【恒心】2015年英语专业四级真题大作文(15分)范文(1)及炳璋点评【纯Word版】

2015年英语专业四级真题大作文（15分）范文（1）及炳璋点评

How I Deal with Stress

In today’s increasingly competitive society, the tempo of people’s living is speeding up and more and more people are loaded with a growing amount of stress and tension. Everyone feels overwhelmed and stressed in some way, as stress is an unavoidable consequence of life. The moments when I was caught up in extreme stress and overwhelm are when I was experiencing great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs.

So what can we do when we feel overwhelmed and stressed about the things over which we have little control? In my opinion, one way to work off stress is to get moving. When I am stressed, I just take a walk, after which I always feel calmer and relaxed. Besides, I’ve learned to confide my stress to others, which does help a lot. Friends and family members can be a great source of ideas and encouragement. Last but not least, I try to get enough rest and eat well, both of which enable me to be healthy enough and properly fueled to help me de-stress.

As is mentioned above, like it or not, it is impossible for us to live completely free of stress. However, as long as we can come up with our own ways to cope with it, stress will not discourage us from living a pleasant life.

【来源：星火微博】【李炳璋点评】

思想内容上：观点清楚，前后不矛盾，并有充分、恰当的例证说明自己的观点组织结构上：细节安排有条理，叙述层次清楚（如：one way to ...；Besides...；Last but not least），段落之间联系自然（如：So what can we do when we feel overwhelmed and stressed about the things over which we have little control?和As is mentioned above, like it or not, it is impossible for us to live completely free of stress.），句子连贯

语言上：

语法：没有句子结构上的重大错误。句式变换丰富，错落有致（如：Last but not least, I try to get enough rest and eat well, both of which enable me to be healthy enough and properly fueled to help me de-stress.）。

用词：准确、恰当，词汇层级较高（如：confide，de-stress），用词细腻（如：a growing amount of，a great source of）。

得体：语言得体，语气恰当，有说服力，不矫揉造作，通俗易懂。

综上所述：此篇作文打14分为佳。