初三英语作文教学课件
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人教版九年级英语unit1-单元作文指导-(共13张PPT)省公开课获奖课件说课比赛一等奖课件
热点作文练习
伴随中国旳发展，世界各地ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้起了“汉语热”。作为中国人，我们更应该学好汉语。请以 “My Chinese Learning”为题，写一篇短文。
内容涉及：1.为何要学好汉语？ 2．谈谈自己学习汉语旳经历。 3．简介1～2条学习汉语旳措施。 写作要求：1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2．文中不得出现真实旳学校名与姓名。
I think reading books is a useful way of learning Chinese well.Also ， it's necessary to practice writing as often as we can.Only in this way can we become a good Chinese learner.
6．I have some trouble/problems in memorizing English words. 7．We can study English by reading as much as possible. 8．The more we practice，the fewer mistakes we'll make. 9．Practice makes perfect. 10．Never giving up is the key to success.
One possible version： My Chinese Learning
With the development of China，Chinese is becoming more and more popular.As native speakers ， it's our duty to learn Chinese well.It helps us to understand Chinese culture better.
中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)
Enjoy an article
Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? （每一段的主要内容是什么？） 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？） 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? （作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？） 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）
正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
九年级英语公开课写作话题作文ppt课件
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___se_n_d__ words , pictures or s
____s_e_n_d__ videos or voice messages
__t_a_lk_t_o_______ friends
__p_la_y_____ games
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Homework
1. Complete your writing and we’ll share it next class. 2. Remember the six steps of writing skills.
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____t_e_ll__ people where I am
___s_h_a_r_e__ what I do with friends
__re_a_d____ news
ta_l_k_/_d_is_c_u_s_s in a group
__le_a_r_n______ English
loo_k_f_o_r_/_se_a_r_c_h_/_fi_n_d__ people around you
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BIneasdiddeisti,on, We can communicate with our friends by sending words and expressions very quickly. We can share pictures ,music and videos with them.
am , read news ,learn English…
in my opinion/view, improve our conclusion life, use it properly , be bad for
人教版九年级英语Unit3写作课课件 (共14张PPT)
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开门见山 express your main idea directly at the beginning
写作应用： 中国有很多节日，比如春节、元宵节、端午节、中秋节 等等。你最喜欢哪一个节日呢？请以“My favorite festival"为题，写一篇80词左右的作文。 要点提示： 1. Introduce the festival. 2. When is it celebrated? 3. What people do and eat? 4. Why do you like it best?
the Mid-Autumn Festival
范文展示
My Favorite Festival My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is celebrated on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. During this festival, people get together, admire the moon and share mooncakes. Also, the mooncakes are usually in the shape of a full moon. They carry people’s wishes to the families they love and miss. How delicious the mooncakes are! There are many traditional folk stories in China. However, most people think that the story of Chang’e is the most touching. So parents often tell the story to their children. I like the festival best because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. ( It falls/comes on August 15th of the lunar calendar. It usually comes in September or October.)
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由：
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
第七步: 誊
誊文章，规范整洁
书 写 注 意 事 项： 1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。 2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、 或用修正液覆盖现象——给人一种凌乱的 感觉 3、一旦写错，规范修改——用一条斜线 划掉即可。
eg: He can speker speak English very well.
Ending
Beginning
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
初中英语作文PPT课件(28张)
六、一致性错误
所谓不一致不仅指主谓不一致，它还包括数的 不一致、时态不一致以及代词不一致等。
例1：Once one have money， he can do what he want to do. 人一旦有了钱，他就能想干 什么就干什么。
析：one 是第三人称单数，因此本句的 have 应改为 has。同理，want 应改为 wants。
四、时态的误用
例：She like it very much and reads it to the class. 她很喜欢它 并且读给同学们听。
析：在书面表达中，应根据上 下文或时间状语来确定动词的时态。
▪ 正：She liked it very much and read it to the class.
writing
书面表达六步法
审
抄
抓
书面
表达
改
扩
连
Writing points
一.审题 (体裁 结构 格式 内容 人称 时态） 二.抓要点 三.扩展句子 四.连句成文 （时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应） 五.查错改错 六.眷写
“中小学生健康 ”为话题写一篇短文 【要求】
(1)内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。 ② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。
例：There are many ways to know the society. For example， by TV radio， newspaper and so on. 有许多 方式来了解这个社会，例如通过电视、广播、报纸等等。
析：本句后半部分 For example， by TV， radio， newspaper and so on 不是一个完整的句子，仅仅是一些 不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。 正：There are many ways to know the society， for example， by TV， radio， and newspaper and so on.
九年级英语全册写作教程课件Unit2Writing共35张
have dragon boat races
admire the moon give best wishes make lanterns share mooncakes with relatives
What does it celebrate? It celebrates the beginning of new year.
This festival is in memory of Qu Yuan, one of the greatest Chinese poets.
ending
What do you think of the festival?
I think it is fun and exciting.
I usually have a great time during this festival because it makes me relaxed.
in January or February
Lantern Festival
Dragon Boat Festival Mid-Autumn Festival
on the 15th of the first lunar month
on the 5th of the fifth lunar month
in September or October
It is a traditional Chinese festival called … When is it celebrated?
It is celebrated on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month of the year.
It is celebrated in /on …
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内容和语言表达 内容全面，表达有新意或亮点
美(beautify)
most to travel to • How do people people choose spend their vacation? get the busy world We away madefrom a survey and here is our report.(the beginning) during the holidays. • A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. • Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.(the ending)
所有主要内容；有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不
影响理解；能使用连接成分，文章内容连贯
二、各档次的给分范围和要求 第二档（较差）（4－6分）：错误理解试题要求，
明显遗漏主要内容；语法结构单调，词汇有限且
错误较多，影响理解；缺乏连接成分，文章内容
不连贯。
第一档 (很差) (0－3分)：未能传达任何信息；内
分
Ending
Supporting sentence 支持句 （细节、例子、数据或引文）
总结观点，发表己见， 结尾通常总结文章主要观点 , 或者发表自 己的观点等等. 首尾呼应
总
Concluding sentence 结论句
Cross-question( 牛刀小试 审题)
健康很重要。在学习和工作的 visit friends or parents 压力日趋增大的今天，会休息 的人才会有健康的身体。人们 work 是如何度过假期的呢？国际健 康组织对此作了一次调查，右 travel 图是他们此次的调查结果。根 据你所得的信息，请为国际健 stay at home 康组织写一篇完整的调查报告, 并提倡大家进行假日休闲。
方法一:善用意义相近的 高 级词汇，避免行文单调
Which is better? 1.我希望你能帮助我。
A B A B I hope you can help me. I’m looking forward to your help. I don’t eat junk food. I stay away from junk food.
1. Cross-question(审题)
调查报告，记叙文 Style (体裁）：__________ 第一人称 Person（人称）：_________ 一般现在时 Tense（时态）: _________________
据实描写： 度假方式 适当发挥： 细节及提倡假日休闲
2. An outline drawing
主要考查学生语言基础知识、 语言组织能力及书写能力 要求：语言流畅，语法正确， 逻辑合理，能达到交际目的
分值高（15分）
近年中考书面表达 写作特点
据实描述+适当发挥
据实描述即提示、要求 适当发挥即细节、观点
夹叙夹议
乐山市中考英语书面表达要求
1.满分15分。 2.考查考生根据提示写作或图表写作的能力。 3.要求考生根据所提供的情景，用英语写一 篇80个词左右的短文。 4.情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容 等，提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等
容太少，无法评判。写的内容与所要求内容无关
或写的内容无法看清。
basic rules(写作考试方法)
search（审） list（列） add(加: 开头和结尾) beautiful(美：谚语/例子) connect(连)
开门见山， 紧扣主题
Beginning
总
Body
topic sentence 主题句
work travel
stay at homeபைடு நூலகம்
List key points
visit friends or parents
1.A lot of people travel. 2.Some people stay at home. 3.Some other people visit friends or parents. 4.A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.
work travel
stay at home
• How do people spend their vacation? We • 加首尾 made a survey and here is our report.
加(add)
• the 总分总 （ beginning）
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
二、各档次的给分范围和要求 第五档（很好）（13－15分）：覆盖所有内容要点；语 法结构和词汇运用准确；有效使用连接成分，组句恰当， 文章结构紧凑。 第四档 （好）（10－12分）：覆盖所有主要内容；语法 结构和词汇运用基本准确；能使用连接成分，文章结构紧 凑。 第三档（适当）（7－9分）：虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖
(the key points)
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）
3. Sentence Making Beautifying and Beautifying word phrase
List key points(列要点) Arrange and Add (布局加首尾)
List key points
列要点时，内容、结构上不能有缺漏，如 根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。 有漏点，扣分最多！
visit friends or parents
• 如何度假 • 调查报告 • 倡议假日休闲