2019高考英语书面表达指导与练习(4)(参考范文)
2019高考英语书面表达指导与练习（4）（参考范文）
如何提高书面表达的档次,争取得高分甚至总分值
不少同学们可能很不理解:考试时,写出的书面表达要点齐全,表达也正确,可就是不知道为什么打不上高分。是啊,为什么呢？今天,
首先让我们来看近年来全国高考英语书面表达的评分标准:第五档〔很好〕:“覆盖所有主要内容;应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑;达到了预期的
可见,高考书面表达评分标准在语言的运用上对考生提出了更高的要求。也就是说在考查考生语言准确性的基础上,进一步强调了用词的得体性、表达方式的多样性。如果同学们仅运用基础的词汇和基本的句型,不能表达出较强的语言运用能力,即使要点齐全,表达没有语法错误,也不能给人一种含金量高的审美享受,因此很难在考试的评分中得到较高档次。评分标准给我们传递了另外一个信息,如果有意识地使用较高级词汇或复杂结构,即使有些错误,也不扣分,
因此要使一个平淡的文章变得丰富起来,从而提高书面表达的档次。我认为同学们应着
1.
词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少,也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。从评分标准可知,运用高级的词汇对提高书面表达的分数至关重要。大家先来看下面这些句子:
(1)Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.
Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.
(2)Weallthinkheisagreatman.
Weallthinkhighlyofhim.
(3)SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea....cameupon...
Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.
(4)Thestudentsthereneedn’tpayfortheirbooks.
Booksarefreeforthestudentsthere.
(5)Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.
Theplanturnedout(tobe)afailure.
(6)Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.
Atthenewsofhisdeath,shewentpalewithsorrow.
(7)ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.
ShewenttoAustriafor/withthepurposeofstudyingmusic.
(8)Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.
Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.
(9)Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.
Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty-sixclassrooms./Twenty-sixclassroomsmakeupourschool.
(10)Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.
You’llhavenotrouble/difficultyfindingmyhouse.
2.
在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句型,要灵活运用各种语法结构,运用得当的句子结构
可以给文章增色不少,从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。例如:
(1)Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.〔使用v.-ing形式〕
→Onhisarriving/arrival,pleasegivemeane-mail.
(2)Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.〔使用名词性从句〕
→Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.
(Thatthelittlegirlknowssomanythingssurpriseshim./Itsurpriseshimthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.)
(3)ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)
→WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.
(4)Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型①Itwas...②notuntil...)
→①Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.
→②Notuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperdidheknowwhathadhappened.
(5)Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.〔使用虚拟语气〕
→①Icouldnothavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.
→②Ifyouhadnothelpedme,Icouldnothavepassedthephysicsexam.
(6)Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(用过去分词)
→Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.
(7)Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用v.-ing形式)
→Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.
(8)Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.〔使用状语从句〕
→Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.
(9)Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.〔使用并列句〕
→Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.
(10)HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)
→NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.
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4.假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：
1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；
2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；
3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。
注意：1.词数：120-150
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
4.DearTom,
Howtimeflies!IthasbeenamonthsinceyoucametoBeijing.Howiseverythinggoingonwithyourlifeandstudynow?
WhatexcitedmemostisthatIwillgotoBeijingtoattendanEnglishspeechcontesttobeheldinsummerholidayinJulyformiddleschoolstudents.Butunfortunately,I’mencounteringmanydifficultiesincollectingmaterialsneededandIalsohaveproblemsintheapplicationofthelanguage.Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.Ireallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.
Hereisgoodnewsforyou.I’vedecidedtogotoseeyouaftertheEnglishspeechcontest.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyou.
Bestwishestoyouandyourparents!
Yours,
LiHua
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8.下面图表是对我省某校高三学生选择高考志愿时所考虑因素的调查结果。请用英语写一篇简要的报告，并说说你自己的观点。
注意：〔1〕文章的开头已经写好。
〔2〕词数150左右。
〔3〕可以适当发挥。
051015202530354045个人兴趣35% 父母/老师意见20%
【参考范文】
8.Someseniormiddleschoolgraduateshavedifferentopinionsonhowtochoosetheirmajorsanduniversities.
About35%ofthestudentsinsistthatthechoiceshouldbebasedontheirowninterest.Theysayinterestisthewayleadingtosuccess.Theythinkitisamiserablethingtobeforcedtostudywhattheyhavenointerestin.
Thepercentageofthestudentswhoconsideritistheneedofthesocietythatmattersalot,is45%.Theysaythinkitwillhelpthemfindthejobtheylikebest.Inaddition,interestcanbedevelopedandchanged.
Interestingly,thereareabout20%ofthestudentswhofinditsodifficulttomakeachoicethattheyprefertofollowtheadviceofferedbytheirparentsorteachers.
Inmyopinion,interestisthemostimportantofall.Withoutinterestyoucan’tstudythesubjectverywellandmayhavemoredifficultywithyourcareer.
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2019年高考英语试卷(北京卷)及参考答案
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绝密★启用前
2019年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（北京卷）
英语
（考试时间：100分钟试卷满分：120分）
考生务必将答案答在答题卡上，在试卷上作答无效。
考试结束后，将本试卷和答题卡一并交回。
第一部分：知识运用（共两节，45分）
第一节语法填空（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）
阅读下列短文，根据短文内容填空，在未给提示词的空白处仅填写1个适当的单词，在给出提示词的空白处用括号内所给词的正确形式填空。
A
Onthe first day ofmy first grade, I stood by the door withbutterflies in my stomach. I 1（voice）my biggest
concern to my mother. ＂How will I make friends?＂She handed me advice. ＂Be yourself.＂Forthepast 20 years.
I have lived by these words. Soon I will graduate and become part of the real world. Nervously 2（face）challenges,
Iknow I will whisper to 3（I）the two simple words＂Be yourself＂.
B
Earth Day, 4（mark）on 22 April, is an annual event aiming to raise public awareness about environmental
protection. First celebrated 5 1970, the Day now includes events in more than 190 countries and regions（地区）. No
高考英语作文题目范文(2019-2023年全国卷一二三)
1 高考英语作文范文汇总（全国卷2019-2023年）
01 2023年全国新高考1卷
【作文题目】
假定你是李华,外教 Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.说明问题;
2.提出建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【优秀范文】
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3. ①We're overwhelmed with excitement at the
knowledge that an oral English class will be arranged for us(同位语从句).But
learning that we'll be randomly paired to do the oral practice, I feel an urge to express
my different voice, hoping that this wouldn't offend you(现在分词短语作伴随状语).
①To begin with, it couldn't be better if students with mixed levels of English
could be grouped together deliberately rather than at random, so that we can help each
other during our practice. Additionally, to ensure that our oral practice goes smoothly,
I suggest that you put three to four students together, with one as the group leader
2019年全国卷高考英语应用文真题范文(填空练习)
2019年全国卷高考英语应用文真题范文
【2019全国I卷】
【参考译文】我是一个名叫李华的中国学生，暑假期间在伦敦学习。 得知当地美术馆将举办中国画展览，我写信申请志愿服务。 作为一名从5岁开始学习中国画的学生，我很高兴有机会向外国人介绍中国画。 此外，我流利的英语口语和丰富的中国画知识将帮助游客深刻理解每幅画背后的意义。
如果能给我这个机会，我将不胜感激。
I am a Chinese student ______________ (过去分词作定语）, ______________ (who引导非限制性定语从句）during the summer vacation. ______________ (动名词作主语）that the
local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings (that引导宾语从句）, I am
writing ______________ (不定式作目的状语）. As a student ______________ (who引导限制性定语从句）since 5 years old,I am very pleased ______________ (不定式作原因状语）to
introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners (不定式作定语，修饰opportunity）. Besides (过渡语）, my fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitors
understand the meaning (省略to的不定式作宾补）behind each painting deeply.
I will appreciate it ______________ (it作形式宾语,if是真正的宾语从句）.
2019年高考英语作文题目预测及范文4篇模板.doc
1 8 2019年高考英语作文题目预测及范文4篇模板
20xx年高考英语作文题目预测及范文一：关于环境保护倡议书
作文题目：环境保护：假如你是李华，现任你们学校的学生会主席。你将代表学生会起草一份倡议书，号召全校同学行动起来，为环保运动做出自己的努力。同时下周六学校将组织同学在全市进行环保宣传活动，征召志愿者到校学生会报名。
注意：(1)短文应该包括以上所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥;(2)词数：0左右;(3)倡议书格式以提供，不计入总词数;(4)参考词汇：征召(新人) recruit。
15 May, 20xx
Dear brothers and sisters,
_________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely, 2 8 Li Hua
University Students' Union
范文：15 May, 20xx
Dear brothers and sisters,
On behalf of the University Students' Union, I,
the Chairman of the Union , am earnestly calling for your
active participation in our environmental protection
campaign. It is the duty of every global villager; man just
can not sustain his glorious civilization without a
书面表达(新高考应用文类)(解析版)
专题28 书面表达（新高考应用文类）
1.【2020·浙江卷】假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1. 询问近况；2. 分享班级最新消息；3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文1】Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now?
I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in
our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the
audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there.
Unit4AdversityandCourage高二英语单元写作深度指导(人教版2019选择性)
选择性必修第三册Unit 4单元写作指导与演练
An essay about Shackleton and his men on Endurance
单元写作早知道 写作任务 本单元的写作任务是写一篇人物介绍。
人物介绍分为人物故事和人物推介。一般是针对所写的人的基本情况作简单的描述，其主要篇幅应是叙述其事迹或在某个领域中作出的贡献。最后简要地对人物进行评价。
常用表达 1. a 1.80metertall boy / an 18yearold boy 一个高1.8米的男孩/一个18岁的男孩
2. at the age of five在五岁时
3. be experienced in 在……方面有经验
4. have a gift for 有……的天赋
5. be in good health /condition 身体健康
6. graduate from... 从……毕业
7. major in 以……为专业
8. get a master’s degree 获得硕士学位
9. be given the title of... 获得……称号
10. win a gold/silver/copper medal 获得金/银/铜牌
11.gain/win the first prize/place 获得一等奖/第一名
单元话题 真题展示 高考链接
人物介绍 2023年全国甲卷 描写人物通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好特长、性格、事迹等多个方面，但写作时需要严格按照写作要求来写，要包括所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。 Use what you have
learned to write an
article about a person. 学校举办以英语用讲中国故事为主题的征文活动，请以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 人物事迹；
2019年英语天津高考作文范文
2019年英语天津高考作文范文
全文共10篇示例，供读者参考
篇1
Wow, The 2019 Tianjin college entrance examination is
finally over! Let me tell you all about it. The English exam was not
as hard as I thought, and I even finished it before time was up.
The first part of the exam was the listening section. The
recording was clear, and I could understand everything they said.
After that, we had to answer some questions based on the
listening. It was a bit tricky, but I managed to answer all of them.
Next was the reading section. There were three passages to
read, and they were all interesting. One was about global
warming, another was about a famous writer, and the last one
was a story about a lost dog. I had to answer questions about
each passage, and it was not too difficult.
After that, we had the writing section. I had to write an essay
2019高考英语全国1卷作文真题及满分范文
1/ 2【题目要求】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1．写信目的：2．个人优势：3．能做的事情。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文xx；3．结束语已为你写好。【优秀满分xx】Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. Idelighted to learn that volunteerstudents are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply forAll in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take myapplication into consideration. Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型，可以按照申请信的思路来写，同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。首先要进行自我介绍，简要交代写作背景，阐明写信目的。2/ 2第二段是文章的主题，要把题干给到的提示完整地体现出来，文章用First of all，What’s more, The most important factoris that等过渡性结构自然地串联三个要点。同时要注意句式的多样化与高级词汇的应用。最后需要使用求职信的常用套话及书信的常用套话结尾。
高考英语作文之应用文写作：2019年全国1卷
应用文写作
2019年全国1卷
2020.3
2
（申请信
▪
2019全国1卷）假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一
封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人优势；
3. 能做的事情。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结束语已为你写好。 【官方范文】 Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a student from China for further study in London this summer vacation. Learning from the notice that your local art museum is recruiting some volunteers for an exhibition of Chinese paintings, I got desperately delighted and thrilled. And I am now writing to apply for this position.
I’ve been longing for a chance to offer service in such a fantastic platform so as to enhance my organization ability as well as communication skills. Being active, enthusiastic and energetic, I am confident to be competent for the voluntary work. Furthermore, my previous experience as a volunteer enables me to be qualified for the position with less training. Most importantly, as a Chinese, I have been exposed to Chinese culture especially Chinese paintings since I was a little child, so I am convinced that I can make a vivid description of the profound meaning behind those masterpieces to the visitors.
(完整word)【作文范文】全国I卷2019年高考英语真题卷
2019年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(全国卷I)
英 语
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
72.假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括:
1.写信目的:
2.个人优势:
3.能做的事情。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.结束语已为你写好。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文1：
I'm LiHua, an outgoing boy, who is studying in London. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer
of your team, having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city. I have
some advantages for the job.
First of all, having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a
child , I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese