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中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
well work well. （the ending）
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
美(beautify)
• mHooswt pdeoopeleopclheoosspeentdo trhaevierl vtaocgaettion? We awmayadferoam stuhrevebyusaynwdohrledreduirsinogurthreeport.(the hoblidegayinsn. ing) • A lot of people travel.
中考英语写作指导
学学习习目目标标：：
1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。 2.学习如何组织作文。 3.如何有效地使用连词。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
要求：要求学生在15-20分钟内，根据所给提
示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的 短文。词数控制在80个左右。
特点：1.贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维
加谚语(Proverb)
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents. A few
people work.
(th and enjoy your vacation. People who relax
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
美(beautify)
• mHooswt pdeoopeleopclheoosspeentdo trhaevierl vtaocgaettion? We awmayadferoam stuhrevebyusaynwdohrledreduirsinogurthreeport.(the hoblidegayinsn. ing) • A lot of people travel.
中考英语写作指导
学学习习目目标标：：
1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。 2.学习如何组织作文。 3.如何有效地使用连词。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
要求：要求学生在15-20分钟内，根据所给提
示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的 短文。词数控制在80个左右。
特点：1.贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维
加谚语(Proverb)
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents. A few
people work.
(th and enjoy your vacation. People who relax
中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)
Enjoy an article
Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? （每一段的主要内容是什么？） 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？） 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? （作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？） 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）
正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
中考英语作文写作指导省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖课件
join a sports club
Friends fun
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注意“四定”
1.定内容。 2.定时态。 记叙文、日志惯用普通过去时； 说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用普通现在时； 计划等用普通未来时。 3.定人称。 用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。 4.定句型、定词语。 应依据内容,先定句型后定词语。
Middle 正文 Ending 结尾
supporting sentences支持句 用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、 讨论。
concluding sentence 结论句 对全文总结和概括。
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例1: 利弊型作文——Microblog利与弊 Para1: （综述）with the development of
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例3: 学校 “English center” 是同学们练习英语 场所。这里 “teenager hotline” 天天都能收不 到不少同学咨询电话。作为热线一名志愿者，请你 依据当初统计，首先描述两位同学碰到问题，然后 给一位同学提出详细提议并说明原因。
主要内容: 问题、提议、原因 限制: 描述两位同学问题，给一位同学提提议 关键词: problem、suggestion、reason
写作步骤：
1 审题 2 选材 3 列提要 4 写作 5 复查
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第一步 审题
审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。假如审 不清主题, 就有可能出现“下笔千言, 离题万里” 情况。
在审清主题基础上, 还需注意要审清文体。 审题不准, 丢关键点, 失分惨重。
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例1: A special gift I’m looking forward to 强调这份“礼品”是“我所期待”, 而非我已拥有一份礼品。 假如慌忙动笔就轻易将文章写成 “My favorite gift”.
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张PPT)
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
Let’s look at these sentences. Can you make them more beautiful? 1.She is very young. She can’t carry the big box. __________________________________ 2.Writing a composition is very hard for me. __________________________________ 3.Our school trip was wonderful. __________________________________ 这回是用的什么方法使简单平淡的句子变得 丰富高级了呢？
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考作文如何拿高分？
1.灵活运用短语或词组，语言正确地道。 2.巧用连接词。 3.句式多样化。 4.用词生动。 5.就易避难，重短轻长。（基础差或中等同学） 6.长短句交错运用（基础较好） 7.书写规范，符合英文要求。 千万切记：万万不可为了美化作文出现汉式英语，
请同学们认真思考，这些关联词和过渡语在文 中起到了什么作用？在以后的学习和写作中 我们应该注意什么？
中考课(共17张 PPT)
How many ways do you find out?
1.结合情境选择恰当的词或短语，巧加修饰词 使语言更加生动。
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
By studying in groups, I am not worried about physics any more. I also get more confidence with my classmates’ help. What’s more, I become the master of the study.
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
Let’s look at these sentences. Can you make them more beautiful? 1.She is very young. She can’t carry the big box. __________________________________ 2.Writing a composition is very hard for me. __________________________________ 3.Our school trip was wonderful. __________________________________ 这回是用的什么方法使简单平淡的句子变得 丰富高级了呢？
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考作文如何拿高分？
1.灵活运用短语或词组，语言正确地道。 2.巧用连接词。 3.句式多样化。 4.用词生动。 5.就易避难，重短轻长。（基础差或中等同学） 6.长短句交错运用（基础较好） 7.书写规范，符合英文要求。 千万切记：万万不可为了美化作文出现汉式英语，
请同学们认真思考，这些关联词和过渡语在文 中起到了什么作用？在以后的学习和写作中 我们应该注意什么？
中考课(共17张 PPT)
How many ways do you find out?
1.结合情境选择恰当的词或短语，巧加修饰词 使语言更加生动。
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
By studying in groups, I am not worried about physics any more. I also get more confidence with my classmates’ help. What’s more, I become the master of the study.
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.1: 抓
➢断句
1.“他（Jim ）的父母都有钱”
2.“他们给他很多零花钱。” 3.“他（Jim）理解父母的不容易” 4.“他不多花钱，想办法省钱。” 5.“他喜欢阅读，在网上买书” 6.“他有时去图书馆借书” 7.“别人买饮料他却带水上学” 8.“他从不花钱买零食” 9.“有人认为他的做法很怪异，但我.....”
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Hale Waihona Puke 中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.4: 抓
➢句子结构 It’s … to do sth.
……
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
因并果列 顺序
观点 …… 源句内化
Stage5:改
Stage4: 连
Stage1: 审
思
体裁 维 时态 导 人称 图
Stage3: 扩
Stage2: 抓
断句 动词 语块
(mind map)
造句
结构
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
（1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.1: 抓
➢断句
1.“他（Jim ）的父母都有钱”
2.“他们给他很多零花钱。” 3.“他（Jim）理解父母的不容易” 4.“他不多花钱，想办法省钱。” 5.“他喜欢阅读，在网上买书” 6.“他有时去图书馆借书” 7.“别人买饮料他却带水上学” 8.“他从不花钱买零食” 9.“有人认为他的做法很怪异，但我.....”
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Hale Waihona Puke 中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.4: 抓
➢句子结构 It’s … to do sth.
……
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
因并果列 顺序
观点 …… 源句内化
Stage5:改
Stage4: 连
Stage1: 审
思
体裁 维 时态 导 人称 图
Stage3: 扩
Stage2: 抓
断句 动词 语块
(mind map)
造句
结构
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
（1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由：
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
中考英语作文指导课件(79张 PPT)演讲稿.ppt
on the one hand…on the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all),
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4. 使用“高端”的词汇。 Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day.
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
课件
如何运用已有的“遣词 造句”能力在写作实践 中学会“谋篇布局”
“战无不胜” 呢？
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审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 • 一般作文包括一定数量的内容点，漏写某一
点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审题要细心观察 ，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注意某些夸 张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写出的 内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍， 做到详略得当。
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一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状
（二）初中生写作现状 •
1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； •
2) 单词拼写错误； •
frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … •
3) 动词缺失； •
Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. •
that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all),
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4. 使用“高端”的词汇。 Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day.
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
课件
如何运用已有的“遣词 造句”能力在写作实践 中学会“谋篇布局”
“战无不胜” 呢？
课件
审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 • 一般作文包括一定数量的内容点，漏写某一
点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审题要细心观察 ，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注意某些夸 张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写出的 内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍， 做到详略得当。
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一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状
（二）初中生写作现状 •
1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； •
2) 单词拼写错误； •
frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … •
3) 动词缺失； •
Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. •
中考英语作文指导.doc
中考英语作文指导1.关于环境保护（水资源节约）的话题Our environment is very important for our lives . We need the fresh ail； the clean water and so on . In the past。
there were many trees around us ,the air was fresh and the river was clean.Bu£_now,people cut down many trees. Air pollution and water pollution are very serious • The environment around us becomes very terrible . We should protect our environment. First, we should plant many trees to keep water. Second , we can ride a bike or walk to the school and work.Third , we shouldn't throw the dirty water into the river . Fourth, we shouldn't use the plastic bags. Finally, we can ask more people to join us.2.人与环境人与环境是和谐相处的，我们生存在地球丄，人是自然之子，而不能仅把人看作自然的征服者，大家都知道，人类只有一个地球，地球上的山山水水、动物。
植物是人类的细胞，如果我们把它损坏了，破坏了大自然的组织，等于消灭人类。
因此，环境要与社会公德联系起来，与实践行为作为人格教育的一项重要内容来抓。
每个人都要履行保护环境的责任和义务。
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• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法一:善用高级词汇
Which is better?
他们很早就到了。
A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.
（t尾he的b句eg子inn应in注g）意简洁、漂亮。
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
我们应该保护环境。
A We should protect the environment. B It’s our duty to protect the environment.
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法二:活用多种句型
她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。
A She is very young. She can’t carry the heavy box.
（正文） meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.
Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不 用说)answer the questions about them. But the most
• A lot of people travel. • Some people stay at home. • Some other people visit friends
or parents. • A few people work. • Enjoy your vacation.
加(add)
• 加首尾，使结构完整。 • Hm•oawd可ed以ao sp采uerovp取eley 总sapned分ndh总etrhe结eiirs构voau，crart开eiopno头?rtW.或e 结
difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and
sentences.
Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please
give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to
some problems we meet in English study. (the beginning)
First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think
studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so
B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she can’t carry the … D She is not old enough to carry the…
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots
of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study.
the body And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who
relax well work well. （the ending）
连(connect)
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
me soon.
(the ending)
Mary
basic rules (写作考试规则)
search（审） list（列） add(加: 开头和结尾) connect(连) beautifY(美：谚语/例子)
审(search)
健康很重要。在学习和 工作的压力日趋增大的 今天，会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。人们是 如何度过假期的呢？国 际健康组织对此作了一 次调查，右图是他们此 次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息，请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整的 调查报告,并提倡大家 进行假日休闲。
How can we write a
good composition(作文)?
——中考写作指导课
basic structure (基本结构的安排)
Let’s go for it!
Dear Mr. Know，
I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you
travel stay at home
Hale Waihona Puke visit friends or parents
work
列(list)
根据以下关键词及图表用 简单的句子列出文章的要点。
• 如何度假 • 调查报告 • 倡议假日休闲
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents
work
列(list)
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法一:善用高级词汇
Which is better?
他们很早就到了。
A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.
（t尾he的b句eg子inn应in注g）意简洁、漂亮。
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
我们应该保护环境。
A We should protect the environment. B It’s our duty to protect the environment.
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法二:活用多种句型
她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。
A She is very young. She can’t carry the heavy box.
（正文） meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.
Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不 用说)answer the questions about them. But the most
• A lot of people travel. • Some people stay at home. • Some other people visit friends
or parents. • A few people work. • Enjoy your vacation.
加(add)
• 加首尾，使结构完整。 • Hm•oawd可ed以ao sp采uerovp取eley 总sapned分ndh总etrhe结eiirs构voau，crart开eiopno头?rtW.或e 结
difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and
sentences.
Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please
give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to
some problems we meet in English study. (the beginning)
First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think
studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so
B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she can’t carry the … D She is not old enough to carry the…
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots
of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study.
the body And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who
relax well work well. （the ending）
连(connect)
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
me soon.
(the ending)
Mary
basic rules (写作考试规则)
search（审） list（列） add(加: 开头和结尾) connect(连) beautifY(美：谚语/例子)
审(search)
健康很重要。在学习和 工作的压力日趋增大的 今天，会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。人们是 如何度过假期的呢？国 际健康组织对此作了一 次调查，右图是他们此 次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息，请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整的 调查报告,并提倡大家 进行假日休闲。
How can we write a
good composition(作文)?
——中考写作指导课
basic structure (基本结构的安排)
Let’s go for it!
Dear Mr. Know，
I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you
travel stay at home
Hale Waihona Puke visit friends or parents
work
列(list)
根据以下关键词及图表用 简单的句子列出文章的要点。
• 如何度假 • 调查报告 • 倡议假日休闲
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents
work
列(list)