高考英语开放性作文
天津高考英语写作分类训练：开放性作文
开放性作文1．假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津，下周你校将与英国姊妹校线上“云”交流校园生活。
高中三年即将结束，回顾丰富多彩的校园生活，哪一次校园活动给你留下了美好而深刻的印象呢请你以“The Most Impressive School Activity”为题写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：1.介绍活动过程;2.分享个人感受。
注意：短文不少于100词。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________2．假设你是某国际学校的学生会主席李津，你校刚刚开展了走进社区的一系列文明实践活动。
请你为校园广播站写一篇英文活动报道，内容包括：(1)介绍你们参加的活动(如照顾老人;宣传交通法规等)及其原因;(2)说明此项活动的意义;(3)简单介绍此项活动引起的反响。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 3．假定你是晨光中学的李津，你校将举办以生态旅游为话题的英语演讲比赛。
高考英语开放性作文模板
开放性作文模版模板一：As can be seen in the picture, there are _____________: _____________, while (当….时，然而，虽然or尽管)/and_________.It/This scene, evidently/obviously, suggests/indicates/implies that_____________. Just as is shown/demonstrated in the picture, __________ （此处可以以不同的形式重述图片中所反映的主要内容）, which makes me think of ________________. ______________________(简单展开分析即可).Generally speaking (总得说来)/Overall (总得说来)/ Briefly speaking （简言地说）/In brief (简言之) /In short （简言之）/In a word （总而言之）/All in all（总而言之）/In summary（总而言之）/In conclusion （总而言之）, _____________（对第二段内容进行总结，此段也可放到第二段段尾）.模板二：In this picture, there are ________: _________, while(当….时，然而，虽然or尽管)/and___________.When people take all the things in the picture into consideration(把…考虑在内)/ Once people take all the things in the picture into account(把…考虑在内), a widespread/enlightening /helpful/important/essential philosophy will occur to them (出现在…的头脑中)/flash in their minds（闪现在他们的脑际）, (that is, 即, 也就是), _______________. This can be well explained by ___________(从自己的生活、经历或社会现象中找到一个典型的例子).Therefore/Thus/Hence/As a result/In consequence/As a consequence/Consequently (因此), it is sensible （明智的，合理的）/wise（明智的）/reasonable（明智的，合理的）/right (正确的)/correct (正确的) to say that _____________.模板三：From the picture we can see_______: ____________, while(当….时，然而，虽然or尽管)/and________.Undoubtedly/There is not doubt that/It is self-evident that this picture is suggesting/indicating/implying/conveying/communicating an allegoric (寓意的)/a symbolic（象征意义的）/an extra (额外的)/ an underlying (隐含的)/hidden(隐含的) meaning:______________, which can be proved by ____________.Therefore/Thus/Hence/As a result/In consequence/As a consequence/Consequently (因此) , It is never hard/It is always easy/It is safe to arrive at (/to reach) such a conclusion that________.模板四：(It is not hard/It is easy/It is safe to conclude that________.)(It is never hard/It is always easy/It is safe to arrive at (/to reach) such a conclusion: ________.) Weigh the cons and pros: 权衡利弊We can learn that…….A wise choice。
【通用版】高考英语三轮复习：开放性作文题目与范文汇编(实用!)
【通用版】高考英语三轮复习：开放性作文题目与范文汇编如今我们高考作文题目更多倾向于开放性质的题目，给更多的空间让学生发挥，展示运用英语表达的能力，下面介绍一组这类开放性质作文题目，句型难度系数大，词组高端，同学们在写作中可以借鉴。
有人认为诚实是一种美德，有人却认为诚实意味着吃亏，针对这两种观点谈谈你的看法。
例文1 An Ever-lasting Merit“Honesty is the best policy.”Goes an aged old saying.Indeed, some people regard honesty as a virtue and they stick to this principle constantly.Some others, however, accept the notion that honesty gives a hint of being in an unfavorable situation. For me, I firmly hold the point that honesty is one of the values we should bear in mind all through our life.For one thing, a person who is not honest is bound to lose the trust of others. Therefore, they can not easily make friends with others and keep a lasting friendship, let alone own bosom friends. In brief, they are undoubtedly unable to enter the main stream of the ethical standard.For another, those who cry wolf is not necessarily lucky to take advantage over others. Admittedly, a lier may perhaps lead a decent life for a time, but eventually he will lose the favor of others.Nevertheless, we should make room for white lies, for sometimes there is a time when we have to conceal the actual fact.All in all / On the whole, honesty is an ever-lasting merit to which people shouldalways adhere.例文2 Honesty, a Virtue to Be EngravedWith the boom of economy and rise of our living standard, a few people eager to make large fortunes, are pursuing a wealthy life at the cost of neglecting our best policy ---- honesty. Those seemingly wise opinions even added to my anger that honesty is referred to as something of a loss.Nevertheless, in my humble opinion / in my view / from my point of view, honesty should always remain a virtue engraved in our minds since it represents a noble way of life.To start with, honesty helps us to screw up the courage in the face of our shortcomings and errors. It provides us with an opportunity to shoulder responsibilities and learn more about ourselves.Secondly, an honest person is always sincere and genuine to others, thus winning the respect and trust of others.Moreover, honesty is a long-standing merit of our brilliant Chinese culture. Thousands of years ago, Confucians practiced their honesty in both the pursuit of knowledge and everyday life. Throughout history all the most distinguished scientists and philosophers impressed us as honest. Honesty is such an attitude towards life as will lead to the achievement of moral integrity.Honesty is like the fragrant aroma. It is like the constant spring water, providing us with sincerity and courage.Let’s cherish the virtue of honesty and always keep it in mind.关于更好的利用学校空地为学生发展，发表自己的看法、提出解决问题的方法My Suggestions on the Use of the Vacant LandNever before in history has (适当使用倒装句式使句式丰富多彩) the integrated ability of a person been so highly regarded as it is nowadays. In order to raise the competence of students in our school, I strongly recommend that a versatile scientific building be set up in the vacant land, which will definitely serve as a supplement to the already comprehensive facilities in our school.On the one hand, the building should include several laboratories (which are) equipped with computers and microscopes, where students can carry out various experiments on their own. (句式复杂而地道) An observatory is also in need due to the large number of astronomy-lovers in our school.On the other, large lecture halls are also suggested since chances are that some eminent (outstanding) professors and scientists will come to deliver speeches on our campus. Such practice from my viewpoint is sure to pave the way for shaping the scientific awareness in our heart.With the art building cultivating our appreciation of music and paintings and the sports field strengthening our muscles and bodies, (独立结构的运用增加了文彩) we need precisely a paradise for scientific research to help us gain intelligence and conscientiousness (sense of duty), which are a must in today’s fierce competition.To sum up, I sincerely hope that a magnificent scientific building will be standing there in the near future.谈抓住机会Grasp the Opportunities in Our Hands!Never before in history has the society offered so many opportunities to its individuals as it has nowadays. Many youngsters of the day accordingly, are simply under the illusion that chances are right there waiting for them.The truth is, nevertheless, that opportunities favor only those who are well prepared. In the light of (according to) this, we students should always remain diligent and dedicated，thus getting well prepared for coming opportunities.First and foremost, hard work is always the best policy. Imagine what a pity it will be when we have to see helplessly those opportunities passing us by just because we’re not qualified. As is often the case, the better we’re prepared, the more likely we’re to seize the opportunities.In addition, the wisdom to sense an opportunity is also an important factor. Careful analysis of our conditions and proper evaluation of our ability are a must in this procedure. Only in this way can we seek the opportunities on our own.Fortune knocks once at least at every man’s house. So are opportunities. To sum up, I would like to encourage young people to cherish the hope that as long as we’re willing to strive in pursuit of our dreams, real opportunities are sure to come by.上海越来越绿，城市更美，谈谈你的感想it is no surprise that Shanghai has won the title of Garden City.As we all know, the ecological environment greatly affects the citizens’daily life. Not only does it help to make the air fresh and beautify our surroundings, it also relaxes one’s body and mind, keeping everyone in high spirits when working and studying.In the meanwhile, the large amount of public green land will give tourists a good first impression. It’s the best name-card for a city, speaking louder than any good words. Perhaps this can account for why the tourism in Shanghai is booming so rapidly, indirectly speeding up the development of the economy.It is a great honor for Shanghai to hold the Expo in 2022 By then, the environment will be quite an important factor. Cities perfect nature, and are perfected by the environment. The far-reaching advantage the environment brings to us is obvious to all.Although Shanghai has been awarded such a glorious title, we still have a long way to go. We hope we can live in a city full of green one day, and we hope Shanghai can be a more harmonious place to live in the near future.With the World Expo 2022 drawing near, great importance has been attached to the appearance of Shanghai. As a result, Shanghai is now enjoying a dramatic increase in the average public green land area per capita every year, and the figure even amounted to 9.16 in 2020, three times as much as that in2019, which means Shanghai is proceeding steadily on its way to the Garden City.Therefore, what positive impact will be brought about under this condition? First, as the tidy appearance of the city is enhanced, more foreign guests will be attracted to pay their visit to Shanghai, which will give rise to the consequent boom in tourism. Second, as we know, external causes partly act upon internal ones. So, with the environment quality promoted, we will live a better city life and thus perform better in every aspect of our social life.To draw a conclusion, there are quite a few advantages in the greening process of Shanghai. It is reported that Shanghai has already been titled as the National Garden City. And just as the slogan goes, “Better city, better life”, I bet we will soon enjoy a greener city and a more colorful city life.每个人应该把握时机抓住机会When it comes to the opportunity, most people hold the view that, as long as you make the best preparation, the opportunity will fall on you one day. But I wonder whether it is true. In my opinion, what we should do is “create”the opportunity.The story often goes that a man with talent waits for someone to provide him with an opportunity to realize his dream. Since human beings can create the world, why not create an opportunity for ourselves?Usually, a created opportunity must be based on a thorough preparation, without which anything you do will be in vain. Confidence is also a must. The smile in your face shows that you have done your best for the preparation to create an opportunity of your own.Were all the people able to create opportunities of their own, complaints about the fate or surroundings would gradually die away. (虚拟语气的使用，增加了句式变化) Once a created opportunity favors you, you should grasp it firmly and make the best of it at once. It is because that an opportunity is always unwilling to wait for even a moment.Opportunities are as much an uncertainty as the weather in June. They are hidden in the mist of future, invisible to us. When they actually want to patronize you,they just steal into and out of your life before you’re aware of their existence. So, if you don’t want to be regretful in the future, you should always keep awake to the opportunities. Don’t let it slip by.谈谈你对应试教育的看法Schools Should Terminate Test-oriented Education With the growing call for a man’s comprehensive capability to adapt to today’s fierce social competition, test-oriented education appears no longer practical in preparing the youth for their future life. What is even worse, such a kind of education even does harm to children’s mental growth.Accordingly, from my viewpoints, schools should terminate test-oriented education for the sake of the children nowadays.In the first place, test-oriented education exerts such negative influence on children as to reduce their ability of imagination. What’s more, the pressure of getting high marks and the fear of making mistakes tense their nerves and deprive (使丧失) them of a care-free (without worry) childhood.Besides，exam results have long been the sole (only) criterion of judging a person’s ability even since distant dynasties whereas a man’s real quality can hardly be reflected merely by scores. As a matter of fact, test-oriented education can no longer meet our need.In order to reverse the misleading tendency, more emphasis should be placed on the development of integrated abilities of the students.With the problems of test-oriented education catching the eye of more people, the best solution is sure to come by.自学的重要性Importance of Self-StudySelf-education bring success. Though we students have teachers to help us, still we should pay due attention to self-study. Self- study has many benefits.First, every new book we read will benefit us in one way or another. The more we read, the more we are benefited. As life is short and knowledge infinite（生命有限，知识无限）, we should try to read as many books as we can.Second, self-study can improve our memory and reasoning powers（推理能力）. If we read more and more, we can make our memory and reasoning powers improved by degrees. Moreover, we shall be able to write more clearly and correctly.Third, it is essential to develop our character. When we have formed the habit of reading, we can learn much about the wise sayings of our sages (圣人). We can put into practice what they have taught and build up a good character.In a word, serf-education is an effective way to make ourselves intelligent and learned. Therefore, if we want to educate ourselves, the most important thing for us to do is to read not only our textbooks, but also any other books that are within our reach.Morality and EducationIt is recognized by everybody that the strength of a country depends upon its education. The higher the education standard is, the stronger the country becomes. But my opinion is that in order to make a country strong, education alone is not sufficient. It should go side by side with morality.In a sense / To some extent / In a way, morality is more important than knowledge. Many people who have obtained a great storehouse of knowledge go astray (走入歧途). They care for their self-interest only. Why? Because they have not learned to be moral. On the other hand, a person who has good character but only a little knowledge can be a good man.Morality and education are the foundation of a good country. Education without morality is dangerous. Morality without education is also inadequate.谈谈你对考试中作弊现象的看法On Cheating in the examNowadays, cheating in exams is commonplace in colleges and universities. It is considered to be a major problem by the school authorities. Some students do not study hard at their usual time. But during the examinations, they always cheat in order to pass them.Cheating in examinations has very bad effects. First, it is impossible to reveal one's weakness of knowledge. So it is difficult for a teacher to know how to help such students. Second, it may encourage other students to cheat in the examinations, too. Third, it is not helpful for fair competition. Some students do not study hard, and yet their grades are higher.In my opinion, cheating in examinations is an unhealthy tendency. As a student, we should always be strict with ourselves. We shouldn’t deceive (cheat) ourselves, nor should we deceive others.谈谈你对社会实践与学习的看法Social Practice and StudySocial activities benefit us in many ways. (开门见山，表达清晰))To begin with, these activities can widen our horizons，because we can learn from these activities what we can' t from our books.(长宾语后置) Secondly, these activities can serve as a bridge between theory and practice, because we can learn how to put our book knowledge into practice. Lastly, these activities can enrich our experience, because we can get to know the society well so that we can adapt to it more easily when we graduate.Too many social activities, on the other hand, will cause a lot of problems. Study is the most important task in our daily life and social activities can only, and should always be a supplement. If we indulge in（沉湎于）these activities, we will never be able to learn knowledge well. Subsequently, we won't be qualified students.Therefore, it is suggested that we students spend most of our time and energy studying, and once in a while participate in some social activities. Only in this way can social activities benefit us.谈谈你对失败的看法On FailureNearly everybody regards failure as a bad thing. The efforts we have made seem to be in vain and we feel disappointed and discouraged. If the failure is a fatal one, some people may lose the courage to start again and even lose interest in life.However, failure is not merely a bad thing; it can benefit us. It teaches us a good lesson and makes us experienced. By analyzing the causes of failure, we can realizeour own shortcomings and get a better knowledge of ourselves. So, when we start again, we may succeed more easily.Therefore, failure not only disappoints us but also benefits us. When we fail, we should make use of our failure and learn from our experience. Only in this way can we turn failure into success after we start our work again. As the proverb says, "A fall into the pit (深渊), a gain in your wit (intelligence)."谈谈活到老学到老Never Too Old to LearnLearning is one of the most important things in one's life, especially for children being educated in schools of different levels. Without the knowledge of languages, mathematics, history, geography, etc. learned at schools, they would be blindfold （盲目的）as living in a dark world.(虚拟语气的运用) Thus, they must know that they should acquire as much knowledge as possible, which can help them know better about the outside world and develop themselves for their future career.As for grown-ups, even the aged, learning is important as well. Although they have studied something for many years, and have learned a lot already, there are still some experiences and laws for them to learn. Moreover, the world keeps changing unceasingly. There is always something new for them to learn. Thus, they must be aware that they should stick to learning throughout their lives. Constant learning can make people more learned and experienced so that they can suit the changing world better.In short , the proverb "It is never too old to learn." is true of everyone. Let us start and keep learning.谈谈你对财富和快乐看法Wealth and HappinessWealth and happiness are not necessarily related to one another. One is the material condition while the other is purely a state of mind.However, we have to acknowledge that wealthy people are more likely to be happy than poor ones, because wealthy people do not have to worry about their work and bread, which are usually the cause of misery to the poor. In this materialistic world, the poor need to have a philosophical mind to make themselves happy. But the world of happiness does not only belong to the rich, the poor have a right to it. We often see poor yet happy people. The reason lies in the fact that happiness derives (comes) directly from contentment. So long as the poor are satisfied with themselves and their conditions, they feel happy.It would be perfect to possess both wealth and happiness. But if the two cannot be possessed at the same time, I would rather choose happiness.Competition and CooperationCompetition and cooperation are involved in every field of life and work. For example, in football match, all players on the team must work with joint efforts in order to win the match. Such activities require teamwork. If you are a shopkeeper and wish customers to buy your products, you have to compete with others. Competition stimulates people to improve their work and makes the world develop rapidly.Actually in many activities, both competition and cooperation are required. For instance, in learning English, we compete with each other. As a result, we all makegreat progress. Our study also demands teamwork. We often help each other by pointing out each other's mistakes and reminding words.While (虽然) we advocate competition we should not neglect cooperation. Human beings are social beings. No one can survive without help from others. Only with both competition and cooperation can we achieve success and live in peace and harmony with each other.。
英语怎么写开放性作文高中
英语怎么写开放性作文高中Open-ended Essay in High School。
I. The first thing that comes to mind when I think about open-ended writing is the freedom to express my thoughts without any constraints or limitations. It's liberating to be able to explore different ideas and perspectives without feeling restricted by a specific topic or structure.II. Open-ended writing allows me to tap into my creativity and think outside the box. I can experiment with different writing styles, tones, and voices, which helps me develop my own unique writing style.III. One of the challenges of open-ended writing is the lack of guidance. Without a specific prompt or direction,it can be difficult to know where to start or how to organize my thoughts. However, this challenge also forces me to think critically and independently.IV. Open-ended writing gives me the opportunity todelve into topics that interest me personally. I canexplore issues that are relevant to my own life and experiences, which makes the writing process moremeaningful and engaging.V. The beauty of open-ended writing is that it allowsfor spontaneity and unpredictability. I never know where my thoughts and ideas will take me, and that element ofsurprise keeps the writing process exciting and dynamic.VI. Despite the lack of structure in open-ended writing, I find that it encourages me to be more introspective and reflective. I have the freedom to explore my own thoughts and emotions without feeling constrained by external expectations.VII. Open-ended writing also challenges me to be more self-disciplined and self-motivated. Without a clear framework or guidelines, I have to take responsibility for my own writing process and push myself to stay focused andproductive.VIII. In conclusion, open-ended writing offers a unique opportunity for self-expression, creativity, and personal growth. It allows me to break free from traditional writing conventions and explore the limitless possibilities of language and thought.。
2024上海高考英语开放式作文名校模拟试题及范文
上海高考英语开放式写作目录1.上海市格致中学2023-2024学年高三试卷2.上海市卢湾高级中学2023年高三英语模拟考试3.上海市2023年高三“六校联合教研”调研试卷4.上海市宝山区2023年高三区统考试卷5.上海市格致中学2023-2024学年高三试题6.上海市控江中学2023年学高三试卷7.上海市浦东新区新川中学2023年高三试题8.上海市市北中学2023年高三试卷9.上海市同济大学第一附属中学2023年高三试题10.上海市吴淞中学2023年高三调研试卷1.【上海市格致中学2023-2024学年高三试卷】Directions：Write an English composition in120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.我校学生会开始筹备2024届高三成人仪式（the coming-of-age ceremony）。
现向高三学生征集成人仪式活动方案，请你给学生会写一封信，为成人仪式设计一个活动方案，方案需要包括：1.你为成人仪式制定的主题；2.你为成人仪式设计的活动；3.设计这些活动的理由。
【答案】Students’Union,I was informed that the Student Union will collect plans for the coming of age ceremony of senior Three in 2024.Now I am writing to offer a plan.The theme of the activity I suggest is“Growth&Gratitude”,because I think it is very important for senior three students to appreciate their parents’hard work.The content of the activity includes student representative giving speech,teacher representative giving speech and parents representative giving speech to express their expectations of students.The last activity is for all students to sign autographs.It gives students the opportunity to make a wish and express their future plans.Through these activities,students will realize the significance of growing up and what their parents and teachers expect of them.I hope you can adopt the plan I suggested.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。
2023年全国乙卷英语作文全方位透析(开放式作文学生怎样获得一个新技能)
学生怎样获得一个新技能？2023全国乙卷开放式作文分析近年的英语高考书面表达经常出现开放式作文，只是开放程度有别。
一般而言都会有一定的相关信息提示，但有的只给出极少的内容提示，甚至仅给出一个话题，而不给出具体内容，是完全建立在作者对话题的理解基础之上，让其自由组织内容的全开放式写作。
开放式作文是高考英语书面表达的重要考查点，考生们必须了解该类型作文的基本特点和写作要求。
基本格式：开放式作文一般需分三段，第一段简单陈述话题或主题。
离开了一定的背景呈现，文章就如无头苍蝇，没有明确的内容和方向。
主体段落应明确、客观表达自己的观点。
虽然开放式作文没有限制观点，但个人观点不能太脱离大众和主流思想，不然会被认为是奇葩主张。
但无论是何种观点一定要能自圆其说。
说理应该清晰流畅，最好能有一定的表示程序或顺序的过渡词语，如firstly/initially, above all, first of all, secondly/then/ and then, besides, additionally, finally/last but not least/last 等，将文章有机串联起来，才能达到较好的统一性和完整性。
最后，文章可呼应前文，总结全文。
常用句型：1. Recently we did a survey about whether... or not.最近我们做了一个关于是否……的调查。
2. It has been... years since... was founded and it has been acpanying me all through my childhood.自从……成立以来已经……年了，它一直陪伴着我度过了我的整个童年。
3. In my spare time, I often read the newspaper which covers not only classic stories but also current affairs.在业余时间，我经常读这份不仅包括经典故事，还报道时事的报纸。
英语开放性作文
英语开放性作文English:The concept of education has evolved over time, and with the advancement of technology and globalization, the traditional approach to education is no longer sufficient. Therefore, an open-minded approach to education is essential in today's world. This open-minded approach involves not only learning from textbooks and lectures but also from diverse perspectives, experiences, and cultures. It encourages critical thinking, creativity, and adaptability, which are crucial skills in navigating the complex and rapidly changing global landscape. Embracing an open-minded approach to education also means fostering an inclusive and respectful learning environment, where students feel empowered to express their thoughts and ideas without fear of judgment. By embracing open-mindedness in education, we prepare students to become well-rounded individuals who can thrive in a diverse and interconnected world.中文翻译:教育的概念随着时间的推移而不断发展，随着技术和全球化的进步，传统的教育方法已经不再足够。
高中英语作文开放性作文
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例5：
• One day afternoon, Wang Ping and I were playing happily in the woods. We were playing balls and suddenly the ball ran into the other side of the road. I hurried to get it when I saw a bird lying there and I found it was wounded. We quickly took it to the hospital and the doctor gave the bird some medicine and we took it back home then. It was getting better and better and we decided to set it
（审题错误）
例2：
• First find the wound of the bird quickly. Second, tidy the wound carefully and softly and remember not to make the bird pain a lot. Then put some medicine on it and tie a cloth around the wound
You know the boy and tell us why:
One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping were playing in the woods when they found a bird on the ground. They picked it up and found it wounded.
•Suppose you are Li Hua and Wang Ping. Please tell us what you did with the bird
1、审语境
一个星期六的下午，李华和王平在树 林里玩，这时他们在地上发现一只小 鸟，他们拣起小鸟，发现小鸟受伤了
2、审人称
Supposing you are Li Hua and Wang Ping. 从此句的提示中可以看出时要求你以李华和 王平两个人的口气续写，因此人称就该we
free the next day.
主次不分
•例6：
• Wang Ping told me that he was a little hungry and we could eat the bird. I greed with him and we found some dry wood and put it together. Then we cooked the bird. It was really delicious. What a happy day.
3、审时态:
Please tell us what you did with the bird.在这个提 示语中的did正是决定学生在写作中所用的时态 应e Li Hua I would try my best to save the bird. I would put the bird carefully into my soft hat to keep it warm. And then carried it to an animal hospital as soon as possible. I think doctor could help it. If the bird can live I would carry it back home, and took care of it until it can fly back to the woods. If it couldn’t live, I would buried it. I think whoever meet this thing will do just like what I did. Everybody would like to see this bird family live happily together, isn’t it?
开放作文专题
练习
Mr. Li is the manager of a large company. He went back home late as usual one night. He found a note written by his only son, saying that he would leave home …
时态/句型不妥
•例3：
•I was worried about the little bird when I had picked it up. Its leg was seriously hurt. So I decided to bring it to see the doctor. But Li Hua told me that the doctor couldn’t see the animals. At last we put it on a big tree, because we believed it could be safer in the woods than in the city. We hoped it could be better now
思想不够积极
•1、认真审题，即：审语境、审人称、 审时态
•2、要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应 •3、注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读 者的意识
•4、要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑 •5、要有主次之分， 详略得当 •6、要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑 •7、要做到思想健康，积极向上
Thinking that it might die without treatment, we took it home. I made a little nest for it and gave it some rice to eat. Some days later, the bird recovered. We took it out and let it be back to the woods. I thought we had done so good a deed.