基础写作专题训练二地点描写
一、描述一个地方(国家，城市等)常用句型 Location ：
(1) 坐落在 be located in/lie in
(2) 与…东部 / 西部 / 北部 / 南部接壤 be in / to / on the east / west / north / south of
(3) 由??组成 be made up of / consist of
⑷ 被…包围/环绕 be surro un ded by
(5) 在...一边 /另一边 on one side (on the other side)
Population :
有….人口 have a populati on of/ with a populati on of
Eg.China has a population of 1.4 billion and the US about 270 million.
China is in Asia with a population of 1.4 billion.
Area
面积有--cover an area of xx square kilometers/with an area of xx square kilometers
Eg.The college located in Zhengzhou, the capital of Henan Province, covers an area of 350 mu.
History
有… 人口 has a history of/with a history of
Eg.It has a long history of over 80 years.
Natural resources
富含矿产 /水资源 be rich in mineral/water resources
Eg.It is rich in natural resources such as coal and gold.
Climate
(1) 气候日夜差距大。 The weather differs sharply during day and night.
(2) 各个地区间的气候有差异。 The climate differs from one area to another.
(3) 澳大利亚冬天的气候炎热湿润 It is hot and humid in Australia in summer./Australia has a hot and humid
climate in summer.
二、实用句型操练
一、所处位置( Location )
1、河的附近有一座庙。
二、周边环境( Surroundings )
基础写作专题训练二 地点描写
1. 这个小村庄三面环山，东部有一条清澈的河流
三、人口( Population )
1中国是个发展中国家，人口约14亿。
四、面积(Area)
1.我们的学校非常大，占地6万3千平方米。
五、历史(History )
1、中国拥有5, 000多年的历史。
2、埃及是一个阿拉伯(Arabian)国家，历史悠久。
六、名胜(Places of interest )
1、悉尼拥有很多名胜，比如歌剧院。
一、1.There sta nds an old temple n ear the river.
二、1.Surrounded by mountains on three sides, the small village faces a clear river on the east.
三、1. China is a developing country with a population of 130 million.
四、1.Our school , which takes up/covers 63 thousand square meters, is very large in size.
五、1. China has a history of over 5000 years.
2.Egypt is an Arabia n country with a long history.
六、1」n Syd ney, there are many places of in terest , such as the Opera House.
三、例文:根据下面内容简要，介绍有关加拿大的地理和文化方面的情况。
〔写作要求〕必须用5个句子表达全部内容。
【参考范文】Canada is the second biggest country in the world, with an area of 9,976,000 square kilometers and a population of slightly over 30 million. It covers the northerin part of the North American continent, with the Atlantic Ocean on the east and the Pacific on the west , and borders the US on the south . Ottawa, considered as one of the most beautiful capitals in the world, is the capital of Canada. English and French are official languages spoken in Canada. One interesting fact about Canada is that it is called “ cultural mosaic, ” because different customs and heritages frcwDdiflf e reichDartiin^ ahe ' s culture.
基础写作地点介绍
基础写作之地点介绍 1.location (位置) 1) A is located/situated in…/A lies/stands in; 位于… 2) in /to/on the east/south of... ；在…的东/南边 3) in the middle/center of 4) on the left /right在左边/右边 5)at the back of在……的后面 6)in front of在……的前面 7) border 与…接壤face 正对着… be surrounded by 被…包围 8) next to / close to, in the neighborhood of, neighboring... 靠近 例: Fujian Province lies in the southeast of China.福建省位于中国的东南部。 The teaching building is located at the back of the school.教学楼坐落于校园的后面。 Our school lies near /behind / in front of / by the side of…/ between / among… France borders Germany along parts of the Rhine法国沿莱茵河部分河段与德国接壤。 The racecourse borders the city on the east. 赛马场邻接东城。 The building faces the big river. 这房子面向着大河。 Surrounded by mountains on three sides, the small village faces a clear river on the east. West of the city stands a tall building. 城市的西边有一座高的建筑物 There stands a 50-meter-high tower On the top of the mountain. 山顶上矗立着一座50米高的塔。in, to, on在方位名词前的区别 1) in表示A地在B地范围之内。如：Taiwan is in the southeast of China. 2) to表示A地在B地范围之外，即二者之间有距离间隔。如：Japan lies to the east of China. 3) on表示A地与B地接壤、毗邻。如：North Korea is on the east of China. 2. area (面积) 1) The size/area of our city is …square kilometers. 2) It has/covers an area of …square kilometers. 3) Our city takes up …square kilometers. 4) With an area of …square kilometers, our city… 5) consist of; be made up of; 由…组成 6) the second largest country 第二大国家 例: Tiananmen Square, the largest square in the world, covers / has an area of … Tiananmen Square, with / covering an area of…, is the largest square in the world. Our school , which takes up 63 thousand square kilometers, is located in… A new school with an area of more than 200,000 square meters will be set up. 3. population(人口) 1) has / with a population of, 2) the population of …is…, 3) The population has reached... 4) eighty percent of the population are … 例： Shanghai has a population of more than 2,000,000.上海人口超过二千万。 China is a developing country with a population of 130 million. The population of our city is increasing year by year. Eighty percent of the population here are farmers. 4. history (历史) 1) … has / /possesses/owns a (long )history of … 2) with a (long )history of … 3) …has witnessed too much coming and going in history 例： China has/possesses/owns a history of over 5000 years. Egypt is an Arabian country with a long history. The city with a history of more than 1000 years is our pride.这座有1000多年历史的城市是我们的骄傲。Built in the16th century, the castle has witnessed too much coming and going in history. The book covers a long period of more than 1000 years from 1000 to 2006. 这本书涉及了从1000年到2006年的1000多年的历史。 5. climate (气候特征) 1)表示天气变化的形容词: warm, dry, humid(潮湿的), cold, sunny, stormy, rainy, snowy… 2) The average temperature of Hong Kong is about 220℃. 3) The rainy season is between May and July. 4) The climate is neither too cold nor too hot./ The climate is mild all the year round. 四季温和 5) with four distinct(clear-cut) seasons. 四季分明 6) enjoys a warm and wet climate气候温暖湿润 7) warm in winter and cool in summer 冬暖夏凉 6. places of interest (名胜) 1)scenic spots, places of interest, a place with tourist/historical attractions 2)a fantastic place 一个极好的地方 3)charming scenery/eye-catching scenery迷人的景色 5)… attract / appeal to sb; the scenery there is attractive / appealing / wonderful. (风景等) 吸引人例： Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places of interest, among which is the Opera House.
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基础写作专题训练二地点描写
一、描述一个地方(国家，城市等)常用句型 Location ： (1) 坐落在 be located in/lie in (2) 与…东部 / 西部 / 北部 / 南部接壤 be in / to / on the east / west / north / south of (3) 由??组成 be made up of / consist of ⑷ 被…包围/环绕 be surro un ded by (5) 在...一边 /另一边 on one side (on the other side) Population : 有….人口 have a populati on of/ with a populati on of Eg.China has a population of 1.4 billion and the US about 270 million. China is in Asia with a population of 1.4 billion. Area 面积有--cover an area of xx square kilometers/with an area of xx square kilometers Eg.The college located in Zhengzhou, the capital of Henan Province, covers an area of 350 mu. History 有… 人口 has a history of/with a history of Eg.It has a long history of over 80 years. Natural resources 富含矿产 /水资源 be rich in mineral/water resources Eg.It is rich in natural resources such as coal and gold. Climate (1) 气候日夜差距大。 The weather differs sharply during day and night. (2) 各个地区间的气候有差异。 The climate differs from one area to another. (3) 澳大利亚冬天的气候炎热湿润 It is hot and humid in Australia in summer./Australia has a hot and humid climate in summer. 二、实用句型操练 一、所处位置( Location ) 1、河的附近有一座庙。 二、周边环境( Surroundings ) 基础写作专题训练二 地点描写
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Teaching Plan Basic writing: How to introduce a place 英语基础写作复习——地点介绍 广东省新课标高考基础写作专题训练 I. Teaching aims Facilitate the students to learn to introduce a place with five sentences. II. Teaching important points 1. The organizations of sentences using the structure of five basic sentences. 2. The model and the useful words, expressions and sentence patterns needed to introduce a place.. III. Teaching difficult points The model, relevant logic, useful words and expressions to introduce a place with five sentences. IV. Teaching methods Task-based learning, inductive and deductive and cooperative learning. V. Teaching aids A multimedia and a blackboard VI. Teaching procedure
Purpose: To make the Ss’learn more about the theme of writing: how to introduce a place. Read the following passage and then discuss the two questions below. Australia Located in the smallest continent—Oceania, Australia is the sixth largest country in the world. / It covers a total area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of about 20 million. / It is a mainly dry country with only a few coastal areas that have enough rainfall. / It is made up of 6 states, in which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities. / Because it is famous for its bright sunshine, countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife, the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery./ 1. 地点介绍通常写哪几方面的情况（写作要点）? 1.地理位置(location)及地位 2.人口(population) 3.面积（area） 4.气候(climate) 5.历史(history) 6. 名胜古迹(places of interest) 2. 地点介绍常用的词汇和句型有什么? Australia Located in the smallest continent—Oceania, Australia is the sixth largest country in the world. / It covers a total area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of about 20 million. / It is a mainly dry country with only a few coastal areas that have enough rainfall. / It is made up of 6 states, in which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities. / Because it is famous for its bright sunshine, countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife, the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery./ Purpose:To highlight the important words and phrases that are needed in the translation by discussion. To make the students translate the sentences in the following, to help Ss solve the problems of vocabulary and sentence patterns.
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国家开放大学（中央广播电视大学）2014年春季 基础写作试题2014年7月 一、名词解释（每小题3分。共12分 1．耽思 所谓“耽思”，主要是在主体对内部世界的自我展示、审度、调整、反思过程中，将“瞻物”过程中出现的某种朦胧的、不清晰的、不具体的体验或思想，提炼成清晰、具体而富于创造性的文本思想。 2．言之有序 所谓“言之有序”，就是要求文本的结构安排能够符合语言表达的线性特征所体现的本质要求，是文本思想内容的表现过程具有严密而又灵活的线性表达秩序，其目的在于使阅读者能够循此而实现与作者的精神交流。 3．表达方式 所谓表达方式，是由写作者的写作目的和文本的表现内容所要求的语言运用的具体手段和方法。一般认为表达方式有叙述、描写、说明、议论和抒情五种。 4．诗歌 所谓“诗歌”，是一种重要的审美性文体，它运用精练和富有音乐性的语言，通过描写丰富的想象和优美的意境，来抒发作者对生活的感受、理想和愿望。 二、简答题（每小题9分，共18分） 5．从写作的一般属性来看，其主要特征表现在哪几个方面？ (1)写作的个体性特征；(2)写作的实践性特征；(3)写作的创造性特征。每个要点各3分。 三、分析论述（20分） 7．分析并阐述实用性文体、析理性文体、审美性文体的基本特征。
(1)实用性文体的基本特征：其写作内容是写作者依据已有知识对客观事实的一种确认； 其写作目的在于以告知的方式交流信息，如报告、解说。 (2)析理性文体的基本特征：其写作内容是写作者依据已有理论对客观事实的一种推论； 其结构方式直接体现了理性思维的逻辑特征。 (3)审美性文体的基本特征：文学作为艺术的审美心理特征：超功利性、（感性）形象性、情感性；文学作为语言艺术的审美表现特征：塑造艺术形象的间接性、反映社会生活的灵活性、揭示心灵世界的具体性。 中央广播电视大学2013-2014学年度第一学期“开放专科”期末考试基础写作试题注意事项 一、名词解释（每小题3分，共12分） 1．瞻物所谓“瞻物”，主要是积累材料。它包括直接经验材料的积累和间接经验材料的积累。任何写作活动总是起始于广泛的原始材料的积累，所以在这个阶段，起主导作用的文本构成因素是对材料的收集、整理和思考。 2．言之有物所谓“言之有物”，就是要求写作成果含有丰富而具体的思想内容，能够反映出写作者对自然界、人类社会或人自身的某种独特体验或认识。 3．文有大法，无定法所谓有大法，指的是人们通过写作而能够实现彼此精神交流的那些通用性因素和手段；无定法，则是指在遵循基本原则的前提下，写作者应根据社会生活的发展变化，以及自身的个性特征而灵活运用。 4．小说作为一种重要的审美性文体，小说以叙述、描写为主要表达方式，通过讲述完整的故事情节，描绘具体的环境，塑造人物形象来反映作者对社会生活的认识、体验和感受。 二、简答题（每小题9分，共18分） 5．简述材料对于写作的重要作用。 (1)在写作之前，广博的原始材料的积累是形成观点、提炼思想的基础；(2)在写作之中，有效地选择和组织材料是准确表达思想的支柱。
英语基础写作人物_地点
A. 怎样写人物简介 （一）人物简介的写作步骤； 1）age, sex, birth-place, background 2）appearance ,character 3）education 4）big events in his or her life ( in order of time ) 5）evaluation (二) 语法，句法高分tips A. 概况（尽量用同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺) 如； 1) Born in Poland on Nov. 7 ，1867, Madam Curie is a great scientist. 2) Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12th, 1809. 3) Born in a poor clerk's family, Charles Dickens, a great novelist, had little schooling. 4) Sun Showier, a world champion in diving, is a boy of 14 from Guangdong. B．外貌,性格(巧用with做定语) 如；
1) He is near-sighted /far-sighted guy with a pair of glasses on his nose. 2) She is good-looking /ordinary-looking/funny-looking with long beautiful hair. 3) He is a tall and thin guy with thick eyebrows, looking very handsome. 4) Born in Germany, Einstein is a great scientist with an extraordinary imagination. 常用描写人物的形容词: [iks?tr?:dn?ri
介绍地点的基础写作
要求介绍某个地方的位置、面积、人口、历史、气候、名胜等特征； 【阅读例文】①Republic of Ireland，whose capital is Dublin，is located in the west of the UK. ②It has a population of more than 3 million. ③It covers an area of more than 70, 000 square kilometers. ④It has an amazing history of over 5 000 years. ⑤Everywhere you look are castles and historical places.⑥It has a mild sea climate. ⑦And it is not too cold in January and February and not too hot in July and August. 【写作分析】 1、体裁：说明文descriptive 2、时态与人称： 1) 时态相对较为统一：多用一般现在时。由于说明文往往是对客观事物或事理的一种介绍 与解释，而这种客观的介绍与解释一般是不随时间和空间变化而改变的，比如：说明早锻炼的好处，介绍猫的胡子的功能，解释臭氧层对人类生活的影响等等，是不受时间和空间影响的。因此，尽管有时为了特殊表达的要求，会在个别地方采用其他时态，英语说明文的基本时态还是一般现在时。 2）人称：基本为第三人称 3、内容：Location:___①______ area: ________ population: ________ history: ______ climate:________ places of interest:________ 【词汇、句型积累】 1.地理位置(Location) The hotel is situated/located at the foot of the mountain. It is in the east/west/south/north/middle of… Our school lies in the city of Jiexiu. 2. 人口(Population) Japan has a population of… China is a developing country, with a population of 130 million. 3. 面积(Area) Tiananmen Square, the largest square in the world, covers an area of… Tiananmen Square, covering an area of…, is the largest square in the world. 4. 历史(History) China has a history of over 5,000 years. Egypt is an Arabian country with a long history. 5. 名胜(Place of interest) In Sydney, there are many places of interest, such as the Opera House. The city attracts millions of visitors from all over the world every year. 6.气候（climate） It has four distinctive seasons. It is very hot in summer, while it is cold in winter. 7. 其他：It is rich in natural sources, such as coal, oil and gold. It is famous for its beautiful scenery. 【地点介绍写作练习】： Writing 1
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Mary 在学习和日常生活中都严格要求自己，也很有能力解决难题. (用定从/非谓语) 然而她刚来学校时在学习英语上有困难；由于这样，她总是抱怨一切. (用状从、定从;非谓语,状从) 幸运的是，哈佛风雨路这部电影让她幡然醒悟过来，于是她下定决心要全身心投入学习英语. (用状从，强调句或者not until 句型) 一方面，她不但积极参与英语课堂而且花她的空闲时间来阅读英语小说. (用as well as 表并列或者用not only… but also…倒装） 另一方面，她热衷于听英文歌曲，这大大地提高了她的听力。(用定从或者非谓语) 令她很开心的是，她成功地在英语这科目取得很大的进步而且也被她的英语老师高度评价。（并列句或者定从或者非谓语） 直到她获得英语演讲比赛的一等奖她才意识到只有专注我们才能实现我们的目标。(not until 句型和only 的倒装) Mary 在学习和日常生活中都严格要求自己，也很有能力解决难题. (用定从/非谓语) 然而她刚来学校时在学习英语上有困难；由于这样，她总是抱怨一切. (用状从、定从;非谓语,状从) 幸运的是，哈佛风雨路这部电影让她幡然醒悟过来，于是她下定决心要全身心投入学习英语. (用状从，强调句或者not until 句型) 一方面，她不但积极参与英语课堂而且花她的空闲时间来阅读英语小说. (用as well as 表并列或者用not only… but also…倒装） 另一方面，她热衷于听英文歌曲，这大大地提高了她的听力。(用定从或者非谓语) 令她很开心的是，她成功地在英语这科目取得很大的进步而且也被她的英语老师高度评价。（并列句或者定从或者非谓语） 直到她获得英语演讲比赛的一等奖她才意识到只有专注我们才能实现我们的目标。(not until 句型和only 的倒装) Mary 在学习和日常生活中都严格要求自己，也很有能力解决难题. (用定从/非谓语) 然而她刚来学校时在学习英语上有困难；由于这样，她总是抱怨一切. (用状从、定从;非谓语,状从) 幸运的是，哈佛风雨路这部电影让她幡然醒悟过来，于是她下定决心要全身心投入学习英语. (用状从，强调句或者not until 句型) 一方面，她不但积极参与英语课堂而且花她的空闲时间来阅读英语小说. (用as well as 表并列或者用not only… but also…倒装） 另一方面，她热衷于听英文歌曲，这大大地提高了她的听力。(用定从或者非谓语) 令她很开心的是，她成功地在英语这科目取得很大的进步而且也被她的英语老师高度评价。（并列句或者定从或者非谓语） 直到她获得英语演讲比赛的一等奖她才意识到只有专注我们才能实现我们的目标。(not until 句型和only 的倒装)