近三年(2017—2019)山东卷中考英语满分作文解析
山东省威海市2017-2019年三年中考英语试卷分类汇编：书面表达含解析
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A Talk with DavidAt the end of the day. Mr Chen spoke to David about his absence.六、书面表达（共1小题, 计12分。
）参考例文“Yes, sir, ”said David with a sigh of relief. “Thank you very much. "David felt happier as he went home.Possible version2At the end of the day. Mr Chen spoke to David about his absence.—Did your mother really write that letter?—No, sir, she didn't. I wrote it. I'm very sorry, sir.David felt ashamed of himself.—It's the P. E, isn't it? You are avoiding something, aren't you?—Yes, sir.—And where have you been going these Thursdays?—To the public library, sir. I was studying there.—Oh, well, at least you didn't run of to the cinema. But you were very silly. What will happen if I report this oletter was really from his mother and why he was absent from P. E. class on Thursday. David felt sorry and told Mr Chen that the letter was written by himself. And just because he was afraid of heights, he wanted to avoid climbing up the rope in the Thursday's P. E. class. But he stayed in the library to study. Mr Chen told David that it was wrong for him to lie to the teachers. Anyway, it was good that he studied in the library. At last Mr Chen advised David to go to his PE. teacher next Monday or Tuesday. Mr Long could help him.评分标准1. 考生能采用适当的时态、语态, 运用适当的句式和词语进行表述, 说理恰当, 论述充分, 层次清楚, 阅卷教师根据具体情况判分, 不受参考答案影响。
山东省枣庄市2017-2019年三年中考英语试卷分类汇编：概括大意及短文修改
概况大意及短文修改201915．（15分）第一节大意总结读下面关于鲨鱼的文章，请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结，词数不少于60，不多于80词．注意：在文章后标清你写的字数．Many have heard of shark fin soup．This famous and expensive dish is especially popular in southern China．But do you realize that you're killing a whole shark each time you enjoy a bowl of shark fin soup？When people catch sharks，they cut off their fins and throw the sharks back into the ocean．This is not only cruel，but also harmful to the environment．Without a fin，a shark can no longer swim and slowly dies．Sharks are at the top of the food chain in the ocean's ecosystem．If their numbers drop too low，it will bring danger to all ocean life．Many believe that sharks can never be endangered because they are the strongest in their food chain．But in fact，around 70 million sharks are caught and traded in this industry every year．The numbers of some kinds of sharks have fallen by over 90 percent in the last 20 to 30 years．Environmental protection groups around the world，such as WildAid and the WWF，are teaching the public about"finning"．They have even asked governments to develop laws to stop the sale of shark fins．So far，no scientific studies have shown that shark's fins are good for health，so why eat them？Help save the sharks!（1）Do southerners like to eat shark fin soup？Why？（because）Yes，they do．Because they think it is good for health．（2）Is getting the shark fin very friendly？（but）How do people get the shark fin？（and）No．it isn't．It's cruel．People catch sharks and cut off their fins．（3）Why do sharks without fins slowly die after they are thrown back into the ocean？（because）Because they can't swim．（4）If there are fewer and fewer sharks，what will happen to the environment？It will bring danger to all ocean life．（5）Does the author say no to eating shark fin soup？Does the author want people to protect the sharks？（and）Yes．he does．【分析】很多人都听说过鱼翅汤．这个著名的且昂贵的菜在中国南方尤其受欢迎．但是你知道吗？每次当你喝一碗鱼翅汤时，你会杀死整个鲨鱼．当人们捕捉鲨鱼，他们切断了它们的鳍，把鲨鱼扔回海里．这不仅是残酷的，但也对环境有害．没有鱼翅，鲨鱼不再能游，慢慢地死去．鲨鱼是海洋中食物链的顶端的生态系统．如果它们的数量下降过低，它将所有的海洋生命带来危险．许多人认为，鲨鱼永远不可能濒临灭绝，因为它们是最强的食物链．但事实上，每年大约有7000万条鲨鱼被抓和交易．在过去的20到30年里，有些种类的鲨鱼的数量下降了超过90%世界各地的环境保护组织，如：野生救援协会和世界自然基金会等，教育公众关于"鱼翅"．他们甚至要求政府制定法律来阻止出售鱼翅．到目前为止，还没有科学研究表明，鲨鱼鳍有益健康，为什么吃？帮助拯救鲨鱼!【解答】1．Yes，they do．Because they think it is good for health．推理判断题．根据This famous and expensive dish is especially popular in southern China．可知中国南方人喜欢吃鱼翅汤．根据So far，no scientific studies have shown that shark's fins are good for health，so why eat them？可知，人们喜欢鱼翅羹是因为他们认为这个对健康有好处．故答案为：Yes，they do．Because they think it is good for health．2．No，It isn't．It's cruel．People catch sharks and cut off their fins．细节理解题．根据This is not only cruel，but also harmful to the environment．可知得到鲨鱼翅的过程是很残忍的．根据When people catch sharks，they cut off their fins and throw the sharks back into the ocean．可知，人们抓到鲨鱼后，把鱼翅切下来．故答案为：No，It isn't．It's cruel．People catch sharks and cut off their fins3．Because they can't swim．细节理解题．根据Without a fin，a shark can no longer swim and slowly dies．可知没有鱼翅的话，鲨鱼不会游了，所以会死掉．故答案为：Because they can't swim．4．It will bring danger to all ocean life．细节理解题．根据If their numbers drop too low，it will bring danger to all ocean life．可知，如果鲨鱼越来越少的话，会对所有海洋生命造成危险．故答案为：It will bring danger to all ocean life．5．Yes，he does．细节理解题．根据so why eat them？Help save the sharks!以及全文可知，作者认为吃鱼翅羹是不好的，建议大家不要吃，要保护鲨鱼．故答案为：Yes，he does．文章大意：The southerners like to eat shark fin soup because they think shark's fins are good for health．But getting the shark fin is cruel．People catch sharks and cut off their fins．Sharks without fins slowly die after they are thrown back into the ocean because they can't swim．If there are fewer and fewer sharks，it'll be harmful to the environment．The author says no to eating shark fin soup and wants people to protect the sharks．（78words）【点评】做题时首先对原文材料迅速浏览，掌握全文的主旨大意．其次，细读题材，各个击破．掌握全文的大意之后，细细阅读材料后的问题，弄清每题要求后，带着问题，再回到原文中去寻找、捕获有关信息．201851. 短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
山东省潍坊市2017-2019年三年中考英语试题分类汇编：书面表达(答案不全) (1)
书面表达2019五、写作（满分15分）请根据上文内容和下列问题提示进行续写，使之失构成一个完整的故事。
What did Andrea thinkaboutWhat happened at last ?注意：1.续写故事的词数为80左右；2. 展开合理想象，适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3. 可根据需要自主选用以下参考词汇：Call the police dangerous escape catch robber (强盗)五、写作（满分15分）Possible versions:A“A knife ! My God ! He was really dangerous .It was wise to drive him off my car .” Andrea thought .Then she breathed deeply and called the police to tell them what had happened .A moment later , the police came to her .Andrea pointed to the direction the “old lady” might bein .Then the police drove along the road to look for “her” . How amazing ! The police were surprised to see that the “old lady” was still standing by the road .The police stopped and sai d , “Hello ,madam .We’d like to take you to Brockboune ,Get in ,please .”B“How dangerous ! What should I do ? ” Andrea said to herself ,”He must be a thief or robber .” As soon as she realized this , Andrea drove to t he nearest police station and told the police what had happened ,then she left .When Andrea got home ,she told her parents all about the “old lady” . After hearing the story ,her parents hugged her tightly and said ,”What a lucky girl ! You are brave and smart enough to protect yourself .We are proud of you !” An hour later ,the police phoned her that they had caught the man-a real robber .评分标准：1.故事情节想象合理，不提倡荒诞离奇、低级趣味，否则降低1-2个档次；2. 词数在60-100之间；如果少于60词，扣1-2分；3. 书写较差，以致影响阅卷，酌情扣1-2分。
山东省临沂市2017-2019年三年中考英语试题分类汇编：书面表达
书面表达2019八、(2019山东临沂)书面表达（计15分）时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝。
跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。
请以“I have changed a lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。
要求：l. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；2.不少于60词。
提示：l. What did you use to be like?2. What is the most important change?3. And how did it happen? Tell a story about it.I have changed a lot!_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ One possible version：I have changed a lotTime goes by. Three years has passed. Of course I have changed a lot. Let me show you mychanges.I used to be really short and thin, I used to be shy and quite. I was always silent in class. But now I have changed a lot. But one of my most important changes is that I become more outgoing. What made me change a lot? I remember when I was Grade Eight, there was an English speech in our school. I wanted to take part in it, but I was afraid it. Our English teacher, Mr. Wang encouraged me to take part it. He guided me a lot, and I practice a lot every day. Finally, I won the first prize in the speech contest. I felt very proud and happy. Since then, I have become more outgoing.2018八、书面表达(计15分)(2018·山东临沂)亲爱的同学,在你三年的初中生活中, 总会与有些同学成为朋友。
山东省青岛市2017-2019年三年中考英语试题分类汇编：任务型阅读(含解析)
任务型阅读2019六、任务型阅读（本题10小题，共20分)22.阅读下面短文，回答问题。
There are some things that are almost impossible to say to our close friends — especially if we want (A) them to be our friends for life. Are you wondering what problems others have?"I can't stand your other friends."(B)My best friend, Kate, sometimes hangs out with some people that I really don't like. I think they have a bad influence on her, and she only spends time with them because they are "cool". Could you tell me if I should bring the matter up with her, or if it would be better for me to keep quiet? I don't want to lose her as a friend.— Linda "I won't help you cheat."My closest friend, Kim, has lost interest in school and studying. He says he's bored with the whole thing, so he often asks me whether I'll let him copy my homework. By now I've said no, but he keeps asking me. I told him, "I think we'll get in trouble." but he just laughed and told me not to worry. I don't want to put my grades at risk, but I'm afraid to face my friend about this, so I just keep avoiding the topic. How can I get him to stop asking? I was wondering if you could give me some suggestions for dealing with my problem.— Mike "No, I CAN'T do that for you!"Anna is my best friend. We get along with each other well, but she is asking me to do things for her all the time. "Could you help me pick out some new clothes? Would you mind if I borrowed your bike? Can you look after my apartment while I'm away?" And these are just a few examples. I've said yes so many times that now I'm afraid I'll hurt her feelings if I say no. Any ideas?— Amy （1）从文中找出(A)处划线单词them 所指代的内容。
山东省青岛市2017-2019年三年中考英语试题分类汇编：任务型阅读(含解析)
任务型阅读2019六、任务型阅读（本题10小题，共20分)22.阅读下面短文，回答问题。
There are some things that are almost impossible to say to our close friends — especially if we want (A) them to be our friends for life. Are you wondering what problems others have?"I can't stand your other friends."(B)My best friend, Kate, sometimes hangs out with some people that I really don't like. I think they have a bad influence on her, and she only spends time with them because they are "cool". Could you tell me if I should bring the matter up with her, or if it would be better for me to keep quiet? I don't want to lose her as a friend.— Linda "I won't help you cheat."My closest friend, Kim, has lost interest in school and studying. He says he's bored with the whole thing, so he often asks me whether I'll let him copy my homework. By now I've said no, but he keeps asking me. I told him, "I think we'll get in trouble." but he just laughed and told me not to worry. I don't want to put my grades at risk, but I'm afraid to face my friend about this, so I just keep avoiding the topic. How can I get him to stop asking? I was wondering if you could give me some suggestions for dealing with my problem.— Mike "No, I CAN'T do that for you!"Anna is my best friend. We get along with each other well, but she is asking me to do things for her all the time. "Could you help me pick out some new clothes? Would you mind if I borrowed your bike? Can you look after my apartment while I'm away?" And these are just a few examples. I've said yes so many times that now I'm afraid I'll hurt her feelings if I say no. Any ideas?— Amy （1）从文中找出(A)处划线单词them 所指代的内容。
山东省潍坊市2017-2019年三年中考英语考试试题分类汇编：阅读表达
阅读表达2019四、阅读表达（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分）阅读下面的短文，根据短文后的要求答题。
The sun was falling behind the hills .Andrea was driving backhome to Brockboune .Then she saw an old lady , standing by thetoad ,with a sign saying “Brockboune” in her hand .Andrea stopped the car .When the old lady got in ,Andrea could see that she was not that little .She was in a long dress and had a hat pulled down low over her eyes .She put her big brown shopping bag down onto the floor .“Do you live in Brockboune ?” asked Andrea . “No , dear,” answered the old lady in a low voice , “I’m just going to visit a friend ,but my car won’t start ,so I decided to hitchhike.”Something in the way the lady spoke made Andrea uneasy ,Andrea secretly studied thehalf-covered face ,the shapeless body ,th e arms with their thick black hairs … Thick black hairs ? Andrea’s blood froze .This wasn’t a woman .It was a man !Her heart was beating wildly and her mind raced . Then suddenly ,an idea came up toher ,She stopped the car in a sudden . “My God !” she shouted ,“A child ! Did you see the child ? I think I hit her !”“I didn’t see anything” ,the “old lady” said ,“I don’t think you hit anything .”“I’m sure it was a child !”shouted Andrea .“Could you just get out and have a look ?” The “old lady” slowly opened the car door ,leaving her bag inside .As soon as “she ”was out of the car ,Andrea drove away as soon as possible .Several minutes later ,Andrea thought about the “old lady’s ”bag and opened itcarefully .There was only one thing in it --- a shining knife .41. What’s the Chinese meaning of “hitchhike” in the text ?42. Please list two details that make Andrea doubt about the “old lady” .(请列举出让Andrea对“老太太”起疑的两个细节)(1)(2)43.How did Andrea get the “old lady” out of her car successfully ?(less than 25words )(请根据短文内容回答问题，25词以内)44.Please translate the underlined sentence into Chinese .(请将文中划线句子翻译成汉语，人名直接用Andrea)45. According to the story ,Andrea was and .(请用两个形容词来评价Andrea，每空一词)四、阅读表达（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分）41.免费搭车；搭（顺风/路）车（意思相近即可）42.She was not that little ./She had a hat pulled down low over her eyes ./She answered in a low voice ./The way she spoke ./The half-covered face ./ The shapeless body ./ The thick blackhairs(有其中任意两条即可得分；表达意思相近即可)43.She said she hit a child and asked the “old lady” to get out of the car to have a look .(答案不唯一，意思相近即可；超出25词，酌情扣0.5-1分)44.“她”一下车，Andrea就尽快开走了。
山东省临沂市2017-2019年三年中考英语考试试题分类汇编：阅读表达
18-24 year old women everywhere in Europe.
In Poland, the population is going down for a different reason. A lot of people, usually aged
78. Why does China use 11 digits for mobile phone numbers?
79. When can a mobile phone number be recycled in China? 80. Which country perhaps has the shortest mobile phone numbers in the world?
76. Is China the only country that uses 11-digit mobile phone numbers in the world?
77. What can we know from the fourth to the seventh digits of a mobile phone number in China?
of mobile phone numbers. That’s enough for each person to have seven or eight phone numbers to use in China.
And mobile phone numbers can be recycled. Usually, the service provider will reuse a canceled number after three to six months. If you call a number that you haven’t contacted(联系）
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中考英语满分作文解析：山东卷2019年文段表达Write a review（评论）of the following story in about 120 words．The review has to include the following points．（阅读下面的故事，请根据下面的提示，写出一篇约120词的评论）．（1）The title of your review．（你撰写的评论的标题．）（2）Your idea（s），examples and the reason（s）for unhappiness and happiness in the story．（你归纳的关于故事中幸福和不幸福的观点，举例子并说明原因．）（3）Your idea（s）of happiness，examples for happiness in your daily life．（归纳你在日常生活中关于幸福的观点，并举例说明．）（4）Your conclusion about happiness．（关于幸福的结论．）（5）The words you may use．（你可能用到的词）be satisfied with（对……满意）desire n．欲望contentment 知足the key（关键）to happiness．A long time ago，in a rich and beautiful country，there lived an unhappy king．He slept badly and didn't feel like eating．He often cried for no reason．This made the queen and his people worried．So they called a doctor to examine him．But he found nothing wrong with his body．He said what the king needed was the shirt of a happy person to wear．That would make him happy．The prime minister was called to the palace．But when they explained the king's situation to him，he said，"Although I have a lot of power，it doesn't make me happy．I'm always worried about losing my power．"Then the king's banker came to say，I'm afraid I'm not happy either．I have a lot of wealth，but I'm always worried about losing money．Someone tries to steal my money．Next，the palace singer was called to say，"I'm famous but I'm not happy because I'm worried about being followed by others．I can't be free．"Finally，the top general was told to go out to find a happy man．He searched and searched but couldn't find anyone．Everyone seemed to have their own problems，and no one was truly happy．Just as he wanted to give up．he saw a poor man on the street．He was eating with his hands and singing happily to himself．The generalwent to him and said，"What makes you so happy？You have no power，money，or fame．" The man said，"I have everything I want．and I don't want what I can't have．So I'm happy，and my song comes from the happiness in my heart．""Can you give your shirt to me，I need it，"said the general．"What shirt？I don' t have any shirts．"answered the man．____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________2019年山东枣庄中考英语作文要求根据题目中的小故事写一篇评论，话题涉及现代人们对幸福的理解，体现了关注学生的成长，教育学生树立正确的价值观，符合社会主义价值观的要求，属于当今社会的热点话题之一。
本文要求根据小故事写出评论，要求学生能够发表自己的观点，难度要求较高。
学生在写作时要阅读所给材料。
My Thoughts about HappinessPower, wealth, and fame can't always make people happy. For example, the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.What can always make me happy Happiness is always in my heart and is easy to find if I pay more attention to what I have. For instance, enjoying the beautiful sunshine after a cloudy day, getting a glass of water from mother when I am studying, getting help from my friends when I am in trouble and so on. These are the moments when I am happy.All in all, don't think about what you can't have. Contentment is the key to happiness.【名师点评】这是一篇要求写评论的文章，根据下面的故事中的相关信息写出一篇约120词的评论。
所提供的材料中列举了撰写的评论的标题。
主要从：（1）归纳的关于故事中幸福和不幸福的观点，举例子并说明原因。
（2）归纳你在日常生活中关于幸福的观点，并举例说明；（3）关于幸福的结论。
这几个方面去介绍。
时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。
注意评论中必须包含材料上的故事情节，并适当发挥。
写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。
语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。
写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【写作亮点】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，紧扣主题，根据事实写出自己感受．灵活运用平时学习的句子和句型，写出了自己对幸福的理解。
短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，符合题目要求。
其次本文运用了一些亮点句型，为文章提分不少。
（1）高分句型一For example，the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.例如，富人不快乐，因为他们害怕失去钱，而穷人真正快乐是因为他对自己所拥有的感到满足。
句子because they are afraid of losing money是由because引导的原因状语从句。
（2）高分句型二All in all, don’t think about what you can't have. 总之，不要想你不能拥有的东西。
句子what you can't have.作think about的宾语。