高考英语书面表达讲解(示范课课件)
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“Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
高中英语-英语书面表达全攻略课件-新人教版教学讲义ppt课件
Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were …
影响给分的因素之三：
行文的流畅 上下贯通、一气呵成
正确而巧妙地使用好连接词
使用恰当的连接词
逻辑角度
⑴排序关系
⑵并列关系
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least and; too; as well as; along with; together with
Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport.
No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were …
高中英语-英语书面表达全攻 略课件-新人教版
失分原因：，句子单一。 ❖4.句子衔接不自然。 ❖5.离题句太多。
❖6.书写差。
高分书面表达的要求：
1. 要点齐全 2. 较多的语法结构和高级词汇 3. 语言地道，准确 4. 全文结构紧凑清析 5. 书写美观
afternoon. ❖3.Not until yesterday afternoon did he
come here. ❖4.It was yesterday afternoon that he
came here.
使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档
Rewrite the sentences
1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere.
影响给分的因素之三：
行文的流畅 上下贯通、一气呵成
正确而巧妙地使用好连接词
使用恰当的连接词
逻辑角度
⑴排序关系
⑵并列关系
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least and; too; as well as; along with; together with
Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport.
No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were …
高中英语-英语书面表达全攻 略课件-新人教版
失分原因：，句子单一。 ❖4.句子衔接不自然。 ❖5.离题句太多。
❖6.书写差。
高分书面表达的要求：
1. 要点齐全 2. 较多的语法结构和高级词汇 3. 语言地道，准确 4. 全文结构紧凑清析 5. 书写美观
afternoon. ❖3.Not until yesterday afternoon did he
come here. ❖4.It was yesterday afternoon that he
came here.
使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档
Rewrite the sentences
1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere.
高考英语书面表达ppt课件
④ Personally, / In. my opinion/ I think,22…
① 现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请
你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编辑 写一封信发表观点。
②
③
④
.
23
① Nowadays in our city, more and more
people own cars.
② I think there are good reasons for owning
food offered by the homestay family. And the cost of living is higher. What’s worse, there will be some limits to their life.
.
19
Para. 4
Opinions or advice
（注意时态、人称等）
.
3
尽量避免下列书面表达常犯错误
一、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点;
二、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多;
1．句子结构错误
①双谓语现象 ②句子结构混乱
2．动词使用错误
①时态错误 ②语态错误 ③滥用be动词
3．名词单复数错误
4. 不规则动词及常用词拼写错误
5. 汉语式英语 三、词义模糊，用词不够准;
总结语:
Above all, In conclusion, In short, In a word, In
my opinion, Personally, .
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半开放式书面表达结尾常用句型
➢In my opinion, … ➢Personally,（only in this way can we …）
① 现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请
你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编辑 写一封信发表观点。
②
③
④
.
23
① Nowadays in our city, more and more
people own cars.
② I think there are good reasons for owning
food offered by the homestay family. And the cost of living is higher. What’s worse, there will be some limits to their life.
.
19
Para. 4
Opinions or advice
（注意时态、人称等）
.
3
尽量避免下列书面表达常犯错误
一、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点;
二、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多;
1．句子结构错误
①双谓语现象 ②句子结构混乱
2．动词使用错误
①时态错误 ②语态错误 ③滥用be动词
3．名词单复数错误
4. 不规则动词及常用词拼写错误
5. 汉语式英语 三、词义模糊，用词不够准;
总结语:
Above all, In conclusion, In short, In a word, In
my opinion, Personally, .
7
半开放式书面表达结尾常用句型
➢In my opinion, … ➢Personally,（only in this way can we …）
高中英语 高考考纲对书面表达的要求 公开课PPT课件
5). This bike is awesomely beautiful . Nevertheless (然而）， I can’t afford it.
Part 2 choose the proper connective words.
first, what’s worse/more, besides/in addition, now, in my opinion, As far as I’m concerned, in my view, from the point of my view.
He burst into tears at the sight of the snake.
4). Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
A good idea occurred to me. struck flashed into my mind.
came to me in a flash.
2). _A_l_l _in_a_l_l _ _____(总的来说）, your answer is not so satisfying.
3). Generally speaking(一般来说）, physics is much more difficult than mathematics.
4). _T_o_m_ y__h_o_rr_o_r___ （令我惊恐的是）， I saw him fall down from the tree.
Advanced structures（较丰富的句式）
Proper connective words（恰当 的连接词）
1). I like English very much . English is my favorite.
Part 2 choose the proper connective words.
first, what’s worse/more, besides/in addition, now, in my opinion, As far as I’m concerned, in my view, from the point of my view.
He burst into tears at the sight of the snake.
4). Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
A good idea occurred to me. struck flashed into my mind.
came to me in a flash.
2). _A_l_l _in_a_l_l _ _____(总的来说）, your answer is not so satisfying.
3). Generally speaking(一般来说）, physics is much more difficult than mathematics.
4). _T_o_m_ y__h_o_rr_o_r___ （令我惊恐的是）， I saw him fall down from the tree.
Advanced structures（较丰富的句式）
Proper connective words（恰当 的连接词）
1). I like English very much . English is my favorite.
高考英语书面表达ppt课件
请你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编 辑写一封信发表观点。
.
11
☆ 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.
请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友 的短文,介绍人们的观点,并表达自己的 看法. (2005年江西高考)
.
12
☆ 假如你是李华,是某农村中学的学生.
你校打算在教室里安装空调,让学生讨论.请 根据下表中讨论的结果,给校英语报刊投稿, 并表明你的观点.
➢All things considered,. …
8Hale Waihona Puke 高考英语书面表达之 话题训练
.
9
☆ 很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家
庭寄宿。对此，不同的人持有不同的看 法。请根据下面表格提示，以Homestay Service 为题写一篇短文，并发表你自 己的观点。
.
10
☆ 现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，
Some people think that students
should study abroad if possible.
To start with, it is good for their
English improvement, especially
Tips
四、行文清晰，句子与句. 子间缺乏衔接. 4
Tips 英语作文如何得高分？
1. 卷面整洁, 书写漂亮 ； 2. 用词造句，扬长避短；
3. 要点写全, 亮点突出； 4. 结构完整，脉络清晰
作文阅卷时间紧，且采用global scoring（整体 评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你 的大作。首先文章结构要完整合理。句与句、段与 段之间运用恰当的过渡词。因此，应适当运用关键 词组、套句，以吸引阅卷老师的“眼球”。
.
11
☆ 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.
请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友 的短文,介绍人们的观点,并表达自己的 看法. (2005年江西高考)
.
12
☆ 假如你是李华,是某农村中学的学生.
你校打算在教室里安装空调,让学生讨论.请 根据下表中讨论的结果,给校英语报刊投稿, 并表明你的观点.
➢All things considered,. …
8Hale Waihona Puke 高考英语书面表达之 话题训练
.
9
☆ 很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家
庭寄宿。对此，不同的人持有不同的看 法。请根据下面表格提示，以Homestay Service 为题写一篇短文，并发表你自 己的观点。
.
10
☆ 现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，
Some people think that students
should study abroad if possible.
To start with, it is good for their
English improvement, especially
Tips
四、行文清晰，句子与句. 子间缺乏衔接. 4
Tips 英语作文如何得高分？
1. 卷面整洁, 书写漂亮 ； 2. 用词造句，扬长避短；
3. 要点写全, 亮点突出； 4. 结构完整，脉络清晰
作文阅卷时间紧，且采用global scoring（整体 评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你 的大作。首先文章结构要完整合理。句与句、段与 段之间运用恰当的过渡词。因此，应适当运用关键 词组、套句，以吸引阅卷老师的“眼球”。
英语书面表达专题讲座ppt课件下载人教版高考复习下册
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高考英语书面表达 Argumentative Writing PPT完美课件(共20张)
Words translation
1.时尚的，流行的adj. 2.生动的；栩栩如生的adj. 3.幽默n. 4.智慧，聪明n. 5.不解的，困惑的adj. 6.误解的adj. 7. ….的深度 8.导致，产生 9.只要
fashionable vivid humor
intelligence confused
misunderstanding
the depth of result in as long as
Linking words
Paragraph one(Introduction paragraph）
Use different sentence pattern to translate:
1.一On方the面on，e hsaonmd e students think it should be prohibitedO;n另the一ot方her面ha，nd, the others think it shouldn’t be prohibited.
表达观点一: ➢ …of them hold the opinion that …. ➢ …of them are in favor of the idea that… ➢ People who are for the idea think …
supporting idea 2
Conclusion paragraph: …
现在一些诸如GG,MM,XIAMI等网络语言在青少年中极为盛行，并出现在家庭
作业, 报告，甚至全国入学考试的作文中。请你以Should Internet Slang Be
Prohibited(禁止)？为题，根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文。
Argumentative Writing
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》公开课PPT(40张)
1. Besides, all the participants will receive a secret present designed by our school. W__h__a__t___m___a__y_be d__e__s_e__r_ves your attention is that we also invite some schools with good reputation as well as yours, intending to offer students a chance to s_h__a__r_e l_e__a__r_n__i_n__g__e__x__perience with each other.
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》教学P PT-(40 页)-PP T执教 课件【 推荐】
④收获、再邀
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》教学P PT-(40 页)-PP T执教 课件【 推荐】
①In order to get everything perfectly prepared, I'll be extremely grateful if you could give us your reply before April 25th. ②Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
①I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. ②On behalf of our school, I sincerely invite you to join in the Dragon Boat Race organized by us.
邀请信
写作目的
①自我介绍 ②发出邀请
VS
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》教学P PT-(40 页)-PP T执教 课件【 推荐】
④收获、再邀
高考英语专题复习《书面表达》教学P PT-(40 页)-PP T执教 课件【 推荐】
①In order to get everything perfectly prepared, I'll be extremely grateful if you could give us your reply before April 25th. ②Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
①I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. ②On behalf of our school, I sincerely invite you to join in the Dragon Boat Race organized by us.
邀请信
写作目的
①自我介绍 ②发出邀请
VS
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My name is Li Hua. I am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School. I often visit your web, looking for topics and from it I know you are finding themes from students all over the world. Now, I write this letter because I want to recommand a theme. recommend topic be We should thankful is a good topic. Our father and mother through thick and thin throw thick and thin raise us, we should be thankful to them. Our teachers teach us how to study, leading a lot of knowledge into our head. we should thank to them. as a Chinese, we As should be thankful, because where there is thankful, thankfulness there’re hopes to make the world better, and with a thankful heart, we can realize how beautiful life is. I really hope you can choose my theme. I wish topic the activity will have an successful end. a
17分 分
step3 sentencing 成句 时态， 时态，语 态 1 简单句 别忘了并列连词 2 并列句 连词的选择 3 复合句 主语一致 4 非谓语形式 No 强调句型；倒装； 强调句型；倒装； 5 特殊结构 Chinglish!! 独立主格结构…… 独立主格结构 避生就熟！ 避生就熟！
Improve your sentences. 1. My name is Li Hua. I am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School. I am Li hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle school. 2. I often visit your web, and from it I know you are looking for topics from students all over the world. I often visit your website, where I got the news that you’re looking for topics from students all over the world.
09年高考书面表达（重庆卷） 年高考书面表达（重庆卷） 年高考书面表达 国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动， 国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向 全球中学生征集话题。 全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生 李华，经常访问该网站。 李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站 发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括: 发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括 自我介绍 写信目的 话题：我们应该感恩（ 话题：我们应该感恩（thankful). 推荐理由 预祝活动成功 注意： 词数 词数100左右 2.邮件格式已为你给出； 左右; 邮件格式已为你给出； 注意：1.词数 左右 邮件格式已为你给出 3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答。 邮件出不能出现本人信息； 在答题卡上作答 在答题卡上作答。 邮件出不能出现本人信息
Step4 成篇 Necessary conjunctions make In my a pieces a writing more opinion smoothly developed. firstly That we should be thankful isbeside idea. a good It is our parents who brought us up through s What’s thick and thin, so we should thank them. We more owe our teachers thanks, for we couldn’t be
总 in brief 三段式
自我介绍 写信目的
分 话题（我们应该感恩） 话题（我们应该感恩） in detail 列举理由 总 预祝活动成功 in brief
拼写 Step2 wording 词性 近义词 同音词 Simple mistakes leave a bad impression! 单复数 冠词 大小写
书面表达评讲之: 书面表达评讲之 建议性书信ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้体
To better your writing
让你的作文
起来
Yongchuan middle school Du Gaoyan
英语书面表达？ 英语书面表达？
25
语文作文？ 语文作文？
No! 25
20-30minutes 80-120words clear 清楚 accurate 准确 logical 逻辑 fluent 流畅
5.I really hope you can choose my topic. I would really appreciate it, if my topic is chosen. Hopefully, my topic will be chosen.
6. I wish the activity will have an successful end. Wish the activity a great success. May your activity succeed.
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09年高考书面表达（重庆卷） 年高考书面表达（重庆卷） 年高考书面表达 国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动， 国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向 全球中学生征集话题。 全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生 李华，经常访问该网站。 李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站 发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括: 发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括 自我介绍 写信目的 话题：我们应该感恩（ 话题：我们应该感恩（thankful). 推荐理由 预祝活动成功 注意： 词数 词数100左右 2.邮件格式已为你给出； 左右; 邮件格式已为你给出； 注意：1.词数 左右 邮件格式已为你给出 3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答。 邮件出不能出现本人信息； 在答题卡上作答 在答题卡上作答。 邮件出不能出现本人信息
A piece of a student’s work(学生作品） 学生作品） 学生作品 My name is Li Hua. I am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School. I often visit your web, and from it I know you are finding theme from students all over the world. Now, I write this letter because I want to recommand a theme. We should thankful is a good theme. Our father and mother throw thick and thin raise us, we should be thankful to them. Our teacher teaches us how to study, leading a lot of knowledge into our head. we should thank to them. as a Chinese, we should be thankful, because where there is thankful, there’re hopes to make the world better, and only with a thankful heart, we can realize how beautiful life is. I really hope you can choose my theme. I wish the activity will have an successful end.
应用文写作五部曲 step1 topic exploring step2 wording 审题 构词
step3 sentence making 成句 step4 step5 essay writing improving 成篇 修订
1 审体裁 2 审人称 3 审时态 4 审要点
Step1 审题
定文章结构
Have a try! 1. We should thankful is a good theme. 2. Our father and mother through thick and thin raise us, we should be thankful to them. 3. Our teacher teaches us how to study, leading a lot of knowledge into our head,we should thank to them. 4. Only with a thankful heart, we can realize how beautiful life is. 5. I really hope you can choose my theme. 6. I wish the activity will have a successful end..