专题05 写作句型训练、参考范文及必备短语和佳句(练习)-【延期不延学】江苏2020高考英语书面表达模拟课件

一、热身训练：
请翻译下列句子
1.上面筑有鸟巢的树枝被压弯了！（S+V）
2.每个人要尽力让我们的社区更美丽和谐。

（S+V+O+Oc）
3.这些年来网络短视频很红火。

（S+Link.v）
4.随着网络的发展，人们越来越喜欢拍摄短视频来促销产品或提高自己的公众形象。

（S+V+O）
5.应该给孩子更多的时间自主学习。

（S+V+O间宾+O（直宾））
二、写作话题：Consumption ratings
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。

【写作内容】
1. 用约30个词概括上述利用排名（ratings）进行消费的现象；
2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 不必写标题。

【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

一）、写作提醒：
1.审题：时态、人称、题材（包括漫画、图表、文本等）
本文是一篇议论文，概况的时态为______________；人称为_______________
2.概况中关键句的提炼（包括转化、对比），摒弃细节部分！
3.理由或观念按照由总到分的顺序拓展。

确定谓语动词（短语）和主语很重要，学会变通和转化是避免语
言错误的关键所在！
4.具体写作过程详见课件制作
二）、Possible versions
1
Various ratings related to people’s daily consumption have gained widespread concern among consumers. Views on this vary from person to person. Some consumers are for them, while others are annoyed with them. (31 words)
I don’t think the ratings on consumption may do good to us consumers. Some shops often organize various activities, claiming to the public that the sales of their products rank the first. By this means an increasing number of customers pour in to purchase their products so that their profits roar sharply. Much to consumers’ disappointment, these irresponsible businessmen fail to focus on the quality of their products in endless pursuit of “so-called” ratings. As a consequence, the quality of their products doesn’t correspond with what is described.
(93 words)
As consumers, we are not supposed to believe blindly the ratings, which may mislead us to purchase undesirable products. If we did so, we would suffer a lot from the loss of our interest.
参考答案：
Possible version one:
As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in
our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers. （32 words）
I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.
There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.
三、写作短语总结：
1. consumption information
2. an efficient source of information for shopping/study/jobs/cultural exchanges
3..interestingly,…../ simi larly……
4. tend to consult/inquire/
5. be both convenient and economical
6. depend on largely the ratings in consumption
7. the advantages and disadvantages of something(ratings/ overseas further study/online lessons…)
8. ….vary from person to person
9. correspond with
10. suffer a lot from the loss of our interest/property/
11. fail to focus on the quality of their products in endless pursuit of “so-called” ratings
12. mislead sb to do…
13. pocket money
14. pursue fashion and trends
15. become blind about consumption
16. purchase luxuries（购买奢侈品）
17. irrational consumption
18. get into the habit of keeping a record about consumption
19. establish economical society
20. the rational use of credit cards
21. beyond one’s consumption capability
22. control one’s desire to purchase something expensive
23. can afford a higher expenditure/consumption
四、写作句型归纳：
1. There are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from.
2. I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase.
3. Some shops often organize various activities, claiming to the public that the sales of their products rank the first.
4. The higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service.。