2020年高考英语专题训练系列 1-1 短文改错记叙文(含解析)

1.1短文改错记叙文——2020年高考英语专题训练与练习系列

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

(一)

During May Day, I went to the zoo to see lovely animals and went to the sea world to see beautiful fishes. That was very much interesting. I also went with my parents to visit my grandparents and to eat minority foods. We rode horses on the grassland and had fun local children. It was very excited. After that, I hold a party and invited some of my best friend to visit my house. His mother bought a lot of tasty foods for us, so we also took many photos on the party. We played very happy.I also watched lots of cartoon films at home, that were wonderful.

(二)

Last year my brother and I went to Beijing for vacation. After our plane landing, we went to the hotel. We had made our reservation six month earlier, but the woman at the service counter said they had been a mistake. We are told that our rooms hadn’t been reserved for that week, but for the week after. I didn’t understand what this would happen and my credit card had already been charged with the reservation. What’s bad, the hotel had been fully booked. When we were wondering what to do with, the manager came out. She apologized and gave them a spare VIP room on the top floor.

(三)

Mary has been award the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class. In the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Mary went downtown and walked from one store to another, looked for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure times in comfortable

classrooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching for and selecting. Finally, she finds the right clothes. Deep moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won first prize in the contest. Mary is warm-hearted so cares about the class. She deserves the honor and we should learn from him.

(四)

Today is my father’s birthday. I got o n the subway train after I have bought the present. And when I was on the subway train, I imagined the situation which I gave the present to my father, and my father would be very happily.

On the next station, there is a lady who had no seat in the front of me. She also had two heavy bag. After a minute, I stood and offered the seat to him. She was quite happy and grateful to my help. She said “Thank you!’’ to me, which made me to feel proud.

Today is best. I felt a fun to help other people.

(五)

I wanted to visit Hangzhou before returning back to London. One of my tasks were to decide where to go. I took out my guidebook which there was lots of informations about the city’s famous sights. At that moment, the attractive young lady came up to me and introduced himself. She offered to show me the city. She suggested we first go to the West Lake and walk along the Broken Bridge. I liked the idea. Therefore, I was worried about crossing the Broken Bridge. If it were broken, I would fell in and drown. It was probable not a good idea, so I politely refused her invitation, closing my book and walked away.

(六)

I still remember one of my experience of hiking on the Mount Tai. Before the trip, I think it a piece of cake to get the top of the mountain. However, after reached the middle of it, I started to feel tired from. I was thirsty and my legs was so painful. Although I faced such a great difficulty, but I was determined to finish the trip as I was full convinced that nothing is impossible. So I must moved on! Finally, I reached the top of the mountain. How happy I was and how a beautiful view I could enjoy on the mountain!

(七)