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新雅思8分作文范文(优选八篇)

雅思8分作文范文(优选八篇)5雅思8分作文范文(篇一)In many countries, the number of elderly people is increasing fast. To what extent do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?Nowadays, owning to the improvement of living condition(这里习惯用复数), people can live much longer than before, which gives rise to the fast increasing number of elderly people. Some hold that this situation will result in a series of problems, such as social burden, population expansion and so on. While others insist that it agrees the development of modern society and brings many advantages. For my part, I take the latter side with(用for) the following reasons:(74words)点评：开头稍微写的有点长，不过内容写的还不错。

属于通过分析两种不同观点，较后阐述自己观点的写法。

(此种写法在雅思大作文的第一段比较常见)美中不足的是倒数第二句的错误比较明显!while是个连词，应该连接句子与句子，所以这里前面不应该是句号。

后面agree是不及物动词，不能直接加宾语。

Firstly, elder people(一会儿elderly people,一会儿又elder people，这不是自相矛盾么) are the fortune of our society. They have enough experiences and capabilities which are badly lacked and needed for our youth when dealing with all sorts of problems, they can still do well in their jobs. Especially(前面应该用逗号，然后这里小写) in some professions, such as teacher, doctor, scientist and so on, sometimes (前面应该用句号，然后这里大写)age means the authority and ability. When you see a doctor, do you prefer an elderly doctor with grey hair or a youth without mustache? (77words)Secondly, elder people(同上) are the happiness of our society. Increasing number of elderly people is also the embodiment of our improving living quality, which shows our society run(应该第三人称单数)to the right and healthy direction, we(前面句号，这里大写) have more chance and time to serve our elderly people, and it’s the happiest time of all our life to accompany with(accompany是及物动词) our parents, grandparents and great grandparents. (63words)Finally, elderly people are the lubricant of our society. They have good temper and enough patients(应该是patience吧) to do anything, they can help us to intercede(它是不及物动词，而且主要用人作宾语) social disputes, and they make our society much more harmoniouswhich(前面较好有个逗号)makes for the construction of harmonious society.(43words)正文段综合点评：此篇是典型的5段式作文的写作，正文段构思出三个分论点来证明自己的观点，的确在构思上花了不少心思。

雅思5.5小作文范文

雅思5.5小作文范文
以下是一篇更加口语化、符合您要求的雅思5.5水平的小作文范文，描述了城市公园的不同区域及其特点：
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一走进公园，就看到一个超级大的草坪，好多家庭都在这儿，孩子们跑来跑去，像撒欢儿的小马驹。

笑声、叫声，啥都有，好热闹！旁边那些花坛，花儿开得真漂亮，蝴蝶蜜蜂都围着转。

往东边走，嘿，有个大湖！湖水闪闪发光，跟镜子似的。

几只鸭子在湖里游，看起来好悠闲。

湖边那些爷爷奶奶们，坐在长椅上聊天，看着湖景，多舒服啊！
再往西边一拐，不得了，这儿是健身区！跑步机、单杠、双杠啥都有，那些年轻人都在这儿锻炼身体，一个个汗流浃背，但看着就特有活力。

北边呢，有个儿童游乐区。

IELTS雅思小作文Task1范文6篇

IELTS Task 1范文1.A glance at the graph provided reveals some striking similarities between the Chinese and US birth rates during the period from 1920 to 2000. It is evident that both nations saw considerable fluctuations in fertility, with lows during the 1940s and highs during the 1950s.1920 to15 percent in 1935, China’sThis was followed by a period of exponential growth, with fertility in the countrypercent in 1950.in this figure.The US birth rate, meanwhile, and 13 percentin 1950, followed by a steady fall.It is interesting to note that whileuntil 1950, the gap between the two after this time as fertility in China slid away.2.Given are two figures concerning criminality in Britain. The first provides data on the rates of conviction among men and women of various ages, while the second indicates the gender balance of the UK prison population.the rate of conviction among Britsof both during adolescence the age of about 20. men are far more likely to offend than women.From a negligible 2 percent among 10-year-old boys, the male conviction rateto approximately 20-year-olds. The percentage of0 percent among girls of 10 to some 5 percent for 20-year-olds. The however, see dramatic decreases in criminality among both sexes. A mere 2 percent of crimes are committed by 60-year-old men and 0 percent by women of the same age.As for the proportion of male and female prison inmates, men outnumber women 24 to 1. Some 96 percent of all prisioners are men, while the remainder are female.A glance at the two pie charts provided reveals the relative popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.Of these activities in both years, at 32 percent in 1985 and a slightly lower 30 percent in 1995. Yet, by far the most significant change to take place during this period was the increased popularity of computer games. Not a single respondent to the survey rated playing computer games as their preferred leisure activity in 1985. However, by 1995 this figure stood at 27 percent –the second highest overall. Also more popular in 1995 was talking with friends, at 26 percent compared to 21 percent a decade earlier.In stark contrast, however, all other activities decreased in popularity. Eating out –which was the second most widely enjoyed pastime in 1985,percent of respondents – slipped to a mere 8 percent in 1995. Likewisealso considerable decreases in the popularity ratings of talking withactivities and (as previously mentioned) watching television.4.Given are two figures providing a comparison of internet use in five European countries (namely Switzerland, Germany, France, Spain and the UK) in 1995, 2000 and 2004, as well as the popularity of internet shopping in these countries.It is evident from the information provided that Britain had by far the highest number of internet users in all three years. From 16 million in 1995, the number of British users climbed steadily to 22 million in 2000, before soaring to a staggering 41 million in 2004. Second in terms of internet use was Germany. This country saw a threefold increase during the period in question, from 5 million people in 1995 to 14 million in 2000 and 15 million in 2004. A similar increase took place in France. The two nations with the fewest internet users, meanwhile, were Switzerland and Spain. It is also interesting to note that internet shopping was far more common in the UK than in any other country listed.In fact, the prevalence of internet shopping in Britain was double that of Germany and triple that of Switzerland. France and Spain, meanwhile, had moderate levels of online shopping.A glance at the table provided reveals a number of clear differences between the major metro systems of the world in terms of age, scale and annual carrying capacity.One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that the more recently established metro systems are considerably shorter than the older ones. Completed in 1863, the London underground is the oldestthe longest, extending for 1100 kilometres.stark contrast, howeverand 2001 respectively– are far shorter. The formerthe latter just 14 kilometre s.With regard to yearly carrying capacity, the metro systems mentioned in the table vary greatly. The Tokyo metro is equipped to carry the largest number of passengers, at 1434 million. With 850 million, meanwhile, the Paris metro has the second largest carrying capacity. The systems with the smallest capacities are those of Kyoto and Washington DC, transporting just 11 million and 70 million people per year respectively.6.Given are two column graphs comparing the rates of secondary and tertiary education among males and females in various different parts of the world.compared with only 20 Asia, meanwhile, have moderate levels of secondary education – between 40 and 50 percent for both sexes.With regard to higher education, the figures are much lower throughout the world. In Europe, some 50 percent of adult females and 45 percent of adult males gain a higher education.Sub-Saharan Africa The figures for Latin America and East Asia are marginally higher thanAlso noteworthy is the fact that receive a secondary education in all regions except East Asia, but less likely to receive a tertiary education in all regions except Europe.。

雅思小作文范文表题(必备14篇)

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文档下载后可定制修改，请根据实际需要进行调整和使用，谢谢!并且，本店铺为大家提供各种类型的经典范文，如工作总结、工作计划、合同协议、条据文书、策划方案、句子大全、作文大全、诗词歌赋、教案资料、其他范文等等，想了解不同范文格式和写法，敬请关注!Download tips: This document is carefully compiled by this editor. I hope that after you download it, it can help you solve practical problems. The document can be customized and modified after downloading, please adjust and use it according to actual needs, thank you!Moreover, our store provides various types of classic sample essays for everyone, such as work summaries, work plans, contract agreements, doctrinal documents, planning plans, complete sentences, complete compositions, poems, songs, teaching materials, and other sample essays. If you want to learn about different sample formats and writing methods, please stay tuned!雅思小作文范文表题(必备14篇)雅思小作文范文表题第1篇The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.雅思小作文范文The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 20XX.It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph.While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period， the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably.In 2000， company A produced 12 tonnes of waste， while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively.Over the following 5 years， the waste output of companies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes， but the figure for company A fell by approXimately 1 tonne.From 2005 to 20XX， company A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes， and company B reduced its waste by around 7 tonnes.By contrast， company C saw an increase in waste production of approXimately 4 tonnes over the same 10-year period.By 20XX， company C’s waste output had risen to 10 tonnes，while the respective amounts of waste from companies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonnes.(192 words， band （9)雅思图表作文真题：混合图：温度与降水The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.雅思小作文范文The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.It is noticeable that monthly figures for precipitation in Kolkata vary considerably，whereas monthly temperatures remain relatively stable.Rainfall is highest from July to August， while temperatures are highest in April and May.Between the months of January and May，average temperatures in Kolkata rise from their lowest point at around 20°C to a peak of just over 30°C.Average rainfall in the city also rises over the same period， from approXimately 20mm of rain in January to 100mm in May.While temperatures stay roughly the same for the neXt four months， the amount of rainfall more than doubles between May and June.Figures for precipitation remain above 250mm from June to September， peaking at around 330mm in July.The final threemonths of the year see a dramatic fall in precipitation， to a low of about 10mm in December，and a steady drop in temperatures back to the January average.(173 words， band （9)雅思图表作文真题：混合图：独居人口The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 20XX.The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.Living alone in England by age and gender， of bedrooms in one-person households (England， 20XX)雅思小作文范文The two charts give information about single-occupant households in England in the year 20XX.The bar chart compares figures for occupants age and gender， and the pie chart shows data about the number of bedrooms in these homes.Overall， females made up a higher proportion of people living alone than males， and this difference is particularly noticeable in the older age categories.We can also see that the most common number of bedrooms in a single-occupant home was two.A significant majority of the people aged 65 or over whowere living alone in England in 20XX were female.Women made up around 72% of single occupants aged 75 to 84， and 76% of those aged 85 or over.By contrast， among younger adults the figures for males were higher.For eXample， in the 35-49 age category，men accounted for nearly 65% of people living alone.In the same year， of one-person households in England had two bedrooms，while one-bedroom and three-bedroom homes accounted for 28% and of the total.Under 7% of single-occupant homes had four or more bedrooms.(189 words， band（9)以上就是雅思图表作文真题及高分范文汇总的全部内容，更多雅思小作文及图表作文真题范文，请关注小站雅思频道。

雅思小作文范文表题(必备14篇)

雅思小作文范文表题(必备14篇)雅思小作文范文表题第9篇雅思小作文范文表题第10篇Task achievement1. 文章基本呈现了图表中的全部数字。

为了避开数字过多的状况，同一学位水平中男女所占比例只消失了一个（总和为100%）。

不影响我们对图表的认知。

2. 文章结尾处总结了图表的整体特点，即文章来自老烤鸭雅思男性在高等学位和低等学位所占比例较多，而女性则在本科阶段所占比例较多。

3. 文章对数据进行了合理对比。

主体段一开头先指出男女差异最大的类别。

然后将剩余类别根据男性多于女性或者女性多于男性进行分类比较。

Coherence and Cohesion1. 文章规律结构合理。

分组之间没有消失重复的状况，而且点出了最大的差异所在。

2. 使用了各种各样的链接手段。

如其次段开头的immediately, 其次段结尾处的by contrast, 第三段开头的at the higher levels of education等。

也就是说链接手段并不肯定得是and或者however，重要的是让文章整体行文流利通常。

3. 指代方面，利用定语从句和词汇（counterpart）来避开混乱和重复。

Lexical Resource文章用词丰富，持有学位使用了held，with，reach等进行同义替换。

同时比较过程中除了使用比较级之外，还用了outnumber这样的词来展现自己的词汇积累。

Grammatical Range语法结构方面，文章虽然也有各种各样的从句，但并不是每个句子都很简单。

关键在于句子结构各不相同。

敏捷使用各种非谓语动词，状语前置来呈现句子的多样性。

雅思小作文范文表题第11篇题目：The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2023. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households. Living alone in England by age and gender, 2023Number of bedrooms in one-person households (England, 2023)雅思小作文范文表题第12篇Dear Sir/ Madam,Dear Professor Moss,I am Sandy, a junior student of the Department of Electrical and Computer Engineering. I am writing to enquire about your African Literature and Culture course.Just a few days ago, I found the course when we were asked to choose optional courses for next semester. The name of African Literature and Culture aroused my great interest. Because of your reputation and my enthusiasm in literature, I hope I could study this course next semester. Except the name, however, all I know about the course is that it is atwo-hour one held every Thursday afternoon. I want to get more details of the course. First of all, I would like to know the brief outline of the course. Moreover, I wonder if there are some relevant books that you can recommend for me to read before the course.I also heard that another course of yours, Chinese Literature, is held every Friday afternoon. If the registration of this course hasn’t closed yet, I will be so glad to participate in your class.Sorry to bother you. Your help will be greatly appreciated.Yours sincerely,Sandy雅思小作文范文表题第13篇题目：The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2023. Here's my suggested outline for a 4-paragraph report: Introduction: rewrite the question statement in your own words.Overview: point out which category was highest in each year, which was lowest, and which saw the biggest changes.Details: compare the 3 categories in 1995, then say what happened up until 1999.Details: notice what happened to local calls from 1999 onwards, and contrast this with the other 2 categories. Finish with a comparison of thefigures in 2023.雅思小作文范文表题第14篇The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.雅思小作文范文：The line graph compares the percentage of people aged 65 or more in three countries over a period of 100 years.It is clear that the proportion of elderly people increases in each country between 1940 and 2040. Japan is expected to see the most dramatic changes in its elderly population.In 1940, around 9% of Americans were aged 65 or over, compared to about 7% of Swedish people and 5% of Japanese people. The proportions of elderly people in the USA and Sweden rose gradually over the next 50 years, reaching just under 15% in 1990. By contrast, the figures for Japan remained below 5% until the early 2000s.Looking into the future, a sudden increase in the percentage of elderly people is predicted for Japan, with a jump of over 15% in just 10 years from 2030 to 2040. By 2040, it is thought that around 27% of the Japanese population will be 65 years old or more, while the figures for Sweden and the USA will be slightly lower, at about 25% and 23% respectively.(178 words, band 9)。

雅思小作文范文10篇

雅思小作文范文10篇英文回答：1. Write a letter to your friend describing your new house.Dear [Friend's Name],。

I hope this letter finds you well. I'm writing to you today to tell you all about my new house! I'm so excited to finally have a place of my own, and I know you're going to love it too.The house is located in a quiet neighborhood, and it's just a short walk from the beach. It's a two-story house with three bedrooms and two bathrooms. The kitchen is spacious and has all the appliances I need. The living room is cozy and has a fireplace. The backyard is fenced in and has a patio and a fire pit.I've been living in the house for about a month now, and I'm really starting to feel at home. I love cooking in the kitchen, and I've been spending a lot of time reading in the living room. The backyard is perfect for entertaining, and I've already had a few friends over for BBQs.I know you're coming to visit next month, and I can't wait to show you my new house. I think you're going to love it as much as I do.Love,。

新雅思考试写作范文(推荐十四篇)

雅思考试写作范文(推荐十四篇)5雅思考试写作范文(篇一)In recent years, there has been growing interest in therelationship between equality and personal people believe that individuals can achieve more inegalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual is your view of the relationship between equality and personal success?平等社会个人成就大；放任自由发展的社会个人成就大。

你认为呢?In my opinion, an egalitarian society is one in which everyone has the same rights and the same opportunities. I completely agree that people can achieve more in this kind of society.Education is an important factor with regard to personal success in life. I believe that all children should have access to free schooling, and higher education should be either free or affordable for all those who chose to pursue a university degree. In a society without free schooling or affordable higher education, only children and young adults from wealthier families would have access to the best learning opportunities, and they would therefore be better prepared for the job market. This kind of inequality would ensure the success of some but harm the prospects of others.I would argue that equal rights and opportunities are not in conflict with people's freedom to succeed or fail. In other words, equality does not mean that people lose their motivation to succeed, or that they are not allowed to fail. On the contrary, I believe that most people would feel more motivated to work hard and reach their potential if they thought that they lived in a fair society. Those who did not make the same effort would know that they had wastedtheir opportunity. Inequality, on the other hand, would be morelikely to demotivate people because they would know that the odds of success were stacked in favour of those from privileged backgrounds.In conclusion, it seems to me that there is a positive relationship between equality and personal success.【雅思考试满分作文范文【精选5篇】】雅思考试写作范文(篇二)对于第二段，将重点放在我自己的想法上，并用三点来进一步发展。

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雅思小作文练习【篇一：雅思小作文阶段练习和总结】小作文常用词汇与句型summary饼状图基本是由百分比来描述数字的相对大小的。

试想下中文的描述语言：a占。

的百分之。

其中包含两种词汇：1. 占， 2. 百分比1. 占：a. 主动：occupy, take up, account for, constitute, representb. 被动：be shared by,c. 词组：be in chart of, be responsible for2. 比例：percentage, proportion, segment, rate, share, figure3. 数字表示：a. 纯数字：32% ，32 percentb. 分数：one third, two fifths , one in four, three out of fourc. 文字表示：quarter, half, the majority, the vast majority, the minority,the small minority, a tiny p ercentage of …, most ofd. 大概： just over, just under, nearly, about, around, approximately,roughly,除了main features以外，我们还要make comparisons，即对象之内以及之间的大小比较。

比较的三种情况：1. 大/小：a. more than/ less thanb. higher—lower, larger---smallerc. more populard. the most popular / the largest-smallest proportione. favor / prefer a rather than b2. 相同：a. as many/ much/ popular as三种句式：1. the number of students in class a is as many as that in class b.2. class a has as many students as class b3. as many students in class a sat the ielts as those in class b.b. follow the similar patternc. a similar trend could be seen in a.d. the trend favors a rather than b.3. 倍数：a. double the number of…b. xx times as many as4. 修饰词： much, slightly, considerably, nearly5. 转折词：on the other hand, by contrast, however, another example is ,conversely, while, whereas一、 ) 主体段常用句式1. a is/occupies.. % / a (%)…. /a, which occupies %, …. /with …2. a, comprising/consisting of %, …. -----= include整体包括部分；compose,constitute 部分组成整体3. the largest number went on/ came from ..4. a has almost over a quarter/half/twice as manypopulation/much moneyas b5. a has some figures in common with b. / a similar patterncan be foundin b6. the chief difference between a and b lies in…7. a is overwhelming greater than b8. a is/occupies.. % / a (%)…. /a, which occupies %, …. /with …9. a, comprising/consisting of %, …. -----= include整体包括部分；compose,constitute 部分组成整体10.the largest number went on/ came from.练习：写下以下词语的同义替换show： ---------------------------------------------------below：---------------------------------------------------information： ---------------------------------------------------proportion： ---------------------------------------------------number： ---------------------------------------------------category： ---------------------------------------------------demand： ---------------------------------------------------males： ---------------------------------------------------females： ---------------------------------------------------university： ---------------------------------------------------family： ---------------------------------------------------练习：把下列作文的开头段与对应的题目做比较，找出改写了的内容。

1. the chart shows the time spent by uk residents on different types oftelephone calls between 1995 and 2002. 剑9t22. the graph shows energy consumption in the us from 1989 to 2012, andprojected consumption to 2030. 剑9t43. the pie chart shows that there are four main causes of farmlandbecoming degraded in the world today. 剑8t14. the charts show how much a uk school spent on different running costsin three separate years: 1981, 1991 and 2001. 剑8t25. the graph illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken andfish consumed in a particular european country between 1979 and 2004. 剑7t26. the charts compare the sources of electricity in australia and france inthe years 1980 and 2000. between these years, electricity production almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 in australia, and from 90 to 180 units in france. 剑7t47. the graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changedbetween 1900 and 2000. 剑6t18. the graph shows the increase in the aging population in japan, swedenand the usa. it indicates that the percentage of elderly people in all three countries is expected to increase to almost 25% of the respective population by the year 2040. 剑5t19. the table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who wereliving in poverty in australia in 1999. 剑4t110.the chart gives information about post-school qualifications in terms ofthe different levels of further education reached by men and women in australia in 1999. 剑4t4饼状图核心表达练习由…组成：be made up ofbe composed of /be comprised ofconsist of包含一个家长或者只有一个成人的家庭不大可能会贫困。

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------表示占多少（后面跟百分比或者是数字）：make up农场工人只占据总人口的一小部分。