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a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
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theirtnoepstiscinsterneetseonrcheoles in the rocks. Other
species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…
表 列 举： for example / instance, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words, as follows
表 总 结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,
Concluding paragraph
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
Topic ement
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
Supporting Paragraphs (Body) Paragraphs
TS Firstly, ...
SS Secondly, ...
SS Moreover, ... SS Finally, . . . However, ...
SS
In addition, … Furthermore, ...
A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.
species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…
表 列 举： for example / instance, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words, as follows
表 总 结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,
Concluding paragraph
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
Topic ement
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
Supporting Paragraphs (Body) Paragraphs
TS Firstly, ...
SS Secondly, ...
SS Moreover, ... SS Finally, . . . However, ...
SS
In addition, … Furthermore, ...
A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.
高考英语写作公开课课件(共25张PPT)
Step3. Combining the sentences into a passage
【连句成篇】 Dear Editor, I’ve read your discussions on how to behave properly when travelling abroad. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation, while they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely ,which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic. In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs, Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others, Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries, more importantly, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, so we need to be cautious about how we act, only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well. yours, LiHua
高中英语写作课教学ppt课件
有人认为，自行车在不久的将来会再次成为 人们的新宠，对此你持何种态度，为什么？请利用 今天所学的表达形式写一篇120—150词的短文。
LOGO
Many people think that the bike will soon become people’s favorite once again. As to this, I can’t agree more.
2. There are several reasons accounting for the phenomenon reflected in the picture.
3. A number of factors account for the phenomenon reflected in the picture.
LOGO
❖Traveling can do us a lot of good,
which can be listed as follows. First of all, it helps us know the world better，
and it can broaden our horizons as well．In addition, it makes it possible
Firstly, they are affordable for most people and convenient to park． Secondly， being eco-friendly, they bring no environmental problem．Thirdly, unlike cars, they almost cause no traffic problems. Last but not least，
LOGO
Many people think that the bike will soon become people’s favorite once again. As to this, I can’t agree more.
2. There are several reasons accounting for the phenomenon reflected in the picture.
3. A number of factors account for the phenomenon reflected in the picture.
LOGO
❖Traveling can do us a lot of good,
which can be listed as follows. First of all, it helps us know the world better，
and it can broaden our horizons as well．In addition, it makes it possible
Firstly, they are affordable for most people and convenient to park． Secondly， being eco-friendly, they bring no environmental problem．Thirdly, unlike cars, they almost cause no traffic problems. Last but not least，
高二英语写作公开课ppt课件
is
take
10
List main points and key words
书面表达：
假设你是李华，我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在德江二中就读的
你的朋友Linda写一封电子邮件，我邀校请她一起参加。下内周容五包括： 1. 介绍比 问你 对语打 方幽算 的默参 意故加 向事的 。大原赛因；
Yours, Li Hua
Body Ending
14
Structure of an invitation 邀请信结构
Para.1 (beginning)
writing purpose 介绍比赛的相关内容
Para.2 (body)
reasons 说明你打算参加的原因
Para.3 (ending)
expectation\reply 表达愿望(希望对方接受邀请)
3. I would appreciate it very much if you could accept my invitationn.
16
Thinking
Step 1 发散思维，扩充内容 （enrich contents） attention:when\ where\ who\ what\ why\ how
Para.1 介绍比赛的相关内容（5W\1H)
我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。
when: next friday where: our school) who: all students who love English what: Telling English story why: (to improve spoken English
8
书面表达失分表现
9 ;.
take
10
List main points and key words
书面表达：
假设你是李华，我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在德江二中就读的
你的朋友Linda写一封电子邮件，我邀校请她一起参加。下内周容五包括： 1. 介绍比 问你 对语打 方幽算 的默参 意故加 向事的 。大原赛因；
Yours, Li Hua
Body Ending
14
Structure of an invitation 邀请信结构
Para.1 (beginning)
writing purpose 介绍比赛的相关内容
Para.2 (body)
reasons 说明你打算参加的原因
Para.3 (ending)
expectation\reply 表达愿望(希望对方接受邀请)
3. I would appreciate it very much if you could accept my invitationn.
16
Thinking
Step 1 发散思维，扩充内容 （enrich contents） attention:when\ where\ who\ what\ why\ how
Para.1 介绍比赛的相关内容（5W\1H)
我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。
when: next friday where: our school) who: all students who love English what: Telling English story why: (to improve spoken English
8
书面表达失分表现
9 ;.
高中英语写作公开课(共61张PPT)
The woman I admire most
Mother Teresa is my favorite women. She is of middle height and she is beautiful . She comes from Macedonia. She lived from 1910.8.26 to 1997.9.5. when she was young,she learned religion. She’s warm- hearted.
My father bought me a car.
第四种句型：S+V+O+C(补充说明宾语的状态）
I will make you happy. I want her to come. We should keep the classroom clean. She heard him singing.
表示选择关系的并列句
常用的连词有or , either…or…..，otherwise, or else(否则）, 等连接.如：
Either you are mad or I am. You must go early, otherwise you will miss the bus.
Will he still be there or will he have gone away? Take this bus or else you won’t get there in time.
After the students were all in the chemistry lab, the teacher brought out three bottles.
Corn is a very useful plant that can be prepared in many different ways.
高中英语公开课课件高三概要写作课(共11张PPT)
But too much sugar can cause health Para2 problems like obesity and tooth disease.
The American and British governments are taking measures to reduce the intake of Para3 sugar by taxing sugary products. It is based on a successful study of taxing Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
I didn’t know the answer.
I looked in reference books.
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
My
I gave him the answer. More answers came and I grew up
Story
Her best-seller grammar book was born.
taking measures to reduceEtfhfeecitnstoafkethoef
Para3 sugar by taxing sugary prmodeuacstusr.es
Para4
It is based on a successful study of taxing
Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
Understanding and Using English Grammar
(10 million book sales)
Summary !
Interconnection between paragraphs
The American and British governments are taking measures to reduce the intake of Para3 sugar by taxing sugary products. It is based on a successful study of taxing Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
I didn’t know the answer.
I looked in reference books.
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
My
I gave him the answer. More answers came and I grew up
Story
Her best-seller grammar book was born.
taking measures to reduceEtfhfeecitnstoafkethoef
Para3 sugar by taxing sugary prmodeuacstusr.es
Para4
It is based on a successful study of taxing
Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
Understanding and Using English Grammar
(10 million book sales)
Summary !
Interconnection between paragraphs
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
PPT内容要精炼简洁，避免冗长繁琐。
文字要简短明了，避免使用大段文 字。
字体大小要适中，避免过小或过大。
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
使用关键词或短语，突出重点信息。
字体颜色要与背景色形成对比，避 免看不清。
感谢您的耐心观看
汇报人：
针对不同文体进行写作技巧讲解
记叙文：注意叙事顺序，情节曲折，人物塑造 议论文：论点明确，论据充分，论证严密 说明文：抓住事物特征，条理清晰，语言准确 应用文：格式规范，语言得体，内容符合要求
分析经典英文写作范文，提炼写作技巧
逐句分析，提炼句式、词汇 和表达方式
总结范文写作技巧，引导学 生掌握写作要领
字体大小适中，颜色搭配合理
字体大小：根据幻灯片布局和观众距离调整，确保清晰易读 字体颜色：与背景色形成对比，突出重点内容，避免使用刺眼颜色 文字排版：遵循简洁明了原则，避免文字堆积和混乱布局 文字数量：精简文字内容，突出重点，避免过多文字干扰观众理解
图文并茂，增强视觉效果
文字与图片结合，增加视觉冲击力 图片选择要符合主题，清晰度高 图片与文字排版要简洁明了，易于理解 色彩搭配要合理，避免过于花哨或单调
课堂总结与作业布置
总结本节课所学内容及重点难点
回顾本节课所学的 单词和短语。
复习本节课所学的 语法和句型。
强调本节课的重点 和难点。
总结本节课所学的 写作技巧和方法。
布置课后作业及要求
作业内容：根据本节课所学内容，写一篇80-100词的英语作文。 作业要求：认真审题，结合本节课所学知识，注意语法和单词的拼写，书写工整。 上交时间：下节课上课前提交，逾期不候。 奖励机制：对完成出色的同学进行表扬和奖励。
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❖ B. Given the chance, I will try my best .
❖
❖ Tip 4分词结构不能少 ❖ 口诀：一去，二看，三改。 ❖ 一去：去连词； ❖ 二看：看主语； ❖ 三改：改分词。 ❖ 1.童年的纸飞机 现在终于飞回我手里,带来甜蜜的回
忆
❖ Back flies the paper-airplane abnrdinitgbirninggs me
11
❖ Group 3
❖ A. We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.
❖ B. At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days.
19
❖ It _____me smile. ❖ Those _____ such happy times and not
so long ago. ❖ How I wondered where they ________. ❖ But they're back again just like a long
watching television.
9
❖ Group 2
❖ A. This village built a school in 2008.
❖ B. Not until 2008 did this village begin to have its own school.
❖ Tip 2 陈述不如倒装妙 ❖ Eg. 我从来不买日货
the fragrant memory of my childhood.
13
❖ Tips to beautify your sentence ❖ 1.高分词汇是首要 ❖ 2. 陈述不如倒装妙 ❖ 3. 主动不如被动巧 ❖ 4.分词结构不能少
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Task I Rewrite the sentences
and developed into a sport only in the late 19th
century.( 用分词结构) （08广东）
16
❖ 1. In order to achieve this goal, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places.
❖ Tip 3 主动不如被动巧 ❖ Eg.最近学校就“谁是你的偶像”进行了一
次调查。（07广东）
❖ Recently a survey has been done on “ Who is you idol?” in our school .
12
❖ Group 4
❖ A. If I am given the chance , I will try my best .
❖ A.I will never buy any products made in Japan.
❖ B. Never will I buy any products made in Japan.
❖
10
❖ 天空中繁星点点 . ❖ In the sky hang little stars. ❖ 河岸上有很多花 . ❖ On the bank grow lots of flowers.
lost friend.
3
❖ When I was young I_l_is_t_e_n_e_d_ (listen) to the radio waiting for my favorite songs. When they _p_la_y_e_d_(play) I'd sing along.
❖ It _m__ad__e_(make) me smile. Those _w_e_r_e_(be) such happy times and not so long ago. How I wondered where they _h_a_d__g_o_n_e___(go).
❖ 3.The survey shows that half of the girls choose
film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys choose sports stars. （06广东）
❖ 4．Shooting was originated as a means of survival
Beautify your sentences (闪亮你的句子）
1
步骤
❖1.好句赏析 ❖2.技巧指导 ❖3.巩固提高
2
Enjoy a song
❖ When I was young I________ to the radio waiting for my favorite songs. When they ______ I'd sing along.
avoid overuse of their eyes ❖ 2. 近视原因很复杂没有哪一种药物能治愈
近视。 （09广东） ❖ So complicated are the causes of short-
sightedness that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.
❖ But they're back again just like a long lost friend.
4
❖ 思考： ❖ What is a beautiful sentence?
❖ Translation
❖ 郭靖是个爷们。他智商不太高。他娶了IQ很高 的黄蓉做媳妇。黄是桃花岛集团（THD Group） 总裁黄药师的女儿。
❖ 4. Shooting, originated as a means of survival ,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.
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❖ Task 2 Translation ❖ 1.他建议学生不要过度用眼（09广东） ❖ He suggested that school children
❖ Guo Jing is a man. He is not very clever. He married Huan Rong with a very high IQ. Huang is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of TaoHuaDao Group . ❖Guo Jing, a not very intelligent man, married a girl named Huang Rong with an extremely high IQ, who is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of THD Group.6
❖ Tip 1 高分词汇是首要
❖ 高分词汇原则
❖ 1.后、高、长（后学的、较高级、较长词汇）
❖ good
❖ very
❖ 2.词组优先
❖ try to do
8
❖ 3.避免重复 ❖ A. I like reading while my brother likes
watching television. ❖ B. I like reading while my brother enjoys
18
❖ 3. 1968年第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 （08广东）
❖ Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968.
❖ 4. 约5. 4亿人受二手烟影响，死亡人数超过 10万／年 。（10广东）
❖ Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke, causing 100,000 deaths a year.
❖ 2. According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, ranking the first in the world.
❖ 3. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys prefer sports stars.
❖ Read the followings and make your wise choice!
7
❖ Group 1
❖ A. We have much homework to do .
❖ B. We have endless homework to do .
❖ C We are burdened with endless homework.
15
❖ 1. In order to reach this goal, we will put up nosmoking signs in all indoor public places.（用被动 结构）（10广东）
❖ 2. According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, which is number 1 in the world. （09广东）
❖
❖ Tip 4分词结构不能少 ❖ 口诀：一去，二看，三改。 ❖ 一去：去连词； ❖ 二看：看主语； ❖ 三改：改分词。 ❖ 1.童年的纸飞机 现在终于飞回我手里,带来甜蜜的回
忆
❖ Back flies the paper-airplane abnrdinitgbirninggs me
11
❖ Group 3
❖ A. We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.
❖ B. At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days.
19
❖ It _____me smile. ❖ Those _____ such happy times and not
so long ago. ❖ How I wondered where they ________. ❖ But they're back again just like a long
watching television.
9
❖ Group 2
❖ A. This village built a school in 2008.
❖ B. Not until 2008 did this village begin to have its own school.
❖ Tip 2 陈述不如倒装妙 ❖ Eg. 我从来不买日货
the fragrant memory of my childhood.
13
❖ Tips to beautify your sentence ❖ 1.高分词汇是首要 ❖ 2. 陈述不如倒装妙 ❖ 3. 主动不如被动巧 ❖ 4.分词结构不能少
14
Task I Rewrite the sentences
and developed into a sport only in the late 19th
century.( 用分词结构) （08广东）
16
❖ 1. In order to achieve this goal, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places.
❖ Tip 3 主动不如被动巧 ❖ Eg.最近学校就“谁是你的偶像”进行了一
次调查。（07广东）
❖ Recently a survey has been done on “ Who is you idol?” in our school .
12
❖ Group 4
❖ A. If I am given the chance , I will try my best .
❖ A.I will never buy any products made in Japan.
❖ B. Never will I buy any products made in Japan.
❖
10
❖ 天空中繁星点点 . ❖ In the sky hang little stars. ❖ 河岸上有很多花 . ❖ On the bank grow lots of flowers.
lost friend.
3
❖ When I was young I_l_is_t_e_n_e_d_ (listen) to the radio waiting for my favorite songs. When they _p_la_y_e_d_(play) I'd sing along.
❖ It _m__ad__e_(make) me smile. Those _w_e_r_e_(be) such happy times and not so long ago. How I wondered where they _h_a_d__g_o_n_e___(go).
❖ 3.The survey shows that half of the girls choose
film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys choose sports stars. （06广东）
❖ 4．Shooting was originated as a means of survival
Beautify your sentences (闪亮你的句子）
1
步骤
❖1.好句赏析 ❖2.技巧指导 ❖3.巩固提高
2
Enjoy a song
❖ When I was young I________ to the radio waiting for my favorite songs. When they ______ I'd sing along.
avoid overuse of their eyes ❖ 2. 近视原因很复杂没有哪一种药物能治愈
近视。 （09广东） ❖ So complicated are the causes of short-
sightedness that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.
❖ But they're back again just like a long lost friend.
4
❖ 思考： ❖ What is a beautiful sentence?
❖ Translation
❖ 郭靖是个爷们。他智商不太高。他娶了IQ很高 的黄蓉做媳妇。黄是桃花岛集团（THD Group） 总裁黄药师的女儿。
❖ 4. Shooting, originated as a means of survival ,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.
17
❖ Task 2 Translation ❖ 1.他建议学生不要过度用眼（09广东） ❖ He suggested that school children
❖ Guo Jing is a man. He is not very clever. He married Huan Rong with a very high IQ. Huang is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of TaoHuaDao Group . ❖Guo Jing, a not very intelligent man, married a girl named Huang Rong with an extremely high IQ, who is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of THD Group.6
❖ Tip 1 高分词汇是首要
❖ 高分词汇原则
❖ 1.后、高、长（后学的、较高级、较长词汇）
❖ good
❖ very
❖ 2.词组优先
❖ try to do
8
❖ 3.避免重复 ❖ A. I like reading while my brother likes
watching television. ❖ B. I like reading while my brother enjoys
18
❖ 3. 1968年第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 （08广东）
❖ Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968.
❖ 4. 约5. 4亿人受二手烟影响，死亡人数超过 10万／年 。（10广东）
❖ Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke, causing 100,000 deaths a year.
❖ 2. According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, ranking the first in the world.
❖ 3. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys prefer sports stars.
❖ Read the followings and make your wise choice!
7
❖ Group 1
❖ A. We have much homework to do .
❖ B. We have endless homework to do .
❖ C We are burdened with endless homework.
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❖ 1. In order to reach this goal, we will put up nosmoking signs in all indoor public places.（用被动 结构）（10广东）
❖ 2. According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, which is number 1 in the world. （09广东）