中考作文解析及范文点评
2020年北京市中考作文解析及范文点评一、【真题再现】1、根据情境，按要求写作。
（10分）校学生会准备出一期“献给母校”的专刊。
主编邀请你以一个初三毕业生的名义为“感恩”栏目写一段话，向在三年的学习生活中帮助和关爱过你的人表示感谢。
请你从班主任、任课教师、校医、保安、图书管理员中任选一个，表达感谢的心意。
要求：（1）将你选定的对象填写在答题卡的横线上。
（2）内容要真实具体，语言要准确得体。
（3）字数在150-200之间。
（4）不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。
2、根据题目，按要求写作。
（40分）从下面两个题目中任选一题，写一篇文章。
题目一：读书学习，科技制作，文体爱好，社会实践……这里，一定会有属于你自己的世界。
这个世界，陶冶你的性情，提升你的境界。
请你以“这里有属于我的世界”为题目，写一篇文章。
题目二：《宜居城市》这篇文章，使你对宜居城市的生活和建设有了一定的了解。
请你发挥想象，以你心目中的宜居城市为背景，以“宜居城市里的故事”为题目，写一篇文章。
要求：（1）将所选题目抄写在答题卡上。
（2）不限文体（诗歌除外）。
（3）字数在600-800之间。
（4）不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。
二、【思路解析】这是一次完美体现语文写作测试目的的作文命题。
三个题目紧扣课标中关于写作“要有真情实感，力求表达自己对自然、社会、人生的感受、体验和思考”的要求，既体现了语文的实用性，又能体现语文的人文性，由提供材料到自主选择材料，适应了学生的不同层次与个性，完美地实现了语文写作测试的目的。
要写好这篇作文，应从以下三个方面充分认识题目，才能充分发挥考生的写作水平。
1、读懂提示信息。
小作文是根据情境作文，要明确题目中“情境”在提示中的表述，即主题是感恩，对象是在校园中和自己密切相关的人物：班主任、任课教师、校医、保安、图书管理员，缘由是在三年的学习生活中帮助和关爱过自己。
大作文的第一个题目“这里有属于我的世界”,提示中明确了范围：读书学习，科技制作，文体爱好，社会实践……提示了立意点：这个世界，陶冶了自己的性情，提升了自己的境界。
2020年北京中考英语试题(解析版)
【答案】C
【解析】
【详解】——句意：你知道视频会议什么时候开始吗?——明天上午九点。
考查宾语从句。问句是一个含宾语从句的复合句，宾语从句中从句语序应该为陈述句语序，因此排除B和D；根据答语“At 9 o'clock tomorrow morning.”可知询问的应该是将来的事，用一般将来时，选项A是一般过去时，故选C。
8.I ___________ on the computer when Frank called me last night.
A.workB.will workC.was workingD.am working
【答案】C
【解析】
【详解】句意：弗兰克昨晚打电话给我时，我正在用电脑工作。
考查过去进行时。work工作,动词原形；will work一般将来时；was working过去进行时；am working现在进行时。根据题干中“when Frank called me last night”可知此处表示当某件事情发生的时候，另一件事情正在进行，when引导的从句用一般过去时，主句用过去进行时。故选C。
ually I make breakfast for my family ___________ Saturdays.
A.AtB.inC.onD.to
【答案】C
【解析】
【详解】句意：通常我在星期六为我的家人做早餐。
本题考查介词。at+钟点，表示在几点钟；in+年/月，表示在某年或某月；on+星期/具体的日子，表示在星期几或某一天；to向。on Saturdays在星期六，故选C。
12.— Do you know ____________?
2020年中考英语 满分作文评析(1)
满分作文评析北京卷【真题呈现】根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。
信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所要完成的回信内。
所给英文提示词语仅供选用。
请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫李华，你们学校为配合北京申办冬奥会，倡导人人都做文明中学生。
请你根据以下提示，给你的英国笔友Peter写一封邮件，告诉他你认为做个文明中学生什么是重要的，你通常是怎么做的，以及你的感受。
提示词语：think, smile, respect, say hello to, wait in line, on time, happy·What is important for a middle school student?(Being polite to others? Following rules?...)·What do you usually do?·How do you feel?Dear Peter,How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good student. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________Anything new at your school?Yours,Li Hua【命题分析】本题是写一封电子邮件，体裁属于应用文。
北京市2020年中考英语试题卷解析
北京市2020年中考英语试题卷解析2020年北京市中考英语学科试题的命制以《义务教育英语课程标准（2011年版）》为依据，坚持稳中求进，在秉承2019年命题思路的基础上，继续优化评价方式和手段。
01贴近时代，“战疫”入题2020年是非同寻常的一年，全国各地抗击新冠肺炎疫情涌现出无数可歌可泣的人和事。
北京市初三学子在此期间利用市、区、校三级资源开展复习备考，学习方式不同以往，学习效果也不尽相同。
试题充分考虑学生居家学习带来的学情变化，注重试卷关键节点的衔接，使难度梯度更平缓，致力于给考生获得感，发挥中考试题导向作用，体现中考试题的教育责任感。
2020年中考英语试题充分考虑“疫情”和“学情”，将“战疫”元素巧妙融入试卷。
例如，“阅读理解”A篇是青少年在网络论坛上分享在疫情期间（通过发帖时间体现）尽己所能帮助老人的文本，充分体现了疫情期间中学生的责任与担当。
“文段表达”题目二以“积累”为主题，引导学生反思、评价自己的学习。
如果考生在疫情期间认真学习，注重积累，厚积薄发，是能够在中考中取得理想成绩的。
试卷其他部分都与疫情期间的生活紧密相关。
试题既置入时代背景，贴近时代，又具有长期的研究价值。
02立德树人，育人为本试题注重对考生情感态度价值观的正向引导，坚持立德树人、育人为本，考生的答题过程就是一次潜移默化的接受人文熏陶的过程。
例如，“完形填空”选文以第一人称记叙了一位中学生追求自立、利用假期打工并在此过程中成长的经历。
故事引导学生关注人与自我，积极参与社会实践，并在实践中感悟做人与做事的道理，引导青少年健康成长。
“阅读理解”B篇讲述了Emma生活中的一次发现与成长之旅。
Emma跟着父母从农场搬家到小镇上，但是在新学校没有交到朋友，感到很孤独。
在一次参观自然中心的活动中，她和性格开朗的同学Julia一起帮助饲养员喂松鼠，最后接受饲养员的邀请，将成为自然中心的志愿者。
在这次活动中，她不仅发现了自我价值，还收获了友谊。
2020年北京市中考英语试卷(附答案与解析)
绝密★启用前2020年北京市高级中等学校招生考试英 语考生须知：1.本试卷共12页，共五道大题，39道小题。
满分60分。
考试时间90分钟.2.在试卷和草稿纸上准确填写姓名、准考证号、考场号和座位号.3.试题答案一律填涂或书写在答题卡上，在试卷上作答无效.4.在答题卡上，选择题、作图题用2B 铅笔作答，其他试题用黑色字迹签字笔作答.5.考试结束，将本试卷、答题卡和草稿纸一并交回.知识运用（共14分）一、单项填空（共6题，每题0.5分）1. Mr. Jackson is a popular writer, and we all like reading ________ books. A. hisB. herC. theirD. your2. Usually I make breakfast for my family ________ Saturdays. A. AtB. inC. onD. to3. Wash your hands before meals, ________ you may get ill. A. andB. butC. orD. so4. —________ you give me a hand? I can’t move the box by myself. —No problem. A. CouldB. ShouldC. MustD. Need5. —________ do you visit your grandparents, Tom? —Twice a month. A How muchB. How oftenC. How longD. How soon6. Zhaozhou Bridge is one of ________ stone bridges in the world. A. oldB. olderC. oldestD. the oldest7. If you take this train, you ________ in Shanghai in five hours. A. arriveB. will arriveC. arrivedD. have arrived8. I ________ on the computer when Frank called me last night. A. workB. will workC. was workingD. am working9. We ________ each other since I came to Beijing, but we send emails very often. A. don’t seeB. didn’t seeC. won’t seeD. haven’t seen10. —What’s that noise, Sam?—My little brother ________ with his toy car now. A. will playB. is playingC. playsD. played11. The kite ________ in China more than 2 000 years ago. A. inventsB. inventedC. is inventedD. was invented12. —Do you know ________? —At 9:00 tomorrow morning.A. when the video meeting beganB. when did the video meeting beginC. when the video meeting will beginD. when will the video meeting begin二、完形填空（共8分，每小题1分）At the end of my first year of high school, I realized I needed to find a summer job. I was tired of having to ask my parents for 13 . I wanted to go to theshopping center or movies with friends without having to ask for $20 from my parents. I imagined having a job at a store or at a summer camp where I could play games with children. But what actually happenedwas 14 . The only job I managed to find was cleaning up tables at a local restaurant.------------在---------------------此---------------------卷---------------------上---------------------答---------------------题---------------------无--------------------效----------------毕业学校_____________ 姓名________________ 考生号_______________ ________________ ___________At first, the idea of clearing tables upset me. The thought of getting up at dawn（黎明）to go clean up after people made me 15 ever asking for a job. The first day was terribly busy. I was running around, racing to get a table ready for the waiting cus tomers. I’ll never forget how 16 I felt that day, but I’ll also never forge t sitting down for lunch with my co-workers for the first time. People my age or ten years older all sat together and talked about their days. All of a sudden I was a part of that, and it felt good to be so 17 .I’ve now worked at the restaurant for almost one year. I’ve learned to be happy aboutgetting up so early, because I know there’re going to be a few good 18 every day there.From starting there as a shy student, I’ve been able to grow into a person that can go up and 19 anyone, at work or anywhere else. I’m also not as sensitive（敏感的）as I used to be-getting an impolite customer might make me feel bad, but very soon I can laugh it off with my co-workers. The little job has given me so much, and I can’t wait to go back and continue to 20 from my experience.13. A. food B. money C. attention D. advice14. A. exciting B. encouraging C. confusing D. disappointing15. A. forget B. enjoy C. regret D. imagine16. A. tired B. happy C. curious D. relaxed17. A. loved B. missed C. needed D. included18. A. dishes B. choices C. moments D. customers19. A. find B. greet C. push D. stop20. A. grow B. stand C. rest D. hide阅读理解（共36分）三、阅读下列短文，根据短文内容，从短文后各题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选择最佳选项。
北京中考英语满分作文
北京中考英语满分作文总结出几篇北京中考英语满分作文给大家阅览。
下面是店铺给大家整理的北京中考英语满分作文的相关知识，供大家参阅!北京中考英语满分作文篇1根据文中大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、不少于60词的短文.所给英文提示词仅供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的经验,如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法…… 现在,某英文报纸就分享(Sharing)的话题征文，请你投稿。
描述一次你与他人分享的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
提示词语：share …with ; experience; interest; learn; change; encourage; enjoy; happiness; confident满分作文示例1In our life, everyone has some experiences of sharing something with others, like sharing an interesting book, a good idea and problems.I had a memorable experience of sharing. Though I was interested in math in Grade6, my math was poor. I could hardly understand what my math teacher said in class. I didn’t know how to deal with the math problems. My best friend, whose math was pretty good, give mesome suggestions on how to learn math well. With his help, my math has made more progress.In a word, sharing is a good way to encourage everyone to make a change and enjoy happiness.满分作文示例2I had an experience of sharing. Last term, we needed two hundred yuan to buy some stabbers for our class clean-up. I came up with a good idea that we could sell some old wastethings to make money. The others agreed with me. So we started to collect waste paper and other things. Finally we succeeded. I like sharing my idea because it can make me feel more confident. If we can share with others, everyone can also have the same happiness.满分作文示例3 I had an experience of sharing. When my family moved, I had to go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that I failed. I got worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and asked softly if I was OK. After I told him about my problem, he gave me someadvice. From then on, we got to know each other and shared our ideas, problems, and happiness. We became good friends. Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit it with others.北京中考英语满分作文篇2中国文化(语言、科目)Why does the Chinese become more and more popular?How do you learn Chinese well?What’s your advice to her/him?With the fast development of China and the more communication between China and the other countries around the world, more and more foreigners realized the importance of Chinese and begin to learn Chinese eagerly.As for the ways to learning Chinese, different people have different ways to learn it. The most useful ways are as follows. T o begin with,it’s very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later. In addition, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of class. I’m never be afraid of makingst but not least, I often arrange my time well and spend more of my free time reading Chinese famous works ,which is a good way to broaden my horizons and enrich my vocabulary .From my point of view, If you want to learn Chinese well, what most important for you is to be confident in yourself and never give up whenever you meet with difficulty. Then you’d better make more Chinese pen pal friends and often send e-mail with each other, not only can it develop the friendship between you but also it can improve your Chinese rapidly.I hope what I said can help you a lot, if you have any questions, you can send me a letter.What subject do you like best?why do you like it ?To improve it,what’s your plan in the future?Among various kinds of subjects in my mind, what interests me most is science,which set a golden bridge leading to success for me.The reasons why I like chemistry are as follows. First of all, chemistry discovers many secrets of the nature, which tell the people not only how the nature come into being but also the why it is like that. What’s more, people invent a lot of useful things for the human beings depending on the law of the nature, which make a good contribution to the development of the world. Last but not least, without chemistry ,people couldn’t discover many kinds of medicine, without the medicine, people will have to suffer from all kinds of illness.there is no doubt that chemistry is one of the most important subjects for us.To improve it, not only will I spend more time learning it well both in and out of class but also I will read more books aboutchemistry. Also,I am going to volunteer in the factories during the vacation and learn more about the knowledge on chemistry. 北京中考英语满分作文篇3梦想(城市，学校，工作)：假如你叫张华，最近和美国朋友Jim通过邮件谈论各自城市的情况，他想了解你的城市现状以及你梦想中的城市是什么样的。
2020北京中考英语作文必备10篇
2020北京中考英语作文必备10篇中考英语作文写作不难，但拿高分却不容易。
如何让自己的英语作文在中考中脱颖而出呢?下面小编给大家整理了北京2020中考英语作文范围，欢迎大家参考借鉴。
第一篇：【写作要求】现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。
作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个"低碳生活";的中学生。
请以"My Low-carbon Life";为题，写一篇短文描述自己的"低碳生活";。
内容包括：1.地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。
2.你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到"低碳生活";的。
如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。
3.号召更多的人加入到"低碳生活";中来。
作文要求：1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。
作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。
My Low-carbon LifeThe environmental pollution is worse and worse today.【优秀满分范文】My Low-carbon LifeThe environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.第二篇：【写作要求】每当朋友之间即将分手的时候，耳边常常会响起这首歌"朋友啊朋友!你可曾想起了我，如果你正享受幸福，请你忘记我";。
2020年高考北京卷英语作文范文
The Power of Perseverance: Lessons from the 2020 Beijing College Entrance ExamEnglish EssayIn the heart of every student preparing for the College Entrance Exam, there lies a powerful force—perseverance. This essay, inspired by the 2020 Beijing College Entrance Exam English prompt, explores the essence of perseverance and how it shapes our journey towards success.Perseverance is the steadfastness in doing something despite difficulty or delay in achieving success. It is the engine that drives us forward, especially when faced with challenges and setbacks. The journey of life is often fraught with obstacles and difficulties, and it is perseverance that helps us navigate through these trying times.The story of Thomas Edison, the inventor of the light bulb, is a testament to the power of perseverance. He faced numerous failures and setbacks in his quest to create a lasting, efficient light source. However, instead of giving up, he chose to persevere. He believed in his vision and ultimately succeeded after hundreds of experiments. Hisstory reminds us that success is often the result of坚持不懈的努力和持之以恒的精神。
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2020近三年中考英语北京满分作文解析2019年真题在线•文段表达从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。
文中已给出内容不计入总词数。
所给提示词语仅供选用。
请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。
请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
提示词语: design，safety rule，careful，protect，picture提示问题: When should you hand in the poster?What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?Dear Peter,I’m glad to receive your emailIf there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know. Yours,Li Hua题目②自律，即自我约束，是自我提升的一种途径，有助于我们成长，促使我们不断前行。
某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。
假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。
提示词语: self-disciplined(自律的)，plan，goal，habit，improve提示问题: What did you do to be self-disciplined?What benefits have you got from doing so?Self-discipline plays an important role in our life.考题解析2019年书面表达题目具有以下三个特点：一、注重教育性，突出育人价值注重对学生情感价值观的引导，坚持立德树人、育人为本。
题目1要求学生写一封关于“安全月”宣传海报制作的电子邮件，引导学生增强安全意识。
题目2围绕“自律”这一话题，要求学生谈谈为了增强自律意识，做过什么，以及这样做的意义，鼓励学生从我做起，增强自律意识。
任务要求符合学生能力水平，自然融入了社会主义新时期对学生能力和品格的要求。
二、注重选择性，体现开放性2019年中考英语试题书面表达继续采用二选一的考查形式。
题目1要求学生写一篇关于安全海报制作的电子邮件，突出“做事”，题目2要求学生就“自律”这一话题写一篇短文投稿，突出“说事”。
两道题目话题不同、形式不同，学生任选一道题目作答，充分尊重学生的个性化学习特点和不同思维需求，给学生更多的选择空间。
同时，题目关注了学生的个体学习特点和生活体验，设置了开放的情景，鼓励不同语言水平和思维层次的学生结合自身的实际，展示自己多年的语言积累，呈现出多样化、个性化的语言表达和多角度的思维方法，为各层次的学生搭建了一个展示自我的平台。
三、注重实践性，凸显学以致用2019年中考英语试题书面表达注重测试任务的真实性和实践性，考查学生在真实情境中运用所学知识解决问题的能力。
题目将语言知识和技能、文化知识以及学习策略的考查融合在完成邮件和征文投稿的具体社会情境的任务之中。
题目1要求学生通过邮件分享设计海报的想法，题目2要求学生为网站投稿，谈论自己的做法和想法。
任务设置贴近时代、贴近生活、贴近学生，体现了对写邮件、制作海报、投稿等实践活动的考查，鼓励学生学以致用，以用促学，更好地促进了学生语言运用能力的发展。
满分范文题目①Dear Peter,I’m glad to receive your email. As it is required，you are supposed to hand in the poster before next Friday.Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you. First and foremost，the basic safety rules are of great importance，which should be included in your poster. In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school. Last but by no means least，if I were you，I would add a few suggestions about safety awareness，considering that better safe than sorry. In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.Yours,Li Hua【名师点评】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给Peter写一封邮件，告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报的相关事宜。
由题目中给出的提示问题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先告诉Peter海报上交的时间；然后和他分享一些设计海报的想法。
第二个内容应该是短文的主体。
题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。
短文应以一般现在时为主、第一、二人称来叙述。
写作时应注意：首先要合理安排短文内容，叙述应有层次、有条理。
可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语，如First, Second, Last but not least等等。
题目中给出的提示词应该在短文中用上。
其次应注意文章的表达，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。
为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。
同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。
【写作亮点】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给Peter写邮件，告诉他制作主题海报的一些事情。
短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，符合题目要求。
除题目中给出的开头和结尾，短文主要包括两个内容：第一段用一句话告诉Peter上交海报的时间；文章的中心和重点是放在了第二段上，这一段中作者和Peter分享了一些制作海报的想法。
主要从四个方面进行阐述，内容非常详实，并使用了First and foremost, In the second place, Last but by no means least, In addition等短语，分清了这一段的层次，叙述非常有条理。
其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，并使用了较复杂的句式结构，表现了作者较强的语言运用能力。
短文中较好的句型有：Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you.、In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school、In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.等等。
题目②Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school. And I could not only respected all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the task, Ideveloped the habit of going to bed early and going to bed early. In the society，I spared no effort to improve myself all the time.In a word, I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had many good habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been to high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined person.【名师点评】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，用英语写一篇短文给某网站投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。