四级作文批改常见错误归纳

大学英语四级作文批改常见错误归纳

1. 最常见错误：从句连接词缺失，最主要的是THERE BE句型：

There is a saying goes ... [应为There is a saying which goes ...]

There are many people think that... [应为There are many people who thin k that...或者直接说Many people think that...]

It's the major thing affects people's friendship. [少了一个that]

When we have difficulty, someone helps you right away is the real friend. [少了一个who]

2. NO MATTER / WHETHER错误，这是英语专业学生最容易犯的另一类错误：

Friendship is important for no matter rich people or poor people. [宜改为Friendship is possible, whether for rich people or for poor people. "no matter"后面必须接一个小句（主语、谓语完整）]

3. C语类重复。所谓C语类是个句法用语，用于引导一个完整的小句，起标志作用，如that/whether等等：

People are not sure that whether... [that一词多余]

4. LACK / LACKING

似乎受汉语语感的影响，多数英语学生似乎认为lack是形容词，所以时常说is lack of...

5. 逻辑域错误。这个应该不难判断，但还是经常出错：

If people become friends, both of them won't care about money... [可改为neither of them care about money...]

其他：

语义重复

In my opinion, I agree with the view that... [agree一词本身就表示说话人的观点，可将In my opinion去掉，或把后面的一半改为the view that... is righ t]

share many common interests [common与share属同义反复，可改为have many common interests或share many interests]

论断过于绝对，缺乏足够思考

A person with good finance will not understand why his poor friend gets on a sardine-jam like bus and always choose to dine at some poor-condition re staurant at the roadsides... [相信富人也不至于笨到这个程度]

句义严重反复，缺乏变化

Some people believe that financial disparity affects friendship. Some believ e that financial disparity doesn't affect friendship. For my part, I agree with th e latter, because financial disparity doesn't affect friendship. [不必多说了]

连词错误

It is not difficult to imagine if those rich people have some poor friends with common interests. [if一词显然应该是that，不过更通顺的说法应该是It is not difficult to imagine rich people having some poor friends with similar inter ests.]

不会使用照应语

We won't ask people whether they have much money or not when makin

g friends with other people. [people和other people显然应该是同指关系，后面的other people应改为them才对]

作文是对语言的综合运用，可以集中体现出学习者的基本功和思维能力；语感非常重要，不过要形成好的语感还需要长期的反复训练。过去指导英语专业大四学生毕业论文，每届都发现有不少已经过了TEM8的英语专业学生的语言能力有明显缺陷。写作能力必须建立在大量阅读、用心感受和无数次练习的基础上，对此曾对学生反复讲过多次，不过由于无法立竿见影，多数学生不能很好地坚持，很是遗憾。

2007年12月四级英语考试美森教育姜烽老师点评作文及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of Elective courses to choose. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:

1、各大学开设了多种多样的选修课

2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课

3、以你自己为例……

备受瞩目的07年12月四级英语考试作文题目已经悄然地揭开了面纱，是关于大学生选课的综合评述类议论文。美森教育的四级强化班上，我提出了这次四级考试作文的类型四大重点之一就是阐述现象原因影响等的综合评述类议论文。而考前一周的冲刺班上我又将四大重点缩减到综合论述和夹叙夹议的两大黄金题型。如果纵观历年四六级英语考试作文类型，综合评论是出现频率最高的题型，因为这类题型最容易接近热点，测试学生综合写作能力的。而四级而言，从03年之后只出现过一次这类题型，因此此次题型的回归对于深入研究四级考试的人来说是不难预测的。

这次四级英语作文的命题话题十分接近于06年6月24日新四级的作文话题，都是围绕大学校园的课程。所以说，这次四级写作的话题不难，学生是有思路，有话可说。那么，文章的段落布局将会是决定写作成败的关键之处。

综合评述类议论文也是要符合四级英语考试写作要求，三段式的，同时内容要点就可以看作是分段点，即第一段写第一点，第二段写第二点，第三段完成第三点。不过，每一段的写作方法是有要求的：

第一段，即议论文当中的引言段，要引入文章所谈论的话题“多种多样的选修课”

第二段，即议论文当中的主体段，谈论文章讨论的分论点，即“选择不同选修课的各种原因”

第三段，即议论文当中的结论段，总结文章，表达观点，即“以自己为例……”

最后，我要强调的是，同学在写第一段(引言段)时，一定要突出“异”字，引入话题的方法要力求新颖，和他人不同，给阅卷老师以新鲜感。比如说，对于此次作文，第一段中存在“多种多样”，那么我们就可以尝试用举例法来引入话题。再者，第二段阐述原因时切忌直接展开原因的论述，而要先“引入”，再展开阐述。

Elective courses to choose

With the remarkable educational reform and the i ncreasing students? deman d, universities strive to offer a variety of elective courses for students to choos e. Some higher institutes provide the optional course of cross-cultural communi cation, and some colleges have computer science on the curriculum of elective courses

There are numerous reasons for students? selection of the courses, and I would like to explore a few of the most significant ones here. In the first plac e, students tend to take personal interest into consideration when they opt for an elective course. P ossibly, that?s why cross-cultural communication course is so prevailing on campus. Additionally, some undergraduates attend certain optio nal courses for their career prospects and future development. Last but not leas

t, to make up for their required credits is another universal reason as students select a course at random.

As far as I am concerned, picking up an elective course, I am inclined to give priority to personal interest. I am taking geographic research and discove ry course in that I?ve been greatly keen on science since I was a kid.

大学英语四级写作经典句型

1）主语从句

It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.

It is well-known that…

It is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent that…

It goes without saying that… It is universally acknowledged that…

It is / that

2）宾（表）语从句

We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.

The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.

3）定语从句（限定性和非限定性）

As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described…in the cartoon/ pict ure/ graph/ table…,

There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.

It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.

4）状语从句（时间，原因，地点，条件，让步，转折等）

When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster （怪物）which will devour him.

Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of comput ers.

5）分词短语做定语或状语

Prof. Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire Engl ish better.

6）倒装句

Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.

Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcani c activity known to geologists as hot spots.

7）被动句

Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem.

He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds.

Many people bel ieve that…（It is believed that…）

8）设问句

Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one w ould trust him?

2007年12月英语四级写作终极归纳之基础篇

大学英语四级考试自1987年开始至今已走过了18个年头，而写作作为必考项目在这18年中无论是命题思路还是写作方法、写作技巧都几乎没有大的改动。从最近公布的新四级考试大纲和样题中我们也不难看到，这种稳定性在新四级考试中仍将得到进一步延续。结合多年来对四级写作的研究和一些丰富的教学经验，笔者认为非常有必要将一些四级写作知识和技巧进行总结，因为这不仅仅对现行四级的考生，而且对即将参加新四级考试的学生都有指导和借鉴意义。

四级写作的特点与要求

孙子云：“知己知彼，百战不殆”。想在写作考试中获得成功，就必须首先了解四级考试的要求和评分规则。由于新四级考试还没有开始进行，笔者就以一篇根据现行四级写作题目“Do…Lucky Numbers?Really Bring Good Luck?”写成的学生作文为例来讲述几个最基本的道理。

例文1：

Some people think that certian(拼写错误) numbers will bring good luck to the m. Numbers such as six, eight, sixteen and eighteen are regarded as lucky nu mbers. There are also people who think that their success is related to certain numbers.

However, some other people think numbers have nothing to do with their luck. They believe in their own rather than“lucky numbers”. They don't do things a ccording to certain numbers.

As far as I am concerned, I think it is a person's own business whether he be lieves in a certain number or not. The most important thing is that he has don e the work by himself and has done it quite well. As to the belief in numbers,

it is their (前后指代不一致，应改为his) personal choice.

该文章是当年四级考试命题组印发给全国评卷老师的一篇例文，根据15分制的评分标准，这篇例文被评为14分，供全国评卷老师作为评分参考。乍看起来，本文无论从遣词造句还是思想深度，似乎都算不得一篇佳作；但它之所以能够被评为14分，还是有其内在深层次原因的，那就是经常被考生们所忽视的议论文写作常识。简要地讲，可分为以下三个部分：

（一）英文议论文的结构特点

汉语写作对文章结构的要求不是很高，如开头段应该包括什么、论题句应该在什么时候出现、文章的结尾是否必须总结全文等等。而英语写作要求文章结构必须十分严谨，文章各个部分的功能都要十分清晰，开头、中间和结尾都有严格的要求。

简而言之，英语议论文共有三大特点：

1、观点鲜明的开头；

2、紧扣主题的结尾；

3、有主题句并且衔接自然的中间段落。

这三点当中，第1、2点早已为绝大多数中国学生所熟知，因为开头点题和结尾扣题同样也是汉语文章的要求。但在长时间的学习过程中，这样的要求被很多学生以为是“老土”而得不到足够的重视。如果将这种思想带到英语议论文写作当中，直接的后果就是中心分散、观点不明确，加上中国学生普遍英文表达能力不强，这些因素就为整篇文章的失败埋下了隐患。

另外，英语文章和汉语不同的是段落的主题句一定要放在段首，而不能按照中文的写作习惯放在段落的中间或者最后，在英文应试写作中更加如此。正因为没有“主题句”的思想，所以中国学生在写英语文章时经常“想到什么，就写什么”，这在英语议论文中是不能接受的。例如，例文1中每一段的首句都简要地概括出了该段的主要内容，换句话说，每段的内容都是根据首句来展开的，其顺序不能颠倒。

（关于段落的衔接，在后面的内容中将详细介绍。）

(二) 中心统一

在中心统一这个问题上，英语议论文和汉语议论文的概念也有所不同。中国人在写议论文时常常遵循“中庸”的原则，其具体的表现就是认为世界上没有任何事情是绝对的。当他们在文章中表扬一件事物或一种现象的时候，总要指出其不足；同样，在批评一件事物或一种现象的同时，也总不忘记指出其也有合理之处。这种做法从道理上来讲并没有什么不妥，但却不符合英语议论文的写作习惯，因为英语作家在写议论文时关注的是自己的辩论技巧和其结果对公众的影响力。换句

话说，如两面都有道理也就等于说两面都没有道理，因为读者在读了文章之后仍旧不知道作者的看法是什么，以及自己在这种情况下到底该怎么做。

所以，既然四级考试考的是英语文章，大家就应该遵循英文议论文的写作思路和习惯：表示支持则旗帜鲜明地支持；表示反对就彻彻底底地反对，而不能采取“墙头草两边倒”的做法。以上面的例文1为例，如果作者的观点是“幸理又无道理的”，这种观点就无法让人接受，因为在英语议论文中，这是典型的中心不统一。

四级英语考试21篇经典必背范文

1. Woman in Modern Society

Title: Woman in Modern SocietyOutline: 1) Role of women in modern society2) Prejudice s and discrimination against women3) My comment

Women play an important part in modern society. Now many women are going into profe ssions, such as medicine, law and engineering. They comprise a large part of the workers in businesses and factories. In addition, they are working up to important positions which used to be held mainly by men. There are even some businesses which are run complete ly be women. Clearly, women are making outstanding contributions to the progress of mo dern society.

There are, However, still some people who assert that men are superior to women in man y ways. First, many jobs men do can hardly be done by women, who are physically not strong enough. Second, most of the world-famous scientists and statesmen are found to be males. Finally, the whole society seems to have always been dominated by men only. In their opinion, men should enjoy more rights than women do.

Personally, I'm firmly standing on the side of those woman right defenders. Since both m en and women are equally important in human activities, they should be on an equal foot ing. (173 words)

2. Study the table

A: Study the following table carefully and write an essay of at least 150 words.

B: Your essay must be written on Answer Sheet.

C: Your essay should meet the requirements below.

1. Changes in people's daily expenses in the past five years

2. Give possible reasons for the changes.

3. Draw my own conclusions

Study the table

In the past five years, there have been great changes in people's daily expenses in XX cit y. According to the figures given in the table, the amount of money spent on food decrea sed gradually, accounting for 35 per cent in 1998. However, there was a rapid increase in clothing expenses, which made up 17% in 1998. In addition, the table shows an upward tendency in recreation expenses. The same was the case with other expenses.

What caused these remarkable changes? In my opinion, there are at least three good reaso ns. To begin with, with the rapid development of agriculture in China, the output of grain, fruit, vegetables, and milk has sharply increased, which contributes to the decline in their prices. Secondly, the family incomes of people both in the city and in the country have greatly risen so that people now can afford expensive clothing and some of them even wa nt to dress in the latest fashion. Finally, as the living conditions improve, the demand for a variety of recreations is growing steadily, too.

In short, with the incomes rising continuously, people are no longer reconciled to living a simple, monotonous life. They are eager to make their life interesting and exciting. There fore, I am sure that people will spend more money on clothing and recreations. (215 wor ds)

3. The role of Migrant Workers

Directions: Migrant workers (外地民工) have made a great contribution to be prosperity of cities. In this part, you are to write within 10 minutes a composition of no less than 15 0 words about "The Role of Migrant Workers". You can agree and or disagree, completel y or partially to above statement. But no matter which position you take, you should give sound supporting reasons.

The role of Migrant Workers

As is known to all, migrant workers have made a great contribution to the prosperity of cities. They are an indispensable part of our workforce. Most of them work on constructio n sites. There is no doubt that without migrant workers many of the construction projects would have to be held up for lack of manpower. In addition, a large number of migrant workers is a factor which stimulates the consumption of food and daily items. This helps to develop food industry and service trades in cities. All these are positive aspects of mi grant workers in cities.

However, as a popular saying goes, "Everything was two sides". The same is the case wit h migrant workers. First, they have trouble getting their children into child care centers an d schools because they are unregistered residents in the city. As you know, illiterate peopl e, who are usually ignorant of laws, tend to make trouble concerning law and order. Seco

nd, most of the migrant workers swarm into big cities just to make money. Being ignoran t and incompetent, some of them would stop at nothing to get what they want. Therefore, they are a potential threat to the peace and stability of the society.

In my opinion, in the appraisal of migrant workers, it is one-sided to affirm everything or to negate everything. We should appreciate the great contribution made by them, and at t he same time pay enough attention to the problems caused by them. (240 words)

4. My First Day on the Campus

I still remember the day when I first came to the college. Being a boy of 17, I was long ing for a new life as a college student; but, at the same time, I had no idea what college life would be like.

That morning when the bus carried me to the gate of the college. I was so excited that my heart was beating very fast as if it would leap out of my mouth. From now on, I wo uld be a student of this college. After registration, we were led by an instructor to the do rmitory, where, for the first time, we were going to live without parents but roommates. I was so clumsy that I did not know how to make the bed and fix the mosquito net.

In the afternoon, I took a walk around the campus together with my roommates. To think of studying in such a beautiful place made me feel quite proud of myself. As we were walking along, talking and laughing, a voice came into our ears, "Oh, look at these fresh men!" It was our middle-school-students' looking that gave us away. We continued our tou r of the college, inspecting every building and every garden until the sun began to set.

In the evening, we sat together, talking about the past and the future. We were so excited that no one wanted to go to bed. 5. The Tape Recorder

The tape recorder is one of the most welcome and popular electronic devices ever invente d. For example, it can reproduce sounds quite well, which are hardly distinguishable from the original. Besides, it is very handy and can be carried around. Furthermore, tape recor ders are not so expensive as color TV sets or video-tape players, so most families can aff ord them. Therefore, the tape recorder is liked by everyone and has entered most homes.

This device is useful in many ways. For example, it is used by people to play music and thus gives them a lot of pleasure. Another example is that it is an effective aid for lear ning a foreign language. It may also serve as a useful tool for many professionals such a s reporters and policemen and enables them to work efficiently.

However, it can also become a nuisance. Some youngsters play the tape recorder late at n ight and therefore disturb their neighbours' rest. Some shop-owners use it to attract custom ers and they often play music so loudly that customers feel very annoyed with it. Thus, t he tape recorder should be put to good use.

6. Studying Abroad

Attending schools abroad has many advantages. In the first place, by looking at our own country from outside, we can best see the strong points and weak points of our nation an d therefore widen our vision and broaden our minds. Second, while studying in a foreign country, we can travel widely, visiting famous scenic spots and making friends with the lo cal people. Thirdly we can use the foreign language in our daily life so that our ability i n the second language may be improved quickly. But the most important thing in attendin g a foreign university is to get acquainted with the latest knowledge in science and techn ology and make use of the first-rate facilities available. For all these advantages, it is real ly worthwhile to go abroad for education.

However, as everything has two sides, there are also some disadvantages in attending a fo reign university. The most serious problem is the language barrier. Most of the students w ho are ready to go abroad do not adequate knowledge of the language spoken there. As a result, on arriving there, they will find it difficult to understand what the instructors are saying. Besides, for lack of knowledge of the customs and way of life of the local people, they may run into trouble in dealing with various situations. Therefore, misunderstandings often arise. Furthermore, the cost of living is much higher than that in our country, so most students have to find part-tine jobs in order to help support themselves. Faced with these difficulties, many students find themselves unable to pay full attention to their studie s and some students may even fail in their courses and learn little.

Therefore, given an opportunity to attend a school abroad, one must consider both sides o f the factors carefully before making up his mind. On the whole, it is a good thing to go and study abroad particularly when the subject is very weak or not available in our coun try. But on the other hand, one must not lose sight of the disadvantages.

7. Is the Expansion of Enrollment a Good Thing?

Many colleges and universities have expanded their enrollment since 1998. The reasons fo r the expansion are as follows. Firstly, they want to keep up with the need of the job ma rket to produce more qualified people to take up the jobs. Secondly, the expansion has en titled many high school graduates to the right of receiving higher education. Last but not least, it can raise the intellectual standards of our nation.

However, studies show that the trend to expand has brought about many problems. For in stance, the teaching facilities and accommodation capacities o f many colleges and universit ies are limited and are unable to meet the demand of an ever-increasing number of the n ewly enrolled students. On the other hand, the average quality of the freshmen is declinin g. In the long run, hunting for a job will be a tough thing for the graduates and that wil l inevitably exert much pressure on the prospects of employment.

In spite of all this, I am still confident that the expansion of enrollment is of great benefi t to our society and is a good thing. With the development of our national economy, the problem as mentioned above will be solved if proper measures are taken.

8. Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus

1.大学生了解社会的必要性

2.了解社会的途径(大众媒介，社会服务等)

3.我打算怎么做

With the development of our society, the campus no longer is an "Ivory Tower". It is nec essary for college students to go outside to get to know the world. They should acquire k nowledge not only from books but also from the society. Thus they can adapt to society more quickly after they graduate from school. Science and technology are developing rapi dly with each passing day. Most students can keep themselves informed by watching TV, listening to the radio, reading newspapers and using computers. It's also good to take a p art-time job, such as tutoring, or working in a restaurant. Any of these methods will enab le students to get in touch with society.

Summer vacation will soon be here. I've already enrolled to be a volunteer to help others.

I think I can do well. Although I won't be paid, the most important thing is that I can learn a lot about society. 9. Harmfulness of Fake Commodities

1.目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fake commodities)。为什么会有这种现象？

2.举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费个人、社会等的危害。

Nowadays in the society, there are enormous fake commodities. When you go to the supe rmarket, you may buy some fake food commodities. When you go to the pharmacist's, yo u may buy some fake medicine.

The deep root of this phenomenon lies in someone's greed for money. In order to get a l arge amount of money in a short time, they try every means to produce fake commodities, without any regard for other people's benefit and health.

Fake commodities can do great harm to both consumers and society. For example, when a person bought fake medicine, it was useless in curing his disease and really a waste of money. Sometimes fake medicine can even cause death. Fake commodities are usually sold in a lower price. It causes unfair competition in the market economy and puts the whole society in disorder.

10. Don't Hesitate to Say "No"

1.别人请求帮助时，在什么情况下我们会说"不"

2.为什么有些人在该说"不"的时候不说"不"

3.该说"不"时不说"不"的坏处

Don't Hesitate to Say "No"

To help those who are in need is always regarded as a traditional Chinese moral. Howeve r people have to know well what the need is before the help is offered. When the need i s just for some minority's benefit and against most people's interests, or when it is immor al or unlawful, people should not hesitate to say No. Otherwise they will put themselves i nto trouble.

Unfortunately, there are so many such examples around us that people end up their leader ship in jail or bury their glory in shame simply because they don't say "No" while they s hould. Some people are reluctant to say "No" in front of all kinds of briberies as they w ant to swamp their power for money. They can't resist the temptations of accumulating we alth in a fast but illegal way. For their own good and their friend's favor, these people w ould sacrifice millions of RMB Yuan for an unproportional commission and therefore stake there future on scales of law. Other people don't say No because of misinterpreted friend ship and lack of sense of law. They never hesitate to do whatever their friends ask them to do. They believe they are helping their friends even when they are actually violating th e law or local regulations. Such people will also be punished according to the degree of t heir misbehavior.

Therefore, to help is not always doing good. People should learn to say a No when the h elp might hurt other people's interests.

11.Reading Selectively Or Extensively？

1.有人认为读书要有选择

2.有人认为应当博览群书

3.我的看法

Reading Selectively Or Extensively？

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own v iew.

Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of m

odern science and technology, more and more books are being published every day. It is i mpossible for us to read all the books. What's more, there are many bad books that are p oisonous to our mind, and we shouldn't read them. Since we can't read all the books, and we shouldn't read bad books, we must read selectively.

But others may not agree. They emphasize that today's society is not what is used to be. If you want to be successful, you must read widely and acquire knowledge in both natur al sciencesand humanities, if a man knows much in one field but little in others, he may not be of great use to the society. Since we must have a wide range of knowledge, we must read extensively.

Who's right? There is a lot to be said for both sides of the argument. However, I think we should read extensively first and then dig into the subject we are interested in.

12. A letter

1.表示欢迎

2.提出对度假安排的建议

3.提醒应注意的事项

A letter to a Schoolmate

June 23, 2001

Dear Xiao Wang,

I am delighted to know that you will be able to visit me for a week during the National Day holiday. I am looking forward to your visit and to the opportunity to catch up. Wel come to my home in Nanjing!

As you know, Nanjing has many places of interest to see, to discover, and to enjoy. Amo ng its historical sites are stone city wall, the Confucius Temple with its magnificent night view, and Dr. Sun Yetsen's Mausoleum. With all its universities, Nanjing is a cultural ce nter, offering an abundance of artistic and musical performances. It's also a city of beautif ul gardens and parks, such as the Xuanwu Lake Park. With all these features, we will ha ve a fun-filled week, especially that in early-October, there are many sunny and mild days for outdoor activities. So, I would suggest visiting these places first, and deciding on the others as our week develops.

Finally, since at this time of the year the weather gets a little chilly in the evening, I wo uld suggest that you bring some warm clothing with you. Also, as there will be crowds o f people at the stations and on the trains, you need to be very careful with your belongin

gs!

Best wishes for a pleasant journey!

Yours,

Zhang Ying 13. How to Succeed in a Job Interview

1.面试在求职过程中的作用

2.取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……

Nowadays, in an ever tighter job market, great importance has been attached to an intervi ew by both the employer and the applicant. The interview, so to speak, has become indis pensable for getting a satisfactory job. On the one hand, the interviewer can take advantag e of the occasion to learn about the candidates, such as their work experiences, education and their personalities, so as to pick out the right candidates for the company. One the o ther hand, the interviewee can make use of the opportunity to get to know the job he is going to take up, the credibility of the firm to which he has applied, and the working co nditions as well.

Essential as it is, the job interview is far from fearful. Well begun, half done. Excellent p erformance in it will enable the would-be employee secure the job. But how can one succ eed in it?

First of all, the interviewee has to pay attention to his or her appearance. Though we can never judge a person by his appearance, the first impression is always where we start. S econdly, good manners are equally important. The interviewee has to be neither too proud nor too timid. Just be courteous. Thirdly, the interviewee must demonstrate his aptitude a nd skills for the job and knowledge about the job-related areas; he must express himself c learly and confidently. Last but not the least, the interviewee ought to be honest about his or her personal as well as academic background, for honesty is the best policy.

To sum up, the job interview is indeed important. There is no need to be nervous, howev er, if the interviewee has made full preparations for it and given a fairly confident and ho nest performance, his or her success can be ensured.

14. A letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus

假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应设计食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

January 12. 2002

Dear Mr. President,

My name is Li Ming. I am a sophomore of the law school. As the school year is drawin

g to a close, I venture to write a letter to you about the canteen service on campus whic

h has given rise to much complaint among students.

The focus of the complaint is the poor quality of the food. The rice is just like bullets a nd the buns are like hand grenades. They are too hard for us to chew. And the vegetable s are so overcooked as to lose their nutrients. The fish and meat are not given full meas ure. The only thing we are satisfied with is the free soup. However, the price of the food is surprisingly high. If we have 3 meals all in the canteen, at least twelve yuan is gone to keep our body and soul together. As a result, many of us go out to have meals.

Honestly speaking, the dining environment has been improved, with the wall painted and s ome Chinese calligraphy works posted up. But there are only two canteens on the campus. As the number of students is ever increasing, there is not enough space and seats to allo w us to have our meals there. The attitude of the service staff to the students is not hosp itable at all.

All in all, there is still much room for improvement as far as the canteen service is conc erned. I hope we will not suffer for another two years.

Best regards.

Sincerely Yours

Li Ming

15. Student Use of Computers

For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on t he chart and the outline given below:

Study the table

1.上图所示为1990年、1995年、2000年某大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化；

2.请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明)；

3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。

Student Use of Computer

Since 1990, there has been tremendous growth in the use of computers by students. While in 1990, the average number of hours a student spent on the computer was about one h our per week, this number grew to nearly four hours per week by 1995, and to approxim ately 20 hours per week by the year 2000.

This significant growth in the use of computers by students in the 1990's can be attribute d to several factors, including widespread usage, lower prices, and technological and social developments. Nowadays, computers are widely used by students for word processing, bo ok keeping, multimedia presentations, and access to the Internet for both research and com munications. Additionally, since 1990, due to competition and technological advances, com puter hardware and software prices, as well as Internet usage charges have dropped signifi cantly. Finally, technological developments and changes in social habits in the 1990's have played a major role in this tremendous growth in the use of computers. Today's society r elies heavily on computers for immediate access to the news and for entertainment, includ ing, listening to music, watching movies and sport events, and playing computer games.

While computers are of great assistance to the students, and therefore, are indispensable to ols, they also pose some challenges. The biggest challenge that many students face is disc ipline in the use of this powerful device. That is, students need to have the discipline of not allowing themselves to be lured by the entertaining aspects of this wonderful tool-aspe cts that can result in addiction to computer games or viewing of undesirable material on t he Internet. That is to say, students need to use this powerful tool with great wisdom!

16. It Pays to Be Honest

1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象

2.诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实

It Pays to Be Honest

Nowadays people are troubled with mass of dishonest behaviors in society. Teachers get a nnoyed when they catch students cheating on exams; consumers get hurt when they unfort unately buy some fake products; children are misled when they see their parents tell lies so as to evade the responsibility they should take.

Why do people cheat? The main reason probably lies in immediate interest they may obta in by cheating. For example, a company, which manufactures fake products, may seem to win for a moment because it can minimize its manufacture cost by doing so. This kind o f businesses, however, will be driven out of the market in the long run. For the consumer s after getting to know the poor quality of the products will not buy them anymore.

The same is true of individuals. Dishonest people dare not take on the responsibility of li fe. They cheat in class, in office, at home and so on. But the truth can hardly be masked.

The moment the truth comes out they will lose their credibility, which is easier to destro y than to rebuild. Consequently, these dishonest will suffer a long time because of their c heating behaviors. In conclusion, no one can afford to be dishonest in a civilized society.

Honesty is the pillar of a society. People will benefit from being honest in the long run. That's why we say it pays to be honest. 17. 假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点：

1.车祸发生的时间及地点

2.你所见到的车祸情况

3.你对车祸原因的分析

An Eye-witness Account of a Traffic Accident

Yesterday afternoon, I happened to witness a terrible traffic accident on my way home fro m school. It was 5:30 p.m., I was riding my favorite Giant back home. When I got to th e last crossing on the Golden Lion Street, the red light was on. So I applied the brakes, along with a long queue of vehicles waiting to pass.

Just at that moment, a heavy-load truck with earth roared forward at my side and bumped against a private Accord of Honda travelling eastbound. As a result, the windshield of th e lorry was broken into pieces and its driver got fatally wounded on the head on the stee ring wheel. The driver of the Accord and his girlfriend, the only passenger in the car, onl y got minor injuries, but his car lost its rear axel and two wheels and was totally dead.

As for the cause of the accident, I think the driver of the lorry should be held responsibl e: the light was red then; he should have stopped and waited. It was he who had broken the traffic regulations. In addition, the bad weather was part of the cause It was drizzlin g then, and the road was quite slippery. Finally, drunk driving was probably an important factor. As the police discovered on the spot, there was a heavy alcoholic smell on the d ead body of the lorry driver.

18. A letter

1.建议报考的专业及理由

2.报考该专业的基本条件

3.应当如何备考

A Letter in Reply to a Friend

Dear friend:

I am very glad to learn that you'd like to apply for admission to my university.

Since you are good at argumentation and debate, I strongly recommend that you major in law. So far as I know, you are an upright dynamo always ready to defend for the wron ged people and let justice prevail. On the other hand, you seem to be a keen observer an d analyst. You really have the makings of a good lawyer.

Now I should (like to) mention some important points you should pay attention to. First of all, you should exert yourself to get high scores in the coming college Entrance Exami nation, for laws is a very popular major in our university. There is fierce competition in t he enrollment of newcomers. In addition to the routine preparation for the exam, it is nec essary to have a sound body for your sound mind to dwell in. Go over all your lessons and read some books about law, and you will be more confident of your getting enrolled.

Just try your best, and you will give full expression to your talent in the future.

Good luck!

Yours

Zhangming

19. A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction

Your role: a tour guide

Your audience: a group of foreign tourists

Your introduction should include:

1.some welcoming words

2.the schedule for the day]

3.a description of the place the tourists will be visiting

(e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site etc.)

I feel it a great honour to be your tour guide today. First, on behalf of my company, I warmly welcome all my distinguished guests from Australia to Shanghai and the Oriental Pearl TV Tower.

Located on the Huangpu River, the Oriental Pearl TV Tower is now the symbol of the ci ty. Built in 1994 and opened to the public in 1995, it is now the highest building in Sha nghai and the third highest in Asia. The Tower has a quite unique structure and consists of 3 large and 5 small balls. Inside the balls, you can have a bird's eye view of the city.

Our schedule for the trip to the TV Tower is as follows: you have an hour form 9:30-10: 30am to experience the history of Shanghai on the first floor. Then we'll assemble in the middle of the hall at 10:30 and have another hour to overlook the beautiful city sceneries in the middle ball. Finally please do remember to go to the top ball at 11:30 to enjoy y our lunch.

Thanks for listening. Have a good time!

20. A Campaign Speech

1.你认为自己具备了什么条件(能力、性格、爱好等)可以胜任学生会主席的工作

2.如果当选，你将为本校同学做些什么

Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen:

Thank you for coming to this election campaign today. With the trust and complete suppo rt of my team, I am delighted to announce that I am running for chairman of the Student Union.

As a diligent man with pleasant personality, I have been always considered to be a good team member. Meanwhile, as a big fan of sports I fully realize the importance of teamwo rk and advocate the spirit of being quicker and stronger. I possess strong determination to take firm steps toward achieving the objectives of my team. In addition, my working exp erience with the Student Union in the past two years will be extremely helpful to my fut ure work here if I get elected.

A sign of a really strong organization is that it can change its leadership without hinderin g its progress and without damaging its values. If I am elected, I believe I have the capa bility to lead the Union to advance in the right direction. I will cooperate well with my f ellow members of the Union and take innovative measures, including establishing a studen t-information center, forming a teacher-student-friendship association, to make the Union a true assistance to students' study and life here as well as a bridge of communication betw een teachers and students.

Thank you very much.

21. Teacher's Day

1.向老师致以节日祝贺

2.从一件难忘的事回忆老师的教诲和无私奉献

3.我如何回报老师的关爱

It is Teacher's Day today. On this special occasion I would like to extend my heartfelt co ngratulations to all teachers, "Happy Teacher's Day!"

Of all teachers who have taught me since my early childhood, the most unforgettable one is my first English teacher in college, Ms. Zhang. It is she who has aroused my keen in terest in the learning of English and helped me realize the importance of self-reliance. Bo rn into a poor farmer's family in a mountainous area and educated in relatively primitive surroundings, I found myself lagging far behind in the first class in college, which happen ed to be Ms. Zhang's English class. I was really discouraged and frustrated, so I decided to drop out. Ms. Zhang was so keenly insightful that she had noticed my embarrassment i n class. After class, she called me into the Teacher's Room and discussed the situation wi th me, earnestly and kindly, citing the example of Robinson Crusoe to motivate me to go ahead in spite of all kinds of difficulties. "Be a man and rely on yourself," she nudged me. The next time we met, she brought me a simplified version of Robinson Crusoe and recommended that I finish reading it in a week and write a book report. Under her consis tent and patient guidance, not only has my English been greatly improved, but my confide nce and courage enhanced considerably.

"Rely on yourself and be a man," Ms. Zhang's inspiring words have been echoing in my mind. I will work harder and try my utmost to lay a solid foundation for my future caree r. Only by so doing can I repay Ms. Zhang's kindness and live up to her expectations of me, that is, to become a useful person and contribute to society.

英语四级作文范文点评：University Courses

当莘莘学子迈入大学校门，他们满怀憧憬却也举目茫然。面对全新的课程设置和宽泛的选择范围，他择呢？怎样的课程安排才能最有益于他们的发展呢？

University Courses

Many young people go to universities without a clear idea of what they are g oing to do. If one considers the various courses offered, it is not hard to see how difficult it is for a student to select the course most suited to him. If a s tudent goes to a university to acquire a broader perspective of life, he will un doubtedly benefit. Schools often have too restrictive an atmosphere. Most stude nts would, I believe, profit by the exploration of different academic studies, es pecially the “all rounder” with no particular interest.①They should have a lon ger time to decide in what subject they want to take their degrees, so that in later life, they do not look back and regret.