2015届高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达15

2015届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达15浙江省温州市十校联合体2014届高三上学期期末考试英语试题【题文】请根据上面图画所反应的现象和问题，写一篇100—120个词的短文。

你的短文应该包括：1、描述这幅图。

2、说明反映的问题。

3、阐述你对这个问题的看法。

注意：短文的开头已经给出。

（不计入总词数）As we can see in the picture，________________________________________________【答案】As we can see in the picture, Xiaoming is busy with his homework while his mother is fanning him to make him cool and comfortable.The picture implies the parents are indulgent with their children. For example, like the picture, they do everything for their children to create a good opportunity for their children to involve in their study, which most children are willing to accept.I don’t approve of what the parents do. Surely there comes a time when everyone has to leave the parental nest, look after themselves and pay their own way in life. Therefore, the parents are required to be aware that a great love and concern means providing a good chance for their children to fly higher instead of spoiling orrestricting them. Certainly it’s better to take action now.【解析】【考点】表明自己的观点—漫画作文【写作指导】1.本次写作任务是漫画作文，实际上是半开放写作。

因为学生有很大的发挥空间。

漫画作文常规上以三个层面或段落来完成：①叙述图画；②分析图画父母过分溺爱孩子；③提出建议。

不要过分溺爱孩子，让孩子养成过分依赖。

时态宜用一般现在时，有些地方要用适当的情态动词，should，ought to，must，can等。

【模版展示】As is shown in the picture……. The picture tells us now….The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with,…. And this social problem should arouse the great concern of all in the world.In my opinion/As for me, we should take strong measures to deal with the problem. First,…Only in this way can we solve the problem of…【一句多译】1. 介绍画面内容时可使用:As we can see from the picture,According to the picture/From the picture,we can see....The picture shows that...Picture 1/The first picture shows/tells us that...Picture 2/The second picture shows/tells us that....2. 介绍画面内容的现实意义时可使用:This kind of phenomenon is very common in life/society.We can often see this kind of phenomenon in life/society.This kind of matter often happens in our life/society.3. 对社会现象进行评论时可使用:We should realize the importance/harm of (doing) something.We should try hard to improve...We should promote the awareness that....We should promote the awareness of(doing)something.We should promote the public awareness of(doing) something.I think it’s our duty to do something.4. 呼吁(有关部门)采取措施解决社会问题时可使用:I appeal to our government/parents/teachers to take action/measures/steps to.... We must take measures/action/steps to....浙江省杭州市学军中学2014届高三第九次月考英语【题文】书面表达(满分30分)假设你是王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。

要点：1. 简要表述李华在你心目中的印象；2. 用一到两个相关的事例进行具体描述；3. 对李华表示美好的的祝愿。

注意：1. 内容积极向上，语意连贯，结构完整。

词数120左右。

2. 不能写成诗歌形式；不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

3. 开头已给出。

Dear Li Hua,It’s time to say goodbye. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】陕西省渭南市2014届高三第二次模拟考试英语【题文】书面表达（满分30分）请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

There is no such thing as a free lunch. Success doesn’t come to anyone who sits back and does nothing at all. As they say, “As you sow, so shall you reap（收获）.”注意事项：1. 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示；2. 除诗歌外，文体不限；3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称;4. 短文词数不少于100；【答案】书面表达（满分30分）One possible version：Everyone has a desire for success while success only belongs to the hard-working people. As the old saying goes, “no pains, no gains.”I failed in the last exam. So discouraged was I that I didn’t want to do anyth ing.I didn’t do exercises and even attend to what the teacher said in the classes. Later on, I found things got even worse. Meanwhile, a great many students made every effort to study. Only then did I realize I was wrong and that success will not wait for me. So I made the best of every minute to catch up with my classmates. Now I’m progressing in my studies. I feel confident that my effort will pay off eventually.My story makes me believe failure is temporary for a diligent person but permanent for th e lazy. One’s efforts will surely be rewarded with success no matter how big or small the success is.北京市重点中学2015届高三上学期第一次月考英语试题【题文】情景作文假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华。