高中英语作文建议信课件

篇一：高中英语作文--建议信

建议信(1)-----阐释原因；提出建议类

请你

代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题

提出两条合理建议。问题包括：

1.菜

价

昂

贵

，

菜

市

单

一

；

2

.

排

队

时

间

长

，

浪

费

午

休

时

间

；

3

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味

道

不

佳

，

浪

费

现

象

严

重

。

注

意：1. 词数不少于120； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 可适当增加细节，

以使行文连贯。参考词汇: 食堂 canteen dear principal,

rece ntly, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen.

____________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________

__________ i sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. thank

you!

your

s, li

hua

作文

文： dear principal,

some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads

to a lot of waste. the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various.需注意的词汇、表达：

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l o w e r / r e a s o n a b l e p r i c e 以较低的价格4

v a r i e t i e s

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6. make sb (not)do sth

7. wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time 8. the kinds of

food are . 表达食堂出现的问题：

9.

the prices of dishes are so high that many of us can't afford them.

10. there are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from

satisfactory. / which can't satisfy our

need s.

11.

it takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time

of rest at noon. 12. the food in the canteen doesn't taste .

the taste of food in the canteen isn't

13. the food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14. it's a waste of time to stand in line for a long time.

15. the food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food. 16. in the long run, it's bad for our health and study.

17.

it goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon. 表达提出的建议：

18. improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems. 19. i think it's necessary to provide more kinds of food. 20. it's high time that we took measures to solve the problems.

so

it's high time for us to take measures

21.

to solve the problems, i think the canteen should set up a new

figure(形象) and improve the

pres ent condition to satisfy the students' needs.

22. we hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price. 23. the canteen should open more windows so

that we needn't wait so long.

24. as far as i'm concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. what's more,

diff erent kinds of food should be provided.

25. measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen.

建议模板： dear ....,

i'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to.......(引出话题). here are a few suggestions. first of all, it is important to do sth. then, it also helps to do sth. besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.

建议句型积累：

effe ctive ones.

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it's necessary for sb to do sth

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it would be a good idea for sb to do sth. / it would be a better

idea if....... 5. it contributes /helps a lot if ......... 6. i suggest that ...../ my suggestion is that ...

it's better to do sth

8. measures are supposed to be taken to do sth

we

are supposed to take effective measures to do sth 9. it's high time that sb sth. / it's high time for sb to do sth

议信(2)-----阐释原因；提出建议类

假定

你是中学生华。在一位名叫sad mother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下容。请你根据博

客容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。

i'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old. recently i have found that my daughter told lies to me. the other day she told me that she did

well in the final exam. however i found out she failed in math and english. what should i do?

写作

要点：

1.说

明

了

解

她

的

问

题

；

2

.

帮

她

分

析

孩

子

撒

谎

的

原

因

；

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提

出

至

少

两

条

建

议

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文

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的

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区

域

。

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语

意

连

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。

4

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书

写

需

清

晰

、

工

整

。

hi，sad mother，

i have learned that_____________________________________________

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文文： hi,sad mother,

she

is afraid you will punish her if she tells you the truth. besides, nowadays, parents put too much pressure on their kids. in order not

to let you down, she lie .

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s. 需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子：

daughter女儿 expectation 期望 be worried / concerned about 担心

calm down 冷静下来 at a loss 迷惑不解 keep in touch with 保持联系 be strict with sb in sth 在某方面对某人要求严格 heart-to-heart 推心置腹的

idea 注意想法 test 测试 text 文本 cheat 欺骗 want sb to do sth 想让某人做某事

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l i e s h a v e

h u r t b o t h

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3. being a teenager, she needs to be encouraged. and it's you who can

do this. 4. it is probably your high expectations to her that makes her decide to lie.

5. you should figure out the reason why she lied to you before solving the problem.

6. it goes without saying that lying is bad behavior.

7.

the reason why she didn't tell you the truth may be that she didn't want to let you down.

8.

it is suggested that you should have a face-to-face talk with her so that she might open her heart to you.

9.

to avoid the lies, you should encourage her rather than blame her when she fails in exams 10. the reason that leads to the problem may be various.

11. confronted with (面对) these problems, you should take a series of effective measures to help you daughter.

13.

it's suggested that you should attach more importance to physical

and mental health. moreover, it's better to encourage her to do what she wants. 改错：

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