商志英语作文模板(推荐文档)

翻译一定要写满，而不要在乎句子是否完整通顺。当然别忘了标点符号，最后别忘了句号。

小作文顶多120字，要在第一页写完，不要拖到页面2，切忌！

页面2用于写大作文，220字左右，相当于B5纸的一半，一定要认真练习适应！

大作文

单号版：

What a compelling and thought-provking drawing it is! As is vividly presented in the interesting and instructive cartoon above, ……（句1）,in contrast,……（句2）。What on earth does the drawer really attempt to convey?

注释：thought-provking 中间的是连字符，不能去掉，不管它是位于同一行还是两个不同的行。

Compelling and thought-provking 两个ing 押尾韵，俗称绝句

Interesting and instructive 两个押头韵

in contrast 路标性词汇，前后形成对比。

句1一般用来简单描述漫画内容，句2和句1形成对比

例如：06年的一个小男孩。。。。。。另一个小男孩（两个矛盾方面描述）

04年起点也是终点

穿中国服装的美国女孩。前一句写漂亮，后一句子转折写穿中国服装。

00年世界捕鱼（以前怎么样，现在怎么样）

温室花朵（温室里面花朵怎么样，外面花朵怎么样）

On earth:究竟加强语气

Drawer=作者。不能写author显得俗气

Really:可去掉，但不丰满

第二段

Simple as the image is the implications（启示）mirrored（反映）are apprantly far-reaching （深远的）。Initially such a phenomenon as revealed in the picture has aroused wide-spread social concern（关注）。Nowhere in the history has the issue of sth（其中of sth也可省略不写）been talked about so much as in our society today（历史上任何时刻都比不上我们的时代这样关注这件事情）

In the second place, the painting reveals an upsetting story（事情）and similar events happened and happening are heared or reported in nearly all aspects of our life.（27字）Additionally,the painter intends to convince us that a package of programs（一揽子项目，计划，方案）should be initiated to reverse the grim stuation----（此处是破折号）lauching（发起，发动）a nationwide education campaign,setting up relvant laws and regulations,and the list goes on.（36字）

三段

To conclude,it is high time that much importance were attached to such cases .And it is imperative （necessary）actions be taken to curb（扭转不好的趋势）such practices（综上所述，结论如下：

早该重视这种现象了）.There is reason to believe that as long as all the society ,the authorites and the mass media and every one involved ,make concerted effort to strive hard,such upsetting stories will ultimately be ended or at least reduced.

注释：

All the society,the authorites and the mass media and every one involved 是用来扩充用的，如果自己觉得空间不够，可以省略1，2个不写

“There is reason to believe that ”可以删除，句子意思不变

第一段双号版

What on earth can we derive from（从什么中获得）this interesting and instructive drawing?It goes without saying that (=There is no denying the fact that 毋庸置疑)what the painter virtually aims to convey is profound. Primarily ,we can learn that such cases are far from being (=not) rare and upsetting (令人心痛的) parallels (类似的事情) can be found any there from our neighborhood and around the world. What’s more,there has been a growing (=more and more) society would be like years later if this pervasive trend (肆虐的趋势) goes unchallenged (放任下去)。Additionally ,to reverse (扭转) the grim situation,effective measures should be entailed （定制）by al parties concerned .Enhancing people’s awareness of such practices (行为) and setting up relevant rules and regulations ought to be top priorities (首要任务) of the agenda. (议事日程)

注释：在第二段中几乎没写东西（指考生完全用的板子，没添加任何东西就可以用），希望考生能够自己根据能力修改，删除，增加一些东西。

第三段

Judging (非谓语动词) from all argument offered above ,we may safely arrive at the conclusive that it is high time that such stories were terminated or at least reduced.I’m strongly convinced that only when such happenings (事情) come to an end,can we maintain a happy ,healthy and harmonious society (和谐社会) as well wish.

呵呵。。。。。。好了，我们现在已经有个大致的骨架了，剩下的所有东西我们都是在这个基础上建立起来的（站在巨人的肩膀上）

强调两点哦：

首先把，部分考生担心射门雷同卷，这个担心是多余的，没必要哦。因为一般人多多少少都是会修改的。

其次，物以稀为贵，东西多了就不值钱了。所以呢各位牛人高手可以在这个基础上采取各种方法对其进行修改（替换词语，换句型，被动，主动，强调句，定语从句如此种种，添加一些自己的宝贝）。

下面单刀直入，切入正题吧。

讲述可能出现的一些新情况：

3个万一：

万一大作文漫画是2幅而不是1幅

万一作文时非讽刺类的呢