雅思写作技巧.ppt
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雅思写作步骤PPT课件
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• 题目5： More and more people travel by car today, instead of using public transport. Why has this happened? How does it affect individuals and society ?
• Step4：转化成英文。
Private car use can cause air pollution. It involves fuel consumption and creates exhaust fumes.
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• Step5：使用并列句、3大从句（名词性从句、 定语从句、状语从句）进行拓展。 Private car use is a major environmental issue around the world, because it can cause air pollution. It is a habit that involves fuel consumption and creates exhaust fumes.
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Task2 作文第2步 思考观点
• 雅思作文大致可分为两种题材： 非教育类和教育类
非教育类：经济（效率；收益和成本） 科技（进步；缺陷） 社会（价值和传统观念；环境；社会关系） 个人（生活方式；基本权利；健康快乐； 行为）
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教育类： 身体健康 学习能力 社会能力和实践经验（与人相处、调节情绪等） 工作能力（动手能力、价值观和道德观、 遵守法律等）
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• e.g. Today, children appear to spend most of their free time watching TV and playing computer games. The focus of this essay is on the causes of and solutions to this problem.
雅思写作小作文PPT PPT课件(共19张)
雅思 写作
王中祺/Sonny Wong
雅思写作小作文部分精讲
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王中祺老师简介：
英语经贸翻译硕士，工商管理硕士，毕业于北京外国语大学和对外经贸大学， 英语专业八级、翻译二级。曾就职于北京海淀外国语实验学校初高中部，新东方、杰 克斯爱德专职雅思托福英语老师，环球雅思、励学国际兼职雅思托福英语老师，曾任 中石化胜利油田区高级英语翻译。翻译类代表作：《把男孩培养成男孩》（译著）； 教学类代表作：《2015-2016雅思阅读真题精选解析集》。
主干： 1. Behaviorists suggest that 行为主义者认为
定语从句翻译的基本步骤：
1. 切分句子，确定主干。
其他成分：
2. the child will experience greater intellectual development.
2. 确定词义，直译意群。
3. 调整语序，润色译文。 4. 通读译文，查缺补漏。
行为主义者 认为 抚育，抚养 1. 切分句子，确定主干。
an environment where there are many stimuli 刺激，刺激物，促进因素（stimulus的复数） which develop his or her capacity for appropriate 发展 能力 适当的，恰当的，合适的 经历 development. 更大的 智力的
responses // will experience greater intellectual development.
系统性 权威性 全面性
翻译考试例题解析
Example Analysis for Translation Examination
词汇突破： 定语从句翻译的基本步骤：
王中祺/Sonny Wong
雅思写作小作文部分精讲
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王中祺老师简介：
英语经贸翻译硕士，工商管理硕士，毕业于北京外国语大学和对外经贸大学， 英语专业八级、翻译二级。曾就职于北京海淀外国语实验学校初高中部，新东方、杰 克斯爱德专职雅思托福英语老师，环球雅思、励学国际兼职雅思托福英语老师，曾任 中石化胜利油田区高级英语翻译。翻译类代表作：《把男孩培养成男孩》（译著）； 教学类代表作：《2015-2016雅思阅读真题精选解析集》。
主干： 1. Behaviorists suggest that 行为主义者认为
定语从句翻译的基本步骤：
1. 切分句子，确定主干。
其他成分：
2. the child will experience greater intellectual development.
2. 确定词义，直译意群。
3. 调整语序，润色译文。 4. 通读译文，查缺补漏。
行为主义者 认为 抚育，抚养 1. 切分句子，确定主干。
an environment where there are many stimuli 刺激，刺激物，促进因素（stimulus的复数） which develop his or her capacity for appropriate 发展 能力 适当的，恰当的，合适的 经历 development. 更大的 智力的
responses // will experience greater intellectual development.
系统性 权威性 全面性
翻译考试例题解析
Example Analysis for Translation Examination
词汇突破： 定语从句翻译的基本步骤：
雅思大作文写作PPT课件
the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
2. 题目中给出双方观点，要求分析正反方观点后做出结论 Some say ……Others argue that ……What is your opinion? Discuss both views and give your opinion. Express some reasons for both views and give your opinion. Do you think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
indicates limitations in range of vocabulary
vocabulary
The answer includes attempts at Attempts complex
5.5
complex sentence forms, but…… sentences but these
+正评价nevertheless, there are tend to be less accurate
examples of accurate complex
structures （6分）
其他 总分
Less than 250 words
（5+5.5+5+5.5）/4=5.25 ≈ 5.5
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5.5-0.5=5
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雅思写作评分标准
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雅思写作评分标准
2. 题目中给出双方观点，要求分析正反方观点后做出结论 Some say ……Others argue that ……What is your opinion? Discuss both views and give your opinion. Express some reasons for both views and give your opinion. Do you think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
indicates limitations in range of vocabulary
vocabulary
The answer includes attempts at Attempts complex
5.5
complex sentence forms, but…… sentences but these
+正评价nevertheless, there are tend to be less accurate
examples of accurate complex
structures （6分）
其他 总分
Less than 250 words
（5+5.5+5+5.5）/4=5.25 ≈ 5.5
2021
5.5-0.5=5
2021
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雅思写作评分标准
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高级雅思英语写作精品PPT课件
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Testing Points
Tests the ability to: ❖ describe & interpret graphic data ❖ describe stages of a process ❖ describe an object or event or
Brainstorming/Expanding the ideas Classifying/Grouping Choosing the main ideas and theme (well-
developing the main points & discarding weak points)
❖ Discuss both views and give your opinion ❖ Causes and solutions or causes and
consequences ❖ What’s your opinion ❖ Do you agree or disagree? or to what extent
Create a logical flow (ordering & ranking) Outlining the structure Draft the key words, thesis statement and
雅思小作文写作教学(全能版)ppt课件
IELTS Writing Task 1 图表作文
CAPTAIN 2019
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共有5种图形
1. The bar chart 柱状图 2. The line graph 折线图 3. The pie chart 扇形图/饼图 4. The table 表格 5. The flow chart 流程图 * The map 地图/地形图
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• Slightly more Nissan cars are sold in America than Hyundai/Kia. • Twice as many Honda vehicles are sold in the US as GM.
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流程型(procedure)图表
Otherwise
In addition
Further more
Meanwhile
while
At the same time
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First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again.
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共有5种图形
1. The bar chart 柱状图 2. The line graph 折线图 3. The pie chart 扇形图/饼图 4. The table 表格 5. The flow chart 流程图 * The map 地图/地形图
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• Slightly more Nissan cars are sold in America than Hyundai/Kia. • Twice as many Honda vehicles are sold in the US as GM.
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流程型(procedure)图表
Otherwise
In addition
Further more
Meanwhile
while
At the same time
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First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again.
雅思写作公开课-写作ppt课件
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2. to what extent do you agree or disagree 3. do you think the advantage outweigh the
disadvantage
最理想的结构是： 开头段 +让步段 + 支持段（论点1） + 支持段（论点2） + 结尾段（表明你自己的观点）
6.雅思写作的误区
7.鸭友们通常会犯哪些语法错误，能有效避免吗？什么样的语 法错误是致命的？
8.小作文重要吗？容易写吗？应该怎么复习
9. 怎么安排大作文和小作文的写作顺序和时间
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考官一般会在1小时内改六份作文（including task 1 and task2），那就是说平均5分钟改一篇。
disadvantage
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1. discuss both views and give your own opinion
开头段（回应题目+表达自己的观点） + 支持观点1（n个论点） + 支持观点2（n个论点） + 结尾段（表明自己的观点）。
请注意，这个题型是不能用一面倒！
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认真阅读题目，划出关键字，紧紧围绕题目问题和所隐 含的内容去思考
2m到3m写作框架
大作文应该控制在35m写完，小作文应该在18m之内 剩下5m通读小作文和大作文各一遍，看有没有语法错
误
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目标分数为8分，特别是要考到4个8的你， 你不要泄气，终究会成为强者。
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雅思大作文的结构及写作方法ppt课件
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结构：四段或五段
引言部分：提出主题（描述当前背景）， 改写复述题目，表明自己的观点，衔接 下文。
正文第一段：原因1 正文第二段：原因2 正文第三段：原因3（可省略） 结尾：重申主题，建议措施，展望未来
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引言部分：提出主题（描述当前背景），改写复述题目， 表明自己的观点，衔接下文。
As is known to all, the big contradiction between the limitation of land and the rapidly increasing demand for it causes an alarming headache of human beings. To improve the situation, some people suggest we instantly give up protecting wild animals, the reason for which, according to them, is simply that they believe there will be no spare places for the wild animals as their habitats in the 21st centhing but a waste of resources to carry out the protection. As far as I am concerned, the so-called “suggestion” is extremely ridiculous and has no point at all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
结构：四段或五段
引言部分：提出主题（描述当前背景）， 改写复述题目，表明自己的观点，衔接 下文。
正文第一段：原因1 正文第二段：原因2 正文第三段：原因3（可省略） 结尾：重申主题，建议措施，展望未来
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引言部分：提出主题（描述当前背景），改写复述题目， 表明自己的观点，衔接下文。
As is known to all, the big contradiction between the limitation of land and the rapidly increasing demand for it causes an alarming headache of human beings. To improve the situation, some people suggest we instantly give up protecting wild animals, the reason for which, according to them, is simply that they believe there will be no spare places for the wild animals as their habitats in the 21st centhing but a waste of resources to carry out the protection. As far as I am concerned, the so-called “suggestion” is extremely ridiculous and has no point at all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
雅思写作G类攻略课件
For this reason, I think it is generally a good idea to encourage children to take up paid jobs.
Most high level jobs in the government are done by men. Some people believe that the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
重点段：分析强势分论点 X 3 【1】: Topic Sentence
Despite the benefit, problems should not be neglected.
【2】+【3】: Main Idea 1 + Development (Reason) Firstly, the practice is not economical compared with modern ways of building.
Conclusion To conclude, taking up paid work brings both benefits and risks to children. However, when certain conditions are met, all the potential problems can be solved in a proper way.
Conclusion 主体定性
To conclude, the suggestion to build all new buildings in a traditional way is beneficial to enhance a city’s cultural identity.
Most high level jobs in the government are done by men. Some people believe that the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
重点段：分析强势分论点 X 3 【1】: Topic Sentence
Despite the benefit, problems should not be neglected.
【2】+【3】: Main Idea 1 + Development (Reason) Firstly, the practice is not economical compared with modern ways of building.
Conclusion To conclude, taking up paid work brings both benefits and risks to children. However, when certain conditions are met, all the potential problems can be solved in a proper way.
Conclusion 主体定性
To conclude, the suggestion to build all new buildings in a traditional way is beneficial to enhance a city’s cultural identity.
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I know I left too much mess And destruction to come back again
And I caused nothing but trouble I understand if you can't talk to me again And if you live by the rules of "It's over"
Then I'm sure that that makes sense
IELTS Academic Writing Campus and Education
March 3rd, 2010
Sample Task 2
In Task 2 you will be presented with a point of view or argument or problem. You are required to present and justify an opinion, evaluate and challenge ideas, evidence or an argument, compare and contrast evidence, opinions and implications, or present the solution to a problem. …
IELTS Academic Writing: Task 2
根据题目要求展开论述，观点论据切合题意； 对文中所举的观点充分展开，进行充足的论证； 合理分层分段，论述展开条理清晰，观点与论据之间衔接紧
密； 准确运用语言进行论述，并体现一定的词汇量和句法的多样
性； 运用半正式文体进行写作，论证中使用的语言规范得体。
Topic One: Mobile Phones
There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that these problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phone?
5 minutes for you to brainstorm
5分钟构思 (书面完成)
This is taken from IELTS Academic Writing (14-01-2006).
Pages 126-133 from our textbook.
How to analyze and express?
Current social context:
好处：方便、经济、生命保障（突发事件时）
坏处：隐私（偷拍）、垃圾短信（包括诈骗）、健康、工作/ 休息间陷的模糊
Key idea in the topic:
好处 〉坏处 坏处 〉好处
文章容易流于普通 文章观点较为独特、有力
Preparatory Steps
Is it similar to the discussion of TV?
From the following aspects Social (incl. family life) Educational Economical (incl. entertainment) ? Environmental?
Sample Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:
… Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
White Flag 爱你不轻言放弃 By Dido (2003)
White Flag Dido
I know you think that I shouldn't still love you I'll tell you that But if I didn't say it
Well, I'd still have felt it Where's the sense in that? I promise I'm not trying to make your life harder
Or return to where we were
Well I will go down with this ship And I won't put my hands up and surrender There will be no white flag above my door
I'm in love and always will be
13 Problems of mobile phone
IELTS Academic Writing 雅思学术写作
Unit Two
Warm-Up Music
Dido Florian Cloud de Bounevialle O'Malley Armstrong (born 25 December 1971 in London, England) professionally known as Dido (pronounced /ˈdaɪdoʊ/ DYE-doe) an award winning English singersongwriter.
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Anything you know about mobile phone?
12arguments! Social Physical Economical Educational Environmental Political …
And I caused nothing but trouble I understand if you can't talk to me again And if you live by the rules of "It's over"
Then I'm sure that that makes sense
IELTS Academic Writing Campus and Education
March 3rd, 2010
Sample Task 2
In Task 2 you will be presented with a point of view or argument or problem. You are required to present and justify an opinion, evaluate and challenge ideas, evidence or an argument, compare and contrast evidence, opinions and implications, or present the solution to a problem. …
IELTS Academic Writing: Task 2
根据题目要求展开论述，观点论据切合题意； 对文中所举的观点充分展开，进行充足的论证； 合理分层分段，论述展开条理清晰，观点与论据之间衔接紧
密； 准确运用语言进行论述，并体现一定的词汇量和句法的多样
性； 运用半正式文体进行写作，论证中使用的语言规范得体。
Topic One: Mobile Phones
There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that these problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phone?
5 minutes for you to brainstorm
5分钟构思 (书面完成)
This is taken from IELTS Academic Writing (14-01-2006).
Pages 126-133 from our textbook.
How to analyze and express?
Current social context:
好处：方便、经济、生命保障（突发事件时）
坏处：隐私（偷拍）、垃圾短信（包括诈骗）、健康、工作/ 休息间陷的模糊
Key idea in the topic:
好处 〉坏处 坏处 〉好处
文章容易流于普通 文章观点较为独特、有力
Preparatory Steps
Is it similar to the discussion of TV?
From the following aspects Social (incl. family life) Educational Economical (incl. entertainment) ? Environmental?
Sample Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:
… Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
White Flag 爱你不轻言放弃 By Dido (2003)
White Flag Dido
I know you think that I shouldn't still love you I'll tell you that But if I didn't say it
Well, I'd still have felt it Where's the sense in that? I promise I'm not trying to make your life harder
Or return to where we were
Well I will go down with this ship And I won't put my hands up and surrender There will be no white flag above my door
I'm in love and always will be
13 Problems of mobile phone
IELTS Academic Writing 雅思学术写作
Unit Two
Warm-Up Music
Dido Florian Cloud de Bounevialle O'Malley Armstrong (born 25 December 1971 in London, England) professionally known as Dido (pronounced /ˈdaɪdoʊ/ DYE-doe) an award winning English singersongwriter.
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Anything you know about mobile phone?
12arguments! Social Physical Economical Educational Environmental Political …