雅思写作大作文审题之题目特点与分析

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英语考试作文-雅思写作真题范文之:大城市生活影响人们健康

英语考试作文-雅思写作真题范文之:大城市生活影响人们健康

英语考试作文雅思写作真题范文之:大城市生活影响人们健康考鸭们都知道,2018年的雅思作文真题都来自于历史题库。

本文就为大家梳理历年雅思写作真题范文——教育类话题:Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2014年3月1日)题目讲解题型类别:议论文审题要点:大城市的生活是否会对人们的健康造成破坏思路分析:文章架构可以选择单边倒,倾向一边或中立,城市发展和健康类的很多素材稍作改动都可以很好地支持论点。

同意:1.整个自然环境遭到严重破坏,如空气污染,导致人们的健康遭到威胁;2.生活节奏快,在大城市生活的人们往往精神压力大,心理不健康不同意(让步段):城市健身设施完备,很多人也积极参加锻炼,但尽管如此,只要人们生活的自然环境没有得到改善,生活节奏过快,人们还是很难维持健康。

雅思写作大作文范文In many countries today, big cities seem to be stubbornly appealing to the mass population, along with which there arises the question as for whether living in a city will damage people’s health. For me, the answer is definitely yes.在今天的许多国家,大城市似乎一直在顽固地吸引着大量人口,同时也出现了一个问题,那就是居住在城市是否会损害人们的健康。

对我来说,答案是肯定的。

On one hand, the environment of most major cities, especially those in developing and underdeveloped countries, has been severely destroyed due to the overly quick industrialization. Take air pollution as an example, the speed of vehicles’s injecting tail gas and erect chimneys’ vomiting forth clouds of smoke is so fast and the volume so considerable that the atmosphere long before has failed to degrade the pollutants. Consequently, haze become a new natural hazard in many metropolises in the long run, with the PM 2.5 density insome reaching several times the national limit.一方面,大多数主要城市的环境,特别是发展中国家和欠发达国家的环境,由于过度的工业化而遭到严重破坏。

雅思作文题目和范文详细分析

雅思作文题目和范文详细分析

雅思作文题目详细分析题目:It is better for people to be unemployed than people to be employed without a job they enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (对于人们来说,失业比从事不喜欢的工作好。

你同意还是不同意这个观点?)首先,正方观点可以概括为,宁可不工作,也不要做自己不喜欢的工作。

我们不难分析到,如果一个人对自己的工作没有兴趣的话,那么每一份工作都将很难做长久,尤其在面对困难或者更好薪水的工作机会面前,很容易放弃现有工作,这无疑不利于个人职业以及公司的长远发展。

有关这个论点给一段例文:It is undeniable that engaging in a job without enjoyment hardly lasts long. This is mainly because they are more likely to give up and hunt for other job opportunities especially when encountering difficulties. With low motivation, employees tend to be reluctant to do their utmost when dealing with tasks in the workplace, which would be totally different from those who insist in discovering new areas and conquering obstacles due to inner motivation without being disturbed by outer hindrances or worries, such as a shortage of a grant or lower salaries.相反,反方观点是不论喜欢与否,都应该先做一份工作。

英语考试作文-雅思写作高分攻略:雅思写作题目类型及思路分析

英语考试作文-雅思写作高分攻略:雅思写作题目类型及思路分析

英语考试作文雅思写作高分攻略:雅思写作题目类型及思路分析进入雅思备考冲刺阶段,很多考生虽然做到了写作练习,但写作上依然存在很多问题,以至于越练越迷茫。

小站雅思君建议考生按照雅思写作题目类型复习和训练,对于雅思写作有一个全局的把握。

雅思写作题目类型:教育类 1. 教育应该包括哪些内容?母题:It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfil both these functions? (050312提示:本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开(个人与社会),准备好这篇文章,即可应付教育类话题中的最大分支—教育的功能,做到以不变应万变。

对于社会角度,可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开,对于个人,可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。

子题:大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能?大学的是应当把学生培养成合格的公民还是让他们自己得益?准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验?大学要不要扩招?中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育?要不要延长义务教育年限?要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学?老师要教学生如何判断是非吗?2. 学校的科目谁来选择?母题:Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion. (060916)提示:这类题目采取的策略就是“双批判”,因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。

2023年6月17日雅思大作文范文及解析

2023年6月17日雅思大作文范文及解析

2023年6月17日雅思大作文范文及解析再犯罪的原因和解决办法一、2023年6月20日雅思大作文题目Many criminals continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happen? How can we solve this problem?二、范文及解析IntroductionA mushrooming number of criminals, after being released from the jail, will revert to crime, exerting ceaseless baneful influence on the social harmony and stability. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my perspective, are two predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.解析本场考试重复1月14日大作文考题,虽然是很多考生害怕的犯罪类话题,但本题以说明文的形式考出,要求分析犯罪分子被释放出之后继续犯罪的原因及解决方法,是一个复古旧题,整体难度并不大;mushrooming adj.迅速增长的;越来越多的;ceaseless adj.不断的;不停的;baneful adj.不好的;有害的;ticklish adj.难对付的;棘手的;Body 1The chief culprit for re-offending would be the difficulty for the criminals to settle down and reintegrate into the society. Indisputably, one of the root causesfor anti-social behaviors is poverty, by which I mean living odds force some people to embark on a path of delinquency to support themselves by engaging in illegal activities such as stealing, larceny and the like. After being freed from the prison, with a criminal record, never would it be easy for the law-breakers who lack livelihood skills to secure a job and become economically independent. Another contributing factor for such a worrying trend has much to do with the psychology condition of the criminals. Suffering from improper treatment, be it physical punishment or verbal aggression, many offenders, when set free from the prison, are inundated with resentment instead of visions of life, for which they, running after revenge, are apt to fall back into perpetrating crimes.解析:再次犯罪的原因有:(1)物质层面:犯过罪的人出来之后在稳定生活重新融入社会上存在明显困难;(2)精神层面:报复心理;culprit n.不好的事情的原因;罪魁祸首;reintegrate into v.重新融入;living odds n.生活窘境;verbal aggression n.语言攻击;embark on a path of delinquency v.走上犯罪的道路;larceny n.盗窃;be inundated with v.充斥着;resentment n. 愤恨;怨恨;revenge n.复仇;are apt to v.倾向于;易于;perpetrate v.犯罪;作恶;Body 2Prickly as the issue is, steps can be taken to address this . Primarily, the government should play a leading role by enacting tougher laws and carrying out more severe penalties such as heavier fines or longer sentences for offenders toaccomplish the purpose of deterrence. The authorities should also polish the effectiveness of imprisonment with the aim to help criminals achieve rehabilitation. To specify, job-related training targeted at those released offenders are staunchly suggested, which enables them to be furnished with some employment abilities, be they a plumber, a hairdresser or a driver. In this case, they can be, in large part, encouraged to live a normal life rather than violate the law for survival. Efforts from family members, friends and the society are also indispensable to cure the mental disorders. To elaborate, showing enough respect and helping those ex-prisoners to find a job are great tender solicitude. The general public and the whole society should be made to believe are formed man deserves a new leaf.解析:解决方法:(1)政府层面:颁布更严格的法律配备更严厉的处罚以达到更好的震慑作用;进一步改进监禁的教育方式从而达到帮助犯罪分子真正改过自新;(2)家庭和社会:更多地尊重,接纳,包容改过自新的罪犯;prickly adj.麻烦的;address v.解决;enact v.制定;颁布法令;rehabilitation n.改过自新;staunchly adv.强烈地;be furnished with v.具有;配备有;solicitude n.安慰;关怀reformed adj.改过自新的;ConclusionIn conclusion, the problem for ex-prisoners to resort to offence, notwithstanding its gravity, can be brought under control with both the government and the public shouldering joint responsibility.解析:总结前文:notwithstanding prep. 虽然;尽管;gravity n.严重性;三、范文2There are a variety of punishments for criminals, including imprisonment, fines, and community service. However, even after serving their sentences, a significant proportion of ex-prisoners continue to commit crimes. This essay will explore the reasons behind this and propose solutions.对罪犯有各种各样的惩罚,包括监禁、罚款和社区服务。

雅思写作大作文要求

雅思写作大作文要求

雅思写作大作文要求雅思大作文要求大概是这样的:一、题目类型与任务。

1. 议论文类型。

对于观点类题目,就像有人在你耳边叽叽喳喳说个观点,比如“有人觉得科技让我们的生活更孤独了,你怎么看?”你得明确说出自己同意不同意,或者部分同意,然后像跟朋友聊天辩论一样,摆事实、讲道理。

讨论双方观点类的题目呢,就好比两个人在吵架,各执一词,你得站在中间当和事佬,把两边的观点都分析分析,然后再说说自己更倾向哪一边,为啥。

解决问题类的题目,就像是家里出了个小麻烦,比如“城市交通拥堵,你有啥办法解决?”你要找出问题的根源,然后提出一些可行的解决方案,可不能天马行空,得是那种真的能在现实里使上劲儿的办法。

2. 报告类题目。

这就像是有人请你去调查个事儿。

比如说“描述一下你们社区的休闲设施,并且说说怎么改进”。

你得先描述现状,是有个破破烂烂的小操场呢,还是有个超酷的健身房。

然后根据现状,提出改进的点子,像给操场添点新的游乐设施,或者把健身房的器材更新一下之类的。

二、文章结构。

1. 开头。

开头得像个漂亮的开场白,把题目里的事儿简单提一提,就像你开始讲一个故事前先给个小引子。

比如“最近大家都在讨论科技对生活的影响,有人说让生活更孤独了,这事儿可有点意思,咱们来唠唠。

”然后最好在开头就表明自己的观点或者表明你要讨论的方向,这样读者(也就是考官)就知道你要带他往哪儿走了。

2. 主体段落。

如果是议论文,一般得有两到三个主体段落。

每个段落要有个中心思想,就像这个段落的小头目。

比如说一个段落是讲科技为啥会让生活孤独,你可以说“科技让我们的交流变得虚拟了”,然后围绕这个点展开,像“现在大家都在手机上聊天,看着屏幕里的文字,没有面对面那种温暖的感觉,朋友之间虽然天天发消息,但是真正见面的时候却没多少话说了”。

每个段落里要有足够的例子来支撑你的观点,例子要具体,不能光说大道理。

就像你说“运动对健康好”,你得具体说“我邻居老王,以前天天生病,后来开始跑步,现在身体倍儿棒,吃嘛嘛香”。

雅思写作真题之大作文利弊分析类

雅思写作真题之大作文利弊分析类

雅思写作真题之大作文利弊分析类这里我们给大家带来一篇关于探讨教育意义的雅思写作大作文题目,包括范文和解析,希望大家能够从中学习和领悟雅思写作思路和方法,同时掌握更多的句型和词汇。

接下来请看内容:雅思写作真题之大作文利弊分析类雅思写作真题之大作文利弊分析类雅思写作题目:The most important thing of people's life is his or her work. Without a satisfying career, the life is meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?雅思写作去模版范文解析:此题目为教育类话题,体裁为议论文下属的利弊分析类,要分别陈述将大部分时间花在学习上对社会和孩子自身的影响。

先交代background information,如:Education, especially children's, is undoubtedly of vital importance to a nation's sustained economic development.再进一步导入具体内容:对孩子产生的积极影响和小孩子可扎实掌握更多深层次知识。

对孩子产生的负面影响:小孩子花过多时间在学习上可能会对成长不利。

可举例说明一下,比如:长时间的sedentary lifestyle令人们担忧他们的健康状况。

在整个论述的过程中,考生可采用举例论证和因果论证这两种常见也是最有效的论证方法详细展开。

长时间学习对孩子自身和整个社会利弊皆有,可通过鼓励孩子在学习过程中积极参加更多的课外活动。

消除弊端,把孩子朝受益的方向引领。

雅思写作去模版范文:With the increasing proportion of employed workers, whether or not one’s career is his or her whole has become a widely debated topic. While some believe that job is the most crucial element of our life, others maintain that there are many other essential things which are meaningful to us. Given that lifeis colourful and non-inevitable relationship between success of career and the meaning of life, I strongly disagree that there will be nothing left if we failed to reach the peak of career.随着就业人数的增加,一个人的职业生涯是否是他或她的整个已经成为一个广泛争论的话题。

雅思作文考题审题误区分析

雅思作文考题审题误区分析

雅思作文考题审题误区分析雅思作文考题审题误区分析下面雅思为大家整理了雅思大作文审题误区分析,供考生们参考,以下是详细内容。

雅思大作文审题误区题目的题干主次不分一个完整的雅思考题,一般是由题干部分和提问部分组成。

题干部分通常是一到二个句子,这二个句子之间的逻辑关系一般为因果,转折或者并列。

若是并列关系的话,前后这二个句子意思的重要性是一致的,但是若题干部分是因果或者转折关系时,意思的重点就放在了表示结果的和表示转折的这个句子上了,于是另外一个句子就变成了次要意思。

而很多考生在考试或者平时训练时,往往会很想当然地把题干中一些比较熟悉的单词当作题目的重心,然后马上就提笔展开写作。

其实这是很不对的。

下面我们来看一个考题:Scientificand technological advances bring benefits to our daily life. However,mostscientists are no longer able to find solutions to the problems they havecreated. To what extent do you agree or disagree?可能读了这个题目后很多考生会觉得接下来的'作文里至少有一段是要去论证一下科技进步给生活带来的哪些好处或者便利。

其实如果你写了这个内容的话那么就大错特错了。

题干的逻辑关系是转折,这就意味着转折词以后的部分是题干的主要意思,前面那个句子只是用来进行背景铺垫或者对比的作用。

因此,我们在对这篇作文进行段落布局的时候一个方面是要去论述一下为什么科学家很难找到解决科技进步所造成问题的解决方案,而另外一个方面则需说明一下科学家们已经或者可以或者有能力找到所有或一些解决办法。

这样的双边论证从思路上才是正确的。

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雅思写作之6大写作话题解析

雅思写作之6大写作话题解析

雅思写作之6大写作话题解析雅思大作文写作话题许多,雅思写作高频话题有政府类,社会类,教育类,环境类,科技类,媒体类及犯罪类等。

今日我给大家带来了雅思写作之6大写作话题解析,盼望能够关心到大家,一起来学习吧。

雅思写作之6大写作话题解析雅思写作解析—政府类写作话题政府类的考题基本围绕政府的责任和政府投资进行。

比如政府是否应当禁烟,政府的钱应当花在哪些方面,艺术,体育,健康,教育,养老,国际救济等等。

1. Some people say the government should not put money in the arts, such as music, opera and paintings, but instead should spend more money on basic facility. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 政府投资艺术还是基础设施建设。

2. Some people said the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums, and they should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree? 政府投资体育消遣还是医疗教育。

3. Some people say that the government should pay for the health and education of its citizens, but other people say that it is not the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion? 政府是否应当担当人们的医疗教育。

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雅思写作大作文审题之题目特点与分析
考生们在写作真正下笔前,需要做的第一件事就是审题。

审题是指在真正动笔写作之前对于考题的理解和分析的过程。

它是雅思写作的第一步,也是非常关键的一个步骤,它直接关系着一篇作文的质量。

良好的审题,能正确引导考生进行接下来的几个写作步骤——头脑风暴(brain storming),结构和写作(writing-up work);反之,则会导致偏题甚至跑题的风险。

那么,具体应该如何审题呢?在介绍具体步骤和技巧之前,朗阁海外考试研究中心先给大家介绍和分析雅思写作题目的特点和具体分类。

一、雅思写作题目特点
雅思写作命题主要是由两大主题部分构成:Background information和Question。

例如以下真题:
Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. ——(Background information)
To what extent do you agree or disagree? ——(Question)
在background information里,我们可以找到具体的写作话题(eg. 犯罪)。

而且,这些话题通常以三种形式出现:一个独立观点(Some people think giving aid to poorer countries has more negative effects than positive effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?)、两个对立观点(Some people think they have right to use as much fresh water as they want, others, otherwise believe governments should strictly control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.)和一种社会现象或问题(Not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects to the society?)。

至于在第二部分——Question中,我们可以找到作文的提问方式。

(具体见以下“按提问方式分类”部分)
二、雅思写作分类
雅思大作文根据不同的分类标准,可以分成不同类别,下面主要给大家介绍两大分类方法:
1. 按话题分类
雅思大作文经常涉及到的话题包括:社会、教育、科技、文化、政府;同时,也包括一些出题频率相对较低的话题:犯罪、环境、媒体、动物、女性等。

对不同话题的熟悉和总结,可以帮助考生考前了解考试内容,实现做好心理准备并做出相应的准备工作,如,总结素材。

2. 按提问方式分类
按照提问方式,雅思大作文主要可以分为三大类:Argumentation、Report和Mixed type。

l Argumentation
议论文是大作文中出题频率最高的一类,约占到70%,主要可以归为以下五类:
Do you agree or disagree?
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Discuss its advantages and disadvantages.
Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
五种类别中,其中第二种和第三种考察频率最高,几乎占到80%。

l Report
报告类作文的提问方式以what are the reasons for this和give some solutions为主打;其次,也经常会问到what are the effects或are there any other factors等。

l Mixed type
Mixed type是指提问方式由一个议论文的提问方式加上一个报告类的提问方式构成,两个问题的提问顺序不固定。

比如说:
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic problems and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think are more effective?
三、特殊题目的处理
1. 题目中遇到生词怎么办
总体来说,雅思写作题目中的词汇属于基础词汇,基本不会涉及到高难度词语。

但是,如果在考试中偶尔碰到不认识的词该怎么处理呢?
首先,如果题目background information出现两个对比观点,如果一方观点中有词汇不认识,可通过另一个观点推出该词的大致意思。

例如:Some people think students should go to boarding schools instead of living at home. Do you agree or disagree? 此题中,比方说有同学不认识boarding school, 那么可以通过live at home推测出其意思,因为,这两者是对立关系,所以,学生住在家里的对立面应该是住在学校里,由此推测boarding school应该是指寄宿学校。

此外,有些生词后面会给出具体的例子,那么我们可以根据例子来推测该词的意思。

比方说,In many countries, fossil fuels such as coal, natural gas and crude oil are the main source of energy while in some other countries, the use of alternative sources of energy such as wind power and solar energy is increasingly encouraged. To what extent do you think this is a positive development? 很多同学都不认识这道题目中的fossil fuel和alternative sources 两个词,但是我们可以发现,这两个词后面都跟了具体的例子,通过分析例子,我们发现他们分别有共性,一种是传统能源而另一种则是清洁能源,故此,推断出这两个词的意思。

但是,如果实在推测不出生词的意思,那么只有避开生词部分,转而讨论另一方面,比如boarding school VS living at home这个话题,如果考生不熟悉boarding school, 那么可以转向讨论学生住在家里的好处。

2. 注意题目中细节信息
There are an increasing number of juvenile delinquents. What are the causes of this
phenomenon? How can we solve this problem? 这是很典型的犯罪类题目,很多烤鸭们看到这道题目很兴奋,因为大部分培训老师都会在课堂上讲到这类犯罪类话题。

但是,这个题目还是会有不低的偏题率。

首先,由于审题不细致,juvenile(青少年)这个词容易被忽略,因此,写作对象便被扩大成整个社会的犯罪。

此外,increasing这个词也很重要,题目中提问的是“为什么会有越来越多的青少年犯罪”,体现了一个犯罪率上升的趋势,而不是单纯的“为什么会有犯罪”。

所以,审题时应当注意一些细节信息的表达。

There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones? 注意题目中的第一问——这些问题是什么,应当分别从social、medical和technical三个角度分析手机使用带来的问题。

但是,很多考生却错误地整体分析手机带来的消极影响,忽略了三个方面的分析。

四、审题步骤
基于以上分析,朗阁海外考试研究中心建议“烤鸭们”按以下步骤认真进行审题:
1. 通读一篇题目,了解话题和提问方式;
2. 细读题目,抽取题目中观点或对立观点;
3. 再读题目,着重划出关键词,辩论焦点或其它绝对词/句,限定词及increasing number of
等需要引起高度关注的词句。

总体而言,雅思写作审题任务其实不难,也没什么高深的技巧。

但是,很多学生由于粗心或者不懂得题目类别及各个类别的特点,看到似曾相识的题目,没有仔细审题,动笔就写,结果导致偏题甚至跑题,最终拿到一个比自己预想低得多的成绩。

因为,雅思写作题目虽然话题重复率很高,但是通常会在原有话题基础上做些小的调整和改动,那么,在审题环节不注意的烤鸭们就不知不觉地栽了个大跟斗。

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