高中英语作文专题：读后续写亮点积累实用
高中英语读后续写素材积累1
高中英语读后续写素材积累
词汇和短语
描述人物外貌特征的词汇：高矮胖瘦、发型、面容、身形等。
描述人物性格特征的词汇：开朗、内向、热情、冷漠等。
描述人物情绪状态的词汇：开心、难过、紧张、放松等。
描述环境背景的词汇：风景、天气、季节、城市或乡村等。
描述情节发展的词汇：开始、发展、高潮、结局等。
句型和表达方式
开头句型：例如，“故事的主人公是一个名叫XXX的人，他/她有着XXX的特点。
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结尾句型：例如，“最终，他/她成功地完成了XXX，实现了自己的梦想。
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表达人物性格和情绪的句型：例如，“他/她是一个XXX的人，总是XXX。
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描述环境背景的句型：例如，“在那个XXX的季节，他/她来到了一个XXX的地方。
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故事情节和素材
爱情故事：例如，两个人相遇、相识、相爱，经历种种困难和考验，最终走到一起。
励志故事：例如，一个人通过自己的努力和奋斗，克服困难，实现自己的梦想。
探险故事：例如，一群人去探险，遇到了种种险阻和困难，最终成功地完成了探险。
成长故事：例如，一个人在成长过程中遇到了种种挫折和困惑，通过经历和学习，逐渐成长和成熟。
阅读和写作技巧
阅读时注意把握文章的主题和情节发展，理解人物性格和情感变化。
注意段落结构和句子之间的逻辑关系，使续写内容与原文保持一致。
使用适当的修辞手法和细节描写来丰富故事情节和人物形象。
在写作过程中注意语法和拼写错误，保持语言规范和流畅。
高中英语读后续写高分表达积累
读后续写高分表达积累表示哭的描写1. burst into tears2. weep/sob3. be about to cry4. cry in silence5. tears streamed down his face/cheeks6. with tears streaming down his face/cheeks7. with tears glistening in his eyes8. with tears welling up in his eyes9. tears of excitement/joy welled up in his eyes10. two drops of tears rolled down her cheeks11. couldn't/fail to contain his tears12. be close to tears13. fight back the tears14. couldn't help shedding tears15. tears he shed were tears of joy.笑的描写1. Susan smiled at him and waved.2. He was smiling broadly now.3. Oh, I'm fine,' Anna replied with a smile.4. A broad smile spread over Lucy's face.5. He managed a faint smile.6. He looked across at Jos with a wry smile (=one which shows both amusement and sadness). 'Oh,I understand,' he said with a knowing smile (=one which shows you know something that is secret).7. a smile on your face/lips8. Now he had a great big smile on his face.9. She gave them a little smile.10. 'Of course,' she replied smilingly.11. Tony was laughing so hard he had to steady himself on the table.12. Nora laughed so much that she nearly cried.13. laugh heartily/uproariously/hysterically etc (=laugh a lot)14. The kids tumbled around on the floor, laughing hysterically.15. He couldn't help it; he burst out laughing (=suddenly started laughing). laugh your head off16. He's one of the few writers who can make me laugh out loud.17. 'What a mess!' she said, with a laugh.18. At first she was silent, then she gave a nervous laugh.19. He looked shocked, then burst into laughter (=started laughing).20. roar/scream/shriek with laughter (=laugh very loudly)21. Audiences roared with laughter.22. He shook with laughter.23. 'Catch me if you can,' she said with a giggle.24. Vicky suppressed a nervous giggle.25. If you can't stop giggling you'll have to leave the room.26. What are you chuckling about?27. Rosie gave a little chuckle.28. The boys tried not to smirk.29. What are you smirking at?30. He had a self-satisfied smirk on his face.心理活动1. These events constantly remind me of my father’s absence.2. I immediately picture/imagine him walking through the door, wearing a shining smile.3. Most days I hope that maybe he will turn up at my doorstep one day.4. At that very moment, he wondered whether he would be sentenced to death for killing people.5. He was determined to tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice.6. So the young man realized the police had arrested the wrong person, and he took the great courage to expose the real criminal.7. I focused my thoughts on every part of myself.8. We nodded our heads in agreement, understanding each other.9. Somehow I got the idea it would be fun to waken my father by firing it.10. I was wondering where he was. I had a new joke to tell him.11. I was afraid to go to sleep, for fear that I would wake up the way I had been before.12. Then I tried to figure out what I should do. Follow my friend to the hospital?13. There was nothing I could accomplish there, I convinced myself.14. All I could do at the hospital, I decided, was to get in the way.15. As I started my car, I realized that my friend had left his truck and keys at the courts.16. From that one experience I learned that the most important thing in life is n’t the money you make.17. I will cherish the fond memories for the rest of my life.18. He felt he could not continue and sat down on the lawn.19. At this dark and hopeless moment, a wonderful idea came to him. It filled his mind with a great, bright light.20. Tom thought for a moment, was about to agree; but he changed his mind.21. The peasant, surprised and disturbed, swallowed a tiny glass of brandy.（upset, bewildered, shocked, perplexed, doubtful ）22. She met his gaze at last, a red flush creeping across her face.23. He went home ashamed, chocking with anger and confusion.(embarrassed regretful apologetic24. He grew angry, becoming annoyed, hot, and shocked.25. The peasant stood choking with anger and fear.26. He was consumed with guilt after the accident.27. He was consumed by /with jealousy.28. He was haunted by his memories of the war.29. He grew a little pale.30. The day of the ball drew near and Madame Loisel seemed sad, uneasy, anxious.31. But one evening her husband reached home with a triumphant air and holding a large envelope in his hand.32. He stopped, distracted, seeing that his wife was weeping.33. Two great tears ran slowly from the corners of her eyes toward the corners of her mouth.34. He stood up, bewildered.35. They looked, thunderstruck, at each other.36. They went toward the Seine in despair, shivering with cold.37. She sat waiting on a chair in her ball dress, without strength to go to bed, overwhelmed, without any fire, without a thought.38. Loisel returned at night with a hollow, pale face.动作描写1. She felt asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.2. Suddenly a tall figure dressed in a dark cloak appeared before him.3. Death spoke with a threatening voice, and disappeared.4. Dr. Urssenbeck suddenly found himself in a large room where thousands of candles were burning.5. The little girl slowlypushes herself on the swing.6. They are sitting outside in the cool night on a wooden porch, talking quietly.7. One of them approached and asked politely if I would throw the ball back to him.8. Wanting to appear agreeable, I bent down, picked up the ball and, eyes half-shut, threw it back as hard as I could.9. Once I was on the bus, I crouched in a seat and shut my eyes.10. In a flash my friend was in the car and gone, disappearing in a cloud of dust.11. For a moment I just stood there, paralyzed(呆若木鸡).口的描写1. Reuben murmured a thank you and ran home all the way.2. “Here, Mum! Here!”Reuben exclaimed as he ran to her side.3. A young man came to the police station, surrounded by a group of journalists, declaring that he had spotted the murderer.4. I was getting ready to blow out all the candles and she’s getting ready to help me in case I ran out of air.5. “Time to go.” I whispered to the girl, wishing she could follow me right away.6. My teammates were all screaming as I dashed toward the finish line.7. I picked up the ball one last time and grumbled, “Please just come to get the damn ball.”8. Frannie quickly told Belle Ringer and the other two drivers about Stevie's surgery, and then sighed.9. The house got really noisy at that time, with everybody hollering and shouting at the top of his voice.10.“How can I let you throw away the thing that means the most to you?” I pleaded with him.11. They let out a surprisingly loud voice.12. The smile froze on his face; his mouth fell wide open.13. He interrupted the silence with an announcement: “The deadline to enter for the Competition is tomorrow.”14. “I haven’t finished; I need more time,” he begged. “That’s what Michelangelo said.” Mr. Edgarjoked.15. She greeted James and inquired. “Are you ready for our field trip?” James didn’t respond.16. “What do you think matters for a bird?” Mrs. Damon questioned.17. He added softly,“I miss you.”18. Rose scolded the child gently for being naughty.19. She suggested a walk in the open air and he readily agreed.20. Students are clearly informed that drugs will not be tolerated.21. Let me explain what I mean.22. How can you explain that sort of behavior?23. “Look, I can’t tell you. Oh, come on, give me a hint.’24. “Tell me.” “You must be joking-he’d never believe me.”25. “Well, there is nothing we can do about it now,”she sighed.26. As I recall, it was you who suggested this idea in the first place.27. “I wouldn’t be afraid, “she boasted.28. Instead of being delighted, she threw the invitation on the table crossly, muttering29. By a violent effort she conquered her grief and replied in a calm voice,Ben stammered out an apology.30. Finally she replied hesitating31. She uttered a cry of joy:32. Then she asked, hesitating, filled with anxious doubt:33. At the end of a week they had lost all hope. Loisel, who had aged five years, declared: We must consider how to replace that ornament.34. Then he began to recount the adventures again.35. He tried to protest. The entire table began to laugh.36. Mauchecome stammered: “But since the pocketbook was found.”37. When he was seated at the table in Jordanian’s tavern, he commenced to explain “the affair”.38. He talked of his adventure all day.39. This man claimed to have found the object in the road.40. He went along, stopping his friends, beginning endlessly his statement.41. As he left the mayor’s office, the old man was surrounded and questioned with a seriouscuriosity.42. He inquired: “Is M.Hauchecome, of Breaute, here?看的动作描写1. We all gather in front of the television, praying to catch a glance/glimpse of his face.2. Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell.3. Her eyes fell on the photos of her and me at my fourth birthday party.4. Singing happily, she gazed at her surroundings with large, innocent eyes.5. The woman was staring eagerly at the girl, trying to make a conversation.6. I watched helplessly, as the woman felt more and more frustrated and hopeless.7. Then I crept downstairs and examined the tags attached to each of the packages.8. When he finished he raised/lifted his eyes and looked out the window.9. She had spotted a man pacing down the hall.10. When the students stepped off the bus, James’s eyes w idened in surprise.11. We recognized the famous comedian on his arrival.12. Meghan nodded seriously, eyes glistening with held-back tears.13. Swallowing hard, I stared into Meghan’s eyes for a long moment, wondering how I could cope with it.14. Then he jumped up, eyes twinkling as he ran to fetch some of his prized Matchbox cars.15. I was taking my time, strolling in the park and looking in shop windows.脚的动作描写1. Then Lisa stood up and made her way through the crowd toward me.2. Lisa planted her feet firmly in front of me.3. She managed to climb onto it and waited patiently.4. Reuben ran/rushed down Water Street, trembling with great panic.5. The shadows were lengthening when Reuben arrived at（动作）the factory.6. Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.7. Racing home, Reuben burst through the front door.8. Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his family.9. Suddenly, the woman stood up and entered the house in tears.10. And yet, they all just stood there staring at me, motionless.11. Belle Ringer nodded thoughtfully, and Frannie hurried off to wait on the rest of her tables.12. I led them toward a large corner booth. I could feel the rest of the staff following behind as we marched through the dining room.13. I dragged myself through daily chores, feeling exhausted.14. The elderly man fled away with great panic.15. The man stepped back/stepped onto the platform to take a good look at the paintings.16. He leapt to his feet and rushed out of the living room.17. He sprung from his chair and rushed to pick up the telephone.18. He jumped up and rushed out of the living room.19. She just sat there staring into space20. The kids sat around a campfire21. Please remain seated until your name is called.22. He seated himself comfortably at the foot of the bed.23. He took his usual seat at the front of the classroom.24. That man is hurt, he's limping.25. He was so drunk that he staggered all the way home.26. She stumbled upstairs and into bed.27. She tiptoed to the bed so as not to wake the baby.28. They strolled around the park.29. They enjoy wandering through the countryside.30. He paced up and down the platform, waiting for the train.31. Demonstrators marched through the streets of the city.32. A baby crawls before he can walk.33. Paul decided to edge away from the crowd.34. The cat crept silently towards the bird.35. The boy sneaked in without paying.36. I must dash or I'll miss the train.37. She goes jogging every day.38. He tripped over the step and fell.39. The group hiked up to the top of the hill.40. As I was sitting in the park, I watched as couples seemed to meander around happily.手的动作描写1. Stunned, I stood up and gave her an awkward hug / hugged her in an awward way.2. Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms.3. The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse wildly .4. The man took the sacks, reached into his pocket and placed four coins in Reuben's hand.5. Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.6. He parked down the street from Bobby's house, and rushed to his front door, trembling with excitement.7. The man gently wrapped the gift in brown paper and placed the parcel in Reuben's hands.8. Dora lifted the lid, tears beginning to blur her vision.9. Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell.10. She didn't say a word, but smiled a watery smile and held my hand tightly.11. As we shook hands with the new owners, I told them how fortunate they were.12. He patted my head, and inquired: “Is there anything particular you want?”13. He was squeezing my wrist so hard that it ached.14. She stroked her fingers through my hair, and said: “Of course there is a Santa Clause.”15. She handed the napkin to me, and three $20 bills fell onto my desk when I opened it.16. Stevie looked at me, and then at his mother, then pulled out one of the napkins.17. The class clapped warmly as Mr. Lee presented me with the reward.18. He reached into his pocket and withdrew a note.19. Mrs. Damon pointed to the quotation from Albert Einstein hanging on the wall.20. Calmly he picked up the brush and started again to whitewash.21. She nervously fingered her collar.22. He stroked the cat and patted the dog23. She tapped him on the shoulder.24. He grasped my hand and we ran25. She grabbed her briefcase and ran to the bus stop26. The thief snatched the handbag and disappeared into the crowd.27. Press the button.28. Please handle the goods with great care。
读后续写亮点句型知识清单高三英语二轮复习
读后续写亮点句型句式1 画龙点睛的"非谓语动词1.He listened with close attention, biting his lips and staring at the floor.他聚精会神地听着，咬着嘴唇，眼睛盯着地板。
2.He sat with his head in his hands, not believing what I told him.他双手抱头坐着，不相信我告诉他的话3.I opened the letter carefully , hoping for some clues to the identity of the owner of the wallet.我小心翼翼地打开信，希望能找到一些有关钱包主人身份的线索。
4.Gasping with pain, he forced himself to his feet and with slow, shaky steps, began to walk.他痛苦地喘着气，强迫自己站了起来，迈着缓慢的步子，摇摇晃晃地开始走。
5.The man stood there silently, tor by sorrow and passion.男人安静地站在那里，被悲伤和同情折磨着。
6.Encouraged by his teacher, he decided to gather his courage and participate in the writing contest.在老师的鼓励下，他决定鼓起勇气参加写作比赛。
7.Filled with fright, I dragged my exhausted body inching forward.我心中充满恐惧，拖着疲惫的身体慢慢向前走。
8.Having told the truth , he felt a lot easier and returned home with a lighter heart.说出真相后，他感觉轻松了很多，心情放松地回家了。
高中读后续写英语作文技巧万能句
高中读后续写英语作文技巧万能句高中读后续写英语作文技巧万能句读后续写法最早由王初明教授提出来的是结合阅读理解进行写作的一种外语教学方法. 由于蕴含丰富的促学理念, 读后续写在近几年受到了教育界的广泛关注，接下来告诉你高中英语读后续写技巧。
读后续写英语作文技巧1.内容在阅卷过程中，我们发现，一部分考生没有读懂原文，如不认识bear spray，不理解a bright red cloud enveloped the animal，没有理清人物关系，误认为Paul与Mac是好朋友：这部分考生由于阅读能力直接影响到续写的发挥。
另外一部分考生则是大面积抄写试卷中的阅读理解或是完形填空等处的语句;还有些考生描写心理活动和场景过多，缺乏具体描写，导致故事不够连贯，不够完整。
2.语言从评卷结果来看，考生出现的问题偏向于刻意追求运用高级、新颖的词汇，强行运用复杂句型等语法结构，而忽略了与原文语言环境的符合度和连贯度。
同时出现了一些单词拼写错误等，尤其是副词的拼写和不规则动词的拼写错误，如disappointly，to his surprised等。
更有甚者用套路作文，这与读后续写的全新创作宗旨相违背。
3.逻辑①违背生活真实。
如在紧张的人狼大战环境下，有的考生却写两人在拉家常。
②人物关系混乱。
如增加了一些人物，让故事变得更加复杂;把Paul与Mac看成是原先认识的;有些故事的结局并没有交代如何处理狼。
③两段的开头语理解不到位，以及两段之间衔接不够，也带来了很多故事上的混乱。
比如第一段的The car abruptly stopped in front of him，学生理解为是Mac要求他停车等。
4.其他问题阅卷中发现很多考生错误地将一个单词随意移行。
因为单词移行规则很复杂，建议考生还是不要拆字为好。
另外，阅卷中发现很多标点错误，以下几点需注意：英语中没有顿号，分割句中并列。
五份高考英语读后续写满分素材
五份高考英语读后续写满分素材满分素材积累1--情绪篇--喜悦快乐兴奋激动必背好词：joy，delight，pleasure，amusement，happiness，overjoyed(狂喜)，joyfully , merry兴奋：excitement满分短语：dance/jump with joy高兴地跳起来，in high/cheerful spirits 兴高采烈，a mixture of excitement and happiness既兴奋又开心1.Delighted and thrilled，I gave a jump in the air and then skipped into the supermarket.我高兴而兴奋地蹦跶了一下，然后蹦蹦跳跳地进了超市。
2.Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the box.当她打开盒子时，她的手激动得发抖。
3.A smile lit up his face and his eyes were shining/twinkling/sparkling with great/excitement.他脸上露出笑容，双眸闪烁着喜悦/激动的光芒。
4.Tears of joy/happiness welled up in their eyes as they hugged tightly together.他们喜极而泣，紧紧相拥在一起。
5.She came up to him, with a smile shining like a diamond. In no time his eyes were filled with warm and excited tears.她挂着灿烂的笑容走到他面前。
他立刻激动得热泪盈眶。
6.A sense of joy and happiness swept over/flooded him.一种喜悦和幸福的感觉涌上他心头。
高中英语作文积累-读后续写好词好句
高中英语作文积累-读后续写好词好句XXX盯着他的车子，愤怒地颤抖着。
(tremble withanger/rage愤怒地颤抖)13.The sun was setting。
XXX.太阳正在落山，照耀在田野上，散发着温暖的光芒。
(XXX投射出光芒/阴影)14.The sound of the XXX.海浪拍打着海岸，发出震耳欲聋的声音。
(the sound of。
发出。
的声音)15.The smell of freshly baked bread filled the air.新鲜出炉的面包香气弥漫在空气中。
(the XXX。
弥漫在空气中)16.She felt a pang of guilt as she liedto her XXX.她对朋友说谎，内心感到一阵内疚。
(a XXX内心的愧疚)17.The old man XXX.老人缓缓地拖着步子走在街上。
(shuffle one's XXX慢慢拖着步子走)18.The baby'XXX.婴儿的哭声划破了夜晚的寂静。
(XXX silence打破寂静)19.The wind howled through the trees。
making them XXX.风呼啸着穿过树林，使得树木猛烈地摇晃着。
(XXX。
穿过。
呼啸/尖叫/吹哨)20.The sun was XXX。
XXX.阳光明媚，照亮了整个房间。
(illuminate/light up照亮)Forrest XXX.XXX XXX.His face XXX red with anger.The child was quivering in her arms.As she XXX。
XXX.I was lying there。
quivering with fear.His voice was XXX.Luck had finally come her way.XXX。
XXX.XXX his face.Bill realized he was still holding his glass.He had time to contemplate his successes and failures.XXX XXX.25.He was startled to find that his car was missing。
英语作文读后续写佳句积累典范
英语作文读后续写佳句积累典范以下是一些英语作文读后续写的佳句积累典范：1. The protagonist's journey was full of challenges and obstacles, but he never gave up and ultimately achieved his goals through perseverance and determination. (主角的旅程充满了挑战和障碍，但他从未放弃，最终通过毅力和决心实现了自己的目标。
)2. The author's use of vivid imagery and descriptive language painted a vivid picture in my mind, allowing me to fully immerse myself in the story. (作者运用生动的形象和描写性的语言，在我的脑海中画下了一个生动的画面，让我完全沉浸在故事中。
)3. The story's underlying message about the importance of friendship struck a chord with me, as it reminded me of the valueof having loyal and supportive friends in our lives. (这个故事关于友谊重要性的潜在信息让我感动，因为它让我想起了在生活中拥有忠诚和支持的朋友的价值。
)4. The plot twist towards the end of the story took me by surprise and left me pondering the deeper meaning behind the actions of the characters. (故事结束时的情节转折让我感到惊讶，并让我思考角色行为背后的更深层含义。
高考英语作文专题复习：读后续写10篇范文
让知识带有温度。
高考英语作文专题复习：读后续写10篇范文高考英语作文专题复习：读后续写10篇范文1. 阅读下面短文，按照所给情节举行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Thanks to my conservative(保守的) Jewish background, I didn’t believe in angels. That is, not until Christmas Eve of 1979, when an angel brought unexpected joy to my home.After divorce, my two daughters not only lost the security of a whole family, they also tearfully left behind neighborhood friends, a familiar school, and a large house. These had all been replaced with a narrowtwo-bedroom apartment in a poorer part of town.I arranged to take my vocat ion during my children’s winter school holiday. We spent evenings planning activities: cookie baking, games, a pizza night, and evening car rides to view neighborhood holiday lights. With expectation, they seemed to be in good spirits.The week before the school break, however, terrible news of family disasters arrived. By Christmas Eve, gloom clouded our vacation plans. An afternoon outing for movie did little to improve our mood.On returning to our apartment, we were astonished to see a beautiful, six-foot Christmas tree propped(支撑) against our front door. In silent wonder, we looked back and forth, from the tree to one another and around the empty street. Excitement built, and the girls begged to keep the tree.“Maybe it’s for us,” insisted my older daug hter.第1页/共3页千里之行，始于足下“Yeah,” echoed my younger child. “I bet an angel brought it to us!”I laughed aloud at the idea of an angel bringing a Christmas tree to a Jewish family. Caught up in their happiness, I pronounced the tree “ours.”We dragged it inside and headed out to the only supermarket in our small town open that late on Christmas Eve. With holiday goods marked down to half price, I gave a nod of approval to a tree stand(底座), two boxes of multicolored balls, a package of six Santa figurines(小雕像), a 100-foot string of mini lights, and one paper angel.Paragraph 1:Back home, we moved “our” tree into our tiny living room.Paragraph 2:The annual winter holiday became a family tradition.One possible version:Back home, we moved “our” tree into our tiny livi ng room. Cheerfully, the girls painted some paper decorations. With delight that had been absent for months, we started to add the things we bought from the supermarket around the Christmas tree. We strung the lights, hung the multicolored balls and placed the paper angel on top. Finally, with a girl in each of my arms, we sat in the darkness, attracted by the twinkling Christmas tree lights. There was full of joy in our new home.The annual winter holiday became a family tradition.We’d feel complete with a “Jewish Angel” Christmas tree in member of our heaven-sent gift. For many years, we held our breath and experienced the familiar feeling up our arms when we placed the original paper angel on the top of each tree. Still, every Christmas Eve, my daughters and I talked第2页/共3页让知识带有温度。
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续写亮点突破系列
一、主句，+ 简短状语（介词短语，分词，状语从句的省略，形容词，副词）
1.At last he came, with his hands in his pockets
2.He was stunned there, staring at me with wide eyes.
3.With apparently unwilling affection, he nodded.
4.With a mixture of surprise and confusion, he managed a forced smile.
5.When coming back, he still folded his arms with a little anger on his face.
6.With an impatient look, he listened to me reluctantly.
7.He was numb with shock, staring at me.
8.Then the next second his eyes were shining like diamonds, with a bright smile
on his face.
9.Curious, he approached to find a silver balloon.
10.With tears in her eyes, he decided to help Desiree.
11.Touched deeply, he decided to tell a white lie.
12.With heart beating wildly, she hurried to show it …
13.Holding back my tears, I tried to squeeze a smile.
14.Bathed in a festival atmosphere, he was in high spirits.
15.He attempted to find the owner, but all in vain.
16.Her eyes began to water, with her stomach uncomfortably twisting.
17.Looking at each other, we smiled, hiding ourselves in the car and expecting
his reaction to the gift.
18.Obviously confused at the sudden disorder around, Rafael turned to me for
reasons in written words.
19. Surprisingly, my explanation put a smile on his face.
20.Greeting us with a confident smile, Rafael shared his story in a magnetic
voice, which left me surprised.
21.Feeling a lump in the throat, I clapped my hands even more loudly, determined
never to judge a book by its cover.
22.He gave me a bright smile, with his eyes sparkling.
23.To our delight and relief, Tom recovered quickly.
二、形容词、副词的恰当使用
1.Cherish every single moment when you can stay with her.
2.I turned to him and said gently.
3.He looked at me with a broad smile.
4.I praised him sincerely.
5.Taking it home, Wade read the touching lines
6. A thunderous applause burst out.
7.I’m firmly convinced that …
8.with a burning desire to win, he …
9.So excited was he that he held it tightly, rushing into the house.
10.
11.
12.
voice, which left me surprised.
13.He listened with full attention, trying not to miss any point.
14.I gazed/ stared affectionately at their receding figures.
三、有表现力的动态动词
1.I tried to squeeze a kind smile.
2.I could find happiness dancing in his eyes.
3.Desiree’s eyes immediately lit up.
4.The child’s eyes shone.
5.Her heart raced.
6.My mind raced as I tried to work out what was happening.
7.She tripped to her mother.
8.She rushed to Desiree’s room.
9.With heart beating wildly, she hurried to show it …
10.I said as I dashed off to look for my dear sweet husband.
11.I pushed my way through the crowds.
12.
13.
14.
15.my voice lowered and I turned and walked away.
16.He choked with sobs.
17.His face burned with shame.
18.A slight breeze was stirring the branches.
19.His stomach stirred with (something very like) fear.
20.She shouted with excitement.
21.I paid for it with my trembling hands.
22.A smile spread across his face.
23.Dead silence spread across the classroom.
24.A strong sense of joy flashed through my mind.
25.I was frozen to the spot, motionless.
26.He exploded with rage.
27.Consumed/ seized with guilt, he made up his mind …
28.Her broad smile is rooted in my heart.
四、长句、短句交替使用
1.I turned back, meeting his black eyes full of gentleness and feeling like
a mild breeze sweeping through my heart. However, I refused.
2.Dancing in her eyes were love and happiness which I had struggled to seek
for so long. Then she beamed.
3.Each person was eager to express and share their experiences, raising hands
enthusiastically. I was no exception.
五、表现情感的描写
1.Feeling a lump in my throat, I said….
2.I was hesitant with confusion.。