新人教版英语八年级下册期末专项复习 作文篇(一) 课件
Read the passage and find the mistakes. SatuБайду номын сангаасday, March 9th
On that day, the weather wisas sunny and a little cold. We got to there by school bus. The teachers and students welcomed ouusr.We helped to clean the windows and the classrooms. The headmaster said something about the poor students. I thought I should help them.
The ending
Volunteers
上个月，我们去希望小学做志愿者，帮助 了那里的老师和学生。以此事为例，巩固复习 如何写好一篇英语作文。
Beginning
Last month, we did something educational. The students in my class went to Hope School as volunteers. We helped the teachers and students there a lot. That event had meaning to all of us.
because; so; since; thanks to; as a result in a word; all in all
⑺递进关系
what’s more; not only…, but also…
Tip 3: Conjunctions make the passage logical (有逻辑的).
Tip 4: More advanced phrases/sentences.
How to polish your writing?
Body part
the class the party the speech the sale
talked with made friends drew the pictures showed the talent sang and danced played the instruments
the poor students the schoolwork their spirit our classmates our teachers our results
students. I thought I should headmaster said something about the poor
help them.
students. I thought I should help them,
such as giving them more books...
The beginning is too boring and plain.
How to make your beginning better?
The secret : Add some relish (佐料)
Proverbs (谚语）
Volunteering makes you look at the world differently. Little things can change a person’s life. Happiness lies in helping others. The aim of volunteer is giving .
期末复习 作文篇 一
How to write
One
Writing is like making a hamburger!
a piece of bread
vegetables eggs meat
another piece of bread
Writing
The beginning
Body part
Beginning
_H_a__p_p_i_n_e_s_s_l_i_e_s_i_n_h__e_lp__in_g__o_t_h_e_r_s_.____
Last month, we did something educational. The students in my class went to Hope School as volunteers. We helped the teachers and students there a lot. That event had meaning to all of us.
Tip 2: No grammar errors.
Body part Why?
Compare
B
A
At first, the teachers and students
The teachers and students welcomed us and they showed us around
welcomed us. We helped to their school. After that, we helped to clean
clean the windows and the the windows and the classrooms because
classrooms. The headmaster there was a strong wind 2 days ago, the
said something about the poor school was in a mess. And then, the
Conjunctions (连接词)
逻辑角度
⑴排序关系
合适的过渡性词汇
first; second; third
⑵并列关系 ⑶举例关系
and; too; as well as for example; like; such as
⑷转折关系
although; but; however
⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结
人教版新目标八年级下册英语作文辅导技巧精讲(PPT41张)
连 写作第四步：
• 恰当运用关联词语，使得文章层次清 晰，各个部分衔接自然。
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6.表示对比:
not…but,
on the one hand…on the other hand;
7.表示解释: for example, such as,
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Ending and comments :
1.As soon as 2.So 3.what’s more 4.Thanks for 5.however
that is to say, in other words;
8.表示顺序: firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;
9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more,
Unit1单元写作专题课件人教版英语八年级下册
1. 你的一次事故经历(事故的起因以及事故的应急处 理措施)；
2. 呼吁同学们学习急救知识和技能。
In life, we often meet some accidents. How should we do to deal with① these accidents for ourselves or others?
2. 感到恶心 f_e_e_l_s_ic_k__
Health
and
意外
3.
移动有困难☆_h_a_v_e_p_r_o_b_l_e_m_s__m_o_v_i_n_g
first-aid
事故
4. 失去生命 l_o_s_e_l_if_e__
5. 在危险的情况下☆
_in__a_d_a_n_g_e_r_o_u_s__si_t_u_a_ti_o_n____
It is necessary for us to learn⑤ some first aid skills⑥ to deal with accidents. We should remember that safety should always come first while we are doing something.
One day, I fell down② while playing basketball in P. E. class. (总起说明什么事故)【When I tried to stand③ up, I found myself having problems moving.】 I thought my leg was broken because it really hurt.【My classmates took me to the school hospital as soon as possible④. The
人教版新目标八年级下册英语作文辅导技巧精讲(PPT41页)
He was ill. He didn’t come to school. He didn’t come to school, because he was ill.
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关联词
1.表示并列或递进: and, both…and, 2.表示选择: or, either…or; 3.表示转折: but, however, 4.表示因果: because,so,therefore 5.表示条件: if
He by bike to school.
如何写出高质量的书面表达
A. 平时注重解题技巧的养成
•准备工作
①.仔细审题，明确要求。 罗列信息，认真分析，审清题意，列出要点。
②.紧扣要点，寻求思路。 草拟提纲，确定开头，选词、选句，拟好结尾 （可适当发表自己的观点）。
•写作之中
①.开门见山，紧扣主题 。
注意语序 (感叹句，疑问句，宾语从句)
Jim works very hard. So does Jack.(前后主语非一人) A: Jim works very hard. B: So he does.(前后主语为一人) He didn’t know where the bookshop was. The boys want to know how they should do it.
③.重短轻长, 就易避难。 •以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。
④.过渡自然, 表达流畅。 •正确使用连词，保持行文的流畅。 •不重复使用可置换的词。
人教版八年级英语下册Unit1_Writing优质课课件
（④）远离 （⑥）好好休息 （①）头疼 （⑦）培养一个健康的爱好 （②）背痛 （⑤）做眼操 （③）躺下休息
介词词块：
①for a long time ②in the same way ③such as ④because of ⑤instead of
（③ ）例如 （ ⑤）而不是 （ ②）用同样的方式 （① ）很长时间 （ ④）因为
Make an outline
Outline
Beginning：Introduce Jack’s
health problems
Main Body：Give advice
Ending：Best wishes
After-writing
Task 1: Self-check ①篇章方面：布局是否完整？逻辑是否合理？要点是否
项目
标准
自我评价 同伴评价 教师评价
结构（3分）
段落合理 （2 分） 衔接自然 ( 1分)
要
点
内容（8分）
全 面
介绍情况（2分） 给出建议（2分） 表达祝福（2分）
拓展合理 ( 2分)
语言（3分） 卷面（1分）
词汇丰富 (1 分) 句法正确 ，语言优美( 2分)
书写工整（ 1分）
修改习作时可使用这些符号：优美句子～；漏词∧；错处： ○；删除／，语法错误 G ，人称错误 P，时态错误 T，拼 写错误Sp等等
Unit 1 Give advice on healthy problems
写作话题：Interpersonal communication (人际交往)
学习目标
1. 掌握说明文的写作方法及技巧，培养学生在写 前分析题目及列提纲的习惯。
2. 学会简单谈论健康问题或事故，并能正确使用不 同的句型给出合理的建议。
人教八下英语作文课件
人教八下英语作文课件英文回答：I have been a teacher for over 10 years and have taught in a variety of settings, including public schools, private schools, and charter schools. I have also taught students of all ages, from kindergarten to high school. In my experience, I have found that there are a number of different factors that can contribute to student success.One of the most important factors is the student's attitude. Students who are motivated and engaged in their learning are more likely to succeed than those who are not. Motivation can come from a variety of sources, such as the student's interest in the subject matter, the teacher's enthusiasm, or the student's desire to do well.Another important factor is the student's ability to learn. This includes the student's cognitive skills, such as their ability to read, write, and solve problems, aswell as their non-cognitive skills, such as their attention span, self-discipline, and perseverance. Students who have strong learning skills are more likely to succeed than those who do not.Finally, the teacher plays a vital role in student success. Teachers who are knowledgeable, enthusiastic, and supportive can help students to learn and grow. They can also create a positive learning environment that encourages students to succeed.中文回答：多年来，我一直担任一名教师，曾在公立学校、私立学校和特许学校等各种环境中执教。
最新人教版八年级英语下册书面表达复习课件全套
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make our school beautiful (clean...)
help other students with their studies... help the people in trouble (cheer others up...)
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②表示命令和要求时，语气比较强烈。
eg：You shouldn't be so careless.你不应该这么粗心。 ③表示预测和可能性。
eg：He should be a teacher.他应该是一名老师。
热点作文练习
假设你是李鑫，你的笔友Jack给你发来邮件。他说他总是感觉很疲
惫，以至于上课都不能集中精力听讲。请给Jack回一封电子邮件，提
much.Yesterday he kept on playing computer games for 8 hours.Now he has a headache，a sore back and feels very tired.He can't go to school.
I don't think Mike should play computer games so long.It's not good for
中的常考话题作文，写作时应尽量用倡议或号召性的语句或者用自己或 他人亲身经历的事件鼓励教育他人。
教材中出现的相关短语和句型：
①help to clean up the city parks帮忙打扫城市公园 ②visit the sick kids in the hospital to cheer them up看望医院里生病的孩
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八年级下英语Units1-5作文复习课件
Dear Sally, I’m sorry to hear that you’re not feeling well these days. Are you still feeling tired now? I think you should drink a lot of hot water and have a good rest. You shouldn’t go to bed too late or work too late. Don’t be under too much pressure, and try to relax yourself. If you still don’t feel better, you should go to a doctor and take some medicine. I hope you will feel better soon.
Unit 4 Why don’t you talk to your parents? 【话题•谈论问题和提建议】讲述我们在 学校、生活中遇到的各种烦恼，以及相 对应的合理化建议。要求同学们会写关 于建议的短文。写此类短文首先应该掌 握常用的提建议的句型，根据一定情景， 明确提建议的方法，再根据所提供的信 息展开合理的发挥，使句子意思完整。
Sam, I know you are upset these days. Here is some of my advice for you. First, you should understand your parents. They have to work hard because they want your family to live a better life. Second, you could talk to your parents about the problem. Maybe they could stay with you next holiday. Third, you should try to help your parents do some housework, or you could visit your friends and have fun with them. Then you won’t feel bored. What do you think of my advice? I hope you have a good time.
人教版八年级英语下册期末作文复习
公众健康日(7月7日)，旨在倡导“全民健康，快乐为本”的理念。
随着生活水平的提高，人们越来越重视自身健康。
请以“How to”为题,用英语写一篇短文,从心理(mental health)和生理两个方面谈谈你是如何保持健康的。
Unit 1 How to Keep Healthy①It's important for us to keep healthy.As a middle school student,we should have a healthy lifestyle.Here is some advice.First,we should do exercise at least one hour a day，such ，have a healthy diet.Eat ，we shouldn't spend too much time going online.It is bad for/It is harmful to our eyes and study.Fourth,go to bed early and don't stay up toolate,because enough sleep is good for our health.Finally,be happy as possible as we can.Learn to smile at ourselves at any time.If we do so,I believe we can keep healthy.How to live a healthy and happy life②With the improvement of living condition,we should care more about our health.Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life?Firstly,we should keep our bodies healthy.Not only do we need to eat healthy food,but also we need to exercise in a proper way every day.Secondly,mental health is also very important.We need to love our life.We need to get along well with others as well.I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind,and then we can have a healthy and happy life every day.Unit 2 Helping Others Makes Me Happy①As an old saying goes, “Helping others is the source of happiness.” It may bring us a lot of joy indeed .Last week, our school visited the old people's home.We did some cleaning and cleaned the rooms there.After that we had many activities，such as singing，dancing，telling stories and chatting to cheer up the old.We also gave some presents to the old.I hope all of us can take an active part in helping others.Through the meaningful activities we can learn to care for others and spread our love to other.②Doing a Good Thing Made Me Happy’s very st winter,he got ill.He had to go to hospital once a week.He took lots of medicine.I hoped he would be as strong as me.So every weekend,I asked him to practice playing basketball with me.I taught him how to play it.Now he is much stronger and healthier.I feel very happy to have done a good thing for my friend.I also realize a true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart!Unit 3 Being a volunteer is great!①I am a middle school student. I like to help other people and I think being a volunteer is great!At school, I’m a member of the school volunteer program . So I often do some volunteer jobs in my free time. I love singing and reading, I often go to the oldpeople's home and sing for the old people to cheer them up on weekends. Every Friday afternoon, I go to a primary school to help young children learn to read. Being a volunteer is great because we can help others and do the things we like at the same time.So if you like helping others, become a volunteer today!My Opinions on Volunteering②Hello, I'm Tom. I think volunteering is a good way to help others.In my opinion, volunteering is a meaningful and important activity.First, volunteering helps us to understand each other. We can learn to care for others and how to help them. Second, volunteering can help us to build relationships with others. We can meet new people and make new friends. Finally, if everyone helps a lot, the world will be more colorful.How about you? Can you tell me your opinions on volunteering?父母工作繁忙，我们作为一名家庭成员，应该学会分担家务。
八年级英语下册 作文复习课件 人教新目标版
Dear Mom and Dad, How is it going? Things are fine here. I got my report card today. Luckily I did OK this time. My English teacher said I was good at listening and speaking. My math teacher said I was hard-working. My PE teacher said I was the best in the class. However, my history teacher said I could do better. Another disappointing result was in science. My science teacher said I was a lazy student. Well, that’s all the news I have. I will work harder at science. Yours, Wang Bin
My future life
Unit 2 本单元的考点：回复求助信。当人家遇到困难时， 本单元的考点：回复求助信。当人家遇到困难时，给别人 真诚的建议。 真诚的建议。 Dear , I’m sorry to hear that .But don’t worry, there are a lot of thing you could do First,…… Second,……Finally,……来组织整篇文章。 来组织整篇文章。 来组织整篇文章 I hope that you can be better soon.Good luck! Yours, 签名 常见的建议有： 常见的建议有：(1)you should say sorry. (2) you should write a letter. (3) you could buy him a gift. (4) you should talk about it with her/him. (5) you should find a part-time job.等等 等等 最后， 祝人家好运。 最后，别忘了在信的结尾写上 Good luck. 祝人家好运。
八年级英语下册_作文复习课件__人教新目标版
昨天早上当老师走进教室时，我们正在休息，有些人在 听音乐，有些人在做作业，有些人在交谈。我正在和汤 姆下棋。
We were having a rest when teacher came into the classtoom yesterday morning.Some students were listening to music, some students were doing their homework, and some students were talking. I was playing chess with Tom.
• 假设（if条件状语从句）
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If I have a lot of money, I will travel around the world. I will buy a big house for my parents so that they can live a happy life. I love cars, so I will buy a car for myself. Maybe I will travel everywhere in my car. Of course, I will give some of my money to charities to help poor students. I think they need money to go to school and get an education. I hope everyone of us me can help them.
• 提建议
Dear Alice, As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get on better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you. You mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it’s not a good way, but it shows your mother’s love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother’s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you’re thinking about. If your mother doesn’t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile. I hope what I say here can help you a Dear Eve, There are lots of things you could do. First, you shouldn’t be unhappy. You could have a good talk with her. Tell her to turn down the radio when you do your homework. Or maybe you could call her up and say sorry to her. Second, you couldn’t lend your things to her next time. Or maybe you could ask your aunt to buy one for her. At last, I hope you will be happy again.