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上海高考英语作文范文赏析

上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：
1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;
2. 说明你的理由(从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比) Dear Sir/ Madam,
First, English is one of the most widely used languages of the world. Nearly all information on the Internet and over half of the world’s technical materials are in English, thus a good command of English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly，it is believed that good English also leads to greater chances and opportunities. In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak English has an advantage over those who cannot.
For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible. (166words)
上海高考英语范文2
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.

高考英语作文范文及点评全国甲卷

高考英语作文范文及点评全国甲卷2022高考英语作文2021高考英语作文2020高考英语作文●2022高考英语作文点评及范文(全国甲卷)第二节书面表达你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。

内容包括：1. 海洋的重要性;2. 保护海洋的倡议。

注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。

______________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________第一段：作用：开篇。

要求：开门见山，点名主题，篇幅：2-3行：2句-3句。

Do you have idea about June 8? It is not only the college entrance examination to Chinese senior school students, but also World Oceans Day, designated by the UN to arouse people’s awareness to protect the oceans.第二段：作用：文章主体内容。

要求：层次分明，逻辑清晰，要点齐全。

篇幅：4-5行，4-5个句子。

The ocean is the cradle of all life on earth, rich in natural resources, and also our blue home for a happy life and happy growth. To care for the ocean is to care for our future. To begin with, protect the Marine ecological environment and advocate green environmental protection actions. What’s more,to strengthen the consciousness of the sea in accordance with the law, consciously protect the blue land and resources environment, start from me, start from now, start from around things, take an active part in green volunteer activities, and advocate green environmental protection. Finally, green initiative, green life, not to the ocean, sewage, hand in hand to protect the Marine environment, be a small guard to protect the blue land.第三段：结尾段，作用：收尾，点题，补充其他细节等。

高考英语作文议论范文

高考英语作文议论范文As we all know, the topic of education has always been a hot issue. Some people believe that traditional education is the best, while others argue that modern education is more effective. In my opinion, both traditional and modern education have their own advantages and disadvantages.Traditional education, with its focus on memorization and rote learning, has been the main method of educationfor centuries. It emphasizes discipline and respect for authority, which are important values in society. However, it can be rigid and inflexible, and may not cater to the individual needs and interests of students.On the other hand, modern education is more student-centered and interactive. It encourages critical thinking and creativity, and uses technology to enhance learning. However, it may lack the discipline and structure of traditional education, and some argue that it has led to a decline in academic standards.In conclusion, both traditional and modern education have their own strengths and weaknesses. It is important to strike a balance between the two, and to constantly adapt and improve our education system to meet the needs of the 21st century.。

2020高考英语作文范文+解析

2020年高考英语作文范文汇总及解析全国卷一你身边值得尊敬的人+理由学校举行作文比赛以你身边敬爱或爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。

内容包括：1、受到敬爱、爱戴的人的简介；2、说明理由。

注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、结束语已为你写好。

写作指导：审题注意点：1.最好写自己身边尊敬或爱戴的人，名人，抗疫英雄应该不算身边的人吧？2.简介最好包括外貌，职业等基本情况，但要简明扼要，不宜拓展太多，毕竟要点2才是重点。

3. 充分拓展尊敬的理由，要点2是文章的body。

有理有据，使人信服。

4.文章标题和第一句话已经给出，注意衔接和紧扣标题。

The people I respectThereare many people respectable around us. The people I respect most is my aunt, acharming woman of medium built, who was born into a rich family and received a good education. Now she is an excellent doctor and specializes in internalmedicine.As we all know, COVID-19 broke out in March of this year in Wuhan city, which was in urgent need of doctors and nurses.Every one across our country was so frightened at the epidemic that nearly none dared to go to Wuhan city. However, at this crucial moment, it was my aunt that risked her life to do voluntary work without hesitation, which amazed me so much. I show great respect for her not only because of her courage but also due to her selfless contribution to our homeland. Besides, she doesn't care about money as well as fame but cares for others. Her life attitude also makes a great difference on me.All in all, my aunt sets a good example for me. And I do learn a lot from her. That's the reason why I respect her most.全国卷二上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。

2020高考全国3卷英语写作范文及升华

2020高考全国3卷英语写作范文及升华假定你是李华。

你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。

请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：1. 球队活动;2. 报名方式及截止日期。

注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】Dear Eric,I am Li Hua. Occasionallylearning that you are addicted to tennis, I am writing to sincerely invite youto join the table tennis team in our school aimed at developing our interestsand improving our skills.Considering the enormousbenefits, which we can earn steadily from tennis practice, including preventingus from getting shortsighted and keeping physically healthy, we are lost intraining course. Definitely, as for the activities, we will be honor to begiven high-level training by a professional coach every Friday around 3-5 pm. Meanwhile,we would be divided into several groups to conduct competitions every two weeks.If you are interested inwhat I have stated above, sign up on our school website before September 1st.I’m looking forward to yourreply even your appearance in our training center soon.Yours,Li Hua。

20xx年全国高考英语作文真题汇总及满分范文(含名师点评)

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高考全国卷英语作文范文(通用5篇)

高考全国卷英语作文范文(通用5篇)下面是高考英语全国卷满分作文，希望大家能喜欢。

【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。

今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：1.外出购物2.替房东还书K2)此事已告知Susan3)尽快回电注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Li Hua[名师点评]本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。

行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。

提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。

在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。

[全国卷高考英语满分作文]写好英语作文的秘密请你仔细阅读所给的英文信，然后给Worried写一封回信。

要求包括以下内容：1.鼓励他振作起来，不要灰心2.记一些惯用词组和句型结构，将他们组织在一起并用其造句。

3.多读英语，告诉他通过大量阅读才能正确使用语言。

4.多背诵一些好的短文。

Dear Helpful,注意：1.不要逐字逐句翻译，词数100左右。

本文内容具体，详略得当，表述方式很有创造力和新意，长短句并用，语言结构富于变化，错落有致，顺畅圆润，尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到，为文章增色不少。

Dear Bob,I’m glad to hear from you.It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It willbe good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and therent is 500 yuan a month.Yours,Li Hua20xx年高考英语满分作文及名师点评My weekendLast weekend，we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits, the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.与节日相关的英语作文是学生在英语学习过程中必须要掌...很多同学想知道，英语作文我的一天应该怎么写呢？下面...春节作为我国的传统节日，很多英语作文的命题也都是和...2023年全国新高考1卷英语作文分两个小节，以下是...2023年西藏高考英语结束，西藏使用全国3卷，本文...2023年云南高考英语结束，云南使用全国3卷，本文...2023年四川高考英语结束，四川使用全国3卷，本文...2023年宁夏高考英语结束，想知道今年的英语作文是...2023年浙江高考英语结束，本文整理了浙江英语作文...2023年吉林高考英语结束，想知道今年的英语作文是...2023年高考英语结束，本文整理了全国3卷英语作文...2023年江苏高考英语结束，本文整理了江苏英语作文...2023年江西高考英语结束，江西使用全国1卷，本文...明强弱之辨，谋身心之强关于“体育之效”，自己正是一个极具代表性的例子。

高考英语作文范文及评分标准

高考英语作文范文及评分标准在高考备考期间，英语写作一定是我们不可避免地要面对的一部分。

而其中关于英语作文的考试就显得格外重要。

在这篇文章中，我们将从高考英语作文范文及评分标准两个方面来深入探讨高考英语作文。

一、高考英语作文范文以下是一篇高考英语作文范文，来自于2017年高考英语作文：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Advantages and Disadvantages of Taking a Part-time Job. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1.很多学生利用课余时间打工。

\n2.打工有什么好处\n3.打工也有坏处。

\n4.我的观点。

The Advantages and Disadvantages of Taking a Part-time JobIn recent years, more and more students choose to find part-time jobs in their spare time. These jobs could be in restaurants, shops,or other businesses. In this essay, the advantages and disadvantages of taking a part-time job will be examined.The advantages of taking a part-time job are many. Firstly, it can provide students with valuable work experience and enhance their employability after graduation. Secondly, it can help supplement students’ living expenses, which is especially important for low-income families. Thirdly, it allows students to learn how to balance their work and study, which develops their time-management skills.However, there are some disadvantages to taking a part-time job. Firstly, students may neglect their studies when they work too much. Secondly, students may not learn the necessary work skills due to poorly managed businesses. Thirdly, students may be exposed to bad influences from colleagues, especially when the business is involved in illegal or immoral behavior.In my opinion, taking a part-time job has many benefits, but it is important to find a balance between work and study. Students should prioritize their studies, and avoid working too much so that school work is not neglected. Businesses should also operate in aresponsible manner to ensure that their employees receive a good working environment.该篇作文不仅符合高考作文的要求，更重要的是，它展示了作者很好的英语写作能力。

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1.语法错误较多，基本词汇掌握不足；
2.句子结构不完整，缺乏连贯性；
3.卷面混乱，表达错误。

建议得分：2-4
点评：本文能够覆盖所有的信息点，能够尝试使用不同的简单的句式结构，语言表达错误较多，但基本能够表达信息内容。

建议得分：8-9
点评：
1.语法错误较多，基本词汇掌握不足；
2.句子结构不完整，缺乏连贯性；
3.卷面混乱，表达错误。