2010年雅思作文分类+论点

2010年雅思作文分类+论点
2010年雅思作文分类+论点

教育类:

2010年5月8日:

Some people believe that schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Disagree

1.教授学术性的科目固然重要,但是还有一些东西不能忽略,例

如:培养学生的文化情操,锻炼学生的体质。

音乐和体育在这方面起到重要的角色。举例子:music sports

2.文化情操和体质在今后的工作也是不可缺少的。举例。Music sports

2010年5月15日:

Nowadays, distance-learning programs are such common thing for us (the study material by post, by internet), but some people argue that

courses can never be taken as good as those by attending in a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Agree:

1.去大学学习可以和同学进一步的交流对于课程的理解,甚至可以

进行讨论。课程就能够被更好的接受。

2.某些课程只能够在大学中学习到,例如:实验课

3.亲自去大学学习可以及时向授课老师询问学习方法和对课程的

疑惑之处。

4.大学的学习氛围

2010年5月20日:

Some people think children should obey the rules their parents and teachers set and listen to them, but others think less control will help children to deal with their future adult life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

观点一:

1.家长和老师具有be equipped with ;in possession of 丰富的经验,因此对事物的看法和理解就会能准确。听从他们的建议可以让我们少走弯路。举例子:

2.对老师和家长的尊重,这样可以培养我们懂礼貌的品质,这对于今后的工作有好处。

观点二:

1.学生如果一味的服从和经常被控制,就会遏制他们分析事情和解决事情的能力,长久下去,他们会丧失这种能力,而完全变

成一个没有思考能力的。。。。?

2.经常被控制会让学生感到非常压抑,对心理健康造成很大的影响,这样,学生会在人际交往中形成一种障碍。据报道。。。

2010年5月29日:

Many people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning. Why does this happen? How to solve the problem?

Triggers:

1.大部分学校片面追求成绩,给学生过多的压力。例子:

2.一些老师的教学方法过于呆板,无法引起学生的学习兴趣。

3.很多学校教授的知识对于今后的工作和学习没有和大的帮

助,缺乏实际性practice .

Resolution:

1.政府应该制定一些措施,鼓励学校把精力放在学生的素质教

育上。

2.提高老师教学的灵活性。

3.应该设计一些和未来工作有关系的课程来吸引学生。例如:

2010年6月5日:

Some groups, such as poor people and people from rural areas, think universities should make it especially easy for them to get access to university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Disagree

1.学生有平等接受教育的权力,如果大学降低录取分数线,就会让城市的学生感觉到不公平。(农村的学生也和城市的学生一

样需要学习稍难一点的课程)

2.会让农村学生感到自卑。对他们能力的一种否定。学习动力会降低,甚至会产一种负面的情绪。

3.学校的整体素质和整体的学术水平就得不到发展。

2010年7月31日:

Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefit the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Disagree:

1.为社会培养人才,参与到社会的建设。

2.大学教育会提高整个国民的素质,从而减少社会的不稳定因素。

例如:犯罪率,失业率,贫困人口。。。。

3.大学教育可以改善国民的生活水平,从而形成新的科技,从而

使社会更快的向前发展.

4.

2010年11月4日:

Some parents need to spend time on reading or telling stories to Children, while others think Children can read through various kinds of resources like books, TV programs, but not by their parents. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

观点一:

1.不仅仅是讲授故事内容,更重要的是一种情感的交流。

2.父母用vivid的语言给孩子读故事可以增加孩子对于故事的兴趣。

观点二:

1 孩子自己读可以增加他们阅读的独立性和阅读的能力。

2 一些资源,例如电视,可以用更丰富的表现形式让孩子产生兴趣。例如:动画音乐。。。

2010年11月6日:

Everyone should stay in the school until they reach the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Agree:

1.不到18岁就离开学校在对于孩子的身心健康不利。例如:18

岁去打工是非法的,18岁就呆在家里会是孩子养成一种懒惰的依靠父母的习惯。

2.在学校接收系统的教育直到18对不仅对于孩子掌握一定的技

能和知识是有利的,也会培养他们的道德水平。比如:分辨是非的能力,自立的能力。。。

2010 年12月16日:

Others often influence young people in their behavior and situations in the same age. This is called "peer group pressure". Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

坏处大于好处

1.一些品德不高的学生对于其他学生的影响,可能会使他们误入歧途。

2.富裕孩子带给普通孩子的压力就更严重了,会使普通孩子产生一种攀比的心理。

3.这种压力如果不是学习上的压力,那么就不会促进学生学习成绩的提高,反而会让学生分心,使他们的学习成绩下降。

2010 年12月18日:

Some people says that the teaching method with a teacher and students in a classroom will not exist by the year 2050. do you agree or disagree?

同上

科技类:

2010年2月27日:

Technological progress in the past century has its negative effect, despite its remarkable contribution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Agree

1.互联网传播不健康,暴力和色情的内容,特别是对青少年是一

种影响。

2.科技在给人们带来方便的同时,也对环境产生负面的影响。例

如:汽车

4.核武器的发展给人类的生存带来威胁,甚至一些核燃料的泄露给很多人的健康带来灾难。

2010年3月20日:

In today's society, more and more work is done by machines. Do you think the positive effects of the development overweigh the negative effects on individuals and society?

负面大于正面

1.人们产生懒惰的情绪。

2.失业率上升,对社会产生不稳定因素。

3.机器时代产生出来的流水线式的产品不再像手工制作的精致产品那样有吸引力,整个社会产品的质量会大幅度下降。2010年4月25日:

It has been suggested that everyone in the world want to own a car, a TV and a fridge. Do you think disadvantage of such a development outweigh advantages?

坏处大于好处

1.浪费能源

2.造成污染

3.资源浪费

2010年9月4日:

Mobile phones have made life easier: anyone can use a mobile phone to answer/make work calls or home calls at any place 7 days a week. Do you think this development has more positive effects or negative effects on the individual and society?

1.人与人之间距离缩短

2.社会节省开支,少提供交通工具.

3.有紧急事情,可以迅速取得联系,

2010年11月20日:

Some people have benefited from modern communications technology, but other people have not benefited from it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Disagree

1.现代交流科技使每个人都得到了便利。手机的大规模得使用。。。。。

网上视频的普遍。。。。。

2.现代交流科技的发展使科技的成本大大降低,无论穷富,都可以通过科技手段来进行交流。

2010 年12月4日:

In the past, some culture and history are shown in the museum. But now, people can use the Internet to see them freely. Therefore, they think we do not need museum in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Disagree

1.博物馆可以让我们看到真正的藏品。

2.博物馆不仅向我们展出文化和历史的物品,还会提供我们一种

氛围。置身于博物馆,就像置身于几千年的文化当中。

3.博物馆除了具备展出的功能,还具备保存历史遗物的作用。

2010 年11月27日:

Out-of-town big stores replace more and more center-town stores. As a result, more and more people have to drive cars in order to get to those 'far away' stores. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

1.减少交通压力

1.价格优势

2.可用地较大,可以扩大卖场的面积,从而提供更多的货品。

社会类:

2010年1月9日:

Some people believe that the charity organizations should give aid to those in greatest need,wherever they live. Some people believe that the charity organizations would better concentrate on helping people who live in own country instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

观点一:

1.慈善机构的目的应该是给所有需要帮助的人以帮助。

2.慈善事业是不分国界和地域的,特别是大部分的慈善机构都建立在相对发达的国家,而大部分需要帮助的人民都生活在比较贫困的地区;因此,无国界式的帮助可以使资金得到更大的利用。

观点二:

1.由于一些人力的缺乏,部分慈善机构只能立足于帮助本国需要帮助的人。

2.帮助成本的提高,就会浪费一部分资金。

2010年1月23日:

The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming more wider, the rich more richer, the poor even more poorer. What problems can the situation cause and give the solutions?

P

1.社会不稳定因素的增加

2.仇富的心理

3.阶级矛盾contradiction between classes

Solution:

1.国家制定合理的税收政策,缩小贫富差距

2.国家应该启动一些救援机制,例如:帮扶,给予资金来帮助

穷人致富。

2010年3月6日:

Surveys show that in many countries, people are living longer but increased life expectancy has many implications for the aging individuals and for society as a whole. What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals and society?

1.年轻人:花时间和精力照顾老人

2.社会老龄化的趋势在增加,财政负担养老,可工作的人口会减少

2010年9月16日:

Society is based on rules and laws. It would not function if individuals are free to do whatever they want to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Agree

1.人随心而作,就会导致犯罪率升高,影响社会稳定。

2.人想做什么就做什么,会导致自我约束力下降,甚至是丧失,

社会就不会更好的运转。

3.。。。。。,社会秩序会被打乱。例如:等车排队,环保,

非吸烟的要求

2010年8月14日:

The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in cities are facing with? Give solutions to these problems.

P:

1.城市发展,诱惑增多。更多的娱乐设施建立。

2.城市发展,环境问题,健康的问题。汽车尾气,绿地面积的减少。

3.物价升高;

4.人口增长,竞争压力,就业。

Solution:

1.政府规范娱乐业,限制淫秽,和年轻人年龄

2.政府出台政策阻止破换环境的行为:

3.提高自己的学习能力和适应能力,增强竞争力;政府可以出台

一些政策鼓励年轻人自己创业

2010年7月17日:

The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem?

P

1.城市人口的增多,导致物价上涨,就业压力,住房压力,环境问题。

2.农村,劳动力丧失,农业生产受到破换,农业产量,农村土地闲置,城市和农村粮食的供应。

S

1.政府出台政策鼓励农村人口回家乡务农。减少税收,提高补助2.政府应该出台政策分流城市中的农村人口,建立urban village;

帮助他们就业(培训,帮助提供工作信息)

2010年8月21日:

Charities and organizations always give special names to particular days such as 'National Children's Day' and 'National Non-smoking Day'. What are the causes of these particular days? How effective are they?

C:

1.引起人们的关注——别人

2.唤醒人们的意识——自己

E:

1.增强了人们的意识,减少了发病率。

2.普及了科学知识。AIDS不是通过拉手,一起工作就会被传染的。

2010年8月28日:

In many cities, planners have separated schools, homes, shops, offices in specific areas which were widely separated from each other. Do you think advantages of this policy overweigh disadvantages to the city residents?

Dis:

1.不方便

2.增加交通压力,造成堵塞。

3.生活质量下降。生活单一;自己例子

好处:

1.对于新来者,有好处

2.有利于店铺的良性竞争,都在一起

政府类:

2010年1月14日:

In today's world, it is private companies rather than government who pay for and carry out most on scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

A:

1.缓解政府财政压力

2.能够更好的了解市场信息和市场需要,来进行相应的科学研究。3.科学研究的成果可以很快的转化成为生产力

2010年4月17日:

Some people think the governments should act to decide how people live in order to make a healthier life. Others think individual should decide their own lifestyle. What do you concern about? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

第一个观点:

1.政府可以利用自己强大的资源,“媒体”来宣传健康的生活方式

2.政府可以通过科学研究来制定有利于人们生活健康的政策。

3 政府,例子:酒驾吸毒

第二个观点

1.人与人是不同的。喜好,健康程度,接受能力。

2.个体对于自己的了解程度最高。

犯罪类:

2010年1月30日:

Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social

behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?

C:

1.缺乏教育

2.社会一些不良思想影响(电影,报刊,电视)

3社会原有的体制跟不上社会的发展,引起很多矛盾,和对社会的不满。例子:社会分配不均,收入差距过大,城乡待遇差距I:

1.加强青少年教育

2.正确引导人们的思想,限制不良思想的传播

3.政府出台政策缩小差距

2010年8月4日:

In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this case happening? How should children or teenagers be punished?

C:

1.社会不良影响:金钱至上,个人主义,标新立异,孩子没有辨别能力,

2.社会压力大,父母忙于工作,忽视了对孩子的教育。

3.学校多关注于学习成绩,升学率,忽视了学生品德的教育。

P:

1.教育为主,惩罚为辅。

2.用爱去惩罚。唤醒对于社会的爱。

交通能源类:

2010年2月6日:

Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Dis:

1.发展带来直接结果,承载量增大;普通人也有机会乘坐飞机。

2.发展导致竞争,竞争导致价格降低,可负担。

3.民营航空业的迅猛发展,可以让普通百姓直接获利,例如:

中国的春秋航空99;新加坡虎航,泰国的亚洲航空。

2010年4月10日:

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