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GRE考试写作经典赏析(二)

GRE考试写作经典赏析(二)

GRE考试写作经典赏析(二)2016年GRE考试写作经典范文赏析(二)导语:下面是小编收集的一篇GRE考试写作经典范文,供您参考,希望能帮助您。

The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time."The speaker contends that technology's primary goal should be to increase our efficiency for the purpose of affording us more leisure time. I concede that technology has enhanced our efficiency as we go about our everyday lives. Productivity software helps us plan and coordinate projects; intranets, the Internet, and satellite technology make us more efficient messengers; and technology even helps us prepare our food and access entertainment more efficiently. Beyond this concession, however, I find the speaker's contention indefensible from both an empirical and a normative standpoint.注意这种新结构:运用了大量的事实作出对原文观点的让步性同意,但是在最后还是有所创新的提出自己的读到见解。

GRE满分作文之达到目标的手段

GRE满分作文之达到目标的手段

GRE满分作文之达到目标的手段GRE满分作文之达到目标的手段题目:If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.只要值得,不择手段达到目的'是合理的。

正文:The speaker claim that if a goal if worthwhile, then any means taken to achieve this goal is justifiable. Although the assertion makes sense when we consider the underlying of this implication is that whatever the conditions, the natures of the endings deserve our effort wholehearted. But if we examine the broad meaning that this claim carries, we find this threshold statement suffer deficiencies from many aspects of consideration.First let define the worthiness of a goal. How worthwhile and valuable a goal is lies not only in the subjective meditation and evaluation of an individual, we must consider the interactive influence exerted by this goal on others. For example, a country may consider the goal of achieving economic success and well being of its citizens to be worthwhile, but if we know they exploit cheap labor forces in third-world country,utilize scarce natural resources that being exported from poor countries, or dump low-cost goods in these countries, our morals reveal us the dark side of the goal and make it less worthwhile than it seems to be to its home people. On a personal level, a person’s food might be the others’ poison, so did the goal. Consider the ambition ofNapoleon, his ambitious goal is to conquer the whole European Continent, which considered by himself and many of his follows to be the most glorious plan they have ever made. But byresorting to wars, killings, and blood shedding, their sweet dream turn out to be the nightmare of people habituating in this continent. In a word, since no goal is set from a pure disinterested, impartial perspective, it is necessary to bear the interwoven relationship in mind before targeting at a certain goal.Even if a goal is worthwhile agreed by majority of people, we should consider cost-and-benefit side of things in an effort to obtaining an nonbiased, all-around point of view. Most people today agree that the exploration of outer space is a worthy goal considering the valuable research materials we would get from for our physics and medial experiment and weather forecast. What is more, due to the limit longevity of earth and the ever increasing of populations, we see high calls to find another habitat for our future generations. Even if all the advantages and benefits involved justify the worthiness of this goal, not all means taken would be considered as sensible and judicial. Since most pressing social problem such as AIDS prevention, poverty,environmental problems still in need of immediate attention and observation, we need to allocate most of our resources to tackle these problems. As a result, even if one way of achieving the breakthrough in out space exploration would be to devote all research staff and available resource to this project, we have to struggle a balance between the worthiness of a goal and the proper way to obtain this goal.。

gre高分作文集锦整理

gre高分作文集锦整理

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下面就跟随我一起来看看具体的内容介绍吧!gre高分(作文)1Wisdom is rightfully attributed not to people who know what to look for in life but to people who know what to overlook.The quotation is certainly correct, insofar as it describes at least an element of wisdom. In other words, I do agree with the proposition, subject to the proviso that the achievement of wisdom may well also involve other traits or attributes.Having qualified my answer somewhat, I must endorse the principles put forth in the quotation. Overlooking -- or, perhaps, forgetting -- is a crucial skill one needs to master in order to navigate the often-treacherous paths of life without undue torment. From my own experience, and from observations of friends, family members and business associates, I am well aware of the pitfalls which await those who fail to overlook the petty, the unnecessary and the irrelevant.In modern America, as it happens, the importance of overlooking is probably greater than ever before. Even a person trying to lead a quiet, simple life encounters an endless stream of annoyances, errors and petty demands such as paperwork, filing numbers and taxes; long lines at the bank; exponentially aggravating traffic jams and sullen, uncooperative coworkers and neighbors. Those of us who cannot overlook such annoyances will invariably succumb to self-defeating dismay.The ability to overlook also reflects a healthy sense of proportion and priorities. The wise overlooker will ignore his or her spouses failings after making a considered judgment that these are outweighed, in the long run, by greater and more significant strengths. for example, what wise or reasonable person would destroy a marriage solely because an otherwise faithful, kind, generous, intelligent and prosperous partner occasionally tosses socks on the floor?An elderly aunt of mine makes a striking example. Long widowed, she now spends her days sitting in her apartment, carping endlessly about the many relatives who have slighted her. Nobody calls enough. Nobody pays her any atention. Nobody cares, she says.And, indeed, why should they? Who wants to visit with someone, elderly or otherwise, who does nothing but complain, find fault and scour for slights? Were she wiser, perhaps she would ignore or even suppress her interminable grievances and take more interest in the world at large, including the very individuals whose attention she purportedly craves.The paradigm of overlooking applies with equal force in the worlds of business and politics. Look at Richard Nixon: a brilliant, often original thinker, he was nonetheless continually obsessed with minutiae and the unimportant. On some level, Im sure, he himself realized the dramatic impact of such a glaring character flaw; when the situation was long past salvaging, he exhorted his staff and friends to Never be petty, a dictum he honored far more in the breach than in the observance.More prosaically, in business and everyday life, it is indeed the wise person who overlooks or ignores a vast amount. Why come home every day nurturing a grudge? Why spend time grappling with activities, peopleor attitudes which bring nothing but pain and torment? Still, most of us do, at least somewhat, and find ourselves far diminished for it.In sum, I think its safe to say that much in this world merits not even a cursory examination, and those among us are wiser and happier who can successfully budget their time and energy in order to avoid negativity.Comments:This is a thoughtful, well-articulated analysis of the issue.The response opens with a clear endorsement of the stated claim, along with an acknowledgement that wisdom involves additional traits. The writer then begins building an argument that modern life is so full of petty annoyances that it would be self-defeating to pay much attention to them. Using, first, examples that illustrate the trivial demands encountered everyday (e.g., paperwork, traffic jams), the analysis moves on to personal types of experiences (a partner annoying habits; an aunt self-pity) and then to politics, where, the writer implies, Nixon met his political demise at least partly because of his obsession with minutiae and the unimportant. The examples clearly support the writer position and lead effectively to the concluding observation about learning to budget our time and energy to avoid the negative aspects of life.In several places, the skillful use of questions helps move the analysis along. And throughout, the skillful use of sentence variety and precise vocabulary combine to convey meaning effectively, as in this excerpt: when the situation was long past salvaging, he [Nixon] exhorted his staff and friends to a dictum he honored far more in the breach than in the observance. This kind of insightful, articulate analysis merits a score of 6.gre高分作文2Wisdom is rightfully attributed not to people who know what to look for in life but to people who know what to overlook.Never before in history have people been so beset with the overflow of ideas and images that the modern human must endure. We are constantly bombarded with news, advertising, and entertainment, so much so that we are often at a loss as to where we should focus our attention. This has lead to what many media critics have called information anxiety, a term used to discribe the paralysis the ordinary human experiences when attempting to organize and synthesize the vast amounts of data that move past her everyday. Now, more than ever before, it can be seen that wisdom truly is attributable to those who know what to overlook.The Internet is a good example of the effects of information overload on people. Many people recieve hundreds of email messages a day, yet there is no possible way for them to respond, let alone read, all of these messages. Through practice they learn to pick out what will be of interest and to ignore the rest. A similar phenomena occurs when a person is browising the web. Information, both trivial and profound, float by in a disorganized way. A person learns to ignore what is not relevant to their search. This is easily demonstrated by watching a person new to the Internet next to someone who is a veteran of the net. The new person will stumble on loads of irrelevant information while the veteran will most likely proceed to the information she seeks. This ability to overlook useless information is not only applicable to the net; consider the older but more established form of information known as the book.Ever since Guttenberg rolled out his first few pages from his press humans have been wondering how to synthesize all this knowledge. Each year more and more books are written and published, more and more information is available to the public through bookstores and libraries, and each year the average person must struggle harder to find what she needs to know.. This is one of the primary reasons people are sent to college: they are taught how to access and research information they need.It is only through experience that one understands how to overlook useless data. This is most likely what the author of the above quote meant.Comments:This response presents a well-developed analysis of the issue.Beginning with a strong description of the current state of information overload, the first paragraph provides a context for the issue and takes a clear position agreeing with the stated claim. The Internet example is well chosen and well developed, clearly supporting the point that wisdom involves learning to ignore what is not relevant. The reference to books reinforces this position but does little to advance the argument or add insightful analysis. The conclusion restates an earlier point, adding little to the analysis.Despite a few instances of imprecise reference (e.g., this has and all this knowledge), the argument is presented clearly and coherently, meriting a score of 5. To earn a higher score, the response would need to develop a more thoughtful analysis of the issue.gre高分作文3Wisdom is rightfully attributed not to people who know what to look for in life but to people who know what to overlook.I disagree with the opinion expressed above, in that I feel that the statement is omitting a very big part of what learning is all about. I firmly believe that wisdom is gained by careful observation of all that is around us in our lives. We gain a great deal by watching those around us, or by observing our surroundings, as well as watching the assembly of an object. All my life, I have learned a great deal by being very observant of people and their reactions to certain situations, or to procedures that are to be followed. Being observant has helped tremendously in travelling as well, since it has helped me recall certain landmarks to know if I am going in the correct direction. It is true that if we pay too much attention to insignificant detail, we clutter our minds with too much that is unnecesssary. Instead, we should have more time to devote our attention to that which is meaningful. In the field of science, we teach our students to be observant, and to look for specific reactions. If they dont learn to watch closely and record their data precisely, their results will be less than adequate, and their data will most likely not be very accurate or dependable. The statement above has merit, but it does not represent widsom in its entirety. It doesnt do justice to the great amount of learning that thas taken place through the ages through simple observation. Our forefathers survived by learning and knowing what to look for. That information was then passed on, so each successive generation didnt have to gather the same basic knowledge, but could build on what had already been learned. As a society, we need to lean on those who come before us, to learn valuable lessons from their experience, and to decipher that which we can improve on and that which is steadfast through the ages.Comments:This response presents a competent analysis of the issue, taking a position contrary to that expressed in the prompt, at least initially.After stating the importance of careful observation of all that is around us, the response presents reasons and examples to support that position. The examples are clear and relevant, although the analysis is fairly brief. Also, the organization and focus of the response weakens a little, especially as the writer interrupts the group of examples with a statement that if we pay too much attention to insignificant detail, we will clutter our minds with too much that is unnecessary. This statement modifies -- and weakens -- the initial position, which the writer believed firmly.The writer抯ideas are conveyed with reasonable clarity, but -- as is evident in the closing sentence -- this response lacks the skillful use of sentence structure and vocabulary that communicate meaning in responses that typically earn higher scores.gre高分作文4Wisdom is rightfully attributed not to people who know what to look for in life but to people who know what to overlook.I believe this statement is how you look at a glass of water. Either the glass is half full or it is half empty. The opptimist would look for things in life, whereas the pessimist would try to aviod things in life. This summary will explain how looking for things in life better than overlooking a persons involvement in new opportunities and to learn from these new experiences.I am strong believer in hands on experiences. If I have a open mind,try new things, and look for new answers to my questions about life, Iwill in the end gain wisdom because I have experienced many new situations. I plan on becoming a speech language pathologist in the future. In this field I will be dealing with clients who may have a disorder, such as autism or a cognitive delay. I must be aware of the red flags that identify these disorders. I must look for the obvious symptoms before I can overlook anything. If I would in my mind tell my self to overlook things. The result would be detrimental to my career and the individual I am treating.Who can predict the future? So how can someone purposely overlook an experience in which they may recieve a life lesson or gain knowledge. In conclusion, a person should look at the glass half full. No one can predict the future so how can one know what to overlook. Look for things in life, you may even stumble across that wisdom you were looking for in the first place.Comments:This response displays some competence analytic writing since it presents a position on the issue and has a clear pattern of organization.The opening paragraph introduces the topic and states a position that neither agrees or disagrees completely with the stated claim. The second paragraph presents an example; and the last paragraph provides a clear conclusion. The one example is minimally developed, however, and does not clearly explain how looking for things in life [is] better than overlooking a person[抅s involvement in new opportunities.There are numerous small errors and problems in sentence structure (e.g., If I would in my mind tell my self to overlook things.), but they donot seriously interfere with meaning. Thus, this response meets the criteria for a score of 3.gre高分作文集锦文档内容到此结束,欢迎大家下载、修改、丰富并分享给更多有需要的人。

决胜中考作文英语

决胜中考作文英语

决胜中考作文英语The Decisive Battle of the High School Entrance Examination。

The high school entrance examination is a crucialturning point in every student's life. It is a battle that determines their future and opens the door to a better education. As the exam day approaches, students all overthe country are preparing themselves for the decisive battle.In order to achieve success in this battle, students need to make careful and thorough preparations. They must first establish a study plan that includes a daily schedule, specific goals, and effective study methods. By organizing their time and setting clear objectives, students can maximize their productivity and make the most of theirstudy sessions.Furthermore, it is essential for students to have apositive mindset and a strong determination. They should believe in their own abilities and stay motivated throughout the entire preparation process. It is important to remember that success does not come easily, and hard work is required to achieve one's goals. By maintaining a positive attitude and staying focused, students can overcome any obstacles they may face.In addition to individual efforts, support from teachers and parents is crucial in the battle of the high school entrance examination. Teachers play a vital role in guiding students, providing them with valuable resources and strategies to enhance their learning. They can offer advice, clarify doubts, and provide constructive feedback on students' performance. Parents, on the other hand, should provide a supportive and encouraging environment at home. They can create a quiet study space, provide nutritious meals, and offer emotional support to help students stay focused and motivated.During the battle of the high school entrance examination, it is important for students to strike abalance between studying and taking care of their physical and mental well-being. Engaging in regular exercise,getting enough sleep, and maintaining a healthy diet areall essential for maintaining optimal performance. Taking breaks and engaging in activities they enjoy can also help students relax and recharge their minds.On the day of the exam, students should remain calm and confident. They should trust in their abilities and believe that they have done their best in the preparation process. It is important to read the instructions carefully, manage their time effectively, and answer the questions to the best of their abilities. By staying focused and composed, students can perform at their best and achieve the results they desire.In conclusion, the high school entrance examination is a decisive battle that requires careful preparation, a positive mindset, and support from teachers and parents. By making thorough preparations, maintaining a healthy lifestyle, and staying focused, students can increase their chances of success. Remember, this battle is not only aboutthe exam itself, but also about the valuable skills and knowledge gained throughout the preparation process. Good luck to all the students in their decisive battle!。

决胜中考英语作文

决胜中考英语作文

决胜中考英语作文The middle school entrance examination is a crucial milestone in every Chinese student's academic journey. (初中升学考试是每个中国学生学术之旅中的一个关键里程碑。

) It can determine the future path of a student's education, shaping their opportunities for further study and career prospects. (它可以决定学生教育的未来道路,塑造他们继续学习和职业前景的机会。

) With so much riding on the outcome of this exam, students often feel immense pressure and stress as they prepare for the test. (随着这次考试结果的到来,学生们往往在备考过程中感到巨大的压力和紧张。

)The English exam, in particular, is a crucial component of the middle school entrance examination. (英语考试尤其是初中升学考试的一个关键组成部分。

) English proficiency is not only a reflection of a student's language skills but also their ability to think critically and communicate effectively. (英语水平不仅仅是学生语言能力的体现,还反映了他们批判性思维和有效沟通的能力。

) Students need to demonstrate their understanding of grammar, vocabulary, and reading comprehension to perform well in this exam. (学生们需要展示他们对语法、词汇和阅读理解的理解,才能在这个考试中表现出色。

GRE作文考试优秀范文

GRE作文考试优秀范文

GRE作文考试优秀GRE作文考试优秀范文Collectibles have been a part of almost every culture since ancient times. Whereas some objects have been collected for their usefulness, others have been selected for their aesthetic beauty alone. In the United States, the kinds of collectibles currently popular range from traditional objects such as stamps, coins, rare books, and art to more recent items of interest like dolls, bottles, baseball cards, and comic books.Interest in collectibles has increased enormously during the past decade, in part because some collectibles have demonstrated their value as investments. Especially during cycles of high inflation, investors try to purchase tangibles that will at least retain their current market values.In general, the most traditional collectibles will be sought because they have preserved their value over the years, there is an organized auction market for them, and they are most easily sold in the event that cash is needed. Some examples of the most stable collectibles are old masters, Chinese ceramics, stamps, coins, rare books, antique jewelry, silver, porcelain, art by well-known artists, autographs, and period furniture.Other items of more recent interest include old photograph records, old magazines, post cards, baseball cards, art glass, dolls, classic cars, old bottles, and comic books. These relatively new kinds of collectibles may actually appreciate faster as short-term investments, but may not hold their value as long-term investments.。

决胜中考英语电子版英语作文

决胜中考英语电子版英语作文

决胜中考英语电子版英语作文The Importance of Electronic Versions of English Essays for Winning the Final ExamIntroductionThe use of electronic versions of English essays has become increasingly important, especially in the context of winning the final exam. The ability to access and utilize electronic versions of essays offers numerous advantages, including ease of access, efficient editing and revision, and the ability to incorporate multimedia elements to enhance the content. In this essay, we will explore the historical background and development of electronic versions of English essays, analyze different perspectives and opinions surrounding the topic, provide case studies and examples to illustrate key points, offer a critical evaluation of the topic, and conclude with future implications and recommendations.Historical Background and DevelopmentThe use of electronic versions of English essays has evolved significantly over the years. With the advent of technology, particularly the widespread use of computers and the internet, students now have the opportunity to create, edit, and submit their essays in digital format. This development has transformed the way students approach essay writing, providing them with access to a wide range of resources and tools that can enhance the quality of their work. Additionally, the availability of electronic versions of essays has made it easier for teachers to provide feedback and for students to make revisions, ultimately leading to improved learning outcomes.Different Perspectives and OpinionsThere are various perspectives and opinions surrounding the use of electronic versions of English essays. Some individuals believe that the reliance on digital formats may lead to a decline in traditional writing skills, as students maybecome overly dependent on spell-check and grammar correction tools. However, others argue that electronic versions offer a more efficient and dynamic platform for creativity, allowing students to incorporate multimedia elements such as images, videos, and hyperlinks to support their arguments and enhance the overall presentation of their work.Case Studies and ExamplesTo illustrate the benefits of electronic versions of English essays, we can consider the case of a high school student who utilized digital resources to create a compelling essay on the impact of climate change. By incorporating infographics, videos, and relevant articles from reputable sources, the student was able to present a comprehensive and engaging piece of work that garnered attention from both peers and teachers. This example demonstrates how electronic versions can empower students to create impactful essays that go beyond the limitations of traditional text-based formats.Critical EvaluationWhile electronic versions of English essays offer numerous benefits, it is important to critically evaluate the potential drawbacks as well. One concern is the issue of access and equity, as not all students may have equal access to technology and digital resources. This disparity could create an uneven playing field, disadvantaging those who are unable to fully utilize electronic tools for their essays. Additionally, the potential for distractions and multitasking while working on electronic devices may impact the focus and quality of the writing process. It is crucial to address these challenges and ensure that the benefits of electronic versions are accessible to all students, regardless of their background or resources.Future Implications and RecommendationsLooking ahead, the use of electronic versions of English essays is likely to continue evolving, presenting new opportunities and challenges for students andeducators. To maximize the benefits of electronic versions, it is important to provide comprehensive training and support for students in utilizing digital tools effectively. Additionally, educators should consider incorporating guidelines and best practices for the use of multimedia elements in essays, ensuring that students are equipped with the necessary skills to create impactful and well-researched work. By embracing the potential of electronic versions while addressing potential limitations, we can ensure that students are well-prepared to excel in the final exam and beyond.In conclusion, the use of electronic versions of English essays is a critical aspect of winning the final exam. By understanding the historical background and development of electronic essays, analyzing different perspectives, providing case studies and examples, offering a critical evaluation, and considering future implications and recommendations, we can ensure that students are well-equipped to leverage the benefits of digital resources while addressing potential challenges. It is essential to embrace the potential of electronic versions while promoting equity and accessibility for all students, ultimately leading to improved learning outcomes and success in the final exam.。

决胜巅峰电影作文英语

决胜巅峰电影作文英语

决胜巅峰电影作文英语The Peak of Triumph: A Cinematic Journey。

Introduction:In the realm of cinema, there exists a genre that captivates audiences with its intense narratives, breathtaking visuals, and awe-inspiring performances. This genre, known as the "Peak of Triumph," encompasses films that explore the human spirit's ability to overcome adversity and achieve greatness. As I delve into this captivating genre, I will explore its defining characteristics, discuss iconic films within its realm, and reflect on the impact these movies have on our lives.Defining Characteristics:The "Peak of Triumph" genre is characterized by its portrayal of individuals who face seemingly insurmountable challenges and rise above them to achieve extraordinaryfeats. These films often draw inspiration from real-life stories, showcasing the resilience, determination, and unwavering spirit of human beings. The central themes explored in these movies include self-discovery, personal growth, and the pursuit of excellence. Additionally, the genre incorporates elements of drama, action, and adventure to create a compelling and emotionally charged narrative.Iconic Films:One of the most iconic films within the "Peak of Triumph" genre is "Rocky." Released in 1976, this movie tells the story of Rocky Balboa, an underdog boxer who gets the chance of a lifetime to fight the heavyweight champion. Through sheer determination and unwavering belief in himself, Rocky trains rigorously and ultimately proves that he is capable of achieving greatness. The film's iconic training montage, accompanied by the uplifting score, has become a symbol of perseverance and has inspired countless individuals to chase their dreams.Another notable film in this genre is "The Pursuit ofHappyness," based on the true story of Chris Gardner. Released in 2006, this movie stars Will Smith as Gardner, a struggling salesman who becomes homeless while trying to provide a better life for his son. Despite facing numerous obstacles, Gardner's unwavering optimism and hard work lead him to secure a prestigious internship, ultimately transforming his life. The film's powerful message of never giving up and the importance of a positive mindset resonates deeply with viewers.Impact on Our Lives:Films within the "Peak of Triumph" genre have a profound impact on our lives. They serve as a source of inspiration, reminding us that we are capable of achieving greatness even in the face of adversity. These movies teach us valuable life lessons, such as the importance of perseverance, self-belief, and the power of a positive mindset. By witnessing the triumphs and struggles of the characters on screen, we are motivated to overcome our own challenges and strive for personal growth.Furthermore, these films also have the power to unite people from different backgrounds and cultures. The universal themes explored in the "Peak of Triumph" genre resonate with viewers worldwide, fostering a sense of empathy and understanding. They remind us of the shared human experience and the potential we all possess to overcome obstacles and achieve our goals.Conclusion:In conclusion, the "Peak of Triumph" genre in cinema offers a captivating and inspiring journey into the human spirit's ability to conquer adversity. Through iconic films like "Rocky" and "The Pursuit of Happyness," we witness the power of determination, resilience, and self-belief. These movies leave a lasting impact on our lives, teaching us valuable life lessons and inspiring us to strive for personal growth. As we immerse ourselves in this genre, we are reminded of the boundless potential within each of us to reach the peak of triumph.。

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进入正题之前,我先解决下很多非牛人的疑虑捎带鄙视部分牛人的做法。

在太傻上真的有很多牛人分享经验,但是也有不少混蛋之流故弄玄虚,把简单的事情复杂化,把普通人能做到的事情神化,更有甚者明明是在付出很多很多汗水和泪水之后才获得作文的高分,事后却故装轻松自在:我没怎么弄,不知道怎么回事,就5分了。

对这种牛人,小西表示严重鄙视,因为你们的装、假、虚真的可能会害了很多很多太傻上的G亲们,很多小西的朋友也都曾有过因为看了某位牛人发过的帖子而觉得自己不行,GRE作文实在太难,自己还未够水准的经历。

这里小西告诉所有可爱的G亲们,千万不要相信这帮高分牛人装装派,不然会害了你。

那么GRE作文难不难?确实难。

GRE作文水平能提高不?废话,当然能提高。

GRE作文分数能不能快速提高?小西用人格保证,绝对可以,只要大家按照我下面介绍的方法,真的去努力了去奋斗了,甩手抛掉无谓的恐惧和害怕,一脚踹开对GRE无聊的敬畏,那么你肯定能够成功,而且很可能是你自己都意料不到的成功。

GRE作文战略级别指导
第一核心思想:最短的时间获得最多的分数
有一个思想绝对是准备GRE机考也好笔考也好还是其他任何考试的核心:最短的时间内获得最多的分数。

这句话大家都懂,关键是做起来很多人就蒙了,怎么在最短的时间内获得最多的分数,有一个基本思路就是:我们不做没有效率的事情,不做比较有效率的事情,我们只做最有效率的事情。

一个成功的人往往可以把一件事情做得很有效率,比别人快速而且质量还高,但是这还仅仅是停留在战术层面上的东西,真正想获得GRE作文高分的同学一定要学会一样本领——选择,选择最有效率的事情来做即便你做的不是很好,那也比你选择一个没有效率的事情然后做得死去活来要来的好。

讲到这边,大家可能还是不大明白什么叫更有效率、最有效率,好,我给大家举几个例子:有人说要读北美范文,小西从来只建议读10篇以内即可,因为北美范文对你的帮助是让你对GRE作文整体有个基本认识和感受,但是有些人却开始犯傻了,要通读北美范文,把好词好句摘出,更有甚者还想把每篇的提纲整理出来,简直不可理喻!可能你也有这么做,那我也要说你,真的,赶紧停止犯傻!你这么做,一直坚持下去,对你的作文水平可能真的有很大很大的帮助,可是在一个月甚至更短的准备时间里面想获得GRE作文的高分,无疑是自掘坟墓。

那么G 亲们,我们要做的是什么——站在巨人的肩膀上,严重拒绝原创!GRE从开始到现在,作文题库几乎就没有变过,北美范文问世也有好多年头了,大家好好想想就应该知道,我们了不起的前人肯定已经有人做过这件事情了,所以我们不做比较有效率的事情,只做最有效率的事情,把人家摘抄出来的好词好句直接拿来,再在别人的精华里边提取精华,事半功倍!
第二核心思想:装作有实力,真正有实力
大家一定要搞清楚一个概念:英语作文水平和GRE作文高分之间并不存在必然直接的联系,作文水平高的人很可能得不到高分,但是作文水平明明很低的人却能一鸣惊人,这又是为什么呢?原因其实很简单,ETS的考官不会看你以前的习作,也不会看你平时的水平,他只看什么?没错,就是你在考场上写出来的文章。

所以小西在这边很严肃的告诉可爱的G亲们,尤其是那些作文很不错的,千万要小心了,如果今天GRE作文上来是好几篇连题目事先都不知道的让你临场发挥的,又或者是同一篇让你多写几次让你写出不同神韵的,那么无疑作文水平决定了分数。

但是GRE作文并非如此,他只要求你写一次,写一篇Issue,一篇Argu,甚至所有的题目都已经事先告诉你了,那这时候我们要获得高分,其实并不一定要真有很强的实力,关键是要在考官面前显现的很有实力,记住:装作有实力比本身有实力更容易获得高分。

根据这个核心思想,我们马上会明白我们平时复习时候的基本思路:不求多变,因为ETS的考官不会再看你的文章,所以你的文采斐然,每每创新,对不起,不好使!我们要做的是把一个套路,一种思路,自己写得好的话语不断的重复,再不断的重复,重复到我们在能用的时候能够马上快速使用,而且还用的好。

有些人是不是听得头大了,好,小西就直接来好了:
比如大家在写历史相关主题的文章的时候,都会写历史的真正作用是什么?那这时候,按照上面的原则,我们永远不要写一次一个样,也拒绝差不多就行的态度,我们要做的事情:就是精炼语句,把这句一定会写到的句子做到最好,然后背下,到了考场上一写就是点睛之笔,当时小西就是这么写的:
History is an elder who keep telling many vivid stories about humanity to hone the sense of pride, dignity and self-worth while promoting the thoughts about values, humanity and morality. In my view, the genuine purpose of study on history is rooted not in reconstructing the past completely and accurately by the mere sifting of evidence for facts but rather delivering the eternal values and humanity which can illustrate the present as a light and bend the arc of future toward the hope of a better day.
具体如何精炼和提升句子,小西会在后面倾囊相授,不用着急,这边是重点,一定要领会精神,很多小西的战友就是当初没弄明白,走了很多很多弯路,费了力还得不到高分。

我们面对同一种话题我们的观点、思想、逻辑得一样,我们面对同一个观点和思想我们的语言和辞藻得一样。

如果同一个意思,你写出了两个版本,那么你就是失败者,小西没开玩笑,我们就是要事先准备,然后重复熟悉,考场应用,拿到高分!
第三核心思想:GRE作文= 逻辑+思想+文采
我们要获得GRE高分的前提和根本是我们要知道ETS的考官想看到的是什么,根据小西还有小西众多战友的经验:GRE作文= 逻辑+思想+文采,重要性是依次排序的,逻辑是根本,思想很重要,文采是其次,但是获得高分却又缺一不可,他们三者基本上就是这么个关系。

知道了这个思路,那我们准备的时候的战略部署和层次把握就明确多了,逻辑不行的G亲们,那你什么都不要做,就是赶紧练好如何迅速的形成严密的整体行文逻辑和分论点的展开逻辑,不会练习的人不用担心,小西在下边的战术指导中会详尽的为大家解决这个问题。

思想不深的同学,就得赶紧开始准备每个题的点睛的思想,也就是作文的魂,你最重要的观点。

文采不好的人,那就得赶紧搜罗资料,整理好词好句,修改提炼然后背诵。

每个部分的解决方案小西下面都会有讲解,大家只要记住一点:GRE作文每个人都可以克服,按照小西的方法去努力和挥洒,让我们一起化腐朽为神奇!。

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