高考英语题型之短文改错
备战2023年高考英语母题题源解密(全国通用)：短文改错(解析版)
专题10短文改错【母题来源一】2022·全国卷【母题题文】1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise.A doctor tells me people who lives the longest are dancers and cyclists(定语从句).Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air,smooth movement and exercise（表语从句）. Whether you ride a bicycle,you don’t use petrol.So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air pollution.Just see how cars have been over our cities.They often run at high speeds(高速),what may put our lives in danger（处于危险中）.And there were traffic jams,too.Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle.【答案】1.greatly→great2.lives→live3.在because后加of4.Whether→If或Whether→When5.they→you6.cause→causing7.去掉have后的been8.what→which9.were→are10.bicycle→bicycles【解析】这是一篇议论文。
(完整版)高考英语专题短文改错二十篇1-20(附答案)
1. Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 miles per hour，we passed over a car。
It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road。
My friend slows down, and pulled behind the other car。
He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn't so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself. I thought my friend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing，but I won't forget his good nature or character。
2. Dear Brad，I’m very glad to hear from you。
In your last letter you ask about the post—80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford。
高考英语短文改错训练3,共5篇,含答案
2020届高二英语专题：短文改错（三）1.短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
）划掉。
修改：修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
后的词。
Good morning, everyone. It’s great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun, born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influenced by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and sports. I’m easy-going, get along well with my classmates.It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream constantly that I, along with mine classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.1.Good morning, everyone. It’s ∧ great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun,a born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influencedboth 或去掉all by them, I read widely during my early age, but by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and I’ve developed a great interest in arts andand sports. I’m easy sports. I’m easy-going, -going, ∧get along well with my classmates.and 或get 改为getting It is this personality which It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also helpthathelps me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your to university has always been a beautiful dream for me.university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream I dream constantly that I, along with minemy classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swimhappily freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.dreams2.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
英语高考短文改错精选和答案详解(25篇)
高考短文改错精选及答案详解(25篇)1.Friendship is importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all 76.our lives we can’t live without friendship just like we can’t77.live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on 78.well with one another to go ahead under different kind of 79. difficulties in front of us. But real friendship is easy to 80.come by, True friendship must be sincerely and be based 81.on understand each other but not on benefits of each 82.other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us. 83.By his advice we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore 84.more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves. 85.2.Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over 91. _______ the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since 92. _______ long ago , many adults and children called their friends together 93. _______to spend hours , even days play games . One of the reasons why people 94. _______like to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other words, 95. _______they help to keep people strongly and feeling good . When people are 96. _______playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities 97. _______for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy. 98. _______Many people enjoy sports by watch the others play. In American 99. _______big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 100 _______3.Last week life didn’t look very well for heart transplant patient.76. Barry Brooks from London. He was told six month ago that he would 77. need the operation if he is to survive. He immediately planned to make 78. the across Atlantic journey to the hospital in Chicago to have the 79. operation on. While he was in transit（中转）at JFK airport in New York, 80. he received the news that his new heart had accidentally transported 81. to other hospital. Barry then had to get on a different plane to 82. convey him to the other hospital, there the operation was carried. 83. out in time. Barry is now gradually recovering from the transplant. 84. but he told us,“ I feel like being a new man-this new heart has”85. changed my life.”4.Have you ever asked you why children 76.go to school? You’ll probably say that they 77.go to learn their native languages and other 78.languages, physics, geography, history or all 79.the other subject. That’s quite true, but 80.why they learn these things? And are these 81.things all what they learn at school? 82.There is much in school education than 83.just learning knowledge. We go school, above 84.all, to learn how to learn, so that when we’ll 85.finish school, we can continue to learn.5.The Chinese diet is the healthy in the world. 61.It contains lots of fruit and green vegetables. 62.It's high at fibre and low in sugar and fat. 63.But the western diet contains too many 64.fat and sugar in form of creams, cakes and so on. 65.Because this, westerners very easily 66.put to weight. As a result, scores of people 67.die from heart illness, some suffer from 68.bad teeth. So the doctor suggests us not 69.to do that. We'd better to eat our healthy food. 70.6.Dear classmates ,Now I’d like to tell you why I learn English. 1. __I often read English aloud and try learn something 2. __ important by hearts , which helps me remember it easily and 3. __ form the good habit of thinking in English 4. __I listen to a lot and talk with others in English . 5. __In this way , I was improved both my hearing 6. _ and my spoken English. I keep a diary in English every day but my 7. ___ spoken English is becoming better and better. 8. ___ I also try my best to master the necessary grammarknowledge. By this means , I can express itself 9. ___ in English correct . That’s the way I have been learnin g 10. __ English . I hope it will be useful to you .That’s all . Thank you.7．Dear Mr. Smith,I am writing to tell you a piece of excited news: 76.___________I won first place in the Spoken English Competition of 77.___________ our city . The achievement that I made it is due to your 78.___________ kind help. You spent so much time help me with my spoken 79.___________English that I made rapid progress, I remember you advice 80.___________" Speak slowly and clearly. " Thank you very much all your time 81.___________and advice . I heard that you and your wife will visit 82.___________our school before long. I'm very glad and look forward to 83.___________see you. I sent you a telescope as a small gift. 84.___________Please check the mail and I hope you will like them. 85.___________Yours Li Ming8．Nowadays more and more people, specially schoolboys and schoolgirls, are 76_____ give to video games. Many of them spend all of their spare time 77_____ to the games, and some even stay at the game machines all day 78_____ long. The reason is that they can enrich their lives as well as 79_____ knowledge by playing video games. But it’s a good way of relaxing 80_____ after a day’s work and study , as video games can bring a fun to 81_____ people’s life. However, on the other hand , play video games too 82_____ much can waste time and money, and has an ill effect on 83_____ people’s eyesight and healthy .So, video games, like coins, have two sides. 84_____ The key point is that we should make of the games properly. 85_____9Henry Royce did not like his car, that ran badly and often 76.broke down. So he decided to make a best car himself, 77.and in 1904 he produced his first new model. Charles Rolls, 78.a car maker, was very interested in Royce' s car, but soon 79.Rolls and Royce go into business together. One of their first 80.model was the Silver Ghost. In 1907, a Silver Ghost broke the 81.world’s record by drive 14,371 miles without breaking down 82.once. After the drive, it was cost just over ￡2 to put the car 83.back into perfect condition. This is not surprising that the Silver 84.Ghost was regarded “the best car in the world”. 85.10．Most families in China hoped their single children will 61. ______have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 62. ______So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 63. ______homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. 64. ______The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 65. ______wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 66. ______attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people 67. ______already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 68. ______Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our 69. ______government is carry out a plan to solve the education problems. 70. ______11One day, on her way school, Li Lan found a small bag 76.________near a bus station. She opened it and found a lot of money 77.________as soon as a calling card inside. From the calling card, she 78.________ invented the owner’s address and his telephone number. 79.________She thought the owner must very worried. So she went 80.________to the public telephones and called the owner. Then she 81.________ waited for the bus station. The owner came by taxi very 82.________ soon, and Li Lan gave the bag to him. The owner is so grateful 83._________to her that he took out from 100 yuan to reward Li Lan, 84._________ But Li Lan polite refused it and went on to school. 85._________12Fishing is my favorite sport. I often fished for 76.________________hour without catching anything, but this doesn’t worry 77. ________________me. Some fishermen are unlucky. Instead catching fish, 78. ________________they catch old boots and rubbish. I’m even less luck. I 79.________________never catch everything—even old boots after having 80. ________________spent a whole morning on the river. So I always go home 81. ________________with empty bag. “Y ou should give up fishing,” my friends 82. ________________say, “It’s a waste time.” But they don’t realize one 83. ________________ important thing. I’m not real interested in fishing. I’m 84. ________________only interested in sitting in a boat and do nothing at all. 85. ________________13．Life is made up from success and failure. No 76. ______ one is always success and also no one is always a 77.______ failure. So it doesn’t make much different 78.______ whether you are successful or not. The most 79._-____ important thing is simply that you do before your success 80.______ or failure. If you lost heart when you fail 81.______ or show proud when you succeed, you will 82.______ never succeed. Instead, you should face to it 83.______ bravely and keep up with your courage when you 84.______ success, and then your failure can be changed into success. 85._______14．I went to the Summer Palace last week. At the gateI happened to meet some American tourists. I greeted to 76.______them in English and then we began to chat. I got know 77.______that they were college students travel in China. Most of 78.______them were found of Chinese medicine. They are busy taking 79.______pictures and were much impressed with the changes that 80.______had been taken place in the past few years as well. After 81.______that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time. 82.______We exchanged our email address so that we could write to 83.______each other in future. They thanked us again and again. I 84.______was very glad to have a chance to practicing my oral English. 85._______15．Tom and Dick are next door neighbor who both 76. ____work in same office. They often walk together to and 77. ____from work. Once they were walking to home together 78. ____while it suddenly started to rain. Tom quickly opened 79. ____his umbrella and said proud, “My wife really was great80. ____ foresight. She said this morning it would rain and tell 81. ____me to carry my umbrella.” Dick smiled and walked 82. ____up to him under the protection of the umbrella, said, 83. ____“Mine has even great foresight. She didn’t let me84. ____carry one as she knew you’d share yours with you.”85. ____16．Before he was a teacher , Bob told me what he 76 ___________ would like to be a lawyer when he was at school . 77 ___________ He worked very hard in his lessons and tried to 78___________ enter into a famous university , but something unhappy 79 ___________ happened in his family , which make necessary for him 80___________ to make for a living . As a young man , he had been a 81___________ bus driver ,a dustman and a salesman .But he spends his 82 ___________ spare time studying and finally becoming a college 83___________ teacher . “Young people,” he often said ,“full of wishes 84 ___________ and dream s before they step into the society” 85 ___________17．As is known , that is interesting to teach children to 76__________ swim while they are still babies . Most the large towns in 77 __________ Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for 78__________ babies . The idea has quickly spread to Europe from where, 79__________in several countries , special courses are now offered to 80 __________the children who are from 7 to 24 month old . 81 __________The first step is to have child get rid of fear of 82 __________ water . Next , he is teaching to float in water . Once he 83__________can do that naturally and can swim with fear , the child can 84__________ master the technique and push him forward through the water. 85__________18．At a party, it is quite normal of someone to have 1. ____a short conversation with you and then go on to talking 2. ____to other people! Don’t think they dislike you or they 3. ____are impolite. It has the custom at many parties 4. ____in Britain, particularly there people are standing up rather 5. ____than sitting down. Here are two ways of finishing conversation 6. ____at a party. "Excuse me. I think I’ll go and get another drinking. 7. ____See you later, perhaps?" "Oh. Excuse me. I’ve just seen 8. ____Mary Jennings over here. I’ve got to discuss a meeting we 9. ____are been having on Thursday. Would you excuse me for a moment?"" 10. ____19．There are advantage for students to work while 76. __________studying at school. One of them was that 77. __________they can earn money. For the most part, 78. __________students working to earn money for their own 79. __________use. Earning their own money allow them 80. __________to spend on anything as if they please. 81. __________They would have to ask their parents for 82. __________money or for permission to do things by 83. __________the money. Some students may also to save 84. __________up for our college or future use. 85. __________20My sister found a bird on the roadside. We named himJack and keep him for about three years. He would greet us 76.________ in a tree outside our bedroom, calling "Hello" as we lay in 77.________ bed in a morning. He also passed "Hello" to the cats when 78._______ they came into the room. We often played a trick on himself. 79._______ We'd throw a coin as far as possibly. Jack would fly away 80._______ and bring it back for us throw again. He would also catch 81._______ the food throwing to him from the other side of the room and 82._______ sing happily. But for the most wonderful thing about Jack 83.________ were his musical ability. Leaving him at home all day, we 84._______ would return at night to hear that he'd picked up from the 85._______ radio in the day21．My car just wouldn’t move any further .It was complete 76．________ dead, and I was a few miles far away from anywhere on a cold, 77．_______wet night .I decided walk around a little before accepting I’d 78．_______have to spend the night in the car .Maybe I can find a 79．________ telephone .Actually ,I didn’t have to walk far before I 80．________ found a small house standing on a field with a light 81．________ shone from the sitting room .I knocked at the door and 82．________ was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the 83．________ door but listened to my story carefully .He said he had 84．________no t elephone, and it wasn’t’ one within walking distance, 85．________but offered to come and look at my car.22You can find all kinds information in just 76. __________a few minute on the Internet. It’s like going to a77. __________huge library without have to walk around to find 78. __________your books. Recently even though, many people 79. __________have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. 80. __________They have been reports in America about people 81. __________trying to steal person information for bad purposes. 82. __________Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all 83. __________ information are good to society. For example, you 84. __________can find such information like how to kill people. 85. __________The problem will become more serious in the future.23．I often dream of a teacher , I dream of standing on the 76．platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys 77．and girls . I teach them , play with them , but watch them 78．growing up . I am always young when I was staying 79．with them . I know there is not easy to be a teacher . Y ou 80．have to learn in order to teach . Without enough knowledge, 81．you can never learn well .What is more , you have to 82．be friends with your pupils and take good care of him . 83．Only in this way can you be a good teacher and win 84．respect from them . Though I am a student now , I willwork as very hard to make my dream come true . 85．24．When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handingin the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had not studied 76. _____________at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. 77. _____________I went through the test for many times but I could only answer 78. _____________ three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail 79. _____________ the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it 80. _____________ and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't 81. _____________ looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand 82. _____________ on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't 83. _____________ know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not push for 84._____________ cheating but instead gave me a second chance. 85. _____________ 25．Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 76. __________ describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 77. __________it seems always difficult for roe to do things well as 78. __________ them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as 79. __________a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 80. __________Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they 81. __________don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 82. __________very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 83. __________ once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t 84. __________seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 85. __________Yours,Tom答案1．76. important; 前加of 77. like--as 78. get 79. kinds 80. easy前加not 81. sincere 82. understanding 83. 正确84. persueded 85. more前加the 2．76. and －but 77. woman－women 78. called前加had 79. play- playing 80．正确81. feel-feeling 82. how-why 83. make-makes 84.watch+ing 85. sell-buy3．76. well-good/fine/nice/ok 77.month-months 78.is—was79.the—a 80.on 去掉81.had ∧been82.other—another 83.there—where 84.正确85.but—and4．76. 第二个you改为yourself。
(完整word版)高考英语短文改错题20篇
高考英语短文改错题20篇短文改错练习（1）Rowena and Billy Wrangler are model high schoolstudents . They study hard 。
They do extreme well on 76．achievement tests . And next year ，Rowena will attending 77．Harvard University 。
Billy ，her younger brother ，hoe to go 78．to Cornell 。
That makes Rowena and Billy different from 79．most students is that they don’t go to school . In fact ，80．they've never been to school 。
Since a kindergarten ，they 81．have studied at home . Neither Rowena or Billy feels as if 82．they have missed out on nothing by being taught at home . 83．As many of the more than one million people who receive 84．home schooling in the United States , they feel if they 85．have gotten a good education 。
短文改错练习（2）Did you enjoy yourself yesterday？I suppose you do。
But I’d 76．like to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday。
高考英语真题 短文改错题及答案
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven yearsold, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.
1. 【2019·全国卷I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
短文改错
2018年
Correction 1 2018全国卷I，10分
高考英语短文改错方法大全
高考英语短文改错方法大全英语短文改错对考生的要求较高，是对语言知识综合运用能力的考查，检测考生发现、判断、纠正文章错误的能力，进而考查学生的词法、句法及行文逻辑等方面的水平。
接下来是小编为大家整理的高考英语短文改错方法大全，希望大家喜欢!高考英语短文改错方法大全一1.形容词与副词的误用。
如exciting与excited，hard与hardly，possible与possibly，here与there等，以及形容词与副词的比较级与最高级。
2.名词的单复数误用。
如在several，many，various，different，afew，oneof等之后，常用名词的复数，在every与each之后常用单数。
3.代词的误用。
如you与your，it’s与its，it与they或them，one与ones，宾格(如me)与反身代词(如myself)等的误用。
4.介词的误用、缺少或多余。
常见的如in与on，to与for，instead与insteadof，because与becauseof等的误用。
5.时态的错误。
看一篇文章，要有一种大局观，要上前下挂，看看上下文的时态是否一致。
6.连词的误用。
如or与and的误用，and与but的误用，so与but的误用，because或since与so连用，though与but连用等。
7.第三人称单数后的动词形式。
8.一些固定结构的误用。
如so.。
that被误用作very.。
that，too.。
to被误用very.。
to，as.。
as被误作so.。
as等。
9.定语从句中，which，that，when，where等混淆不清。
10.一些常用词，如what与how，except与besides，any与some以及它们的合成词如any-thing与something，anywhere与somewhere等混淆不清。
高考英语短文改错方法大全二形成整体意识!首先明确，英语短文改错的体裁以记叙文为主。
高考英语短文改错练习题及答案共10篇
(一)Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busytaking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain.The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleepat the moment my head touched the pillow.（1）第一行：two-days 改为two-day 第二行：mountain 前加a第三行：noon后加when 第四行：them改为us第五行：visiting 改为visited 第六行：pictures；passed第七行：去down 第八行：and改为but 第九行：去at（二）Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people.According to studies, many children spend more time watching televisionthan they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may notbe develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can bevery noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials.On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, allplanned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.（2）第一行：with改为on 第二行：many改为some 第三行：because of 第四行：删去be；read改为reading 第五行：programs第六行：noisy第七行：On改为In 第八行：去掉want前的to；real改为really（三）I’m the captain of our school team so with my fellow playerswe’ve won several games. There will an important game next month.But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’tplay basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more timepreparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him.But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sportsand college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend hadno choice. He wanted to make their parents happy.(3)第一行：so改为and第二行：will后加be第三行：player 改为players；then改为now第四行：once改为any；删去in第五行：to改为for第六行：go改为going；第七行：was改为is第八行：their改为his (四)When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties .The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese andtried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised meto keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paperas I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrotea little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much andreads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their wordwere a great encouragement to me.(4)第一行：write后加in 第二行：去掉第一个in 第三行：anything改为everything 第四行：my改为a；去掉should 第五行：talk改为talking第六行：me改为myself第七行：showed 后加it第八行：reads改为read；word改为words（五）Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself asshy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for meto do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me asa fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends.I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talkedto each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger atonce. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’tseem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do?Yours,Xiao Wei(5)第一行：of改为from 第二行：quietly改为quiet 第三行：well 后加as；to改为at 第四行：happy改为unhappy/sad 第五行：that改为why；talked改为talk 第六行：stranger改为strangers 第七行：since改为but第八行：去掉about（六）On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend.I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museumand some parks. But I have spent lot my money, so I cannot even goout of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. Yes, a concert can be very excited.You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a concertcost so much. I may just listen to music, I have some records giving to meas birthday gifts. If I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend money.All right. That’s how I' m going to do.(6)第一行：划掉myself ；a 改为the 第二行：visit 改为visiting第三行：my前加of 第四行：excited 改为exciting第五行：So改为But 第六行：cost改为costs；giving改为given第七行：are改为is第八行：how改为what（七）Dear Susan,I’m very glad to hear about you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won’t find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My class willbe over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together toa hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we’ll talk with our plan for the weekendover dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.Yours,Zhang Ming（7）第一行：去掉about；去掉the 第二行：although改为because / as 第三行：find 后加it 第四行：minute 改为minutes；rightly 改为right第五行：or 改为and ；去掉together；第六行：with 改为about第七行：Having 改为Have(八)You can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the Internet.It’s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books. Recently even though, many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.They have been reports in America about people trying to steal person Informations for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all information are good to society. For example, you can find such informationlike how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future.（8）第一行：kinds 改为kinds of ；minute改为minutes 第二行：have改为having 第三行：去掉even 第四行：They改为There ；person改为personal 第五行：informations改为information；easily改为easy第六行：are改为is 第七行：what改为how（九）Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby whichis both interested and fun. And every year more and more people starta stamp collection of your own and discover an interest which caneven last lifetime . Starting your collection of stamps are easy becausethey are nowhere. Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and lettersfrom friends can all provide you for stamps from all over the world. So onceyou’ve started collecting seriously, you will probably want to join in theStamp Collectors’Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection.9）第一行：age改为ages 第二行：interested改为interesting第三行：your改为their；what改为which/that第四行：lifetime前加a；are改为is 第五行：nowhere改为everywhere 第六行：for改为with；So改为But 第七行：去掉in第八行：exist改为exists（十）Though a great progress has been made in science these years, thereare still many people live in poor conditions. They make their livesby collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to schoolbecause they have not enough money to send their children to there.Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?The answer lies on the population explosion. A presidentof a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blame forthe poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit.”Although this few words sound simple enough, they haveclear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.（10）第一行：去掉a 第二行：live改为living 第三行：thing改为things 第四行：去掉第二个to 第五行：在you前加do 第六行：on改为in第七行：us改为we 第八行：child改为children 第九行：tthis----these 第十行：clear改为clearly。
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Homework
Do the exercises of Correction （学案 P39/52 ）
口诀: 动词形，名词数 还要注意形和副
代词格，细领悟 介词短语常常考
习惯用法要记住
冠词连词常光顾
一、动词形
1.动词的时态和语态错误 2.主、谓不一致的错误 3.助动词和情态动词的使用错误 4.非谓语动词(不定式、分词和动名词）的误用
高考链接１：
When the air move, we have wind.
tall
it
代词格，细领悟
＼ covered it with a lot of room. Jim was 动词形（语态) Christmas _______ light. The sitting room looked 名词数 lights really beautifully at the moment. There was _____________ 还要注意形和副 beautiful a fire burning in the fire place, _____ but the Christmas 冠词连词常光顾 and tree lights was _____ shinning brightly. Jim and his were 动词形（主谓一致） parents singing and dancing happily. ∧ 动词形（缺be动词） were
三、还要注意形和副
１．修饰名词，be动词，系动词要用形容词 ２．修饰动词，形容词，过去分词，整个句子用副词 ３．比较级和最高级的使用
高考链接３：
It is still hardly for me to write in English. hard
形容词和副词
1.The bad news made us feel sadly.
This passage is about______ C
A. Jim’s family.
B. Christmas lights.
C. How Jim’s family decorated the Christmas tree on Christmas Eve.
____
At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his On 介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住
moves
动
词
1.Water pollution often bring on disease.brings 2.So far, he made a living by picking up wastes.has pare to 1992, the price of grain was increased by 50%. Compared 4.Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English. talking
高考链接4：
I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our English this term. us
代
词
1.Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to save themselves .
their
2.He drove too fast, and the police stopped
2. I’m sorry, and I won’t be able to come tonight . but
冠
词
1.You can’t consider him as a honest man. 2.In China, children usually start school at an age of seven.
her and handed him a ticket. him 3.I live in Beijing，where is the capital of
China.
要记住．
主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式 主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。
如：
in Sunday afternoon
代词格，细领悟 ____ 介词短语 常常考 ________
习惯用法要记住 ________
冠词连词常光顾 ________
Correction 1
At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights was shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily.
an
the
连
词
1.Though it was cold, but he went out without a coat. 2.This kind of car costs a lot of money, and he can afford it.
but
Summary: 动词 形，____ 名词数 ____ 还要注意______ 形和副
(注意：
原行没有错的不要改。)
短文改错考查方式
Unnecessary Word（多词） Missing word （缺词） Wrong word 2. I like playing piano.
∧
1. I can go to home now.
删除
补漏 更正
the 3. I am fond at English. of
on lose a sight of
in hurry
The man is sitting next his son.
∨
a
∧
to
介
词
1.Don’t get into the habit at smoking.
of 2.Because the help you gave me that
summer, My life changed.
∧ of
3.It is also a window which we can learn ∧ from about American society.
六、冠词连词常光顾
１. 冠词a, an和the的用法错误．
1.What a good news we’ve heard.
２．连词 but，and，or, so, ,because,although，that, which和what的用 法错误．
（错词）
Steps of correcting a composition:
1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意） 2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐句找错） 3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones. （检查核对，攻克难点）
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose _________ 动词形（时态）
chose
a big one. It was almost as _______ taller as the room! 还要注意形和副 They put _______ them in the corner of the sitting
二、名词数
指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。 高考链接2：
We write to each other all the times. time
名词
1.I need some more informations. information 2.These machines look the same, but they are of different kind. kinds
sad
2. Unfortunate，there are too many people in my family. Unfortunately
四、 代词格，细领悟
1. 人称代词主格和宾格的使用． 2. 形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的使用． 3. 反身代词oneself 的使用． 4. 不定代词many, much, few, little, both, all, either, neither, none 等的使用． 5. 指示代词this, that ; these, those的使用. 6. 疑问代词，连接代词，关系代词（who, whom, which, that, whose, what )的使用．
How to correct a composition 短文改错
Attention ：改错格式
短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 以下的句子共有10处语言错误。每处错误涉及一个 单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下 面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修 改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。