英语记叙文的写作解析

例文– A traffic accident中心段赏析
It was about 7:00 on Friday morning, (Oct. 31st). （补充说明时间）I was walking through the pedestrian overpass near my school when I was shocked by the screech of a car. （事情的起因）I saw a man knocked down by a black car. Soon many cars were jammed there. I got there and found that beside a black Benz lay a middle-aged man in a pool of blood. （交代一些细节）The street turned chaotic.（事情的大致经过）After a moment, the police and an ambulance arrived. The victim was instantly sent to the hospital.（事情的结果）
记叙文常用句式——首段：交代主题
补充交代时间 The event took place/happened/occurred in the early morning. The whole story happened the (first) day I entered the senior high school.
记叙文常用句式——主体部分：
（二）人物外貌和性格的描写 He is of medium height. He is good-looking/ordinary-looking. She is plump/slim, with fair skin and curly hair. He looks handsome in a sports suit/blue jeans. He is of mild/bad temper. At first glance, you would say he is the perfect image of an obedient boy, but deep down, he is not that way at all.
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例文– A traffic accident
首段：首段概括交代事件发生的时间、地点、人 物等信息 A week ago, I witnessed a traffic accident in a rainy day on my way to school, which still sticks in my mind.
注意空间的移动：I got there…
例文– A traffic accident结尾段赏析
结尾段：可适当发表一点议论 In my opinion, the pedestrian should have taken the overpass when crossing the street. Besides, the driver might have driven too fast, regardless of such bad weather. Anyway, I believe accidents may be avoided if we become aware of the importance of safety.（结尾）
范文一
Last year, a terrible flu spread across the whole school. One of my classmate, John/Jane Doe, became a victim of it. He/She ran a high fever, and ordinary medicine didn’t work on him. The news quickly reached everybody in our class. Some classmates recorded the English lessons for him so that he/she could keep up with his/her studies. Our English teacher called on him/her at the weekends sometimes. With care and help, he/she was soon able to be up and about and finally came back to the class. From this event, I learn two things. One is that with love, no illness or difficulty is terrible. The other is that love and help are two-way streets. Our classmates offered John/Jane Doe kind help partly because he/she himself/herself had always been a helpful person. So I realize that when we help others, we are helping ourselves.
例文– A traffic accident
中心段：交待细节，注重在how; 交待细节时应注意的事项？ 过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。
中心段细节描写练习
请找出下文与主题无关的细节
An accident This afternoon I went out in the country to see my grandparents. After I got out there I decided to take a short drive. I drove down to East Greenwich, which is about eight miles from Centreville. While coming home I was obliged to follow the railroad for a mile or two. When I had gone about half a mile I heard a terrible whistling ahead of me. On coming near to where the sound came from, I discovered that an express train had run into the rear end of a freight train. Fortunately no one was seriously hurt, although I heard on man say that he never got shaken up so badly in his life before. The engine of the express train was somewhat disabled, as the cow-catcher was broken and the head-light and the smoke-stack were knocked off. No one seemed to know the cause of the accident.
练习一
The Day My Classmate Fell Ill １）简单描述这位同学的生病情况； ２）同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的； ３）人与人之间的这种互相关爱给我的感受 是……
词汇拓展






扭伤 twist one’s ankle / give a wrench to one’s ankle / sprain one’s ankle one’s sprained ankle 喉咙疼痛 have a sore throat 痛苦的表情 an expression of pain Her face was contorted with pain. 她痛 得脸都变了样。 量体温 take one’s temperature 轮流照顾某人 take care of sb. by turns / take turns at caring sb. 发高烧 have/run a high fever 健康状况 health / condition 请假 ask for a (sick) leave / ask for a four-day leave / be on sick leave
记叙文常用句式——主体部分：
（三）物体的描写 It comes in a variety of colors/shapes. It consists of several integrated parts. It is shaped like a circle. It is flat in shape and small in size. Attached to the bottom is…
记叙文常用句式——主体部分：
（一）作者心理活动的描写 I could hardly believe my eyes. I felt as if I were on top of the world. I was completely shocked. I was bursting with joy.
记叙文常用句式——首段：交代主题





It was the most exciting moment that I have ever experienced. All through my senior high school, I couldn’t forget … In the years that followed the event frequently floated in my mind/often recurred to my memory/kept haunting me. Last week, when I was on my way home something terrible happened. I quickly turned around, just in time to see the whole process of the accident.
记叙文常用句式——主体部分：
（四）景物的描写 There is a wonderful array of flowers along the street. The air is filled with the scent of roses. The trees stood there on guard for generations, with branches reaching out like a canopy over the road. I feel miserably insignificant approaching the mountain. Even judging by modern standards, the town was large in population. The campus has a unique atmosphere.
记叙文



记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历，以 写人、叙事为主要内容。它可以包括历史， 游记，报道，回忆，故事，琐事等。 这样的文章也要有中心。一般从第一或第三 人称角度出发，表达自己或他人的经历或感 受，使读者对事情十分明了以获得强烈感受。 记叙文通常以一般过去时为主，根据上下文 用各种时态。
例文– A traffic accident
中心段：交待细节，注重在how; 交待细节时应注意的事项？ 过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。 因此，在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切 相关的内容，从而点明文章中心。 从首段也可看出 文章重点在traffic accident和stick in my mind
记叙文写作的注意事项
一、交代背景 文章的开头应概括地介绍事件发生的 时间、地点、人物以及事件等 二、详略得当 过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。 因此，在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切相关 的内容，从而点明文章中心。 三、条理清晰 记叙文一般按照时间顺序或空间顺序来描述， 要求层次清晰、条理清楚。