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托福写作环境类话题满分素材
摘要:每次提笔要写英语的时候屌丝们都有一种生不如死的感觉。每次绞尽脑汁写完之后,总有种逃出生天的感觉,但是真正到考试的时候,却如同在地狱里溜达了一圈,有时甚至还不得轮回解脱,还得再来一次。真当是举目茫然,道阻且长。
这样就要放弃了吗 ? 当然不是了。即使是屌丝也有追求女神的权利。而我们的出发点就是希望能做一些力所能及的努力,以期能伴诸君征服漫漫杀托路,早日将女神拥入怀中。花开有时,青春难再,劝君莫惜金缕衣,劝君惜取少年时。望诸君能遂心所愿,方不负今日之辛劳。这样屌丝君在深夜码字时也会心存慰藉了。
众所周知, 托福是一种语言能力的测试。对语言知识的熟练掌握是很重要。语言是拿来用的,要想学语言, 那么我们就看语言是怎么用的喽,而英文报纸和杂志就是一个不错的学习范本。我们可以不断收集短语,模仿原文的用法套题写段落。这样,我们不但能够了解到最新的实事,看到最中肯的评论,还能学到好用的短语, 哎呦,不错呦 !
那么今天我们就来学习一下关于环境问题的短语吧。
虽说环境问题是托福独立写作中的熟脸,我们生活中也经常会谈论到它。但就是这样一个貌似无处不在的热点词,在实际写作中论述起来却比屌丝娶个白富美还难。有的同学一看到关于环境问题的题目就顿时觉得大脑转速不够喉头发紧肠胃打结,真是不会再爱了啊,除了不乱扔不吐痰多种树木少用煤就没话说了啊摔 ! 怎么办在线等,急 ~~~都说了咱们有办法。且看中国日报的报道。
Beijing is regularly hit by extended bouts of choking, acrid smog, with heavy industries and car-use both among the key culprits.
既然说到环境问题,那么就让我们来看看目前人们面临着什么样子的环境问题吧。面临环境问题怎么说
呢?“be faced with”? 这如同满大街的人都用 iPhone 一样,托福评分老师简直要
哭了。看看原文,一个“hit” 简洁有力,还让人有一种扑面而来精神一震的感觉,北京被“extended bouts of choking, acrid smog” 也就是大面积的呛人的雾霾雾霾击中了,那这影响还能不恶劣吗 ? 而导致雾霾的罪魁祸首就是重工业和汽车。等等,罪魁祸
首怎么说 ? 当当当当, ”key culprits” 瞬间上了一个档次有木有 ?
雾霾影响如此之恶劣,政府也迅速采取了措施,请听报道:
Beijing will ban the consumption of high-polluting fuels in downtown areas by 2020, the municipal environmental protection authority said.
新闻说北京市区将要在 2020年前禁止燃烧 high-polluting fuels。这是北京市的一个政策,旨在大幅度降低空气污染。这里的 high-polluting fuels是指“ 高污染燃料” 。高污染燃料的范围包括 coal, fuel oil, petroleum coke, combustible waste, biomass fuels(煤炭、燃料油、石油焦炭、可燃废弃物、生物质燃料等。这些燃料
是北京雾霾的重要污染源之一,所以是北京市政府着重治理的对象。而且“ 禁止燃烧” 怎么说的来着 ? 人家用的可不是 do not burn ,看好了,新闻里说的是 ban the consumption of。
看到这里真是对北京的明天充满希望啊,终于可以看见不戴口罩的美女啦 ~~赶紧擦擦口水,讲正事呢。告别
了猥琐大叔一般的高污染燃料,我们将迎来萌妹纸 ----清洁能源 (clean energy的时代:
Clean energy is also expected to be promoted in the capital, so that by 2017, according to a goal set by the municipal government, clean energy sources will account for at least 90 percent of all energy consumption.
新闻里明确说了,在 2017年前清洁能源将占到所有能源消耗的至少 90%。这可是一个真真切切的数据啊。马克备用 ~~
类似的,咱们再来看看新华社的另一则新闻。
The State Council on Monday issued a guideline to promote new energy vehicles. Consumers will enjoy tax cuts to buy new energy vehicles from Sept. 1, 2014 to Dec. 31, 2017, it said. The new policies will energize the market and boost the healthy development of the sector.
这是一条关于国家推广新能源汽车的新闻。为了减少环境污染,新能源汽车的使用不失为一个好方法。那如何推广呢 ? 文中说了消费者去买车会享受减税待遇。减税政策的实行是为了鼓励人们选择新能源汽车。这样做的好处有神马 ? 后面又说了,能使市场焕发活力,促进健康发展。像 enjoy tax cut, energize the market 和boost the healthy development of这些好的搭配,想想看,要是用在作文中, …… 简直爽歪歪 ~
俗话说,没有题目的讲解就跟没有婚姻的爱情一样都是耍流氓。光说不练怎么行呢 ? 来看看我们如何做到学以致用。翠花 ~上考题 ~~
The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual.
这个题乍一看不好写,但是我们把刚才收集的短语直接用到写作中,写个段子绝对腰不酸腿不疼一口气两百字不喘气儿 ! 来吧:
To pick Beijing as an example, suffering from the extended bouts of choking, acrid smog, a vast number of residents have been diagnosed with respiratory diseases which are detrimental to their health. In order to shield themselves from the hazardous gases, citizens are impelled to wear masks when traveling outside. Additionally, the rate of traffic accidents has ascended to some extent due to the poor visibility triggered by the serious haze. Hence it is time that government should invest money in coping with the air pollution - the key culprit of respiratory diseases and other misfortunes.
On one hand, an effective solution would be banning the consumption of high-polluting fuels such as coal and oil on the ground that they generate copious toxic
pollutants to the air after burning. On the other hand, provided that 90% of energy consumption is clean energy like solar or wind energy, renewable and environment-friendly, air quality will be enhanced tremendously in Beijing. Furthermore, stricter laws should be enacted to curb the amount of vehicle exhaust fumes and preferential policies should be implemented to subsidize the enterprises that are involved in clean energy. Had they enjoyed tax cuts, those businesses would have been more vigorous and resilient in the midst of stiff competition. Definitely these governmental measures are highly likely to energize the market and boost the healthy development of clean-energy industries.
简单的短语和数据,不但列出了环境问题的危害,原因,也说明了要解决环境问题,靠个人还真的解决不了, 需要政府从政策、技术上去解决。怎么样 ? 是不是瞬间觉得文章高大上了 ?
本期就是想告诉诸君,短语其实就像海绵里的水,挤一挤,总会有的。因此大家在平时要注意积累,善于发现好用的短语,并用在自己的作文中,就会发现原来屌丝也有自己的春天呢 !!!! 有没有感觉自己萌萌哒 ????
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