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I am keen on sports and outdoor pursuits. I have enjoyed a range of activities from countryside walks to kayaking and abseiling. Because of this I feel I would particularly enjoy the fieldwork the course offers. I have been able to combine this interest in sport with a part time job as a leisure attendant at local sport centres. As part of this post I was asked to lead a youth sports and activities group which aims to promote sport among young people in my area. This activity has also allowed me to introduce other young people to activities that I have enjoyed. This role has also helped me to develop skills that would help me while I am at university. The sports group involves arranging individual sessions as well as trips outThis has improved my organisational skills, which has reflected my ability to combine part-time work with college effectively. Working as part of a team and serving members of the public has also improved my social skills, making me more confident when working with othersI wish to study at university, not only for the knowledge that I will gain from the course, but alsofor the experience of university life has to offer. During my two years at college I have participated in various activities. For example, I represented the college at an open day, volunteered as a collage council representative for my form group, participated in a blood donation scheme and was also involved in the shoebox appeal. These activities meant that I have to be confident, approachable and polite. I feel these are characteristics that will enableme to get involved with student life at universityMy ambition is to participate in conservation work abroad, before gaining experience in a career based in this area. I feel the experience outlined above and the knowledge I will gain from the course will enable me to achieve this ambition.Personal Statement Sample - biology生物2009-10-10 11:22:42 阅读563 评论0 字号：大中小As with science in general, I find it interesting, often fascinating, and I feel that I could gain much from studying it at university University has always appealed to me because of the wealth of experiences it has to offer as a student. Although I enjoy English Literature and Chemistry: I am especially keen to study Biology and Psychology. For me, the main appeal of the course lies in the variety of topics that will be covered. The aspects of Biology I find particularly interesting are neuroscience and how the immune system functions and responds.In Psychology, I am very interested in what makes people unique and how different factorsshape our personalityAt present I am employed at McDonald's where within one year of work I got promoted to a Floor Manager. Then I rapidly got promoted as a shift Manager. Being at this position it gives me numerous of responsibilities. For instance I am responsible for the whole resturant, ensuring the good communication flow exists between the crew members, correct procedures are followed, restaurant goals are achieved and ensuring that every customer gets 100%customer satisfactionThis experience especially allowed me to use my interpersonal skills to the full. In my reference, my employer remarked on my willingness to learn, my enthusiasm and initiative as well as my ability to work independently and as part of a teamI have a variety of hobbies outside school. When time allows, I find playing football, tennis, and listening music, a change from my studies. My other pursuits include more physical activitiessuch as attending the gym, dancing and cyclingAt present, I am putting most of my effort into achieving the best grades in my 'course to allow me to reach the next target in my education. I understand that university life will be very challenging, but I am confident that it will give me the best chance to achieve my potential, and lead the way forward to a successful career. I hope that this application indicates that I am apromising candidate.Personal Statement - Bioengineering生物2009-10-10 11:21:41 阅读364 评论0 字号：大中小"Scientists investigate that which already is. Technologists create that which has never been."I chose engineering as a life pursuit because I wish to engage in both. This choice was enhanced by a personal yearning to apply all that I learn; I wanted to be able to implement my physical and mathematical abilities in real life situations. I feel higher education would enableme to realise this aim.Although all aspects of physics and engineering intrigue me, I am particularly interested in the medical application of these two disciplines. When considering which field I might enter I realised that the only discipline that appealed to me, other than engineering, was medicine.Having researched the crossover between medicine and engineering I decided thatbioengineering provided the perfect blend.In order to improve my grasp of A-level Physics and Mathematics, and develop a better understanding of the options available to me in Higher Education, I have made extensive use of the online lectures of the Massachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT). I was particularly receptive to the teaching methods of the Physics lecturer, Professor Lewin.Supplementary reading has widened my horizons and encouraged me to examine elements above and beyond the A-level course. Some of the books I have encountered include 'A Brief History of Time' by Stephen Hawking and also 'Mr. Tompkins in Wonderland' by Nobel Prize winner, George Gamow. The latter was more than simply 'a physics book' to me - the presentation of the physical principals within a love story proved to be extremely captivating.Following the debate regarding students' declining abilities and the 'dumbing down' of the A-levels I have undertaken a study of material from the older, and in my opinion more challenging, 1996 syllabus. Books such as 'Essential Principles of Physics' by Whelan and Hodgson have been particularly enlightening in this respect.I feel that theoretical concepts are easier to understand and more easily absorbed when they are tangible and therefore I have applied to the Year in Industry scheme, hoping that this will enhance the application of my mathematical and physical skills. Due to personal issues during the A-level exam period I was unable to achieve my potential and did not meet all my predicted grades. In order to amend this I have chosen t o retake some modules during my gap year whilst at the same time studying a new subject and expanding my language skills.I consider that my multicultural upbringing, including 12 years in Japan, Dubai and the Sudan have led to me being a well-rounded and colourful person. As a consequence of this time I benefited by gaining knowledge about different traditions, an insight into diverse cultures, anda furtherance in my linguistic abilities. This granted me the ability to adapt to different environments swiftly and comfortably, which would explain my enthusiasm for meeting new people. Moreover, the contrast in the living standards in these different environments has shown me the importance of science and technology in our lives.Professionals have confirmed for me that bioengineering is an intellectually challenging field, requiring commitment and motivation. I have always believed in fully devoting myself to all that I do, and with my particular interests and experiences, I feel that only an opportunity to studybioengineering at university will enable me to express my abilities in their entirety.生物个人陈述模板生物2009-09-17 10:32:31 阅读344 评论1 字号：大中小I will never forget my experience of working alongside doctors to fight against the horrible disease, AA, in China in 200X. This work taught me the great impact of disease control and prevention and motivated me to apply for the biostatistics program at Yale University, with the ultimate career goal of becoming aninfluential professional or researcher in the field. I firmly believe that my constant thirst for knowledge, high regard for the work in the biomedical and public health fields, and my courageousness will drive my graduate studies and help me achieve personal and professional success.I first became interested in biostatistics when the AA epidemic breakout in China in 200X. As a memberof the University Red Cross Association, I was responsible for assisting the university hospital to publicize disease prevention methods, distribute medicine, and complete health surveys. I learned from that process the value of survey dates in supplying useful strategies for disease prediction, prevention and control. Afterward, when I served as Vice President of the Student Union, I organized an introductory lecture and health survey about hereditary disease for the local community. I truly enjoyed these voluntary public health services, as I was able to use my knowledge to enhance the quality of life for my fellow man. These achievements gave me the determination to fully devote myself to public healthservices and global health care development.My academic training to this point has provided me with a wide range of general knowledge and skills related to the biological sciences. This training is an excellent first step in preparing for the professional career that I desire. As an undergraduate student in bioengineering at BB University, I acquired a solid foundation in the theoretical concepts associated with genetics, molecular biology, immunology, and biochemistry. I also gained knowledge in the several areas of industrial significance, includingbio-products, fermentation, and biotechnology. In addition to the comprehensive studies in my major field, I received as well extensive training in mathematics and computer science, both of which were of great benefit to my study of biostatistics, an important area in various industrial and scientific research efforts.For example, as I learned during my summer internship as an Assistant Researcher at the DD Pharmaceutical Company in 200Y, biostatistics has a vital role in the development and marketing of new medicines, in the control of the quality of products, and in the tracking of consumer trends, attitudes and purchases. I have also worked as an undergraduate research assistant for a map-based cloning project in the ZZ Biology Center, where I used statistical methods to develop WW genetic markers and to calculate the probabilities of recombination. These hands-on training activities gave me a clearer understanding of and a deeper insight into the biostatistics of biological and clinical problems.I look forward to furthering my knowledge of biostatics at Yale University. Indeed, I believe that Yale’s dynamic environment coupled with the emphasis placed on both statistics theory and real-life biological issues in the biostatics program will prepare me well to stand out in future competition. Therefore, my well considered decision to choose your program will certainly help me realize my dreams. I am confident that with Yale’s beneficial guidance and training, I will be well on the way to becoming a notedprofessional in the area of public health.bioengineering personal statement生物2009-09-16 23:43:57 阅读228 评论0 字号：大中小1. Tough memories played a key role in my decisionI am determined to pursue graduate studies engineering in a large part because both of my grandmothers died because the hospitals did not have the facilities to give them prompt diagnosis andeffective treatment. My paternal grandmother suffered from cancer, but he doctor did not know it was cancer until was already to late. A few years later, my maternal grandmother passed away because of a sudden heart attack. To this day, my mother’s words at her funeral till echo in my ears:“If only she could wear a portable monitor for heart disease, and if only there was a portable cardiac pacemaker in theambulance.”On the strength of my strong performance in the 1994 National University Entrance Examinations, I won acceptance into the Tsinghua University, China’s top engineering school. Without any hesitation, I chose to major in biomedical engineering in its Department of Electrical Engineering. In making that choice, I hoped that, one day, I could be more of a help to patients than doctors, since a doctor treats patients one at a time, but the more effective medical devices I develop can help many people all the time.2. My solid academic recordWith a clear objective in my mind, I made myself a “gifted student” recognized b y the department. In my class of 32 students, I was consistently a top student. My GPA for basic courses was 3.75/4.0 and my GPA for specialized courses was as high as 3.87/4.0. In my second year in Tsinghua University, my academic ranking and comprehensive ranking were both the highest in my class, and I was awarded the first ranking excellent student scholarship that year. I was particularly strong in mathematics and physics, which I took as fundamental to every branch of science and technology.3. My independent research abilityAs a recognized gifted student, I was one of the first students in my year to be given the opportunity of taking part in actual research. In July 1996, I joined the research group for biomedical instrumentation and signal processing, led by Professor Cheng Jiajie, a noted Chinese term EEG signals. A joint project between Professor Cheng and the National Research Center for Engineering and Technology on Appliance for Medical Treatment and Health Care, the system was to consist of two sub-systems. One was for sampling and recording the EEG and other physiological signals, and the other was for reviewing and analyzing the signals. I was involved in the development of both.I first built a double-T band-stop filter network for ultra-weak signals to serve as an essential part of the EEG hardware. As brain waves are extremely weak signals, only from tens to hundreds microvolt, the whole system, including the filter network, had to meet extremely stringent standards. I designed the circuit and its components meticulously. After painstaking efforts, I successfully set up the filter network.After that, professor Cheng assigned me to perfect the clinical EEG software in recognition of my computer skills. In a Windows-based EEG review and analysis software system, I integrated various functions of automatic and manual data scrolling, annotation, grouping, montage, block marking, data discarding and transferring into diskette, filter design and filtering, compress spectrum array, brain electrical activity map, power spectrum estimation, twelve quantity EEG analysis and statistics. This cleared away a major hassle for doctors working in the hospitals. The software system also adopts background data loading and re-sampling of data while displaying to speed up the scrolling process andreduce the doctors’ waiting time.Through this project, I was solidly trained in independent research, much more so than most of myclassmates.4. Extracurricular activitiesI was a good student not just because I studied well but also because I actively involved myself in a variety of activities. In these activities, I not only honed my leadership and communication skills but also acquired a pioneering spirit and the ability to do teamwork.For much of my undergraduate studies, I served as a member of the student union council. In 1995 and 1996, I was elected the monitor of my class. Under my leadership, my class was chosen “A Class of Good Academic Atmosphere”, a designation given to only the best group of stude nts. To take advantage of my leadership and communication skills, the department appointed me a counselor to first-year students in the school year between September 1996 to July 1997. In this position, I advised the freshmen on the choice of courses and adaptation to the university life.Interested in the cultural and recreational activities, I helped to organize, in 1995, the First Beijing Opera Competition in Tsinghua University. In December 1996, I organized and participated in making the first music v ideo for our class as our contribution to the department’s art festival, and it won a second prize.What I like to emphasize is that I was one of the founders of the Biomedical Club in our department. The purpose of it is to spread knowledge and exchange ideas in the rapidly developing biomedical world. During the past three years, we successfully fulfilled our goal by means of regular seminars as well asvisits to various academic institutions and hospitals.I became even more active in extracurricular activities after m third undergraduate year. In January 1997, I went on a trip to ShenZhen, China’s first and most successful “special economic zone”, as part of a social investigation group. The far-reaching economic and technical reforms taught me a lot outside my discipline. From June to August 1998, u worked in the IBM China Research Laboratory on localization and system testing for IBM WorkPad Chinese Applications. It was an extraordinary experience for me. I not only tested myself in real research, but also I learned about advanced technology and thinking. During this time, I attended the IBM Research Summer Jam 98, which was an event for IBM Research’s supplemental and summer student employees to get together and explore the future of computing. My creativity displayed in this Summer Jam won acclaim from IBM Senior Vice President Dr. Paul Horn.I believe that the team spirit, communication skills and other qualities I acquired in thee activities will beconducive to advanced research in an American university.5. Solid command of EnglishAlthough not an English major, my English proficiency is comparable to that of English majors in Chinese universities, as demonstrated by my high grades in both TOEFL and GRE. I do not just know the English language well. I can communicate as effectively in English as I do in Chinese. I believe that goodcommunication and writing skills are indispensable to a successful researcher or engineer. My TWE score is 5.5, which is especially high for Chinese students, and my oral English is good, too, as I have many a chance to talk with my parents’ foreign colleagues and exchange different ideas and information with them when they come to China. I will take TSE this October and I am confident that I will get anotherhigh score.6. Why I decide to pursue my study abroad?Although studying in Tsinghua University has solidly grounded me for an engineering career, I have for long felt the urgency and responsibility to study abroad. From my personal experience, I realize, frankly speaking, that China’s biomedical engineering is not yet developed enough. I remember that, in September 1997 when I went to Beijing Recovery Center for “social investigation”, I found all the advanced recovery and nurse appliances displayed and used there were made abroad and the expenses were too high for ordinary people. To give you another example, the EEG system currently made in China for clinical use requires electrode check-up before operation. This always brings patients suffering because the nurses have to rub the electrode heavily on their scalp for about half an hour for ideal location. One day, a professor there brought us an EEG system imported from California, U.S.A. This system not only solves the old problem, but also sets up a new detecting function for brain’s cognitionability.From these and other things, I know that the United State has the advanced technology and thus the original ideas, but China has quality researchers like me who can learn to do as well. I feel that I have not taken the full advantage of my intellectual capabilities. I wish to pursue more advanced studies and then improve my country’s biomedical situation. Only by doing this can I feel better when I recall my childhood memories, memories of my grandmothers dying needlessly. Only by doing this can I fulfil my ultimate aim to make biomedical appliances part of everybody’s life, to help provide ordinary people correct and timelytreatment and care for their illness.I have inherited from my parents’ intellectual qualiti es. My father, a professor of Physics at the Beijing University, and my mother, a senior engineer of Physics with the Chinese academy of Sciences. Have bestowed on me the character of diligence, resolution and perseverance as well as the ability to understand new things quickly. They have both been to several universities in U.S.A. as visiting scholars. So when I was young, I had some knowledge of universities in United States. My older brother pursued his graduate studies in MIT, where he obtained a Master of Science Degree in physics in 1992 and a Ph.D. in the Division of Health Sciences and Technology in 1996. By realizing his achievement, he has givenme tremendous encouragement and confidence because I know that I am as excellent as he is.7. I think Cornell University is an ideal place for me.Graduate studies should be both intellectually exhilarating and challenging. But to decide which university to attend is one of the biggest decisions in one’s life. Keeping these in mind, I consider Cornell University as my First Choice. A world-famous top-notch university, Cornell has a world-class faculty, advanced research facilities and a stimulating academic atmosphere, all very conducive to the development of my potential into actual ability. If I am accepted, I will Instrumentation and Diagnostics aswell as Biomedical Mechanics. My solid academic foundation, independent research ability and strong background in biomedical engineering and related subjects, coupled with my determination and strong sense of responsibility, have paved the way for me to undertake advanced studies at an institution ofhigher learning like yours.生物学个人陈述生物2009-09-07 08:36:18 阅读224 评论0 字号：大中小Why should I select biology as my career? Born in a medical family for generations, I was very interested in all over around, especially in living organisms and I came into a habit of watching, touching, feeling and protecting them who become my favorite friends later. Life science is much more intriguing and fascinating to me when I made endeavor to represent Shandong Province 400,000 high-school students to go to Beijing to take part in the National Biological Olympic Context, a Pick-Out for the International Biological Olympic Context. As a result, I selected Biotechnology, the foremost interesting field in Biology, as my college major when I won acceptance into Department of Biotechnology in the College of Life Science at Peking University, the best university of China.Upon acceptance to Peking University in 1996, I was awarded consecutive scholarships for all 4 years in college. During my college years, with the systematic education, I obtained a solid academic background in chemistry and basic biology science especially in experiment skills as a preparation for future advanced research, which is also, the basis for me to do my current research project at the lab.Due to my outstanding experiment skills, in the third year of my undergraduate study, I was recommended to the State Key Lab of Microbial Resource, Institute of Microbiology, Chinese Academy of Science, which only 2% the students can get in, to do research on the structure and character of a new family of DNA-Binding Protein from the Hyperthermophilic Archaeon Sulfolobus Shibatae(extreme environment). And independently I have been dedicating in the interaction between DNA and DNA-Binding Protein by Gel Retardation Assay, Nick Closure Assay and EMSA. This project provided me with not only considerable experiment experience including bacterial culture, expression of recombinant, and western blotting etc, but also how to plan an experiment, by consulting papers, seeking optimal conditions and selecting appropriate methods. Now my partners and I have made a great achievement of this project and we have a paper, “A Highly Conserved DNA-Binding Protein from the Hyperthermophilic Archaeon Sulfolobus Shibatae Affects DNA Supercoiling in a Temperature-Dependent Fashion”, which will be published inthe NUCLEIC ACIDS RESEARCH(4.488) in the nearer future.Furthermore, I have once, as a co-operator, helped other group investigate Archaeon ssh7 DNA binding protein and DNA interaction. With the experiment process, I am proficient in PCR and RT-PCR, southern and northern blotting, cell in-situ blotting, CsCl density gradient centrifuge, expression of recombinant protein, FPLC, protein purification and protein/enzyme activity assay, etc.In addition to academic studying and lab training, I benefit much from my college life. I joined the Green Life Association, one of the best student organizations in Peking University, and had been the minister of propagation for one year. The job has deepened my love for lives and improved my responsibility both for group and for the well-being of our earth. Moreover, all the many-sided pleasant experiences and excellent records are a great treasure to me, giving me high confidence and independence.Why to go abroad to pursue Ph.D.? I’m always thinking that the research of life sciences is not only interdisciplinary but also international. Besides the advanced technology, I hope to fuse the analytic way of the east and west. So I’d like to go abroad for advanced studies after my graduation in July of 2000. And besides, it is to make more research achievement in the life science and at the same time, fulfill my keen dream of standing on the foremost frontline in biology science. Why to choose your University as my graduate school? It is that she is one of the most highly regarded universities in the world and is an ideal place for ambitious youth. Why to select your program? With my experiment skills and broad academic background, I am more and more certain that I am well prepared for the further exploration into your respected program, which is very promising in the modern biology. Despite the highly competition of your admission, I still regard your research program as my future struggling goal.At the time being, I think I am honest, intelligently mature and psychologically ready for this goal and I believe that I can accept the challenge and will surelymake success in the end. Would you accept me as one of the members of your program to fulfill my dream? I hope I can contribute my strength and intelligence to your program. You are sure to find that your investment on me is really awarding and worthwhile.Sincerely yours,Yunfei WenBiology - Personal Statement生物2009-09-07 08:35:52 阅读238 评论0 字号：大中小By applying your Ph. D. program, I am seeking to fulfill a dream in my childhood, to be a great scientist. This dream encouraged me to read a lot of books on many disciplines, since my primary school time. Although my parents had to work abroad much of the time from then on and had no time to look into my study, I had never been slack, for the dream gave me a pressure to do my best in study.In the meanwhile, my talent in mathematics helped me excel my classmates and gain outstanding grades. Besides my excellent grades in school, I won remarkable scores in various contests in Beijing and a few national contests on mathematics, physics, chemistry, etc. Moreover, from 1993 to 1998, I won the Shupin Scholarship several times based on my excellent score.When I was in high school, I came to realize the great potential of life sciences. As we all know, mankind can go up to outer space or down to the bottom of the ocean, and predict the movement or state of a huge planet or an infinitesimal particle. Yet we can’t explain a lot of phenomena about ourselves or various lives around us, because lives are the most complicated systems in the world. I am sure that to explain these phenomena is what a great scientist should do, and just what I wish to do.Therefore, when I was about to take the National College Entrance Examination, I chose the college of Life Sciences in Peking University, the most famous university in China, which is dubbed as China's Harvard by President Clinton on his visit to my country. In the university, I studied at the Department of Biochemistry & Molecular Biology, which required its students to have a great ability to learn and research. With the study of a series of courses, I obtained a solid academic background in chemistry and basic biology. At the same time, I learned many skills of both general chemistry experiments and specialized biology research. From lab courses, I experienced all kinds of experiments for DNA, protein and microbe’s research and analysis.However, I realized that I need more practical experience before I step on the way to be a scientist. To enhance my research ability, I have been working as a research assistant since July 2000 in the Laboratory of Molecular Virology & Bioengineering at the Institute of Microbiology, Chinese Academy of Sciences (CAS) for a project on the regulation of cotton fertility in plant heterosis, which is part of the National High Technology Research & Development Program (the “863 Program”), and have got great progress in the work of clone, abs ence and analysis of promoter’s function on the specific expressed gene in cotton pollen. We constructed plasmids that have pollen specific promoters and poisonous protein genes, and then transformed the recombinant genes into tobacco by agrobacterium or particle bombardment to study the long time。
2023申请加州大学文书写作指南
2023申请加州大学文书写作指南UC去年11月19日宣布永久去标化，不再承受SAT/ACT，因此审核必然更加关注其他申请材料，文书也因此成为申请者进展自我宣传的最好的时机。
加州大学的文书称为 Personal insight questions。
8个个人见解的文书题目代替了个人陈述。
详细要求如下：在所给的8个题目中任选4个来进展答复，每个题目字数在250-350个词之间。
UC对8个题目没有偏好，要注意选择的问题应该是最能强调活动局部的优势，或者可以更清楚说明关于个人/过往的学习经历。
要求直接答复下列问题，无需进展过多的场景描绘或刻意煽情。
将答复的焦点集中在获得的成就、经历、挑战和奉献这些方面。
8个题目的比重一样，要求在答复的时候不要针对个别学院，文书统一由学校的招生委员会来审核。
据统计，申请者选择最多的题目是1、6，选择最少的题目8：即什么使你脱颖而出成为UC强有力的申请人。
一起来看一下每个题目的要求及写作方向！1.领导力Describe an exle of your leadership experience in which you have positively influenced others， helped resolve disputes or contributed to group efforts over time.描绘一个展现你领导力的例子。
在过程中，你对别人产生了积极的影响，帮助解决了纠纷，或为团体的努力做出了奉献。
在答复这道题时要记住，作为领导者的经历不一定非要是社团负责人或者球队队长的任职体验。
很多人对领导力有所误解—其实它不一定和你的头衔挂钩，而是一种“软实力”的表达，包括你通过何种方式改变了自己所在的群体、学校或者学生团体？仔细考虑这个问题。
答复中最重要的是你的影响力，而不是“会长”、“社长”这样的头衔。
2.创造力Every person has a creative side， and it can be expressed in many ways： problem solving， originaland innovative thinking， and artistically， to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side.每个人都有创造性的一面，它可以通过许多方式来表达：解决问题、原创和创新思维以及艺术表达，仅举几例。
留学个人陈述范文Personal Statement (商科方向)
留学个人陈述范文Personal Statement(商科方向)___As a child。
I have always been fascinated by the world of science and ___。
___ has only grown stronger as I have grown older。
and I am ___.During my high school years。
I took every ___ science fairs and ns。
___ courses in physics。
chemistry。
and computer science。
which helped me develop a strong ___ subjects.After high school。
___-ranked university。
where I was able to learn from some of the best professors in the field。
I also took part in us extracurricular activities。
___ and coding ns。
which allowed me to apply my knowledge in a ___.___ years。
I have worked on several research projects。
including the development of a new algorithm for imageprocessing。
This project allowed me to apply my ___ a real-world problem。
and it was a great learning experience for me.___。
I have also ___ internships and part-time jobs。
上海交通大学学生生存手册图文稿
上海交通大学学生生存手册集团文件发布号：（9816-UATWW-MWUB-WUNN-INNUL-DQQTY-上海交通大学学生生存手册1立志篇1.1欢迎来到上海交通大学1.2失败的思维方式1.2.1高考思维1.2.2被动思维1.3悲壮的学习方式1.4你的身价是多少1.5正确地浪费剩下的时间1.6总有更值得做的事情1.7做研究的兴趣1.8关于工作2访谈集2.1为了留学而出国2.1.1为什么要出国?2.1.2出国读什么学位什么专业?2.1.3出国都有哪些步骤2.1.4为了申请出国，大学期间需要准备什么2.1.5警惕出国中介2.2做真正的研究2.2.1合理的研究态度2.2.2区分上学与研究2.2.3知识积累2.2.4衡量学术价值2.2.5一些常见误区2.3管理者的智慧2.3.1御人先御己2.3.2培养团队2.3.3重在参与2.4认识设计类课程2.4.1进度控制2.5保研者说2.5.1明确目的2.5.2需要做些什么2.5.3硕士之后2.6小心项目的陷阱2.6.1辨别项目的质量2.6.2选对导师2.6.3团队与合作伙伴2.7破解留沪政策2.7.1面对户口，我们应该持有什么样的心态2.7.2户口审批制度是否规范2.7.3分！分！学生的命根！2.7.4其他琐碎问题3生存技巧3.1选课原则与选课技巧3.1.1我是否一定要选二专3.1.2选课选什么3.1.3广占坑，占好坑3.2人文、经管类课程3.2.1必修类3.2.2选修类3.3突击备考3.3.1注意复习范围3.3.2三天冲刺3.3.3考试结束后3.3.4复习箴言3.4正确解读成绩算法3.4.1GPA制度概览3.4.2伟大的选修课3.4.3理性挂科，合理重修3.4.4风险与收益并存3.5旁门左道3.5.1开学前两周的点名3.5.2理解“免听”3.5.3形势政策考试3.5.4物理实验3.5.5学术灌水立志篇1.1欢迎来到上海交通大学You trust in the lord ;your ass belongs to me. Welcome to Shanghai Jiao Tong University.各位同学们，在本书的开始，我不得不遗憾地告诉大家一个消息。
ucsb-personal-statement
• Don’t be campus specific. You’re talking to all the UC campuses in your response. • Inappropriate use of humor. • Creative writing (poems, scene-setting or clichés). • Scene-setting – We don’t need to be in the moment with you. • Quotations – We want to know your thoughts and words, not someone else’s. • Generalities – Stick to facts and personal examples. • Repetition – Give us new information we cannot find in other sections of the application. • Philosophy – Don’t ask questions. Get to the point and tell us what you mean. • Acronyms – We won’t look it up, so spell it out.
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• You have 1,000 words to answer both prompts. • Your shortest response should be at least 250 words. • Avoid the use of special characters. • Feedback and suggestions from others are useful, but you are responsible for writing the Personal Statement.
出国留学个人陈述personalstatement案例模板21篇(主要生物类PS)
I have always had an interest in science-based subjects, especially those relating to biology.Whilst undertaking my A-level Biology course, the module energy and ecosystems was ofparticular interest to me. My interest in the natural world, and study of science encouraged meto further my understanding in this area by applying to study environmental biology at degreelevel. I wish to take this course to enable me to develop scientific skills that will provide me witha greater understanding of the environm ent and factors that affect it. I am also studying Chemistry and Maths at A-level. The practical element of my chemistry course involves an understanding of procedures and precautions necessary throughout all science-based experiments; I feel that this understanding will improve my ability in practical elements of thecourse. After studying A-level maths, I feel being able to interpret numerical data at a high levelwill also enable me to develop my understanding of any numerical information that features i nthe courseI am keen on sports and outdoor pursuits. I have enjoyed a range of activities from countrysidewalks to kayaking and abseiling. Because of this I feel I would particularly enjoy the fieldworkthe course offers. I have been able to combine this interest in sport with a part time job as aleisure attendant at local sport centres. As part of this post I was asked to lead a youth sportsand activities group which aims to promote sport among young people in my area. This activityhas also allowed me to introduce other young people to activities that I have enjoyed. This rolehas also helped me to develop skills that would help me while I am at university. The sportsgroup involves arranging individual sessions as well as trips outThis has improved my organisational skills, which has reflected my ability to combine part-time work with college effectively. Working as part of a team and serving members of the public has also improved my social skills, making me more confident when working with othersI wish to study at university, not only for the knowledge that I will gain from the course, but alsofor the experience of university life has to offer. During my two years at college I haveparticipated in various activities. For example, I represented the college at an open day,volunteered as a collage council representative for my form group, participated in a blooddonation scheme and was also involved in the shoebox appeal. These activities meant that Ihave to be confident, approachable and polite. I feel these are characteristics that will enableme to get involved with student life at universityMy ambition is to participate in conservation work abroad, before gaining experience in acareer based in this area. I feel the experience outlined above and the knowledge I will gainfrom the course will enable me to achieve this ambition.生物2009-10-10 11:22:42 阅读563 评论0 字号：大中小As with science in general, I find it interesting, often fascinating, and I feel that I could gainmuch from studying it at university University has always appealed to me because of thewealth of experiences it has to offer as a student. Although I enjoy English Literature and Chemistry: I am especially keen to study Biology and Psychology. For me, the main appeal of the course lies in the variety of topics that will be covered. The aspects of Biology I find particularly interesting are neuroscience and how the immune system functions and responds.In Psychology, I am very interested in what makes people unique and how different factorsshape our personalityAt present I am employed at McDonald's where within one year of work I got promoted to aFloor Manager. Then I rapidly got promoted as a shift Manager. Being at this position it gives me numerous of responsibilities. For instance I am responsible for the whole resturant,ensuring the good communication flow exists between the crew members, correct procedures are followed, restaurant goals are achieved and ensuring that every customer gets 100%customer satisfactionThis experience especially allowed me to use my interpersonal skills to the full. In my reference, my employer remarked on my willingness to learn, my enthusiasm and initiative aswell as my ability to work independently and as part of a teamI have a variety of hobbies outside school. When time allows, I find playing football, tennis, and listening music, a change from my studies. My other pursuits include more physical activitiessuch as attending the gym, dancing and cyclingAt present, I am putting most of my effort into achieving the best grades in my 'course to allow me to reach the next target in my education. I understand that university life will be very challenging, but I am confident that it will give me the best chance to achieve my potential, andlead the way forward to a successful career. I hope that this application indicates that I am apromising candidate.生物2009-10-10 11:21:41 阅读364 评论0 字号：大中小"Scientists investigate that which already is. Technologists create that which has never been."I chose engineering as a life pursuit because I wish to engage in both. This choice was enhanced by a personal yearning to apply all that I learn; I wanted to be able to implement my physical and mathematical abilities in real life situations. I feel higher education would enableme to realise this aim.Although all aspects of physics and engineering intrigue me, I am particularly interested in the medical application of these two disciplines. When considering which field I might enter Irealised that the only discipline that appealed to me, other than engineering, was medicine.Having researched the crossover between medicine and engineering I decided thatbioengineering provided the perfect blend.In order to improve my grasp of A-level Physics and Mathematics, and develop a better understanding of the options available to me in Higher Education, I have made extensive useof the online lectures of the Massachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT). I was particularly receptive to the teaching methods of the Physics lecturer, Professor Lewin.Supplementary reading has widened my horizons and encouraged me to examine elementsabove and beyond the A-level course. Some of the books I have encountered include 'A Brief History of Time' by Stephen Hawking and also 'Mr. Tompkins in Wonderland' by Nobel Prize winner, George Gamow. The latter was more than simply 'a physics book' to me - the presentation of the physical principals within a love story proved to be extremely captivating.Following the debate regarding students' declining abilities and the 'dumbing down' of theA-levels I have undertaken a study of material from the older, and in my opinion more challenging, 1996 syllabus. Books such as 'Essential Principles of Physics' by Whelan andHodgson have been particularly enlightening in this respect.I feel that theoretical concepts are easier to understand and more easily absorbed when theyare tangible and therefore I have applied to the Year in Industry scheme, hoping that this will enhance the application of my mathematical and physical skills. Due to personal issues duringthe A-level exam period I was unable to achieve my potential and did not meet all my predicted grades. In order to amend this I have chosen t o retake some modules during my gap year whilst at the same time studying a new subject and expanding my language skills.I consider that my multicultural upbringing, including 12 years in Japan, Dubai and the Sudanhave led to me being a well-rounded and colourful person. As a consequence of this time I benefited by gaining knowledge about different traditions, an insight into diverse cultures, anda furtherance in my linguistic abilities. This granted me the ability to adapt to different environments swiftly and comfortably, which would explain my enthusiasm for meeting newpeople. Moreover, the contrast in the living standards in these different environments hasshown me the importance of science and technology in our lives.Professionals have confirmed for me that bioengineering is an intellectually challenging field, requiring commitment and motivation. I have always believed in fully devoting myself to all thatI do, and with my particular interests and experiences, I feel that only an opportunity to studybioengineering at university will enable me to express my abilities in their entirety.生物个人陈述模板生物2009-09-17 10:32:31 阅读344 评论1 字号：大中小I will never forget my experience of working alongside doctors to fight against the horrible disease, AA, inChina in 200X. This work taught me the great impact of disease control and prevention and motivated meto apply for the biostatistics program at Yale University, with the ultimate career goal of becoming aninfluential professional or researcher in the field. I firmly believe that my constant thirst for knowledge,high regard for the work in the biomedical and public health fields, and my courageousness will drive mygraduate studies and help me achieve personal and professional success.I first became interested in biostatistics when the AA epidemic breakout in China in 200X. As a memberof the University Red Cross Association, I was responsible for assisting the university hospital topublicize disease prevention methods, distribute medicine, and complete health surveys. I learned fromthat process the value of survey dates in supplying useful strategies for disease prediction, preventionand control. Afterward, when I served as Vice President of the Student Union, I organized an introductorylecture and health survey about hereditary disease for the local community. I truly enjoyed thesevoluntary public health services, as I was able to use my knowledge to enhance the quality of life for myfellow man. These achievements gave me the determination to fully devote myself to public healthservices and global health care development.My academic training to this point has provided me with a wide range of general knowledge and skillsrelated to the biological sciences. This training is an excellent first step in preparing for the professionalcareer that I desire. As an undergraduate student in bioengineering at BB University, I acquired a solidfoundation in the theoretical concepts associated with genetics, molecular biology, immunology, andbiochemistry. I also gained knowledge in the several areas of industrial significance, includingbio-products, fermentation, and biotechnology. In addition to the comprehensive studies in my major field,I received as well extensive training in mathematics and computer science, both of which were of greatbenefit to my study of biostatistics, an important area in various industrial and scientific research efforts.For example, as I learned during my summer internship as an Assistant Researcher at the DDPharmaceutical Company in 200Y, biostatistics has a vital role in the development and marketing of newmedicines, in the control of the quality of products, and in the tracking of consumer trends, attitudes andpurchases. I have also worked as an undergraduate research assistant for a map-based cloning projectin the ZZ Biology Center, where I used statistical methods to develop WW genetic markers and tocalculate the probabilities of recombination. These hands-on training activities gave me a clearerunderstanding of and a deeper insight into the biostatistics of biological and clinical problems.I look forward to furthering my knowledge of biostatics at Yale University. Indeed, I believe that Yale’s dynamic environment coupled with the emphasis placed on both statistics theory and real-life biologicalissues in the biostatics program will prepare me well to stand out in future competition. Therefore, mywell considered decision to choose your program will certainly help me realize my dreams. I am confidentthat with Yale’s beneficial guidance and training, I will be well on the way to becoming a notedprofessional in the area of public health.bioengineering personal statement生物2009-09-16 23:43:57 阅读228 评论0 字号：大中小1. Tough memories played a key role in my decisionI am determined to pursue graduate studies engineering in a large part because both of mygrandmothers died because the hospitals did not have the facilities to give them prompt diagnosis andeffective treatment. My paternal grandmother suffered from cancer, but he doctor did not know it wascancer until was already to late. A few years later, m y maternal grandmother passed away because of asudden heart attack. To this day, my mother’s words at her funeral till echo in my ears:“If only she could wear a portable monitor for heart disease, and if only there was a portable cardiac pacemaker in theambulance.”On the strength of my strong performance in the 1994 National University Entrance Examinations, I wonacceptance into the Tsinghua University, China’s top engineering school. Without any hesitation, I choseto major in biomedical engineering in its Department of Electrical Engineering. In making that choice, Ihoped that, one day, I could be more of a help to patients than doctors, since a doctor treats patients oneat a time, but the more effective medical devices I develop can help many peopl e all the time.2. My solid academic recordWith a clear objective in my mind, I made myself a “gifted student” recognized by the department. In myclass of 32 students, I was consistently a top student. My GPA for basic courses was 3.75/4.0 and myGPA for specialized courses was as high as 3.87/4.0. In my second year in Tsinghua University, myacademic ranking and comprehensive ranking were both the highest in my class, and I was awarded thefirst ranking excellent student scholarship that year. I was particularly strong in mathematics and physics,which I took as fundamental to every branch of science and technology.3. My independent research abilityAs a recognized gifted student, I was one of the first students in my year to be given the opportunity oftaking part in actual research. In July 1996, I joined the research group for biomedical instrumentationand signal processing, led by Professor Cheng Jiajie, a noted Chinese term EEG signals. A joint projectbetween Professor Cheng and the National Research Center for Engineering and Technology onAppliance for Medical Treatment and Health Care, the system was to consist of two sub-systems. Onewas for sampling and recording the EEG and other physiological signals, and the other was for reviewingand analyzing the signals. I was involved in the development of both.I first built a double-T band-stop filter network for ultra-weak signals to serve as an essential part of theEEG hardware. As brain waves are extremely weak signals, only from tens to hundreds microvolt, thewhole system, including the filter network, had to meet extremely stringent standards. I designed thecircuit and its components meticulously. After painstaking efforts, I successfully set up the filter network.After that, professor Cheng assigned me to perfect the clinical EEG software in recognition of mycomputer skills. In a Windows-based EEG review and analysis software system, I integrated variousfunctions of automatic and manual data scrolling, annotation, grouping, montage, blo ck marking, datadiscarding and transferring into diskette, filter design and filtering, compress spectrum array, brainelectrical activity map, power spectrum estimation, twelve quantity EEG analysis and statistics. Thiscleared away a major hassle for doctors working in the hospitals. The software system also adoptsbackground data loading and re-sampling of data while displaying to speed up the scrolling process andreduce the doctors’ waiting time.Through this project, I was solidly trained in independent research, much more so than most of myclassmates.4. Extracurricular activitiesI was a good student not just because I studied well but also because I actively involved myself in avariety of activities. In these activities, I not only honed my leadership and communication skills but alsoacquired a pioneering spirit and the ability to do teamwork.For much of my undergraduate studies, I served as a member of the student union council. In 1995 and1996, I was elected the monitor of my class. Under my leadership, my class was chosen “A Class ofGood Academic Atmosphere”, a designation given to only the best group of students. To take advantage of my leadership and communication skills, the department appointed me a counselor to first-yearstudents in the school year between September 1996 to July 1997. In this position, I advised thefreshmen on the choice of courses and adaptation to the university life.Interested in the cultural and recreational activities, I helped to organize, in 1995, the Firs t Beijing OperaCompetition in Tsinghua University. In December 1996, I organized and participated in making the firstmusic video for our class as our contribution to the department’s art festival, and it won a second prize.What I like to emphasize is that I was one of the founders of the Biomedical Club in our department. Thepurpose of it is to spread knowledge and exchange ideas in the rapidly developing biomedical world.During the past three years, we successfully fulfilled our goal by means of regular seminars as well asvisits to various academic institutions and hospitals.I became even more active in extracurricular activities after m third undergraduate year. In January 1997,I went on a trip to ShenZhen, China’s first and most successful “special economic zone”, as part of a social investigation group. The far-reaching economic and technical reforms taught me a lot outside mydiscipline. From June to August 1998, u worked in the IBM China Research Laboratory on localizationand system testing for IBM WorkPad Chinese Applications. It was an extraordinary experience for me. I not only tested myself in real research, but also I learned about advanced technology and thinking.During this time, I attended the IBM Research Summer Jam 98, which was an event for IBM Research’s supplemental and summer student employees to get together and explore the future of computing. Mycreativity displayed in this Summer Jam won acclaim from IBM Senior Vice President Dr. Paul Horn.I believe that the team spirit, communication skills and other qualities I acquired in thee activities will beconducive to advanced research in an American university.5. Solid command of EnglishAlthough not an English major, my English proficiency is comparable to that of English majo rs in Chineseuniversities, as demonstrated by my high grades in both TOEFL and GRE. I do not just know the English language well. I can communicate as effectively in English as I do in Chinese. I believe that goodcommunication and writing skills are indispensable to a successful researcher or engineer. My TWEscore is 5.5, which is especially high for Chinese students, and my oral English is good, too, as I havemany a chance to talk with my parents’ foreign colleagues and exchange different ideas and inf o rmationwith them when they come to China. I will take TSE this October and I am confident that I will get anotherhigh score.6. Why I decide to pursue my study abroad?Although studying in Tsinghua University has solidly grounded me for an engineering career, I have forlong felt the urgency and responsibility to study abroad. From my personal experience, I realize, franklyspeaking, that China’s biomedical engineering is not yet developed enough. I remember that, inSeptember 1997 when I went to Beiji ng Recovery Center for “social investigation”, I found all theadvanced recovery and nurse appliances displayed and used there were made abroad and the expenses were too high for ordinary people. To give you another example, the EEG system currently made i nChina for clinical use requires electrode check-up before operation. This always brings patients suffering because the nurses have to rub the electrode heavily on their scalp for about half an hour for ideallocation. One day, a professor there brought us an EEG system imported from California, U.S.A. Thissystem not only solves the old problem, but also sets up a new detecting function for brain’s cognitionability.From these and other things, I know that the United State has the advanced technology an d thus theoriginal ideas, but China has quality researchers like me who can learn to do as well. I feel that I have nottaken the full advantage of my intellectual capabilities. I wish to pursue more advanced studies and thenimprove my country’s biomedic al situation. Only by doing this can I feel better when I recall my childhoodmemories, memories of my grandmothers dying needlessly. Only by doing this can I fulfil my ultimate aimdinary people correct and timelyto make biomedical appliances part of everybody’s life, to help provide ortreatment and care for their illness.I have inherited from my parents’ intellectual qualities. My father, a professor of Physics at the BeijingUniversity, and my mother, a senior engineer of Physics with the Chinese academy of Sciences. Havebestowed on me the character of diligence, resolution and perseverance as well as the ability tounderstand new things quickly. They have both been to several universities in U.S.A. as visiting scholars.So when I was young, I had some knowledge of universities in United States. My older brother pursuedhis graduate studies in MIT, where he obtained a Master of Science Degree in physics in 1992 and a Ph.D. in the Division of Health Sciences and Technology in 1996. By realizing his achievement, he has givenme tremendous encouragement and confidence because I know that I am as excellent as he is.7. I think Cornell University is an ideal place for me.Graduate studies should be both intellectually exhilarating and challenging. But to decide whichuniversity to attend is one of the biggest decisions in one’s life. Keeping these in mind, I consider Cornell University as my First Choice. A world-famous top-notch university, Cornell has a world-class faculty, advanced research facilities and a stimulating academic atmosphere, all very conducive to thedevelopment of my potential into actual ability. If I am accepted, I will Instrumentation and Diagnostics aswell as Biomedical Mechanics. My solid academic foundation, independent research ability and strongbackground in biomedical engineering and related subjects, coupled with my determination and strongsense of responsibility, have paved the way for me to undertake advanced studies at an institution ofhigher learning like yours.生物学个人陈述生物2009-09-07 08:36:18 阅读224 评论0 字号：大中小Why should I select biology as my career? Born in a medical family for generations, I was very interested in all over around, especially in living organisms and I came into a habit of watching, touching, feeling and protecting them who become my favorite friends later. Life science is much more intriguing and fascinating to me when I made endeavor to represent Shandong Province 400,000 high-school students to go to Beijing to take part in the National Biological Olympic Context, a Pick-Out for the International Biological Olympic Context. As a result, I selected Biotechnology, the foremost interesting field in Biology, as my college major when I won acceptance into Department of Biotechnology in the College of Life Science at Peking University, the best university of China.Upon acceptance to Peking University in 1996, I was awarded consecutive scholarships for all 4 years in college. During my college years, with the systematic education, I obtained a solid academic background in chemistry and basic biology science especially in experiment skills as a preparation forfuture advanced research, which is also, the basis for me to do my current research project at the lab.Due to my outstanding experiment skills, in the third year of my undergraduate study, I was recommended to the State Key Lab of Microbial Resource, Institute of Microbiology, Chinese Academy of Science, which only 2% the students can get in, to do research on the structure and character of a new family of DNA-Binding Protein from the Hyperthermophilic Archaeon Sulfolobus Shibatae(extreme environment). And independently I have been dedicating in the interaction between DNA and DNA-Binding Protein by Gel Retardation Assay, Nick Closure Assay and EMSA. This project provided mewith not only considerable experiment experience including bacterial culture, expression of recombinant, and western blotting etc, but also how to plan an experiment, by consulting papers, seeking optimal conditions and selectingappropriate methods. Now my partners and I have made a great achievementnserved DNA-Binding Proteinof this project and we have a paper, “A Highly Cofrom the Hyperthermophilic Archaeon Sulfolobus Shibatae Affects DNA Supercoiling in a Temperature-Dependent Fashion”, which will be published inthe NUCLEIC ACIDS RESEARCH(4.488) in the nearer future.Furthermore, I have once, as a co-operator, helped other group investigate Archaeon ssh7 DNA binding protein and DNA interaction. With the experiment process, I am proficient in PCR and RT-PCR, southern and northern blotting,cell in-situ blotting, CsCl density gradient centrifuge, expression of recombinant protein, FPLC, protein purification and protein/enzyme activity assay, etc.In addition to academic studying and lab training, I benefit much from my college life. I joined the Green Life Association, one of the best student organizations in Peking University, and had been the minister of propagationfor one year. The job has deepened my love for lives and improved my responsibility both for group and for the well-being of our earth. Moreover, allthe many-sided pleasant experiences and excellent records are a great treasure to me, giving me high confidence and independence.Why to go abroad to pursue Ph.D.? I’m always thinking that the research of life sciences is not only interdisciplinary but also international. Besides the advanced technology, I hope to fuse the analytic way of the east and west. SoI’d like to go abroad for advanced studies after my graduation in July of 2000.And besides, it is to make more research achievement in the life science andat the same time, fulfill my keen dream of standing on the foremost frontline inbiology science. Why to choose your University as my graduate school? It isthat she is one of the most highly regarded universities in the world and is anideal place for ambitious youth. Why to select your program? With my experiment skills and broad academic background, I am more and more certain that I am well prepared for the further exploration into your respected program, which is very promising in the modern biology. Despite the highly competition of your admission, I still regard your research program as myfuture struggling goal.At the time being, I think I am honest, intelligently mature and psychologically ready for this goal and I believe that I can accept the challenge and will surely make success in the end. Would you accept me as one of the members of your program to fulfill my dream? I hope I can contribute my strength and intelligence to your program. You are sure to find that your investment on me is really awarding and worthwhile.Sincerely yours,Yunfei Wen。
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uc文书例子Unfortunately, as an AI language model, I am unable to provide you with an exact example of a UC personal statement without specific instructions or details about your personal background, experiences, or aspirations. The UC application requires applicants to write a personal statement, which typically ranges from 500-650 words, or about two to three pages. To help guide you, I can provide a general framework for writing a UC personal statement. Remember to carefully review the prompts provided by the UC application and tailor your response accordingly.Introduction:- Begin with a captivating opening sentence or anecdote to grab the reader's attention.- Provide some background context or set the stage for your story.- Clearly state the main theme or central idea you will be exploring in your personal statement.Body:- Structure your personal statement around a few key experiences, accomplishments, or challenges that have shaped you.- Use specific examples and anecdotes to illustrate your points and make them more relatable.- Link your experiences to the subject or major you intend to pursue and explain how they have influenced your decision.- Discuss how these experiences have contributed to your personal growth, resilience, or character development.- Reflect on any obstacles or setbacks you encountered and describe how you overcame them.- Emphasize what you have learned from your experiences and how they have prepared you for success in the UC system.Conclusion:- Summarize the main points or messages you want to leave the reader with.- Reinforce your interest in attending the UC system and how it aligns with your goals.- End with a strong closing sentence that leaves a lasting impression on the reader.Remember to proofread your personal statement multiple times to ensure it is free of grammatical or spelling errors. Additionally, seek feedback from teachers, mentors, or peers to improve the clarity and coherence of your writing.Please note that while I can provide guidance on writing a UC personal statement, it is important to personalize your statement to reflect your own experiences, perspectives, and aspirations. Good luck with your application!。
PersonalStatement资料及范文
普林斯顿大学指导The personal statement for law school is a document that law school Admissions Committees read with great interest. The more effective personal statements tend to be in the form of anecdotal, personal histories which lead the reader to believe the writer might be an interesting and valuable addition to the new class. Contrary to what you may have heard, law schools DO read the personal statement. It is an important piece of your application materials.What is a personal statement?It is the story of you. Before we get into content of the essay it is important to be aware of, or at least have some guidelines about, the purpose of the essay. The following are some components that the personal statement must fulfill:▪The essay represents you in lieu of an interview with an Admissions Officer. Law schools typically do not grant interviews (the exception is Northwestern). Even if you are willing to incur the expense of travel and lodging, law school Admissions Deans will not schedule interviews - law schools are simply not staffed to handle thousands of interviews.That said, your personal statement speaks to the Admissions Committee on your behalf.▪The essay is a writing sample. As such, it must be free of grammar and punctuation errors.What you write will reflect how well you express yourself in a clear and concise manner.In the competitive reading of literally thousands of personal statements, conciseness, interest, and uniqueness are major virtues.▪The essay demonstrates your ability to craft an argument, an important skill in law school.Resist the impulse to tell the Admissions Committee everything about you. Or, to write your essay in a paragraph form of your resume. Convey your ideas creatively and back them up with evidence or accomplishments.▪While it is important to respond to each law school’s application instructions on what is requested in the personal statement, the requirements are generally such that one essay may be used for most law schools. The usual required length is 500 words - two pages, double spaced.What should I write about?In a word, you. The Admissions Committee will have your transcript, GPA, and LSAT score (your “numbers”), resume, and application. What they don’t have is a sense of who you are. Often, the personal statement is what makes one application be selected for admission over other candidates with equal, or better, “numbers.”Try to think of your application as a whole and how an Admissions Committee would view it. Can you spot any issues or areas that should or could be further addressed? Address such issues clearly and make your argument convincing; summon facts and present them in a clear, organized, and convincing manner. For example, if your interest is public sector law it makes perfect sense that your personal statement support this by writing about your experience(s) in the non-profit arena. Personalize your essay by telling a story about yourself.Despite what many law school applications will instruct regarding the personal statement, you do not have to write the entire essay about why you want to go to law school. (Admissions Deansknow you want to go to law school –they have your application in front of them! What they don’t know is who you are as an applicant to law school.)Sample Personal Statement Topics:▪Something about which you are passionate, such as a sport or volunteer activity▪An experience that resulted in intellectual or emotional growth▪ A challenge that you not only met but surpassed▪Your academic interests and researchDOs a nd DON’TsDO be concise. Law School Admissions Committees read literally thousands of these statements, so an economy of phrase is appreciated. Can a sentence or two be cut without compromising your meaning?DO be relevant. Your statement should convey information which the reader doesn't have. That information should be about you. Writing about things you have no personal knowledge of or things which have happened to others tend to be non-personal, generally undercutting the purpose of a “personal” state ment.DO be diligent in your attention to detail. Unfortunately, Admissions Committees look for easy things to reject personal statements like misspellings, typos, and poor grammar.DON'T be theoretical. For example, an essay on “law is the fabric that holds society together” or “the value of law to a civilized society” is usually playing to an audience/committee of admissions deans and law professors, so your effort may come off as naïve (obviously not your intent). Writing about something the committee doesn't know (like yourself) is more likely to be impressive (obviously that is your intent!). Remember, this is not an academic exercise to demonstrate some newly acquired knowledge; it's a personalization of your application.DON'T use quotes and DON’T title your statement. Quotes are usually the ideas of others, and often presage a theoretical discussion, which, as stated above, is best to avoid. In fact, more than a few law school Admissions Deans have made specific mention on how quotes set their teeth on edge, especially when they occur in the first sentence. The “theme” of your statement should come through to the reader(s) without having to title it.DON’T use the personal statement to explain a low GPA or LSAT score. Include a separate “supplemental statement” to explain the reason for a semester of poor grades or the fact that you historically do not do well on standardized tests. This information is important for the Admissions Committees to receive, but not in your personal statement.范文I am a person keen on challenges. Law will provide me with the kind of constant challenge I have always craved, while helping me to improve my analytical, practical & communication skills. Also my concern and curiosity about society and its people inspired me to pursue this subject for my higher education, as I believe Law plays an essential role in the changing nature of society.My upbringing has honed my perception of society and people leading me to be acutely aware of social injustice, inequality, exploitation, discrimination, and religious fundamentalism, especially in a society such as the one I come from - Bangladesh. I possess a desire, to struggle if necessary through my life in establishing a society which will be free from exploitation and inequality. As such, I have chosen to study Law, for I believe the proper implementation of Law is the only potent weapon to obliterate injustice. I believe throughout the history of the world, working classes have been deceived by the upper class bourgeoisie and the elites - my ultimate goal in life is to establish the rights of the socially deprived classes. I always have wondered why Law has not been used to raise the voice of the working class, and why it has been used to safeguard the interests of people who are exploiting. I seek a new definition of human rights – the true definition, without exploitation and corruption colouring the notion. My greatest wonder is why our society and the legal system, do not point out economic exploitation as an abuse of human rights; for it is the root of poverty, which elicits crime. If the creation of Law is to curb injustice, why has it not been used to eradicate this injustice? Taking law as a subject for higher education will hopefully help me find answers to my questions, and will teach me the proper method of implementation.I am someone who is passionate to evaluate problems. I am not an extremist but I do not hesitate to resort to radical measures if the situation forces it. I believe, in a society, co-operation is more desired than competition; competition doesn’t necessarily bring rapid prosperity. I adhere to a socialistic political ideology, and aim to devote myself in establishing true socialism. I am from a country, which has been subject to military dictatorship for over twenty years after her independence. My political consciousness grew during the time, when my father was imprisoned by the military just because he was a leader of a political party who opposed military regime. Police and military jointly ran a brutal campaign throughout the country to repress politicians, where they imprisoned and sometimes killed thousands of students, politicians, professionals, workers, and even soldiers. These incidents severely affected my family, making my childhood a turbulent time. After the military regime failed, a western style democratic political structure was set up, which gave nothing, yet increased the discontent of the masses, and created some elites, who virtually control the country. Wealth and power both are centralized to them, law is a puppet in their hand, and they control everything, from economy to politics. Millions of people live below the poverty level, and there is nobody, not one strong and resilient political party to represent them. Extreme form of capitalism has taken over our country’s social and human values, and morality is at the brink of extinction. Corruption is everywhere, human rights abuses are innumerable, political repression is paramount, money is power and power is everything. This indisciplined violent condition of my country created a rebellious nature within me that is why I have set my ambition to restructure the socio-political structure of my country in a radical way. I would like to utilize the knowledge I acquire from my life at university and beyond to clarify and show me the proper way of implementation of my thoughts.I have proved myself as an efficient and responsible student through primary and secondary school, I have been able to maintain and improve my grades, which are consistently good. Currently I am undertaking A’ levels in History, Government & Politics, and Bengali. Being an ambitious and inquisitive person, even after completing a Foundation Programme with an overall A grade, I have chosen to do three A’ levels in one year to study in one of the top British universities. History has always fascinated me; though this is the first time I am studying this subject in detail. In Government & Politics, I am learning about the procedures of law making and the system of politics and government in different countries. Languages have always been of interest to me, and my favoured loyalty is to my mother tongue - Bengali.I have spent my time productively on extra curricular activities. I have keenly taken part in debating, student politics and acting in television dramas. I headed my school’s debating society for one year and independently achieved many prizes in speech competitions at local and national levels. My hobbies include reading, playing cricket and table tennis, web browsing, etc.The principal reason for my desire to study at UK is the quality of teaching here and particularly in my chosen subject, Law. I also find exciting the prospect of joining a university hee with international flavours and exceptional research facilities. I believe University is a place for accumulating more interests, for meeting people, for working hard, for finding a niche in life. I feel I have the commitment and confidence of giving my best during my university career and afterwards。
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Question: Describe anything else that you have not had the opportunity to include elsewhere in your application. 500-word limit
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Although I do not plan to major in veterinary science, my experiences raising and caring for animals have helped me understand how important animals are to human well-being. Because I have seen the result of human disregard for other forms of life, I am better able to appreciate the importance of ethical treatment for all. As a result, I will be able to contribute my knowledge of animal preservation and my skill as an organizer to the campus environment.
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An admission decision will never be based on
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Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — AND tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations. Aspiration= A strong desire for high achievement. An object of such desire; an ambition.
How did your FAMILY shape your DREAMS and ASPIRATIONS?
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How did your SCHOOL shape your DREAMS and ASPIRATIONS?
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A Message from UC Faculty
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Understanding the Task
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Two questions Students respond to both questions.
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Although my school does not offer Advanced Placement Spanish, I wanted to master Spanish so that I could enrich my understanding of the literature of Latin America and prepare for my eventual career goal of becoming a diplomat. I prepared on my own for the Advanced Placement Spanish exam, and as a result have become a more disciplined and engaged student in all of my classes.
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Tell us about A personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?
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Minimum 2 prompts, possibly 3 with the
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How will you stand out? How has it contributed to WHO YOU ARE
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What qualities/characteristics define the applicant? (YOU) Which of these qualities/characteristics is most prominent?
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Draft, Get Feedback, Revise Develop Topic and Thesis Read Critically
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