段落写作中易犯的错误

Tom was one of my students, who came late for class that snowy Monday. 修改：one of my students →the only one in my class
●Faulty: Students should learn to analyze and solve problems independently. Don’t rely on your teachers’ help.
●Revised: She reviewed the lesson taught last week and did all the exercises assigned by the teacher.
The faulty sentences are not coherent because of a confusing change in person, in number, in mood, and in voice respectively. A sentence should be consistent in these respects. Unnecessary shifts should be avoided.
Exercise: When one is sick, you don’t want company. 修改： Battles between American Indians and white men came about because they oppressed them. 修改：because the latter oppressed the former
●Confusing shifts in person and number,or in voice,tense,and mood
-voice 语态 -te源自文库se 时态 -mood (动词的)语气
●Faulty: An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize. ●Revised: An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, he should not plagiarize.
●Revised: Students should learn to analyze and solve problems independently. They should not rely on your teachers’ help.
●Faulty: She reviewed the lesson taught last week and all the exercises assigned by the teacher were done.
●Faulty: Those who wish to take Linguistics are expected to sign his name on this sheet of paper.
●Revised: Those who wish to take Linguistics are expected to sign their names on this sheet of paper.