中考英语写作常见错误 教学精品课件(共21张PPT)
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中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• 词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
英语写作典型错误例析PPT课件
纠正： 1. I have no difficult in finding your home
difficulty
重复累赘
1. The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it. 2. I hope to improve your work better. 有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需要不能 再出现某一单词，如果学生基本功不够扎实，就常常出 现造句累赘的现象。
I like listening to music very much and every day I read some newspapers as well.
3. I don’t know I should do what. I don’t know what I should do.
方法点拨：要减少中式英语必须做到：
关联词用法错误
I am tired, I must go to bed.
^ so
His living room seemed empty, there were only two
^ chairs, a desk and a bed.
but
whose
The children are playing in the distance, their parents
Li Ping is not old enough, he can not join the army. Li Ping is not old enough. He can not join the army. Li Ping is not old enough to join the army.
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difficulty
重复累赘
1. The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it. 2. I hope to improve your work better. 有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需要不能 再出现某一单词，如果学生基本功不够扎实，就常常出 现造句累赘的现象。
I like listening to music very much and every day I read some newspapers as well.
3. I don’t know I should do what. I don’t know what I should do.
方法点拨：要减少中式英语必须做到：
关联词用法错误
I am tired, I must go to bed.
^ so
His living room seemed empty, there were only two
^ chairs, a desk and a bed.
but
whose
The children are playing in the distance, their parents
Li Ping is not old enough, he can not join the army. Li Ping is not old enough. He can not join the army. Li Ping is not old enough to join the army.
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【全文】中考英语书面表达指导教学课件-(共50张PPT)
连(conn源自ct)美(beautify)
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.
中考英语专题复习短文改错复习讲解优秀课件(共24张PPT)【完美版】27页PPT
谢谢！
中考英语专题复习短文改错复习讲解 优秀课件(共24张PPT)【完美版】
21、没有人陪你走一辈子，所以你要 适应孤 独，没 有人会 帮你一 辈子， 所以你 要奋斗 一生。 22、当眼泪流尽的时候，留下的应该 是坚强 。 23、要改变命运，首先改变自己。
24、勇气很有理由被当作人类德性之 首，因 为这种 德性保 证了所 有其余 的德性 。--温 斯顿． 丘吉尔 。 25、梯子的梯阶从来不是用来搁脚的 ，它只 是让人 们的脚 放上一 段时间 ，以便 让别一 只脚能 够再往 上登。
21、要知道对好事的称颂过于夸大，也会招来人们的反感轻蔑和嫉妒。——培根 22、业精于勤，荒于嬉；行成于思，毁于随。——韩愈
23、一Байду номын сангаас节省，归根到底都归结为时间的节省。——马克思 24、意志命运往往背道而驰，决心到最后会全部推倒。——莎士比亚
25、学习是劳动，是充满思想的劳动。——乌申斯基
中考英语专题复习短文改错复习讲解 优秀课件(共24张PPT)【完美版】
21、没有人陪你走一辈子，所以你要 适应孤 独，没 有人会 帮你一 辈子， 所以你 要奋斗 一生。 22、当眼泪流尽的时候，留下的应该 是坚强 。 23、要改变命运，首先改变自己。
24、勇气很有理由被当作人类德性之 首，因 为这种 德性保 证了所 有其余 的德性 。--温 斯顿． 丘吉尔 。 25、梯子的梯阶从来不是用来搁脚的 ，它只 是让人 们的脚 放上一 段时间 ，以便 让别一 只脚能 够再往 上登。
21、要知道对好事的称颂过于夸大，也会招来人们的反感轻蔑和嫉妒。——培根 22、业精于勤，荒于嬉；行成于思，毁于随。——韩愈
23、一Байду номын сангаас节省，归根到底都归结为时间的节省。——马克思 24、意志命运往往背道而驰，决心到最后会全部推倒。——莎士比亚
25、学习是劳动，是充满思想的劳动。——乌申斯基
英语写作常见错误分析总结31页PPT
英语写作常见错误分析总结
1、战鼓一响，法律无声。——英国 2、任何法律的根本；不，不成文法本 身就是 讲道理 ……法 律，也 ----即 明示道 理。— —爱·科 克
3、法律是最保险的头盔。——爱·科 克 4、一个国家如果纲纪不正，其国风一 定颓败 。—— 塞内加 5、法律不能使人人平等，但是在法律 面前人 人是平 等的。 ——波 洛克
6、最大的骄傲于最大的自卑都表示心灵的最软弱无力。——斯宾诺莎 7、自知之明是最难得的知识。——西班牙 8、勇气通往天堂，怯懦通往地狱。——塞内加 9切好书如同和过去最杰出的人谈话。——笛卡儿
Thank you
1、战鼓一响，法律无声。——英国 2、任何法律的根本；不，不成文法本 身就是 讲道理 ……法 律，也 ----即 明示道 理。— —爱·科 克
3、法律是最保险的头盔。——爱·科 克 4、一个国家如果纲纪不正，其国风一 定颓败 。—— 塞内加 5、法律不能使人人平等，但是在法律 面前人 人是平 等的。 ——波 洛克
6、最大的骄傲于最大的自卑都表示心灵的最软弱无力。——斯宾诺莎 7、自知之明是最难得的知识。——西班牙 8、勇气通往天堂，怯懦通往地狱。——塞内加 9切好书如同和过去最杰出的人谈话。——笛卡儿
Thank you
写作常见错误ppt课件共17页
*On the one hand, this makes us healthy; on the other hand, it can save us money.
---For one thing… for another…
*I wish they are happy forever.
---I hope they will be happy for ever.
*There are many ways we can learn English well. --- There are many ways for us to learn English well.
*Money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need. ---They spend money on what they need.
*Some people think it is justified, others think it is unfair.
Some people think it is justified, while others think it is unfair.
*There are a lot of people in the world suffer from poverty.
*Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with this situation.
Children who are raised in impoverished families can generally deal with this situation.
中考英语作文指导教学课件(共46张PPT)
• First, paper books are more convenient. And we can write notes in them.
• We should use e-books because we live in modern cities and we should share the result of the development of the technology.
河北省中考作文评分标准
第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响
意思表达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子
基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量
• However, paper books also have some advantages. With paper books, we can make notes easily. It is good for us to practice handwriting. It won’t do so much harm to our eyes as e-books do.
春天来了，容易患感冒，为了保持健康，某英语网
站正在征集有关保持健康建议的稿件，请结合以下
图表写一篇应征短文。
more water drink
…
more vegetables and fruit
eat less junk food
…
How to keep healthy
… others
run and do morning exercise
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Don't cut down trees, because trees can improve our environment.
First, we must realize the importance of protecting the environment. If we often breathe the dirty air, we will get ill easily.
缺少成分
误：I happy I can come to Beijing. 正：I am happy I can come to Beijing.
误：The apples cheap. I'll take some. 正：The apples are cheap. I'll take some.
缺少成分
时态错误
误：Because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.
正：Because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.
正：Because the rain is heavy, we can't hold the sports meeting.
正：My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my father.
误：Trees can help our to improve the air quality.
正：Trees can help us to improve the air quality.
英语写作常见错误
英语写作常见错误
误：My father and my mother are both teacher.
正：My father and my mother are both teachers.
名词单复数问题
误：When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.
We should realize (that) protecting the environment is important.
4. I was realize the important of protect the environment.
I realize the importance of protecting the environment.
正：When one has knowledge , he can do what he wants to do.
主谓不一致
误：The strong man hits the little boy badly last night.
正：The strong man hit the little boy badly last night.
Second, we can ride a bike or go on foot often. Also, we should try to take a bus or subway more and drive cars less.
5. We should walked or ride bick to go out.
We should walk or ride a bike to go out. 6. We should realize that save the earth
is important, air is bad, we could be ill. We should realize that saving the earth is important. If air becomes bad, we
could be ill.
7. Protect the Environment is very important.
Protecting the environment is very important.
8. Don't cut the tree. Because the tree can improve our environment.
词性误用
Байду номын сангаас
误：Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school.
正：Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.
单词的误用
误：Take care of the elderly is our duty.
正：Taking care of the elderly is our duty.
误：You can't success without your efforts.
正：You can't succeed without your efforts.
标点误用，句子不完整
小组讨论，识别错误
1.名词单复数问题 2.主谓不一致（注意第三人称单数） 3.时态错误（过去时VS一般现在时） 4.成分残缺或多余（主语、谓语、介词、
冠词等） 5.单词误用（主格，宾格，动词等） 6.词性误用（名词当动词等） 7.大小写，标点误用,拼写错误
运用所学，改正错误
1.The air bad and people will ill. The air is bad and people will be ill.
2. I suggestion, we should by bike or walk go out and we should by bus. I suggest (that) we should ride a bike, take a bus or go on foot.
3. We should realize to protect the environment is important.
First, we must realize the importance of protecting the environment. If we often breathe the dirty air, we will get ill easily.
缺少成分
误：I happy I can come to Beijing. 正：I am happy I can come to Beijing.
误：The apples cheap. I'll take some. 正：The apples are cheap. I'll take some.
缺少成分
时态错误
误：Because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.
正：Because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.
正：Because the rain is heavy, we can't hold the sports meeting.
正：My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my father.
误：Trees can help our to improve the air quality.
正：Trees can help us to improve the air quality.
英语写作常见错误
英语写作常见错误
误：My father and my mother are both teacher.
正：My father and my mother are both teachers.
名词单复数问题
误：When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.
We should realize (that) protecting the environment is important.
4. I was realize the important of protect the environment.
I realize the importance of protecting the environment.
正：When one has knowledge , he can do what he wants to do.
主谓不一致
误：The strong man hits the little boy badly last night.
正：The strong man hit the little boy badly last night.
Second, we can ride a bike or go on foot often. Also, we should try to take a bus or subway more and drive cars less.
5. We should walked or ride bick to go out.
We should walk or ride a bike to go out. 6. We should realize that save the earth
is important, air is bad, we could be ill. We should realize that saving the earth is important. If air becomes bad, we
could be ill.
7. Protect the Environment is very important.
Protecting the environment is very important.
8. Don't cut the tree. Because the tree can improve our environment.
词性误用
Байду номын сангаас
误：Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school.
正：Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.
单词的误用
误：Take care of the elderly is our duty.
正：Taking care of the elderly is our duty.
误：You can't success without your efforts.
正：You can't succeed without your efforts.
标点误用，句子不完整
小组讨论，识别错误
1.名词单复数问题 2.主谓不一致（注意第三人称单数） 3.时态错误（过去时VS一般现在时） 4.成分残缺或多余（主语、谓语、介词、
冠词等） 5.单词误用（主格，宾格，动词等） 6.词性误用（名词当动词等） 7.大小写，标点误用,拼写错误
运用所学，改正错误
1.The air bad and people will ill. The air is bad and people will be ill.
2. I suggestion, we should by bike or walk go out and we should by bus. I suggest (that) we should ride a bike, take a bus or go on foot.
3. We should realize to protect the environment is important.