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托福独立作文开头模板经典
托福独立写作中，很多人都会在开头或者结尾使用模板。开头让人眼前一亮的经典模板有哪些?下面就是 给大家整理的托福独立作文开头模板，希望对你有用!
托福独立作文开头模板1、According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.
6、Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.
7、For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________. But people are taking a fresh look at it now.
19、One of our ancient philosophers said, ______________. Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.
20、One of the great early writers said that ______________. If this is true, the present situation should make us ponder over ______________.
10、______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.
11、Recently, ______________ has become the focus of the society, and in this way.. People swarm to ______________.
7. 短期与长期
短期(目标分24分以下)，靠思路/逻辑思维提分;长期(基础好，目标24分以上的)要修炼高级词汇&长难句。
托福写作要提神的雷区1.结构不平行
例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books. 当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
4. 理由段论证一定要体现严密的逻辑，思维不能跳跃。
比如“Improving schools is the most important factor in successful development of a country. ”这道题，为什么改善学校会对国家的发展有帮助?纯粹的美化能起到作用吗?到底怎样改善学校才能对国家的发展起到积极作用?所以第一步就先要解释“how to improve schools”;然后才是第二步improving school的好处是，可以培养更多的优秀人才。学生可以有很好的条件学习，有助于他们学习知识(学到什么样的知识，锻炼出什么样的能力)，对于国家的发展有很大帮助。括号内的内容也是不能缺失的，否则就会有思维GAP。A(改善学校)→B(培养人才)→C(国家成功发展)，每一步都不能缺失。缺了A，how to improve没有解释清楚的话，B可能就不会发生;缺了B，没有说明改善学校可以培养出什么样的人才，C也不会实现。所以论述一定要详细充分。
托福独立作文七大写作原则1. 审题，抓关键词，关键词多为名词和形容词，最重要的是一些限定词。全文都要围绕题目展开论述，紧紧扣题。
考生粗心看错题也是常有的事儿，比如“Only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth watching.”这道题，有人就会误解为“只有电影能够教会我们关于真实生活的东西”，而本题有两个限定部分，一个是only，一个是that引导的定语从句。再如“Solving environmental problems is the best way for the government to improve public health.”这道题，有人写着写着就忘记了主角“government”，论述的时候应该要从政府的角度出发，政府能都怎么做来改善公民的健康?也不能把public health理解为“小众的的健康”(比如“patients’”)，不能写“政府可以资助医院，让医院更新医疗设备，提高病人的治愈率”。medical facilities的话只针对病人。那怎么写“医疗”这个角度呢?其实在后面补充一句“减少疾病的传播，不会传染给健康的人”，范围就扩大为“the public”了，而不再仅仅是“patients”。
8、It has stipulated by the government that ______________. To this stipulation, many people respond actively because ______________.
9、______________ is a common occurrence in our daily life. Whatever we do, ______________ can't be avoided.
13、Man is now facing a big problem-______________, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ______________ second, ______________.
14、Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of ______________.
17、The English proverb says, ______________. This is quite true because ______________.
18、______________ is now______________, and at the same time ______________. These two factors have caused ______________. Then what shall we do to solve ______________ in the face of such a situation.
5. 切忌大量模板，尤其在论证过程中出现大量繁琐的没有实质内容的模板句。
独立写作不要背别人总结的模板句，想想评卷老师看到一模一样的开头会有何感想?第一印象肯定不好，还会觉得“这学生不大会写文章啊，都是抄别人的”。
6. 学会发散思维，不要就事论wenku.baidu.com。
不要仅仅围绕给的点去论述，比如我们前面提到的improving school那道题，不要仅仅围绕着“改善学校”这个因素来论述，“改善学校好啊，好在这方面，好在那方面”，这样论述就偏题了，仅仅证明了它是一个很重要的因素(说明education的重要性)，并没有说明它是最重要的。要完整充分地证明自己的观点，必定要提到其他因素，比如说政治、经济、文化等。
We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the containerchanged. 措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。
5.不要使用缩写
在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(can"t，don"t，it"s，we"ll，they"ve等等) ，而应当使用单词的完整形式 (cannot，do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。
12、______________ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well.
15、It is only during the last years that man has become generally aware that ______________.
16、There is an old saying, ______________. It's the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct in many cases ever today.
3. 理由段落结尾 进行段落点睛。
中间主体段落的论述，最好是“观点句+理论解释+例子+总结句”，总结句其实跟观点句一个意思，“举的例子说明了XXX道理”，这个道理其实就是topic sentence啦。那么写总结句的时候就要对观点句进行改写了，用不同的词汇和句型表达同一个意思，这就体现你的语言功底了。
2、There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: ______________.
3、Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________.
2.不知所云
例：Many companies began using computers mouth.
3.段落过长，不分段，主语与动词一致问题
She are a good friend of mine that I has known fora long time. 主语和动词在数方面不一致。
4.句子别扭
4、Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like ______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________.
5、 ______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ______________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.
“审题一定要审清楚，题目限定对象、限定范围时，一定要在这个范围内去讨论;没有限定时，就没必要自己曲解题意，自己限定在一个小范围内论述，没有给定范围时，什么情况都可以讨论，言之成理即可。审题花3到5分钟，把全文思路想清楚再动手写，比你边写边想要好很多。”
2. 文章结构最好为四段式，字数400字以上。
很多人会觉得写五段比较好，两正(支持观点)一反(反对观点)或者两正加一让步段，而且让步段都是让步观点点到为止(说出了好/不好的一面，但是即刻又马上回到自己的主立场)，不多做解释，这样其实不太好把握，让步段对考生的逻辑思维要求较高，稍不注意会被考官误认为立场不坚定。凡是有观点，最好都要给出具体的解释，不展开解释人家就会疑惑“为什么?”。如果三个观点都展开论述的话，大多数学生就会觉得时间不够用。所以，主体段落最好就写两个理由段，段与段之间的逻辑关系阐述清楚就可以。
托福独立写作中，很多人都会在开头或者结尾使用模板。开头让人眼前一亮的经典模板有哪些?下面就是 给大家整理的托福独立作文开头模板，希望对你有用!
托福独立作文开头模板1、According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.
6、Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.
7、For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________. But people are taking a fresh look at it now.
19、One of our ancient philosophers said, ______________. Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.
20、One of the great early writers said that ______________. If this is true, the present situation should make us ponder over ______________.
10、______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.
11、Recently, ______________ has become the focus of the society, and in this way.. People swarm to ______________.
7. 短期与长期
短期(目标分24分以下)，靠思路/逻辑思维提分;长期(基础好，目标24分以上的)要修炼高级词汇&长难句。
托福写作要提神的雷区1.结构不平行
例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books. 当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
4. 理由段论证一定要体现严密的逻辑，思维不能跳跃。
比如“Improving schools is the most important factor in successful development of a country. ”这道题，为什么改善学校会对国家的发展有帮助?纯粹的美化能起到作用吗?到底怎样改善学校才能对国家的发展起到积极作用?所以第一步就先要解释“how to improve schools”;然后才是第二步improving school的好处是，可以培养更多的优秀人才。学生可以有很好的条件学习，有助于他们学习知识(学到什么样的知识，锻炼出什么样的能力)，对于国家的发展有很大帮助。括号内的内容也是不能缺失的，否则就会有思维GAP。A(改善学校)→B(培养人才)→C(国家成功发展)，每一步都不能缺失。缺了A，how to improve没有解释清楚的话，B可能就不会发生;缺了B，没有说明改善学校可以培养出什么样的人才，C也不会实现。所以论述一定要详细充分。
托福独立作文七大写作原则1. 审题，抓关键词，关键词多为名词和形容词，最重要的是一些限定词。全文都要围绕题目展开论述，紧紧扣题。
考生粗心看错题也是常有的事儿，比如“Only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth watching.”这道题，有人就会误解为“只有电影能够教会我们关于真实生活的东西”，而本题有两个限定部分，一个是only，一个是that引导的定语从句。再如“Solving environmental problems is the best way for the government to improve public health.”这道题，有人写着写着就忘记了主角“government”，论述的时候应该要从政府的角度出发，政府能都怎么做来改善公民的健康?也不能把public health理解为“小众的的健康”(比如“patients’”)，不能写“政府可以资助医院，让医院更新医疗设备，提高病人的治愈率”。medical facilities的话只针对病人。那怎么写“医疗”这个角度呢?其实在后面补充一句“减少疾病的传播，不会传染给健康的人”，范围就扩大为“the public”了，而不再仅仅是“patients”。
8、It has stipulated by the government that ______________. To this stipulation, many people respond actively because ______________.
9、______________ is a common occurrence in our daily life. Whatever we do, ______________ can't be avoided.
13、Man is now facing a big problem-______________, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ______________ second, ______________.
14、Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of ______________.
17、The English proverb says, ______________. This is quite true because ______________.
18、______________ is now______________, and at the same time ______________. These two factors have caused ______________. Then what shall we do to solve ______________ in the face of such a situation.
5. 切忌大量模板，尤其在论证过程中出现大量繁琐的没有实质内容的模板句。
独立写作不要背别人总结的模板句，想想评卷老师看到一模一样的开头会有何感想?第一印象肯定不好，还会觉得“这学生不大会写文章啊，都是抄别人的”。
6. 学会发散思维，不要就事论wenku.baidu.com。
不要仅仅围绕给的点去论述，比如我们前面提到的improving school那道题，不要仅仅围绕着“改善学校”这个因素来论述，“改善学校好啊，好在这方面，好在那方面”，这样论述就偏题了，仅仅证明了它是一个很重要的因素(说明education的重要性)，并没有说明它是最重要的。要完整充分地证明自己的观点，必定要提到其他因素，比如说政治、经济、文化等。
We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the containerchanged. 措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。
5.不要使用缩写
在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(can"t，don"t，it"s，we"ll，they"ve等等) ，而应当使用单词的完整形式 (cannot，do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。
12、______________ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well.
15、It is only during the last years that man has become generally aware that ______________.
16、There is an old saying, ______________. It's the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct in many cases ever today.
3. 理由段落结尾 进行段落点睛。
中间主体段落的论述，最好是“观点句+理论解释+例子+总结句”，总结句其实跟观点句一个意思，“举的例子说明了XXX道理”，这个道理其实就是topic sentence啦。那么写总结句的时候就要对观点句进行改写了，用不同的词汇和句型表达同一个意思，这就体现你的语言功底了。
2、There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: ______________.
3、Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________.
2.不知所云
例：Many companies began using computers mouth.
3.段落过长，不分段，主语与动词一致问题
She are a good friend of mine that I has known fora long time. 主语和动词在数方面不一致。
4.句子别扭
4、Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like ______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________.
5、 ______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ______________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.
“审题一定要审清楚，题目限定对象、限定范围时，一定要在这个范围内去讨论;没有限定时，就没必要自己曲解题意，自己限定在一个小范围内论述，没有给定范围时，什么情况都可以讨论，言之成理即可。审题花3到5分钟，把全文思路想清楚再动手写，比你边写边想要好很多。”
2. 文章结构最好为四段式，字数400字以上。
很多人会觉得写五段比较好，两正(支持观点)一反(反对观点)或者两正加一让步段，而且让步段都是让步观点点到为止(说出了好/不好的一面，但是即刻又马上回到自己的主立场)，不多做解释，这样其实不太好把握，让步段对考生的逻辑思维要求较高，稍不注意会被考官误认为立场不坚定。凡是有观点，最好都要给出具体的解释，不展开解释人家就会疑惑“为什么?”。如果三个观点都展开论述的话，大多数学生就会觉得时间不够用。所以，主体段落最好就写两个理由段，段与段之间的逻辑关系阐述清楚就可以。