英语记述文写作模板

英语作文的写作模板

记叙文

记叙文特别注重写作技巧要求跌宕起伏不平淡崇尚“意料之外情理之中”的文学效果是一种难度很大的文体。但是在考试的时间压力下我们可以背诵一些写作模板应付紧张的考试。

一记叙文的写作模板介绍

记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素，即时间(time)、地点(place)、人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)

第一段、总结描述交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点：主题句

第二段、具体描述具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果：起因＋经过＋结果

第三段、对事件的分析分析句1 + 分析句2 + 分析3

由于大部分记叙文都是建立在时间顺序的基础上的，所以记叙文最常用的时态是一般过去时或者一般现在时，而前者出现的几率更大一些。大多数文学作品中的叙述（或概括）采用的都是一般现在时; 大多数对历史事件或个人经历的叙述采用的都是一般过去时要注意的是，每篇记叙文都应该有一个基本的时态贯穿其始终。只有在需要特别解释或特别强调的时候，时态变化才是必须并有效的。

Everyone has an unforgettable memory and cannot remove it. To me, it happened __1时间和地点___, and I still remember the whole process vividly. At that time, I was ___2“我”在做什么____. It was a sunny day and things were awfully ___3形容词_____ before it happened. Then ____4事件____ drew my attention. I saw ___5详细说明当时情况_____, and to my ____6表达感受的名词_____, ____7当事人______ was ____8正在进行的动作____. It did not last very long, but it impressed me so deeply that I would _____9自己的感受______. Whenever I look back on what happened that day, I think it is right to ____10理应采取的措施或态度一______. First for all, no one can deny its/his/her _____11对当事人评价的名词______. Furthermore, it is important for us to _____12理应采取的措施或态度二______. I will cherish all these memories forever.

习作练习I Directions: Now you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage on the title My Best Friend. You should write at least 100-120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.简要介绍你最好的朋友。

2.你们之间的故事。

3.你对朋友的理解。

2.范文：My Best Friend Upon the words “best friend”, a figure Jumps into my mind (jump

这个词使一个人物形象活灵活现地展现在读者眼前) —Zhang Ye—my schoolmate in senior high school and also my best friend. During the three years in high school, we shared countless moments of laughter and tears, joy and sorrow. (排比句式能使表达更有力度，而且将与朋友的共同经历描绘得丰富多彩)

3.She is of medium height and slim figure. Though not strong, she is really a girl with amazing

stamina(毅力). Despite the similarities in our outlook on life and living, it is always she, the physically weaker one, who encouraged and urged me to finish some tasks when I attempted to give up. When we were preparing for the National Entrance Exam, she cheered me up emotionally and would give me a hand whenever I was in trouble. But for everything she did for me, I couldn’t have had this opportunity to give a decent job with a decent pay. After the

exam, she got enrolled by Tsinghua University in Beijing while I went to a college in south China. (对3年中两人共同勉励、共同奋斗经历的叙述为读者展示了一段难忘的人生时光，确实不愧为best friend)

4.For the past several years, we have been in touch and share everything we are experiencing,

sad or happy, dull or exciting. True friendship lasts life long. Friendship is a magic. It can melt the ice in one’s heart and blow away the mist on one’s mind. It can inspire others and outdo the self. (再次应用排比句式表达了对友谊真谛的理解，感人至深) I believe the friendship

13 between Zhang Ye and me will be the life-time beacon for both of us.

评析：这是一篇典型的人物记叙文。大多数人物记叙文都遵循一个比较固定的写作套路，即:第一段叙述文中人物与作者的关系，并对人物进行综合评价; 第二段叙述文中人物其个人或与作者共同的某段经历、活动;第三段进行综合叙述。本文的第一段总体叙述了两个人相识相知的经历并用一个排比结构总括了两人共同经历的苦与乐、欢笑与泪水( laughter and tears，joy and sorrow)。第二段通过对具体事例的叙述将人物的性格特点表现得淋漓尽致，也丰富了best friend这个称谓的具体内涵。最后一段作者陈述了自己对友谊真谛的感悟，使文章的主题得到升华。而其中所使用的句式和词汇(melt the ice in one’s heart; blow away the mist on one’s mind; inspire others and outdo the self)也展示了作者深厚的语言功底。