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1. Why people attend college?

People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career

preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific

reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个)：

增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野

为了实现理想(ideal; idealistic)(如，周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书)

为了保证将来的就业机会

父母要求子女上大学

别人都上大学了，所以自己也选择读书

找不到工作

("无知"，总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。上大学如是[1]，去博物馆如是[12]，从事危险运动亦如是[43]。) 相关题目：[168]

『范文』

After graduating from high school many young people have the option to directly enter the work force. Most

students who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding jobs (They attend college to

obtain more choices,-higher salaries, and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitive job market.

Before attending college, students have a limited opportunity to specialize. After obtaining a specific college

degree a job applicant can be competitive for previously unavailable jobs. For instance, applicants with Computer Science degrees would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, they would also be well prepared for

any job with computer skills as a prerequisite. With a larger range of potential jobs to choose from, degree holders

are more likely to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.

Additionally, employers are willing to pay a premium for highly qualified applicants. For example, many

companies desire employees who are competent in more than one language and offer higher salaries to attract

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a higher value on an applicant with similar test scores who also possesses credentials from a well-known

university. Because of the extent to which a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of competence in a

given field, college graduates are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also command higher salaries than applicants who lack college diplomas.

Finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries, a college degree offers access to jobs with a

clear path towards professional advancement. A B.S. in biology, for example, could allow a student to find a job

in a lab after graduation, a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. The same major could also

be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. Both of these avenues would be unavailable without taking the first step of an undergraduate degree in biology.

2. Are parents the best teachers?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific

reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

因观点绝对而不能同意。

不是所有的父母都是好老师

᳔好的老师不仅仅是父母

有些父母尽管善良，但对教育孩子一无所知

有些父母不配做孩子的老师，对孩子有不良影响

『范文』

Obviously, in most cases the earliest teachers people have are their parents, and parents are generally most

concerned about the development of their children. However, it is not completely true to say that parents are the

best teachers.

First of all, not all parents are good teachers. As normal individuals, some parents more or less have some

bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating their offspring, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy everything including bad ones from their parents. Another deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are

lack of common senses of education. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but

failed dream by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. Ironically, when their children do not follow the instructions, the children will be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. In fact, it is parents

rather than their children that virtually disobey common senses.

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