广东高考读写任务段落写作之主题句

2014 年高考复习

----读写任务段落写作之主题句的模式

Teaching goals：

1. To learn how to write the topic sentences, such as answering the key point directly, the expressions of

supporting and objecting, sharing an experience, and so on.

2. To learn some important words as well as phrases that can be used in writing topic sentences.

3. To practice the use of different skills

Period One

Teaching procedures:

1. 直接回答要点

内容回顾：对你来说，节俭是什么？(2014广一模要点1)

As for me, being thrifty means valuing money and making the most of what I have.

直接回答要点：_____________________________________________________________________ 可参考词汇：_____________________________________________________________________ Practice:

1). 你理想中的大学生活是什么样的？(2008要点2)

_______________________________________________________________________________ 2). 假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应？(2009要点2 )

________________________________________________________________________________ 3).上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师？(2012要点1)

________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 重述要点

内容回顾：你认为节俭是否重要? (2014广一模要点2)

I think we cannot emphasize the importance of thrift too much.

重述要点: 题干要求说明某事的重要性、意义、差别、利弊等，这类主题句并不直接回答要点的提问,而是重复要点作为段落的主题句，具体回答则通过其后的拓展句体现。

例如，要点是“谈谈……的重要性”，主题句则为“……有重要作用”，要点是“谈

谈……有何重要意义”，主题句可直接说“……很有意义”等。

Practice：

1). 中学生活和大学生活的差别，及你打算如何适应。(2008要点3)

________________________________________________________________________________ 2). 想家给学习和生活带来的影响。(2011要点2)

________________________________________________________________________________ 3). 你怎样看待老师对学生的影响(2012要点3)

________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 表明立场

内容回顾：你是否赞同报道中那位老人的做法并说明理由(2014清远调研考要点1)

I cannot agree more with what the cleaner did.

表明立场：_____________________________________________________________________

可参考句型：

表示支持或赞同的句型：

I can’t agree more with the statement that …；I am in favor of … ；I appreciate that

I approve of the idea that… ；I agree with what the writer said/says.

表示反对或不赞同的句型：

I disagree with the idea that…；I am opposed to the idea that …

I disapprove of the idea that…；I am against the…

Practice:

1). 你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照. (09要点3)

_______________________________________________________________________________ 2). 你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法。(2010要点1)

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 4. 引出经历

内容回顾：描述你或你的朋友在此灾难发生时的一次经历。(14年惠二调)

It reminds me of my experience during the typhoon which hit my hometown several days ago. 引出经历常用句式：

1). This story reminds me of a similar experience of...

2). I happen to have a similar experience / I also went through such an experience.

3).The passage brings me back to …

4). After reading the story above, I recall the experience of my friend who…

5). It occurred to me that my friend had a similar experience.

Practice:

1). 讲述一次你（或你朋友）想家的经历。(11年高考要点1)

_______________________________________________________________________________ 2). 你或你同学的做兼职的经历。

_______________________________________________________________________________

综合运用–随堂练习

[写作内容]

以约120个词谈谈你对“如何对待孩子的错误”的看法，内容包括：

(1)描述一次你犯错的经历及你父母对此的反应；

(2)评价你父母的做法；

(3)你认为家长应该如何对待孩子的错误。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

综合运用-课后练习

2013 年高考读写任务: [写作内容]

1. 以约30词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：

(1)描述清洁工工作的艰辛；

(2)假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？

(3)你对平凡的工作的看法

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

Period Two

5. 总述原因

内容回顾：(汉字拼写错误) 谈谈造成这种现象的原因。(2014惠州调研考要点2)

What causes this phenomenon?/There are several reasons for this phenomenon.

总述原因：_____________________________________________________________________

引出原因常用句式：

1). My views are based on the following reasons. 2). The reasons for … can be listed as follows.

3). Various reasons might result in the above phenomenon.

4). Reasons for this phenomenon are obvious/ various 5). The reason why… is that…

Practice:

1). 人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照(2009年要点1)

重述：人们在参观动物园时喜欢和动物拍照.

________________________________________________________________________________ 2). 掌握急救知识为什么那么重要。

________________________________________________________________________________ 6. 引出建议、方法、措施、步骤

内容回顾：在日常生活中，我们如何做到节俭勤俭节约，杜绝浪费？(2014惠州调研考要点3) To be thrifty and fight against wasting in our daily life, we should…. Besides, ….

题干要求就某事提出一些建议、方法、措施、步骤，可参考以下句型：

1). We should take some effective measures to solve the problem.

2). We should try our best to overcome the difficulties.

3). It is necessary that proper action should be taken to end the phenomenon.

4). I would like to share some advice/suggestions on...

Practice:

1). 你认为建设绿色校园应该采取哪些措施？

________________________________________________________________________________ 2). 你的父母（或其他亲人）是如何鼓励你学习的；(2010要点2)

________________________________________________________________________________ 3). 说说人们对环境保护所采取的措施。

________________________________________________________________________________ 7. 说出感受

1).你读这篇演讲稿的感受。如：读完这篇讲稿，我为中国人感到自豪。

After reading this speech, I ____________________ the Chinese people.

2).你读完这个故事的感受。如:这个故事使我深受启发。

I was ______________by such a story.

关于感受的形容词

relaxed（放松的）moved(感动的) happy, pleased, glad, delighted（高兴的）disappointed（失望的）angry, annoyed（生气的）nervous（紧张的）unhappy，sad（不开心的）upset （烦心的，不安的）grateful ,thankful （感激的）worried，anxious（担心的，焦虑的）frustrated （沮丧的）surprised, amazed，astonished（惊讶的）confident（自信十足的）proud （自豪的）lonely(孤独的)

encouraged，inspired （受鼓舞的）frightened, scared, afraid（害怕的）

determined （下定决心的）hopeful（充满希望的）hopeless （毫无希望的）homesick（想家的）可参考句式：

1). After reading this speech, I feel really sorry for the student…

2). Having read the passage, I have a better understanding of…

3). What inspired/ impressed me most was that…

Practice

1). (07年高考题)以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：(1)读信后的感受；

________________________________________________________________________________ 2). (08年高考题)以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括： (1) 对中学生活的感受；

________________________________________________________________________________

综合运用–随堂练习

4月15日训练题读写任务

佳句赏析

1)The story serves as a great reminder of my own experience. / The case mentioned in the passage reminds me of my own experience. / It occurred to me that I once had a similar experience . --类似经历2) Considering the parent-child relationship, I will provide some possibly helpful advice for teenagers to

get along well with their parents. To begin with…--提供建议

3) I am greatly convinced that if measures are taken in no time, we can make a big difference. --提供措施

4)I am in favour of the idea that the schools should not allow students to use mobile phones. --明示观点

5) I am opposed to students using mobile phones during their campus life because it may have a negative

effect on their lives and study. --明示观点

6）That parents care about their children too much is a double-edged sword and has both advantages and disadvantages. --说明利弊

7) On the one hand, modern transportation brings us lots of benefits, making our life more convenient and

comfortable; On the other hand, it also causes some negative consequences like over-consumption of energy and air pollution. --说明利弊

8)In my opinion, the reason why surfing the Internet becomes popular among high school students are as

follows. /A number of factors/reasons might contribute to that. --说明原因

9）Too much stress placed on academic performance will lead to the imbalance of personal development.

--说明结果

读写任务的写作，通常有三个写作内容，每一个写作内容就是一个自然段，每一个写作要点就是该段落的主题句。因此，理解写作内容要点，写好主题句是一个重要的写作技巧。一般来说，写主题句的方法有：直接回答问题；翻译写作要点；明确表达观点；总述原因；引出个人经历；说出个人感受；提出解决办法；分享自己的建议等等。

以下为训练主题句写作的五篇材料，主题句为本人原创。

话题一、谈谈你对诚实有回报的想法

内容包括：

1. 谈谈你对诚实的理解

2. 讲述一件诚实有回报的事情

3. 谈谈你从中得到的启示

原文总结：As the news reported, a homeless man in Boston got a large donation because he called the police and returned the bag with a lot of money in it.

主题句写作：

1. As an English saying goes, honesty is the best policy.

2. The story reminds me of my own experience of being rewarded for being honest.

3. I’ve learned a good lesson from the story that honesty pays off.

话题三：谈谈你对尊老爱幼的想法

内容包括

1. 老人应该受到全社会的尊重

2. 儿童应该受到全社会的保护

3. 谈谈你对尊老爱幼的想法

原文总结：The passage states that respecting the old people and taking care of young people is a social responsibility and good tradition. Emperor Wendi of the Han Dynasty and Mencius’mother set good examples to us.

主题句写作：

1. There is no doubt that the old should be respected by the society.

2. It is obvious that the children should be loved and cared.

3. In my opinion, we should keep up the tradition to respect old people and take care of the young.

话题四：谈谈你对公务员热的想法

内容包括

1. 越来越多的大学应届毕业生报考公务员

2. 简述考公务员热带来哪些不良的影响

3. 谈谈你的看法

原文总结：More and more college graduates apply for civil service positions in the hope of being government employees because the positions are ideal in terms of incomes, employment security and respect of others.

主题句写作：

1. It is true that more and more college students are taking civil service exams.

2. The young people’being crazy about being a civil servant has brought some negative effects.

3. I’m convinced that both the government and college students should reflect the trend.

话题五：谈谈你对礼貌的想法

内容包括

1. 社会对有礼貌和没有礼貌的态度如何？

2. 用自己或身边的实例加以叙述

3. 你应该怎么做？

原文总结：The writer makes it clear what good manners are, and also points out that there may be different manners in different countries, but people all agree having good manners means being kind and helping others.

主题句写作：

1. Our society always thinks highly of good manners and criticize bad manners.

2. Take Mr. John, my football coach, for example.

3. To be honest, I would take any trouble to be a good person with good manners.话题六：就挑战与成长谈谈你的想法

内容包括：

1. 这故事给了你什么样的启示

2. 举例阐述勇于挑战与成长之间的关系

3. 谈谈你对挑战与成长的看法

原文总结：A lobster took off his hard shell to grow without being afraid to be knocked or be eaten. After knowing this, the crab felt ashamed of himself because he wasted time looking for places to hide.

主题句写作：

1. The interesting story inspires me that it takes efforts and pains to grow up.

2. I’m reminded of my own experience during my senior one.

3. I believe that challenges and difficulties are unavoidable during our growth.