给英语老师的一封信final draft

话题分类：

假如你是李英，在即将毕业之际，你的英语老师Mr. Smith要求你们每人给他写一封英文书信作纪念，信的内容包括下列三方面的内容：

1、你对Mr. Smith的整体印象；（kind, warm-hearted, helpful, hardworking…）

2、简述一次经历或一件事；（help, give up, keep…）

3、你的感受或愿望。（thankful, lucky, proud…）

（信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入短文内；括号里的英文提示供选用）

Dear Mr. Smith,

How are you? It’s a pity that I am leaving this school soon. At the moment I really want to say “Thank you very much.”

______________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes to you!

Yours,

Li Ying

作文分析

文体：书信（记叙文）

人称：第一人称单数，第二人称单数

时态：1.整体印象：现在是2. 简述一次经历或一件事：过去时 3. 感受或愿望：现在时和将来时

内容要点：简述一次经历或一件事（事件选材很重要，事件要较具体）

结尾：

I am so lucky that I can meet you. Your kindness helps me go through the difficulties. Although I am leaving this school, you’ll be in my heart all the time. Thank you for everything.

It’s lucky of me to meet you. Although you are just my English teacher, you taught me something more important than English.

I am proud of being your student. And I will never forget your help!

I don’t know how to show my thankfulness. I always tell myself: how lucky I am that I can be your student. Today, I am proud of you and I will work hard in the future in order to let you be proud of me.

Your words have made difference in my school life. You gave me the confidence to carry on. Thank you very much, my teacher. It’s you who make me improve myself during the three years.

When I feel tired, it is your words to encourage me; when I fall down, it is your hands to hold me up; when I want to give up, it is your smile to provide me energy again.

范文：

You were a kind and hard-working teacher in my mind. Every time we have problems, you will help us solve the problems and tell us how to grow up in adversity. I remembered once, I was asked to give a speech in front of the whole school. I felt not only nervous but also stressed out. You encouraged to do my best and told me I was always the best in your eyes. Then you provided me some suggestions on how to make speech. You were also with me through the rehearse. What you did helped me build my confidence. Thanks to your help, I did quite well in the contest.

It was lucky for me to have such a good teacher like you. At the same time, I hope you will be happy all the time.

You have done a lot for us since you came to our school. You are always helpful and try to help us when we are in trouble.

I still remember when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do wel l in it and almost gave it up. As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, you have kept helping me. Little by little, I have become interested in English and I am now good at it.

I think I am so lucky to become one of your students. I have learned a lot from you. I will try to help others when they are