安徽省都江堰市高考英语二轮复习短文改错练习(2)

四川都江堰市2016高考英语短文改错二轮练习（2）下面短文中有10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。

2011年浙江高考真题：I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I w ould always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.【2011年参考答案】：I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did.cousin’s richerThere was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed,in put后加 iteven at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would去掉to facealways know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, ILaterpulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and everslowly knew nevermentioned it again.短文改错。

After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________will go through the job­hunting talk today and he w ould8.________take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________答案与解析：1．去掉the finish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。

2．month→months month是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。

3．interested后加in be interested in是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”。

4．him→himself calling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。

5．do→did根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。

do well in“干得好”。

6．√7．beaten→beating a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。

8．will→would这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。

9．surprised→surprise to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。

10．said后加was what he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。

句子缺少系动词。

短文改错。

Dear doctor,My name is Wang Lin. I’m a middle school student.I havea problem and I’m writing to ask you for some advices. 1._________I’m just 1.57 meters high, and my weight is 71 kilos.Many 2.__________ Students often make fun me.Some boys are unfriendly to me. 3._________They called me “ Meat Ball”. That makes me feel unhappy. 4._________I’m now worry about my weight. Though I am a bit too fat, I 5.__________feel rather good. I enjoy my meals. I love eating meat very 6._________ much. And I like sweet food, either. I often have sugar with 7._________tea, milk, porridge, and even hot water. In the past two months 8._________I have put off 5 kilos. I’m worried about this problem, 9.__________but I don’t know what to lose weight quickly. Please help me, 10_________dear doctor!I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.With best wishes,Wang Lin【参考答案】Key 91 advices –advice2 and—but 3of 4 called –call5 worry—worried6 good –well7 either –too8 right9 off –on 10 what –how2015年浙江高考真题：My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.2015年参考答案：My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyedsides ofsit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see thesittingeasilyfootball field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroomisis also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in theitdistance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I wasnot去掉always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view加amade me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forgetfeel Though/Althoughit.(2013·河南省六市第二次联考)It's reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others.In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.【参考答案】： It's reported that many people died dieof traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely wide attention of the public. Many rules have ∧beenmade to reduce thetraffic crashes, especially for ＼ the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make take road safety seriously in our daily life. While used usingthe road, we mustwalk on the pavement and learn to protect us ourselves. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that whichis both good for themselves and others. In the a word, obeying the traffic rules are iswhat all of us should pay attention toparticularly. After all, life is not a small matter.【2015届宁夏银川一中高三上学期第一次月考】第一节：短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。