英语演讲比赛点评模板
英语演讲比赛点评模板There are several aspects of language and speaking that I would like to focus on today for considerations to allow you to improve moving forward.First, the area of pronunciation and delivery. Some of you, especially when you are nervous, should focus more on diction and pronunciation. Specifically, try not to swallow your articles like "a" and "the" or little connectors like "of" Take a breath, take your time. and let each word be sounded. Similarly, make sure you sound final consonants, especially the "-ed" in your past tenses. This is one of the things that Chinese, even the good ones, the really good ones, when you start speaking quickly and passionately, forget. So, pay a lot of attention and be conscious that that's something that you may know that the grammars, grammatical and structural rules and not sound that final consonant or you may be a little fuzzy on what the pasttenses, but that some- thing that makes a big difference in a competition,Finally, in the area of pronunciation for all you students, not just the contestants here today, please, the word "the", th-: put your tongue between your teeth. It's not "da," it's "the"; it's not "der." it's "their"; it's not "utter." it's "other." You can do this, you can do this, Practice on the way to class, practice in the shower, practice wherever but don't say "da," it's "the."Second category of feedback is I want to talk very briefly about lexicon and vocabulary. As I mentioned, I felt that your use of lexicon in today's presentation was quite sophisticated and showed a lot of preparation. Most of you may have noticed that in the contemporaneous, spontaneous remarks and questions, the level of vocabulary came down a notch or two. That's very natural: some- thing that we all have to work on. But there were a couple ofI think. there's three examples that I'd like to share with you to take home to work on. Number one, since the topic was ecology, when you talk about living in harmony with da za ren, is it "the nature" or "nature'? Nature! I's not "the nature"! "The nature" is shenrna shenma dongxi de xingzhi, so, that was like one of those errors that. umm, came up because of the theme of the speech, but that's something you can remember right now, "Live in harmony with...nature."' Second, some small things that I noted, some of you messed up "emphasized" with "emphasis"---it's a common mistake. And one of the contestants was talking about how important it was to be aware of the environment and that we should generate awareness of environment to help us think of ways to improve it, and she, I think it was she, said "we should get a consensus of the environment," I think she probablymeant "sense." "get a sense of the environment" as an awareness. So, little things like that. Be careful semantically. If you reach the upper levels of language, it's very easy to choose a wrong word and I guess my advice for you would be, "When in doubt, check a dictionary for nuance and proper usage." because when you're in the lower levels you're not using those fancy words. But when you get up in the upper levels, like today, they're very important.Finally, my last category of feedback for you is in the area of discourse and organization. This is very important in speaking contests, it's very important when you're translating at the upper levels, and it's important in adult life when you're working in the world of work where you're no longer talking simply about yourself and your family, but other things, issues. Today's contestants demonstrated a wide variety of rhetorical styles in their preparedspeeches. Many of the candidates showed a sophisticated use of linguistic register, and register is, as you know. using language that is appropriate for a specific purpose for a specific social context. The reason l mention register is that for learners of English as a second language, the higher the register, the more difficult it is to speak accurately, coherently, and persuasively. Right? So, today, one of the contestants made a very insightful remark and said, I quote, "The higher level of English I speak, the more mistakes I make." Remember that'? Actually. What she meant by this was that she was having trouble communicating sophisticated ideas and arguments in English without making errors in grammar or usage. University students learning English can improve their ability to speak naturally in high registers and high level of discourse and can sustain a high level of discourse by doing a few things and theseare the three pieces of advice I will leave for you before I conclude my remarks. So, this is advice teachers and students for how to build that competency and high level of discourse.Number one: Read texts that represent a high level of discourse. Soak up that language. But, remember that written text has a discourse that is separate from spoken discourse. Some of you were speaking today in very. kind of written-prose language, and you may not want to do that in the future.Number two, piece of advice: Make a tape recording of yourself talking about abstract topics or complex topics and then go back and listen to it and listen to how it sounds: if it's cohesive and coherent'? Are there errors? Then go back, practice again, and do it a second time like editing a written text but, in fact, it's a spoken text. You will hear what you're doing that could beimproved, even you, and of course if you have teachers, that's even better, but you, yourself will hear.Finally, my last piece of advice for you is that you should practice building. If language, if spoken language, was like a house you should practice building the house brick by brick, storey by storey, so you all can do basic sentences now, clearly. And, most of you are pretty good at building paragraphs, but some of you are not yet perfect house builders in terms of discourse and organization. So you want to practice writing compound and complex sentences, and then weave those together into paragraphs and you'll weave those paragraphs into the full spoken text. Weave them together, push yourself to go for the discourse and woven nature so that not only the thought flows, but it's coherent. And. I think you'll agree with me, that some of the most compelling speeches that weheard today displayed this type coherence and sort of natural progression of ideas, lf you do that, there's no doubt in my mind that you can progress at this area.In conclusion, I would like to quote one of our question masters, who said today that, "Life is a journey, not the arrival." that you focus on the journey not the arrival. Language learning is lifelong. Lifelong. So, as you move forward, language learning enjoy the journey.评委总结发言(表达感谢时用):Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, excellent contestants,its really a great honor and pleasure to be here as a judge for this English feast of speechcompetition. I think all contestants did a great job today, and I’d like to express my thanks to everyone who hasMade a great contribution to organizing the competition and has made it a fantastic success. So let’s give a big round of applause to all of them. I have been really enjoying this contest thoroughly, especially because all the contestants have approached the topic from different perspectives. All speeches have been well researched, with good thoughts as well as interesting ideas. I am very pleased to see that most of you delivered your speech with good pronunciation, clear articulation, with good eye contact and a proper manner. Finally I would like to take this opportunity to offer you some little tips about public English speech competition.First, the area of pronunciation and delivery. Some of you, especially when you are nervous, should focus more on diction and pronunciation. Specifically, try not toswallow your articles like "a" and "the" or little connectors like "of" Take a breath, take your time. and let each word be sounded. Similarly, make sure you sound final consonants, especially the "-ed" in your past tenses. This is one of the things that Chinese, even the good ones, the really good ones, when you start speaking quickly and passionately, forget. So, what I here want to suggest to those contestants, when you preparing your speech, whatever the prepared speech and the impromptu speech, do not just focus on the whole picture of your work, instead pay a attention to the small details, as well as the intonation.On top of that, I would like to speak with those who always get somewhat a little bit nervous once they stand on the stage to deliver a public speech. Speaking of this, I would like to share with you a little bit about myself. When I was at my high school and I often blushed on my facewhen I stand even in the front our class, let alone the city competition later on. And one of my foreign teachers give my some tips. That’s what I want to share with you right now. when you feel nervous, especially before get on the stage, take a deep breath and tell yourself in your heart that I am the best in the whole universe. Then, by the time you speak, what you should bear in mind is that don’t ever get direct contact with same part area of audience all the time. Remember you are here to serve the whole listeners with your point of view, so change your eyesight to different audience.I always like to say that ”Lifeis a journey”. Language learning is a life long experience and we never finish learning, especially for the English language which is so alive and ever changing. So as youmove forward with your language learning make sure you enjoy every moment ofyour journey.面对标新立异选手:You really have been very creative in trying to clear out yourpoint. But this time, it was very clearly stated what would be required of you in thespeech. Therefore, it is very important to understand what is required of you and whatis demanded of you in a competition.面对跑题选手(或主题不明确选手)In today’s competition, I think you are a littletoo hasty in your preparation for the speech. For instance, as your topic is “a word that changes the world” ,you ‘d better show your point out straightly. Otherwise howcould you grab the audiences’ attention to your speech. So next time, you just readcarefully about the instructions before you start making a speech. And try tounderstand every word clearly and correctly.对不能及时切入主题的选手:I think the basic rules of communication are universal,and apply across languages and cultures. Say what you mean, and say it in as clear,direct, and simple a manner as possible. And when you are talking or writing tosomeone from a different country, don’t be afraid to say the obvious thing first.面对发音不好的选手:I have to mention in this competition that you still need toimprove your pronunciatione specially rhythm and sentence stress.You need toimprove your vowels. It is still very important. I think that’s all I want to say. Thankyou very much for your speech.对表现好的选手I am very much impressed by the speech you have made. Tocompare with the speech of others, you really did a great job. I feel good about this.First of all, in your prepared speech, you are more to the point and your English is more natural. Secondly, your point is very impressive. And you provide a lot ofexamples to support your speech.对即兴演讲的评论:Talking about your impromptu speech, I think you are quite sensitive to answer questions.Your answer is quite logical and I like it.对眼神交流/肢体语言把握好的选手:It's worth metioning that you give us afantastic speech with an impressive beginning, ending or the free talk. Furthermore,you are enthusiastic throughout the speech. You made good eye contact with theaudience and used appropriate body language in the speech. .You made your speechmore wonderful and more perfect with yourbody language. You looked cool!适时对选手提出的建议:We all know a language is a means and the purpose is communication. What really matters is the courage to come and participate in the contest. I should learn from all of you. However, there are still some problems andmuch room for improvement. I am going to put forward some suggestions on how todo better in the future.Have you thought about this question: When you prepare a speech, there is somethingmore important than language. What is it? It is idea. Ideas come before the language.If you don’t know what to say, if you have no ideas, what is the use of the language?So, you must think, and think again and decide what you want to say and thenorganize your ideas. One point I want toemphasize is that you should have your own approach, your own original ideas. If you only borrow things from others or copythings from some ready materials or textbooks, your speech is bound to fail. In thiscontest we hear some expressions again and again. Then, we know you have been borrowing things from the same source. To quote from one of the topics forimpromptu speech: “Imagination is more important than knowledge.” This is a quotation from Einstein. If we want the world to move forward, we need imagination,and we need creativity.对即兴演讲的建议:When you prepare your impromptu speech, the most importantthing is to be clear about the topic you have chosen. If you miss the point, howeverfluent and expressive you are, you get a poormark. For example, there is a topic: Toerr is human; to forgive is divine. When you choose this topic, you should know itmeans everybody makes mistakes, but if you are able to forgive other people’smistakes, then you are a better being. The emphasis is the second half. If you only talk about how to do your best to correct your mistakes, you miss the point. I feel this partis the most difficult part of the contest. You have to be quick for you don’t have muchtime to prepare; you have to be knowledgeable for you must understand the meaningof the topic properly.对选手提出更高要求:So, you must have realized the contest has become more demanding,. You need to have something more creative. And next year, you would be expected to be at a new and higher stage.I am sure everyone would like to join with me in saying that the Organizing Committee has chosen a very good theme for the prepared speech, that is, “Does one plus one equal two?” which is very thought provoking and leaves plenty of room for your imagination. As I said at the very beginning, we have been enjoying the contest thoroughly and tremendously because, the 92 contestants approached the theme from different perspectives, well researched, with good thoughts as well as interesting ideas. And we are very pleased to see, most of you delivered your speech with good pronunciation, clear articulation, with good eye contact and a proper manner. You have also demonstrated your remarkable analytical ability. But there is one thing I would like to mention. With a little bit more sense of humor, you might have entertained your audience more。
英文演讲点评用语
英文演讲点评用语(全英)Good afternoon/Hello, excellent contestant! ( or Name).点评提出赞赏的:1)It’s my great pleasure to be here as an instructor for this speechcompetition.2)I’d like to show my appreciation to you because you did a reallygreat job today.3)I have been really enjoying this speech thoroughly, because thetopic you choose is very attractive.4)I am very glad to see that you delivered your speech with goodpronunciation, great intonation, with good eye contact and a proper manner. In other words, you have also demonstrated your remarkable language skills.5)You really have been very creative in trying to clear out your point.I am very impressed by the speech you have made. In your speech,I appreciate your fluency in English expression and the passion forthe presentation.6)The importance of today goes beyond the competition itself.Language learning is a life-long experience and we never finish learning, especially for the English learning which is so alive and ever-changing.7)The topic you choose is very interesting to every audience. Also, itis worth mentioning that your speech and language expressions are very appealing, and every word and sentence is full of emotions. Thank you for bringing us a wonderful speech!点评给出建议的:8)Through this speech, I feel that your language ability is talented,and the pronunciation and tone are excellent. In the meanwhile, I have some small suggestions about your presentation skills, and you can add more emotions next time, so the presentation will be more vivid.9)I think the basic rules of communication are universal and applyacross the language and culture. Expressing what you mean in a clear, straightforward and direct way might be a better way in your future speech. And when you are talking or writing to someone in English, don’t be afraid to say the obvious thing first.10)Your topic is very fascinating, and all of us really enjoyed yourspeech. But I still have some sweet suggestions for you. In your future English learning, maybe you can better improve your pronunciation, just like rhythm and sentence stress. I look forward to your better performance in the next activity.临时提问:1)Why did you choose this topic?2)Is this your first public English speech? how do you feel?3)When preparing this speech, what is the most difficult partfor you?4)Your oral English is very good. How do you practice speakingin your daily life? Can you share it with other students?5)How do you feel about this activity?6)What have you learned from this speech competition?7)In the process of preparing and practicing for this speech,what learning skills can you share with everyone.。
演讲稿之英文演讲点评语
英文演讲点评语【篇一:英语演讲点评】英语演讲比赛评委点评good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, dear students of ningbo foreign language school and you, 14 excellent contestants,it’s my great pleasure to be here for the veryfirst time as a judge for this english speech competition. i think all the contestants did a great job today, so let’s give a big round of applause to all of them. another round of applause goes to the teacher for having chosen such an interesting topic like open to the world cultures and to everyone who has contributed to organize the competition and has helped to making it a success. i have been really enjoying this contest thoroughly, especially because all the 14 contestants have approached the topic from different perspectives. all speeches have been wellresearched, with good thoughts as well as interesting ideas. i am very pleased to see that most of you delivered your speech with good pronunciation, clear articulation, with good eye contact and a proper manner. on top of all this you all have also demonstrated your remarkable analytical abilities.as an english teacher, i’m always very happy when i see young people who are doing such a terrific job. the importance of todays goes beyond the competition itself. your school and this competition continue to promote international communication, and will help you to progress and to have more and more opportunities in your future life.i am so impressed with this successful speech competition and with this beautiful school that as the mother of a grade 6 primary student i wish that my daughter will have the opportunity to study here , so she can learn to speak english more fluently, just like you all.i always like to say that ”life is a journey”. language learning is a life long experience and we never finish learning, especially for the english language which is so alive and ever changing. so as you move forward with your language learning make sure you enjoy every moment of your journey.finally i would like to take this opportunity to wish all the contestants the best of luck and great success in your future. ---评委老师its terrific to see you dress formally and well prepared for the speech, and your poster is well doneas well.however, you need to make more eye contact with theaudience and better speak with various tones and clear pronunciation. i have to say you are a bit stiff without proper body language, which is no good for impressing the audience and the jury. moreover, i really hope you can put more passion into the speech and try to eich it with more facial expression, then surely your speech would be fabulous.演讲中没有语法错误,尤其其中一个男孩讲的非常好,他演讲的开头很好,而且很幽默,演讲有激情,并且和观众有很好的眼神交流并且在演讲中有适当的肢体语言your grammar is ok. its worth mentioning that a boy gave a fantastic speech with an impressive beginning, furthermore, he was fairly humorous and enthusiastic throughout the speech, and he made good eye contact with the audience and used appropriate body language in the speech.【篇二:演讲点评语】篇一:领导讲话后的评语恰到好处,深入关键,认清形势,为我们今后的发展指明了方向。
英语演讲点评大全简短
英语演讲点评大全简短Title: Comprehensive Guide to Delivering Effective English SpeechesIntroduction:Good morning/afternoon, ladies and gentlemen. Today, I am here to present a comprehensive guide to delivering effective English speeches. Whether you are a beginner or an experienced speaker, these tips will help you captivate your audience and leave a lasting impression. Let's dive into the content.1. Engage Your Audience:The key to a successful speech is audience engagement. Begin with a powerful opening statement, a captivating quote, or an intriguing question. This will instantly grab the attention of your listeners and make them eager to hear more. Maintain eye contact throughout your speech, use facial expressions, and vary your tone of voice to keep everyone involved.2. Clear and Concise Language:To convey your message effectively, use clear and concise language. Avoid using jargon or complex vocabulary that may confuse your audience. Break down your ideas into simple, relatable terms. Use real-life examples, anecdotes, or visual aids to enhance understanding and provide concrete evidence to support your points.3. Structure Your Speech:Organize your speech in a logical and coherent manner. Begin with an introduction that provides a brief overview of what you will be discussing. Clearly state your main points andsupport them with relevant information in the body of your speech. Finally, conclude your speech by summarizing your key points and leaving your audience with a powerful closing statement or call to action.4. Use Visual Aids:Visual aids play a crucial role in enhancing comprehension and retention. Incorporate slides, charts, graphs, or props into your speech to support your main points visually. Ensure that your visual aids are clear, concise, and aesthetically pleasing. However, do not depend solely on them; your speech should be able to stand alone without the aid of visuals.5. Effective Body Language:The way you present yourself on stage speaks volumes. Maintain an upright posture, with your shoulders relaxed and your head held high. Use hand gestures to emphasize key points, but avoid unnecessary movements that may distract your audience. Be mindful of your facial expressions, as they can convey emotion and connect you with your audience on a deeper level.6. Voice Projection and Articulation:Project your voice clearly and confidently to ensure that all members of your audience can hear you. Speak at a moderate pace, enunciate your words, and articulate each syllable. Practice proper breathing techniques to maintain a steady flow of speech. Vary your tone and pitch to add depth and interest to your delivery.7. Practice and Rehearse:Practice makes perfect. Take the time to rehearse your speech multiple times. Pay attention to your timing, making sure youneither rush nor drag your speech. Record yourself or seek feedback from others to identify areas for improvement. Practice will boost your confidence and help you deliver a polished performance.8. Connect Emotionally:Connecting with your audience on an emotional level is essential in making your speech memorable. Use storytelling techniques to evoke different emotions. Show genuine passion and enthusiasm for your topic. Share personal experiences or anecdotes that your audience can relate to. This will createa bond and leave a lasting impact on your listeners.Conclusion:In conclusion, delivering an effective English speechrequires practice, preparation, and effective communication skills. Engage your audience, use clear language, structure your speech, utilize visual aids, demonstrate strong body language, project your voice, and connect emotionally. With these tips in mind, you are well on your way to becoming a persuasive and impactful speaker. Remember, an effective speech has the power to inspire, educate, and transform lives. Thank you for your attention.。
最新英语演讲比赛完整版点评
评委总结发言(表达感谢时用):Good afternoon, excellent contestants,1it’s my great pleasure to be here as a judge for this English 2speech competition. I think all contestants did a great job today, and 3I’d like to show my thanks to everyone who has contributed to organize 4the competition and has helped to make it a success. S o let’s give a big 5round of applause to all of them. Finally I would like to take this 6opportunity to wish all the contestants the best of luck and great success 7in your future.89对选手整体水平的肯定:I have been really enjoying this contest 10thoroughly, especially because all the contestants have approached the 11topic from different perspectives. All speeches have been well researched, 12with good thoughts as well as interesting ideas. I am very pleased to see 13that most of you delivered your speech with good pronunciation, clear 14articulation, with good eye contact and a proper manner. On top of all 15this you all have also demonstrated your remarkable analytical abilities.16The importance of today goes beyond the competition itself. I always like 17to say that ”Life is a journey”. Language learning is a life long 18experience and we never finish learning, especially for the English 19language which is so alive and ever changing. So as you move forward with 20your language learning make sure you enjoy every moment of your journey.2122面对标新立异选手:You really have been very creative in trying to clear 23out your point. But this time, it was very clearly stated what would be 24required of you in the speech. Therefore, it is very important to 25understand what is required of you and what is demanded of you in a 26competition.2728面对跑题选手(或主题不明确选手)In to day’s competition, I think you 29are a little too hasty in your preparation for the speech. For instance, 30as your topic is “a word that changes the world” ,you ‘d better show 31your point out straightly. Otherwise how could you grab the audiences’32attention to your speech. So next time, you just read carefully about the 33instructions before you start making a speech. And try to understand every 34word clearly and correctly.35对不能及时切入主题的选手: I think the basic rules of communication are 36universal, and apply across languages and cultures. Say what you mean, 37and say it in as clear, direct, and simple a manner as possible. And when 38you are talking or writing to someone from a different country, don’t 39be afraid to say the obvious thing first.4041面对发音不好的选手:I have to mention in this competition that you still 42need to improve your pronunciatione specially rhythm and sentence 43stress.You need to improve your vowels. It is still very important. I think 44that’s all I want to say. Thank you very much for your speech.4546对表现好的选手I am very much impressed by the speech you have made.47To compare with the speech of others, you really did a great job. I feel 48good about this. First of all, in your prepared speech, you are more to 49the point and your English is more natural. Secondly, your point is very 50impressive. And you provide a lot of examples to support your speech.5152对即兴演讲的评论:Talking about your impromptu speech, I think you are 53quite sensitive to answer questions.Your answer is quite logical and I 54like it.5556对眼神交流/肢体语言把握好的选手:It's worth metioning that you give us57a fantastic speech with an impressive beginning, ending or the free talk.58Furthermore, you are enthusiastic throughout the speech. You made good 59eye contact with the audience and used appropriate body language in the 60speech. .You made your speech more wonderful and more perfect with your 61body language. You looked cool!62适时对选手提出的建议:We all know a language is a means and the purpose 63is communication. What really matters is the courage to come and 64participate in the contest. I should learn from all of you. However, there 65are still some problems and much room for improvement. I am going to put 66forward some suggestions on how to do better in the future.6768Have you thought about this question: When you prepare a speech, there 69is something more important than language. What is it? It is idea. Ideas 70come before the language. If you don’t know what to say, if you have no 71ideas, what is the use of the language? So, you must think, and think again 72and decide what you want to say and then organize your ideas. One point73I want to emphasize is that you should have your own approach, your own74original ideas. If you only borrow things from others or copy things from 75some ready materials or textbooks, your speech is bound to fail. In this 76contest we hear some expressions again and again. Then, we know you have 77been borrowing things from the same source. To quote from one of the topics 78for impromptu speech: “Imagination is more important than knowledge.”79This is a quotation from Einstein. If we want the world to move forward, 80we need imagination, and we need creativity.8182对即兴演讲的建议:When you prepare your impromptu speech, the most 83important thing is to be clear about the topic you have chosen. If you 84miss the point, however fluent and expressive you are, you get a poor mark.85For example, there is a topic: To err is human; to forgive is divine. When 86you choose this topic, you should know it means everybody makes mistakes, 87but if you are able to forgive other people’s mistakes, then you are a 88better being. The emphasis is the second half. If you only talk about how 89to do your best to correct your mistakes, you miss the point. I feel this 90part is the most difficult part of the contest. You have to be quick for 91you don’t have much time to prepare; you have to be knowledgeable for 92you must understand the meaning of the topic properly.93对选手提出更高要求:So, you must have realized the contest has become 94more demanding,. You need to have something more creative. And next year, 95you would be expected to be at a new and higher stage.9697。
英语演讲评语
英语演讲评语英语演讲评语参考:1. Introduction:- Great opening! It immediately captured the audience's attention and set the tone for your speech.- Well done on introducing the topic clearly and concisely. It provided a good background for the audience and showed your understanding of the subject matter.- Your personal story at the beginning was a nice touch. It helped to create an emotional connection with the audience and make your speech relatable.2. Structure and organization:- The structure of your speech was well thought out and easy to follow. Each point flowed smoothly into the next, creating a coherent and logical progression of ideas.- Your use of transitions between sections was excellent. It helped to guide the audience through your speech and ensured that they were able to follow along easily.- The way you divided your speech into clear sections with subheadings was effective in keeping the audience engaged and focused on your key arguments.3. Content and arguments:- Your content was well-researched and supported by evidence and examples. This added credibility to your speech and made your arguments more persuasive.- It was great to see you addressing counterarguments and refutingthem with strong evidence. This showed that you had considered multiple perspectives on the topic and could defend your own stance.- Your use of statistics and factual data was impressive. It added weight to your arguments and made them more convincing.4. Language and delivery:- Your language was clear and concise throughout the speech. You used appropriate vocabulary and terminology related to the topic, which showed your deep understanding of the subject matter.- Your delivery was confident and engaging. You maintained good eye contact with the audience and varied your tone and pace to keep them interested.- You effectively used gestures and body language to enhance your message. It made your speech more dynamic and visually engaging.5. Conclusion:- The conclusion was powerful and left a lasting impression on the audience. It effectively summarized your main points and reinforced your message.- Your call-to-action at the end was motivating and inspired the audience to take action. It was a memorable way to end your speech.- It was great to see you leaving the audience with a thought-provoking question. It encouraged them to think deeper about the topic and sparked further discussion.Overall, your speech was impressive and well-delivered. You demonstrated a strong command of the English language and communicated your ideas effectively. Your passion for the topicwas evident throughout the speech, which added an emotional appeal to your arguments. Keep up the great work!。
英语演讲点评大全简短
英语演讲点评大全简短英语演讲点评大全(简短版)(1200字)尊敬的评委、亲爱的观众们:今天我很荣幸能够站在这里与大家分享我的想法。
首先,我要感谢所有支持我的人,并且要表达我对参赛者们的敬意。
我已经倾注了很多心血在准备这次演讲比赛,我希望能够为您们呈现一场令人难忘的表演。
首先,发布你的演讲主题非常重要。
一个明确、吸引人的主题能够让观众立刻投入其中。
同时,在演讲过程中,一定要保持清晰度和连贯性。
这样可以确保观众能够理解你的要点,并在演讲结束后形成对你的主题的印象。
在发表演讲之前,充分的准备是必不可少的。
这包括深入研究你的主题,收集相关信息,并从可靠的来源获取数据和事实。
你的准备工作不仅体现在文字上,还包括语言表达和肢体语言的训练。
要通过练习来确保你的表达方式自然、流利,并且能够与观众建立共鸣。
当你开始发表演讲时,请注意与观众保持眼神交流。
这样做会使你的演讲更生动、更真诚。
另外,注意你的声音投射。
使用适当的音量和节奏来吸引观众的注意力,并传递你的信息。
更重要的是,要注意控制自己的情绪。
如果你紧张或焦虑,这可能会影响到你的演讲效果。
试着放松自己,保持自信和镇定。
在演讲的过程中,用一些生动的例子和有趣的故事来支撑你的观点是非常有效的。
这样可以使观众更易于理解和接受你的观点。
同时,注意给观众留下时间思考和反馈。
通过与观众互动,你可以建立更紧密的联系,并且更好地回应他们的问题和疑虑。
最后,给观众留下一个强烈的印象是至关重要的。
这可以通过总结你的主要观点和呼吁行动来实现。
确保你的言辞有力且引人入胜,激发人们的思考和行动。
并且,在结束演讲时,不要忘记礼貌地感谢观众的聆听和支持。
总之,一个成功的演讲需要全面的准备、自信的表达和与观众的有效互动。
通过采纳这些建议,相信你能够在今后的演讲中取得更大的成功。
谢谢大家的聆听!。
演讲稿之英语演讲比赛点评稿
英语演讲比赛点评稿【篇一:英语演讲点评】英语演讲比赛评委点评good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, dear students of ningbo foreign language school and you, 14 excellent contestants,it’s my great pleasure to be here for the veryfirst time as a judge for this english speech competition. i think all the contestants did a great job today, so let’s give a big round of applause to all of them. another round of applause goes to the teacher for having chosen such an interesting topic like open to the world cultures and to everyone who has contributed to organize the competition and has helped to making it a success. i have been really enjoying this contest thoroughly, especially because all the 14 contestants have approached the topic from different perspectives. all speeches have been wellresearched, with good thoughts as well as interesting ideas. i am very pleased to see that most of you delivered your speech with good pronunciation, clear articulation, with good eye contact and a proper manner. on top of all this you all have also demonstrated your remarkable analytical abilities.as an english teacher, i’m always very happy when i see young people who are doing such a terrific job. the importance of todays goes beyond the competition itself. your school and this competition continue to promote international communication, and will help you to progress and to have more and more opportunities in your future life.i am so impressed with this successful speech competition and with this beautiful school that as the mother of a grade 6 primary student i wish that my daughter will have the opportunity to study here , so she can learn to speak english more fluently, just like you all.i always like to say that ”life is a journey”. language learning is a life long experience and we never finish learning, especially for the english language which is so alive and ever changing. so as you move forward with your language learning make sure you enjoy every moment of your journey.finally i would like to take this opportunity to wish all the contestants the best of luck and great success in your future. ---评委老师its terrific to see you dress formally and well prepared for the speech, and your poster is well doneas well.however, you need to make more eye contact with the audience and better speak with various tones and clear pronunciation. i have to say you are a bit stiff without proper body language, which is no good for impressing the audience and the jury. moreover, i really hope you can put more passion into the speech and try to eich it with more facial expression, then surely your speech would be fabulous.演讲中没有语法错误,尤其其中一个男孩讲的非常好,他演讲的开头很好,而且很幽默,演讲有激情,并且和观众有很好的眼神交流并且在演讲中有适当的肢体语言your grammar is ok. its worth mentioning that a boy gave a fantastic speech with an impressive beginning, furthermore, he was fairly humorous and enthusiastic throughout the speech, and he made good eye contact with the audience and used appropriate body language in the speech.【篇二:英语演讲比赛完整版点评】评委总结发言(表达感谢时用):good afternoon, excellent contestants,it?s my great pleasure to be here as a judge for this english speech competition. i think all contestants did a great job today, and i?d like to show my thanks to everyone who has contributed to organize the competition and has helped to make it a success. so let?s give a big round of applause to all of them. finally i would like to take this opportunity to wish all the contestants the best of luck and great success in your future.对选手整体水平的肯定:i have been really enjoying this contest thoroughly, especially because all the contestants have approached the topic from different perspectives. all speeches have been well researched, with good thoughts as well as interesting ideas. i am very pleased to see that most of you delivered your speech with good pronunciation, clear articulation, with good eye contact and a proper manner. ontop of all this you all have also demonstrated your remarkable analytical abilities. the importance of today goes beyond the competition itself. i always like to say that ”life is a journey”. language learning is a life long experience and we never finish learning, especially for the english language which is so alive and ever changing. so as you move forward with your language learning make sure you enjoy every moment of your journey.面对标新立异选手:you really have been very creative in trying to clear out your point. but this time, it was very clearly stated what would be required of you in the speech. therefore, it is very important to understand what is required of you and what is demanded of you in a competition.面对跑题选手(或主题不明确选手)in today?s competition, i think you are a little too hasty in your preparation for the speech. for instance, as your topic is “a word that changes the world” ,you ?d better show your point out straightly. otherwise how could you grab the audiences? attention to your speech. so next time, you just read carefully about the instructions before you start making a speech. and try to understand every word clearly and correctly.对不能及时切入主题的选手: i think the basic rules of communication are universal, and apply across languages and cultures. say what you mean, and say it in as clear, direct, and simple a manner as possible. and when you are talking or writing to someone from a different country, don?t be afraid to say the obvious thing first.面对发音不好的选手:i have to mention in this competition that you still need to improve your pronunciatione specially rhythm and sentence stress.you need to improve your vowels. it is still very important. i think that?s all i want to say. thank you very much for your speech.对表现好的选手i am very much impressed by the speech you have made. to compare with the speech of others, you really did a great job. i feel good about this. first of all, in your prepared speech, you are more to the point and your english is more natural. secondly, your point is very impressive. and you provide a lot of examples to support your speech.对即兴演讲的评论:talking about your impromptu speech, i think you are quite sensitive to answer questions.your answer is quite logical and i like it.对眼神交流/肢体语言把握好的选手:its worth metioning thatyou give us a fantastic speech with an impressive beginning, ending or the free talk. furthermore, you are enthusiastic throughout the speech. you made good eye contact with the audience and used appropriate body language in thespeech. .you made your speech more wonderful and more perfect with your body language. you looked cool!适时对选手提出的建议:we all know a language is a means and the purpose is communication. what really matters is the courage to come and participate in the contest. i should learn from all of you. however, there are still some problems and much room for improvement. i am going to put forward some suggestions on how to do better in the future.have you thought about this question: when you prepare a speech, there is something more important than language. what is it? it is idea. ideas come before the language. if you don?t know what to say, if you have no ideas, what is the useof the language? so, you must think, and think again and decide what you want to say and then organize your ideas. one point i want to emphasize is that you should have your own approach, your own original ideas. if you only borrow things from others or copy things from some ready materials or textbooks, your speech is bound to fail. in this contest we hear some expressions again and again. then, we know you have been borrowing things from the same source. to quote from one of the topics for impromptu speech: “imagination is more important than knowledge.” this is a quotation from einstein. if we want the world to move forward, we need imagination, and we need creativity.对即兴演讲的建议:when you prepare your impromptu speech, the most important thing is to be clear about the topic youhave chosen. if you miss the point, however fluent and expressive you are, you get a poor mark. for example, there is a topic: to err is human; to forgive is divine. when you choose this topic, you should know it means everybody makes mistakes, but if you are able to forgive other people?smistakes, then you are a better being. the emphasis is the second half. if you only talk about how to do your best to correct your mistakes, you miss the point. i feel this part is the most difficult part of the contest. you have to be quick for you don?t have much time to prepare; you have to be knowledgeable for you must understand the meaning of the topic properly.对选手提出更高要求:so, you must have realized the contest has become more demanding,. you need to have something more creative. and next year, you would be expected to be at a new and higher stage.【篇三:齐全的英语演讲比赛点评模板】there are several aspects of language and speaking that i would like to focus on today for considerations to allow you to improve moving forward.first, the area of pronunciation and delivery. some of you, especially when you are nervous, should focus more ondiction and pronunciation. specifically, try not to swallow your articles like a and the or little connectors like of take a breath, take your time. and let each word be sounded. similarly, make sure you sound final consonants, especially the -ed in your past tenses. this is one of the things that chinese, even the good ones, the really good ones, when you start speaking quickly and passionately, forget. so, pay a lot of attention and be conscious that thats something that you may know that the grammars, grammatical and structural rules and not soundthat final consonant or you may be a little fuzzy on what the past tenses, but that some- thing that makes a big difference in a competition,finally, in the area of pronunciation for all you students, not just the contestants here today, please, the word the, th-: put your tongue between your teeth. its not da, its the; its not der. its their; its not utter. its other. you can do this, you can do this, practice on the way to class, practice in the shower, practice wherever but dont say da, its the.second category of feedback is i want to talk very brieflyabout lexicon and vocabulary. as i mentioned, i felt that your use of lexicon in todays presentation was quite sophisticated and showed a lot of preparation. most of you may have noticedthat in the contemporaneous, spontaneous remarks and questions, the level of vocabulary came down a notch or two. thats very natural: some- thing that we all have to work on. but there were a couple of i think. theres three examples that id like to share with you to take home to work on. number one, since the topic was ecology, when you talk about living in harmony with da za ren, is it the nature or nature? nature! is not the nature! the nature is shena shenma dongxi de xingzhi, so, that was like one of those errors that. umm, came up because of the theme of the speech, but thats something you can remember right now, live in harmony with...nature. second, some small things that i noted, some of you messed up emphasized with emphasis---its a common mistake. and one of the contestantswas talking about how important it was to be aware of the environment and that we should generate awareness of environment to help us think of ways to improve it, and she, i think it was she, said we should get a consensus of the environment, i think she probably meant sense.get a sense of the environment as an awareness. so, little things like that. be careful semantically. if you reach the upper levels of language, its very easy to choose a wrong word and i guess my advice for you would be, when in doubt, check a dictionary for nuance and proper usage. because when youre in the lower levels youre not using those fancy words. but when you get up in the upper levels, like today, theyre very important.finally, my last category of feedback for you is in the area of discourse and organization. this is very important in speaking contests, its very important when youre translating at the upper levels, and its important in adult life when youre working in the world of work where youre no longer talking simply about yourself and your family, but other things, issues. todays contestants demonstrated a wide variety of rhetorical styles in their prepared speeches. many of the candidates showed a sophisticated use of linguistic register, and register is, as you know. using language that is appropriate for a specific purpose for a specific social context. the reason l mention register is that for learners of english as a second language, the higher the register, the more difficult it is to speak accurately, coherently, and persuasively. right? so,today, one of the contestants made a very insightful remark and said, i quote, the higher level of english i speak, the more mistakes i make. remember that? actually. what she meant by this was that she was having trouble communicating sophisticated ideas and arguments in english without making errors in grammar or usage. university students learning english can improve their ability to speak naturally in high registers and high level of discourse and can sustain a high level of discourse by doing a few things and these are the three pieces of advice i will leave for you before i conclude my remarks. so, this is advice teachers and students for how to build that competency and high level of discourse.number one: read texts that represent a high level of discourse. soak up that language. but, remember that written text has a discourse that is separate from spokendiscourse. some of you were speaking today in very. kind of written-prose language, and you may not want to do that in the future.number two, piece of advice: make a tape recording of yourself talking about abstract topics or complex topics and then go back and listen to it and listen to how it sounds: if its cohesive and coherent? are there errors? then go back, practice again, and do it a second time like editing a written text but, in fact, its a spoken text. you will hear what youre doing that could be improved, even you, and of course if you have teachers, thats even better, but you, yourself will hear.in conclusion, i would like to quote one of our question masters, who said today that, life is a journey, not the arrival. that you focus on the journey not the arrival. language learning is lifelong. lifelong. so, as you move forward, language learning enjoy the journey.评委总结发言(表达感谢时用):good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, excellent contestants,its really a greathonorandpleasure to be here as a judge for this english feast of speech competition. i think all contestants did a great job today, and i?d like to express my thanks to everyone who has made a great contribution to organizing the competition and has made it a fantastic success. so let?s give a big round of applause to all of them. i have been really enjoying this contest thoroughly, especially because all the contestantshave approached the topic from different perspectives. all speeches have been well researched, with good thoughts as well as interesting ideas. i am very pleased to see that most of you delivered your speech with good pronunciation, clear articulation, with good eye contact and a proper manner. finally i would like to take this opportunity to offer you some little tips about public english speech competition. first, the area of pronunciation and delivery. some of you, especially when you are nervous, should focus more on diction and pronunciation. specifically, try not to swallow your articles like a and the or little connectors like of take a breath, take your time. and let each word be sounded. similarly, make sure you sound final consonants, especially the -ed in your past tenses. this is one of the things that chinese, even the good ones, the really good ones, when you start speaking quickly and passionately, forget. so, what i here want to suggest to those contestants, when you preparing your speech, whatever the prepared speech and the impromptu speech, do not just focus on the whole picture of your work, instead pay a attention to the small details, as well as the intonation.on top of that, i would like to speak with those who always get somewhat a little bit nervous once they stand on the stage to deliver a public speech.speaking of this, i would like to share with you a little bit about myself. when i was at my high school and i often blushed on my face when i stand even in the front our class, let alone the city competition later on. and one of my foreign teachers give my some tips. that?s what i want to share with you right now. when you feel nervous, especially before get on the stage, take a deep breath and tell yourself in your heart that i am the best in the whole universe. then, by the time you speak, what you should bear in mind is thatdon?t ever get direct contact with same part area of audience all the time. remember you are here to serve the whole listeners with your point of view, so change your eyesight to different audience.i always like to say that ”lifeis a journey”. language learning is a life long experience and we never finish learning,especially for the english language which is so alive and ever changing. so as you move forward with your language learning make sure you enjoy every moment of your journey.面对标新立异选手:you really have been very creative in trying to clear out your point. but this time, it was very clearly stated what would be required of you in the speech. therefore, it is very important to understand what is required of you and what is demanded of you in a competition.面对跑题选手(或主题不明确选手)in today?s competition, i think you are a little too hasty in your preparation for the speech. for instance, as your topic is “a word that changes the world” ,you ?d better show your point out straightly. o therwise how could you grab the audiences? attention to your speech. so next time, you just read carefully about the instructions before you start making a speech. and try to understand every word clearly and correctly.对不能及时切入主题的选手: i think the basic rules of communication are universal,and apply across languages and cultures. say what you mean, and say it in as clear, direct, and simple a manner as possible. and when you are talking or writing to someone from a different country, don?t be afraid to say the obvious thing first.。
点评别人英语演讲的评语
点评别人英语演讲的评语以下是一些点评别人英语演讲的评语:1. The presentation was well-精心准备, engaging, and well-written.(演讲内容充分,有趣,语言流畅优美。
)2. The audience was clearly satisfied with the content and presentation.(听众对内容和演讲表现满意。
)3. The speaker清晰、流畅地表达了他/她的观点, with correct grammar and pronunciation.(演讲语言正确、发音清晰,表达流畅。
)4. The speaker gave a lot of examples to support his/her argument, which helped to make the presentation more engaging. (演讲举例丰富,支持观点,使演讲更有吸引力。
)5. The speaker was able to connect the ideas in his/her presentation with real-life examples, which made the topic more relevant.(演讲将课程内容与实际例子相结合,使主题更相关。
)6. The speaker was confident and engaging in his/her voice and presentation.(演讲自信、有趣,声音和表现有吸引力。
)7. The language used was appropriate for the topic andaudience, which made the presentation more comfortable for everyone.(使用的语言适合主题和听众,使演讲更舒适所有人。
英文演讲比赛评委英文评语
英文演讲比赛评委英文评语求英文歌唱比赛评委常用英文评语The sound is nice.你的声音很美。
You're good,but please loudly.你很棒,但是请大声点。
The song is very good.这首歌挑选的不错。
I think that the song has a little quickly,but you did't sing like that quickly。
这首歌比较快,但是你没有唱的那么快。
老师,请问一下,英语演讲比赛评委老师都注重从哪些方面去评价but as long as your aerials are up,to用英语描述英语演讲比赛结束,如何评价自己与他人的表现评价自己与他人的表现Evaluate yourself and others演讲比赛评语要怎么讲首先要讲讲对他们演讲的大体感觉怎么样(尽量往好处去讲)接着提出特别让你欣赏的一点(或几点)比如:XXX的声音很清脆,朗读非常流利(偶只是打比方而已)最后,要讲出缺点(如果你觉得完美就不用了),句末加上一句:“如果你XXXXXX(怎么怎么样)就更是锦上添花了(或十全十美等)”急需评委的点评语可以是常用的一些话~ 评价演讲者的但必须是英文~~谢谢大家了帮个忙~~your pronunciation is very clear and comfortable.but you can be relax,don't be so nervous.although there are some small mistakes in your prensentation,generally speaking,i appreciate your opinon.(绝对原创,希望采纳)对英语演讲的点评It's terrific to see you dress formally and well prepared for the speech,and your poster is well done as well.however,you need to make eye contact with the audience and better speak with various tones and clear pronunciation.I have to say you are a bit stiff without proper body language,which is no good for impressing the audience and the jury.Moreover,I really hope you can put passion into the speech and try to enrich it with facial expression,then surely your speech would be fabulous.演讲中没有语法错误,尤其其中一个男孩讲的非常好,他演讲的开头很好,而且很幽默,演讲有激情,并且和观众有很好的眼神交流并且在演讲中有适当的肢体语言your grammar is ok.It's worth mentioning that a boy gave a fantastic speech with an impressive beginning,furthermore,he was fairly humorous and enthusiastic throughout the speech,and he made good eye contact with the audience and used appropriate body language in the speech.可以了e799bee5baa6e78988e69d8331333236396430吧适当再加分吧很辛苦的求英语辩论评委评语英文版辩论的内容呢不能只有题目就评论的啊英语课赛评委发言稿尊敬的各位领导、亲爱的各位同学:大家好我叫XX,现任高一(15)班副班长,校团委宣传部长。
英语演讲比赛点评模板
There are several aspects of language and speaking that I would like to focus on today for considerations to allow you to improve moving forward.First, the area of pronunciation and delivery. Some of you, especially when you are nervous, should focus more on diction and pronunciation. Specifically, try not to swallow your articles like "a" and "the" or little connectors like "of" Take a breath, take your time. and let each word be sounded. Similarly, make sure you sound final consonants, especially the "-ed" in your past tenses. This is one of the things that Chinese, even the good ones, the really good ones, when you start speaking quickly and passionately, forget. So, pay a lot of attention and be conscious that that's something that you may know that the grammars, grammatical and structural rules and not sound that final consonant or you may be a little fuzzy on what the past tenses, but that some- thing that makes a big difference in a competition,Finally, in the area of pronunciation for all you students, not just the contestants here today, please, the word "the", th-: put your tongue between your teeth. It's not "da," it's "the"; it's not "der." it's "their"; it's not "utter." it's "other." You can do this, you can do this, Practice on the way to class, practice in the shower, practice wherever but don't say "da," it's "the."Second category of feedback is I want to talk very briefly about lexicon and vocabulary. As I mentioned, I felt that your use of lexicon in today's presentation was quite sophisticated and showed a lot of preparation. Most of you may have noticed that in the contemporaneous, spontaneous remarks and questions, the level of vocabulary came down a notch or two. That's very natural: some- thing that we all have to work on.But there were a couple of I think. there's three examples that I'd like to share with you to take home to work on. Number one, since the topic was ecology, when you talk about living in harmony with da za ren, is it "the nature" or "nature'? Nature! I's not "the nature"! "The nature" is shenrna shenma dongxi de xingzhi, so, that was like one of those errors that. umm, came up because of the theme of the speech, but that's something you can remember right now, "Live in harmony with...nature."' Second, some small things that I noted, some of you messed up "emphasized" with "emphasis"---it's a common mistake. And one of the contestants was talking about how important it was to be aware of the environment and that we should generate awareness of environment to help us think of ways to improve it, and she, I think it was she, said "we should get a consensus of the environment," I think she probably meant "sense." "get a sense of the environment" as an awareness. So, little things like that. Be careful semantically. If you reach the upper levels of language, it's very easy to choose a wrong word and I guess my advice for you would be, "When in doubt, check a dictionary for nuance and proper usage." because when you're in the lower levels you're not using those fancy words. But when you get up in the upper levels, like today, they're very important.Finally, my last category of feedback for you is in the area of discourse and organization. This is very important in speaking contests, it's very important when you're translating at the upper levels, and it's important in adult life when you're working in the world of work where you're no longer talking simply about yourself and your family, but other things, issues. Today's contestants demonstrated a wide variety of rhetorical styles in their prepared speeches. Many of the candidates showed a sophisticated use oflinguistic register, and register is, as you know. using language that is appropriate for a specific purpose for a specific social context. The reason l mention register is that for learners of English as a second language, the higher the register, the more difficult it is to speak accurately, coherently, and persuasively. Right? So, today, one of the contestants made a very insightful remark and said, I quote, "The higher level of English I speak, the more mistakes I make." Remember that'? Actually. What she meant by this was that she was having trouble communicating sophisticated ideas and arguments in English without making errors in grammar or usage. University students learning English can improve their ability to speak naturally in high registers and high level of discourse and can sustain a high level of discourse by doing a few things and these are the three pieces of advice I will leave for you before I conclude my remarks. So, this is advice teachers and students for how to build that competency and high level of discourse.Number one: Read texts that represent a high level of discourse. Soak up that language. But, remember that written text has a discourse that is separate from spoken discourse. Some of you were speaking today in very. kind of written-prose language, and you may not want to do that in the future.Number two, piece of advice: Make a tape recording of yourself talking about abstract topics or complex topics and then go back and listen to it and listen to how it sounds: if it's cohesive and coherent'? Are there errors? Then go back, practice again, and do it a second time like editing a written text but, in fact, it's a spoken text. You will hear what you're doing that could be improved, even you, and of course if you have teachers, that's even better, but you, yourself will hear.Finally, my last piece of advice for you is that you should practice building. If language, if spoken language, was like a house you should practice building the house brick by brick, storey by storey, so you all can do basic sentences now, clearly. And, most of you are pretty good at building paragraphs, but some of you are not yet perfect house builders in terms of discourse and organization. So you want to practice writing compound and complex sentences, and then weave those together into paragraphs and you'll weave those paragraphs into the full spoken text. Weave them together, push yourself to go for the discourse and woven nature so that not only the thought flows, but it's coherent. And. I think you'll agree with me, that some of the most compelling speeches that we heard today displayed this type coherence and sort of natural progression of ideas, lf you do that, there's no doubt in my mind that you can progress at this area.In conclusion, I would like to quote one of our question masters, who said today that, "Life is a journey, not the arrival." that you focus on the journey not the arrival. Language learning is lifelong. Lifelong. So, as you move forward, language learning enjoy the journey.评委总结发言(表达感谢时用):Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, excellent contestants,its really a great honor and pleasure to be here as a judge for this English feast of speech competition. I think all contestants did a great job today, and I’d like to express my thanks to everyone who hasMade a great contribution to organizing the competition and has made it a fantastic success. So let’s give a big round of applause to all of them. I have been really enjoying this contest thoroughly, especially because all the contestants have approached the topic from different perspectives. All speeches have been well researched, with good thoughts as well as interesting ideas. I am very pleased to see that most of you delivered your speech with good pronunciation, clear articulation, with good eye contact and a proper manner. Finally I would like to take this opportunity to offer you some little tips about public English speech competition.First, the area of pronunciation and delivery. Some of you, especially when you are nervous, should focus more on diction and pronunciation. Specifically, try not to swallow your articles like "a" and "the" or little connectors like "of" Take a breath, take your time. and let each word be sounded. Similarly, make sure you sound final consonants, especially the "-ed" in your past tenses. This is one of the things that Chinese, even the good ones, the really good ones, when you start speaking quickly and passionately, forget. So, what I here want to suggest to those contestants, when you preparing your speech, whatever the prepared speech and the impromptu speech, do not just focus on the whole picture of your work, instead pay a attention to the small details, as well as theintonation.On top of that, I would like to speak with those who always get somewhat a little bit nervous once they stand on the stage to deliver a public speech. Speaking of this, I would like to share with you a little bit about myself. When I was at my high school and I often blushed on my face when I stand even in the front our class, let alone the city competition later on. And one of my foreign teachers give my some tips. That’s what I want to share with you right now. when you feel nervous, especially before get on the stage, take a deep breath and tell yourself in your heart that I am the best in the whole universe. Then, by the time you speak, what you should bear in mind is that don’t ever get direct contact with same part area of audience all the time. Remember you are here to serve the whole listeners with your point of view, so change your eyesight to different audience.I always like to sa y that ”Lifeis a journey”. Language learning is a life long experience and we never finish learning, especially for the English language which is so alive and ever changing. So as you move forward with your language learning make sure you enjoy every moment of your journey.面对标新立异选手:You really have been very creative in trying to clear out your point. But this time, it was very clearly stated what would be required of you in the speech. Therefore, it is very important to understand what is required of you and what is demanded of you in a competition.面对跑题选手(或主题不明确选手)In today’s competition, I think you are a littletoo hasty in your preparation for the speech. For instance, as y our topic is “a word that changes the world” ,you ‘d better show your point out straightly. Otherwise how could you grab the audiences’ attention to your speech. So next time, you just read carefully about the instructions before you start making a speech. And try to understand every word clearly and correctly.对不能及时切入主题的选手:I think the basic rules of communication are universal, and apply across languages and cultures. Say what you mean, and say it in as clear, direct, and simple a manner as possible. And when you are talking or writing to someone from a different country, don’t be afraid to say the obvious thing first.面对发音不好的选手:I have to mention in this competition that you still need to improve your pronunciatione specially rhythm and sentence stress.You need to improve your vowels. It is still very important. I think that’s all I want to say. Thank you very much for your speech.对表现好的选手I am very much impressed by the speech you have made. T o compare with the speech of others, you really did a great job. I feel good about this. First of all, in your prepared speech, you are more to the point and your English is more natural. Secondly, your point is very impressive. And you provide a lot ofexamples to support your speech.对即兴演讲的评论:Talking about your impromptu speech, I think you are quite sensitive to answer questions.Your answer is quite logical and I like it.对眼神交流/肢体语言把握好的选手:It's worth metioning that you give us a fantastic speech with an impressive beginning, ending or the free talk. Furthermore, you are enthusiastic throughout the speech. You made good eye contact with the audience and used appropriate body language in the speech. .You made your speech more wonderful and more perfect with your body language. You looked cool!适时对选手提出的建议:We all know a language is a means and the purpose is communication. What really matters is the courage to come and participate in the contest. I should learn from all of you. However, there are still some problems and much room for improvement. I am going to put forward some suggestions on how to do better in the future.Have you thought about this question: When you prepare a speech, there is something more important than language. What is it? It is idea. Ideas come before the language. If you don’t know what to say, if you have no ideas, what is the use of the language? So, you must think, and think again and decide what you want to say and then organize your ideas. One point I want to emphasize is that you should have your own approach, your own original ideas. If you only borrow things from others or copy things from some ready materials or textbooks, your speech is bound to fail. In this contest we hear some expressions again and again. Then, we know you have been borrowing things from the same source. To quote from one of the topics for impromptu speech: “Imagination is more important than knowledge.” This is a quotation from Einstein. If we want the world to move forward, we need imagination, and we need creativity.对即兴演讲的建议:When you prepare your impromptu speech, the most important thing is to be clear about the topic you have chosen. If you miss the point, however fluent and expressive you are, you get a poor mark. For example, there is a topic: T o err is human; to forgive is divine. When you choose this topic, you should know it means everybody makes mistakes, but if you are able to forgive other people’s mistakes, then you are a better being. The emphasis is the second half. If you only talkabout how to do your best to correct your mistakes, you miss the point. I feel this part is the most difficult part of the contest. You have to be quick for you don’t have much time to prepare; you have to be knowledgeable for you must understand the meaning of the topic properly.对选手提出更高要求:So, you must have realized the contest has become more demanding,. You need to have something more creative. And next year, you would be expected to be at a new and higher stage.I am sure everyone would like to join with me in saying that the Organizing Committee has chosen a very good theme for the prepared speech, that is, “Does one plus one equal two?” which is very thought provoking and leaves plenty of room for your imagination. As I said at the very beginning, we have been enjoying the contest thoroughly and tremendously because, the 92 contestants approached the theme from different perspectives, well researched, with good thoughts as well as interesting ideas. And we are very pleased to see, most of you delivered your speech with good pronunciation, clear articulation, with good eye contact and a proper manner. You have also demonstrated your remarkable analytical ability. But there is one thing I would liketo mention. With a little bit more sense of humor, you might have entertained your audience more。
