中考英语作文写作指导课件
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中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• 词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)
Enjoy an article
Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? （每一段的主要内容是什么？） 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？） 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? （作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？） 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）
正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
中考英语作文写作指导省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖课件
join a sports club
Friends fun
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注意“四定”
1.定内容。 2.定时态。 记叙文、日志惯用普通过去时； 说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用普通现在时； 计划等用普通未来时。 3.定人称。 用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。 4.定句型、定词语。 应依据内容,先定句型后定词语。
Middle 正文 Ending 结尾
supporting sentences支持句 用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、 讨论。
concluding sentence 结论句 对全文总结和概括。
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例1: 利弊型作文——Microblog利与弊 Para1: （综述）with the development of
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例3: 学校 “English center” 是同学们练习英语 场所。这里 “teenager hotline” 天天都能收不 到不少同学咨询电话。作为热线一名志愿者，请你 依据当初统计，首先描述两位同学碰到问题，然后 给一位同学提出详细提议并说明原因。
主要内容: 问题、提议、原因 限制: 描述两位同学问题，给一位同学提提议 关键词: problem、suggestion、reason
写作步骤：
1 审题 2 选材 3 列提要 4 写作 5 复查
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第一步 审题
审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。假如审 不清主题, 就有可能出现“下笔千言, 离题万里” 情况。
在审清主题基础上, 还需注意要审清文体。 审题不准, 丢关键点, 失分惨重。
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例1: A special gift I’m looking forward to 强调这份“礼品”是“我所期待”, 而非我已拥有一份礼品。 假如慌忙动笔就轻易将文章写成 “My favorite gift”.
【全文】中考英语书面表达指导教学课件-(共50张PPT)
连(conn源自ct)美(beautify)
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由：
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
中考英语写作指导 (共13张PPT)
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8.提炼中心法。这是写新材料作文最 为常见 且最为 稳妥的 审题立 意方法 。写新 材料作 文时， 如果能 准确地 提炼出 材料的 中心， 并以其 作为文 章的主 旨，一 定会使 所写文 章既切 题又有 深度。 所以， 写新材 料作文 时这种 方法来 立意最 多。
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9.抓关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材 料中心 的作用 。所以 ，有些 新材料 作文材 料中的 关键性 语句可 以作为 选择立 意角度 的突破 口。在 新材料 作文的 材料中 ，关键 句常常 是命题 者或材 料中的 人物的 评议性 语句。
一、审题（认真审题，确定时态、人 称，同时关注题材格式） 1、时态：故事性文章一般用过去时， 其中表达感受时可用现在时。
说明性或议论性文章一般用现在 时，举例时可用过去时。
根据题目要求也会出现时态的交 错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。
如果句中出现了时间状语，时态 则要遵循时间状语。 2、人称：句子中人称要统一。
三、成文：成文时表述正确 ，文字流畅
切忌与汉语提示的一 一对应，使用所学表达方 法将语义表达出来即可。
考虑句子结构(如主谓宾 ，主系表等)。
同时注意短语的正确 使用和单词的拼写，最好 使用课本上学过的短语和 句式。
四、理清文章结构： 文章结构清晰，重点句型出彩。
考虑文章的篇章结构，使用 适当的连词，使文章结构紧凑。 那连词有哪些呢，常分为以下几 类：
感谢观看，欢迎指导！
4.表因果关系的：Because，As ，So，Thus，Therefore，As a result
5.表换一种方式表达： In other words
6.表进行举例说明：For example，For instance，such as
中考英语作文指导课件(79张 PPT)演讲稿.ppt
on the one hand…on the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all),
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4. 使用“高端”的词汇。 Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day.
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
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如何运用已有的“遣词 造句”能力在写作实践 中学会“谋篇布局”
“战无不胜” 呢？
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审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 • 一般作文包括一定数量的内容点，漏写某一
点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审题要细心观察 ，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注意某些夸 张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写出的 内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍， 做到详略得当。
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一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状
（二）初中生写作现状 •
1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； •
2) 单词拼写错误； •
frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … •
3) 动词缺失； •
Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. •
that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all),
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4. 使用“高端”的词汇。 Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day.
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
课件
如何运用已有的“遣词 造句”能力在写作实践 中学会“谋篇布局”
“战无不胜” 呢？
课件
审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 • 一般作文包括一定数量的内容点，漏写某一
点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审题要细心观察 ，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注意某些夸 张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写出的 内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍， 做到详略得当。
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一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状
（二）初中生写作现状 •
1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； •
2) 单词拼写错误； •
frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … •
3) 动词缺失； •
Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. •
中考英语作文课件(19张PPT)
看法
我认为……
建议（至少3条） 1. 合理安排时间 2. 参加兴趣小组
3. ……
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our
第五步：集句成段，组段成篇
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play computer g2a.m迷es恋网吧，上网打游戏 watch too much.T..V... refuse to do homework
2. List some keywords about opinions.
not good for our health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to
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（至少3点） 2. 迷恋网吧，上网打游戏
3. ……
已知信息
以一般现 在时为主
时态
看法
我认为……
1. 建议（至少3条） 2.
3.
合理安排时间 参加兴趣小组 ……
未知信息
字数
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数
第二步：
列出写作提纲不（要Ou遗tli漏ne）。 要点！
具体做法：
根据段落整理写作要点
范文展示
Hello, everybody! It's time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Today's topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”.
Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students don't know how to use the time properly. They spend so much time on their hobbies that they can't finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV, What's worse, some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games. We don't think it's good for their study and health.
3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions. Sentences: _________________________________ _________________________________
第五步：集句成段，组段成篇
However, how can we make better use of our spare time?
Let's make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!
Summary
The structure of the article Introduction
Problems
Main body
opinions
Conclusion
2. Make sentences with the keywords about opinions. Sentences: _I_d__o_n_'t_t_h_in__k_i_t'_s_g_o_o_d__f_o_r_o_u_r_s_t_u_d_y___ __a_n_d__h_e_a_lt_h_.______________________
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups social activities, do sports, net bar
第一步:审清题意
认真审题 ，明确写作 主题、体裁、 人称、字数、结构、时态、提示 要点和补充信息
However, how can we make better use of our spare time? There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. Besides these, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework.
同学“不校知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室
园英请语你之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。
用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。
内容不要良点现包象括和：行为 1. 花太多时间在兴趣爱好上
（至少3点）
2. 迷恋网吧，上网打游戏
3. ……
看法
我认为……
1. 建议（至少3条） 2.
3.
合理安排时间 参加兴趣小组 ……
Problems
be crazy about (7B4) play computer games (7A1) watch too much TV (8A1) spend too much time on their hobbies (9A3) refuse to do homework (9A3) spend --- on (7A2)
第四步：连词成句
1. Make sentences with the keywords about problems. Sentences: _S_o_m_e_s_t_u_d_en_t_s_s_p_e_n_d_t_o_o_m_u_c_h__ti_m_e__on__th_e_ir _h_o_b_b_i_es__an_d__c_a_n_'t_f_in_i_sh__th_e_i_r_h_o_m_e_w_o_r_k__on time.
中考专题复习课
Writing
检查口语
爱好与学业
1.迈克疯狂地迷恋足球，喜爱看足球比赛， 当然也喜爱踢足球；
2. 放学后，他经常花 1个小时左右的时间和 同学们一起 踢足球；
3. 他的父母不喜欢这一点，要求他在 5点半 之前回家；他认为在爱好上花些时间是重 要的，希望能得到父母的支持。
分析结构
Introduction Hobbies and studies
具体做法： 用笔勾画
主题 人称
体裁 结构
自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时 间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这 种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如 何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给 该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：
不良现象和行为 1. 花太多时间在兴趣爱好上
And also
For example
There are many things we can do. we can plan our time
carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between
our study and hobbies. Wecan set up and join different
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Besides these,
抓住要点，列关键词
He wishes he could have his parents' support.
Conclusion
Discussion
Writing skills —six steps
抄写规范
抄
组段成篇
组
集句成段
审
作文
集
审清题意
抓 抓住要点
连 连词成句
自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些
2. List some keywords about opinions.
Phrases: ___n_o_t_g_o_o_d__fo__r _s_tu_d__y_a_n_d__h_e_a_lt_h_,_…_______
____________________________________
3. List some keywords about suggestions. Phrases: ____________________________________ ____________________________________
Mike is crazy about football!
Main body
He loves watching football matches. Of course, he loves playing football too. He often spends about one hour playing football with his classmates after school. His parents don't like this and have asked him to go home before 5.30. He thinks it is important for him to spend some time on his hobbies真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、 人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息 第二步就是要列出写作提纲（列关键词、连词成 句、集句成段、组段成篇）
写作前：确定人称、时态 写作后：查错改错
Homework
1.复习本课要点 2.背诵精彩范文
祝同学们在中考中取得好成绩！
Opinions
not good for our health and study (7A2) focus on (9A3)