Unit1英语写作PPT课件

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ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ Good writing…
• is good thinking. • involves thoughtful revision.
• is directed towards an audience.
• achieves a clear purpose. • expresses ideas clearly. (Qi, 2001:11)
On a professional level formal letters, writing for application, instructions, papers for publication, paper abstracts, etc. writing for examinations, reports, etc.
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For nursing students, it seems that we could only learn and gain useful experiences in hospital placement, rather than from internship programs offered by enterprises overseas. However, in my opinion, I think we could earn as much valuable experience as those business-related studies students through overseas internship programs.
Research involved the distribution of 165 questionnaires to Nottingham citizens visiting the health promotion displays set up at the local shopping center. A response rate of 56 per cent was achieved. An analysis of data indicated that over 30 percent of child respondents had experienced sunburn in the previous 12 months.
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3. The following sentences are informal and some of them are not concise enough. Rewrite these sentences in formal written English.
(1) This is not agreeing with the result that we got.
Nature and Purpose of a Research Paper
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Give a man a fish and you feed him for a day. Teach a man how to fish and you feed him for a life time.
LAO-TZU, Founder of Taoism
iv) The information is clearly connected and arranged. v) The words are well chosen, and the sentences are clear, concise, and correct.
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1.2 Features of a Research Paper
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4. Following are guidelines stipulated by an international research journal for manuscript reviewers. Read the guidelines and answer the questions that follow.
It is often argued that nursing students could only learn and gain useful experiences in hospital placement, rather than from internship programs offered by enterprises overseas. However, the result of the present questionnaire survey indicates that the nursing students could earn as much valuable experience as those business-related studies students through overseas internship programs.
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(2) We need five more tests and then we’ll carry out the experiment.
Five more tests will be necessary before the experiment can be conducted.
(3) I may possibly think about the results from a different viewpoint.
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(10) Table 1 gives out the group of reasoning rules of the fuzzy adaptive controller. I used maximum and minimum principles, the output value in every fuzzy subsidiary group can be got.
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Statements about writing
a. How far do you agree with the viewpoints expressed in these quotations?
b. In your opinion, what is good writing? With a partner, work out a list of key features of good writing.
Normally/Generally, the use of this procedure is effective.
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I distributed 165 questionnaires to Nottingham citizens. They visited the health promotion displays we set up at the local shopping center. I received 56 per cent back. After the analysis of data I found that over 30 percent of child respondents had had sunburn in the last 12 months.
Table 1 presents a set of reasoning rules for the fuzzy adaptive controller. By using maximum and minimum principles, the output value in every fuzzy subsidiary group can be obtained.
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Five basic characteristics of good writing
i) It makes a clear point. ii) The arguments are supported with specific information.
iii) It responds to the interests and needs of the readers.
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(6) The reduction technique is used a lot in mechanical engineering.
The reduction technique is used a lot in mechanical engineering.
(7) Most times the use of this procedure is effective.
It is possible to consider the results from a different viewpoint.
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(4) You should notice that the production rate was big.
It should be noticeable that the production rate was high.
(5) Why should the questionnaire be revised? I have a number of reasons for that.
There are a number of reasons why the questionnaire should be revised.
1. What is your reaction to Dr. Zhang’s views? Discuss your reactions with a partner. 2. Following are eight strategies some non-native speakers adopt when they write up research. Reflect upon your own academic writing experience, and decide whether they are effective, less effective or ineffective by writing the word before those items. Discuss your reasons of choice with a partner.