记叙文三段式范例

篇一：三段式英语作文范文吸烟（smoking）段首句1. smoking cigarettes is hazardous to our health.2. in addition to health hazards, there are other reasons to give up smoking.3. giving up smoking is not easy, …smoking cigarettes is hazardous to our health, study shows that cigarette smoking can cause cancers and other problems, for example, it can contribute to branchitis. in addition to health hazards, there are other reasons to give up smoking. first, cigarette smoking is expensive. a man who smokes a pack a day will spend at least $365 in one year. it is also annoying. nonsmokers do not like to be around smokers and have to inhale their pollution. further more, smoking cigarettes leaves an offensive odor. these reasons are all good incentives to give up smoking.giving up smoking is not easy, but it can be done. first, the cigarette smoker should list the disadvantages of cigarette smoking, which will help him give up smoking. next, the smoker should get support and encouragement from his friends and relatives. finally, the cigarette smoker should try to find a healthy or creative habit to replace cigarette smoking. this new habit, such as reading, can help to take the smoker’s mind off cigarettes.青春（youth）段首句1. youth is a golden stage in life.2. although most people enjoy their youghful days, this period of life differs with differentpersons.3. i will spend my youth like the latter.youth is the golden stage in life. at this stage, we are free from worry, most energetic and have all the possibilities to shape up ourselves. youth is the spring time.although most people enjoy their youghful days, this period of life differs with different persons. different persons have different ideas as to how to spend their youth. some people think that it is best time for enjoying themselves by eating, dringing and even fooling about. while others work hard to widen their scope of knowledge.i will spend my yough like the latter. if we don’t make the best of it, what a waste it will be! we are young, so we must learn more, experience more and keep strict demands on ourselves so as to render greater service for our country.依靠自己（depend on yourself）段首句1. depend on yourself is what nature says to every man.2. there have been many great men in history.3. today, however, some young men have no ambition to excel…“depend on yourself” is what nature says to every man. parents can help you. teachers can help you. others still can help you. but all these only help you to helpyourself.there have been many great men in history. many of them were very poor in boyhood, and had no uncles, aunts, or friends to help them. their schooling was not enough. but they saw how it was, set to work with all their mind to know something and finally worked their own way up to fame.today, however, some young men have no ambition to excel in anything and they are to be pitied. they never can amount to much unless they see their folly and change their way of life. it is time for them to know this and depend upon their own honest and earnest efforts to make their life rewarding.朋友（friends）段首句1. friends are very important to us.2. a person has to make as many friends as he can.friends are very important to us. a person can not live alone in this world. whether we are children or adults, we all need friends because friends can help us solve our problems, offer us friendship and encourage us to take part in various social activities.a person has to make as many friends as he can. the more friends he has, the happier he will be. when we make friends we shall realize fully the influence our friends can have on us in our daily life. besides, we must bear in mind that real friendship is not easily won.运动与健康（sports and health）段首句1. a healthy body is necessary to a healthy mind.2. to keep ourselves fit, physical exercise is the best way.3. i benefit a lot from doing physical exercise and take pride in my good health.a healthy body is necessary for a healthy mind. as is known, a sound body in a sound mind is important to all. only by keeping ourselves strong an healthy can we feel energetic in studying and working and live a happy life.i benefit a lot from doing physical exercise and take pride in my good health. i seldom get sick but feel vigorous even if i work the whole day long. i shall keep up doing physical exercise so as to live longer and do more.篇二：记叙文的写法(三段式)记叙文的写法(三段式)要点:开头(起),正文(承),结尾(合)记叙文可分五种:写人的,写物的,写景的,叙事的,游记的.一,以人为主的写作方法:1 背景,形态.这两部份可依需要而顺序对调.以映衬法写其背景,如写家人,就写家境;如写伟人,就写时代;如写学者,就写当时学术思潮等.以细叙法写其外在相貌2 个性,情感,思想等.描写人的情感,用其语言,不如用其行事来得深刻.例如朱自清的「背影」,藉其父亲在月台上困难地爬上爬下帮他买橘子,以描写父爱.3 记其特殊事件.如果是写自己的亲人或好朋友等,需记其与众不同之处,或对自己有特殊意义之事.如果是记载伟人,需记载其伟大之事.如果是记载某一平凡人的特殊事件,则应特别重视该特殊事件的描写,甚且可忽略其余与该特殊事件无关的部份.4 记叙多人,宜分主客.多用映衬法,注重修辞学.二,以物为主的写作方法:1 包括动物,植物及无生物等.要兼俱动态静态的描写.2 要兼俱外在特徵及内在象徵.如骆驼的耐劳,莲花的不染,窗的展望.并可讨论其哲理,抒发其教训.3 多用修辞.4 并记二物时,可记其相似点:先记甲物,次记乙物,最后并论.也可记二物相异处,结论可记其价值之取舍.三,以景为主的写作方法:1 要掌握景物的重点,做深入的观察和描述,给人以深刻的印象,不可做空泛的描述.2 要注意层次的变化,中心点的景物描绘最详;离中心点稍远,较无关者描绘较淡;如此层次愈远,描述愈少.3 只描写静态的景物易流於单调,要插入动态的事物,以对照生动化.4 多用拟人法.5 要渗入作者的感情,藉景抒发思想,使文章更有深度.四,叙事为主的写作方法:1 记叙事情必需注重该事的完整性,亦即要注重该事的因果关系.事情的发生,经过,结果等三部份,必需交代清楚,不可前后矛盾.其顺序之安排有两种:a 顺叙法:发生,经过,结果.b 倒叙法:结果,发生,经过.2 与事的因果有关的才写,无关的不写.3 要选取事情精彩部份详细描写,切忌流水帐的叙述.4 叙事离不开写人,但需以事为主,以人为辅,不可宾主失次.5 叙述的人称要统一,或用第一人称,或用第三人称,前后必需统一.6 叙述事情的结果,要加入作者的思想,感情和评价.五,游记的写作方法:1 走到哪里,就叙述那里的事物,就是游记式的文章.所以游记式的文章,要把作者的行动交代清楚.例如参观一所学校后若记载:「校舍宏伟,操场是一片青绿的草,学生们都爱好各种运动.」就不是游记,因为没有包含作者的动在内.应这样描述:「远远地就看到那宏伟的校舍.走过穿堂,绿茸茸的操场便映入眼里.学生们都活活泼泼地做著各种运动.」2 观察事物,必需用到视,听,感,想,做等五种经验.开头的写法:1 精彩开头法:由事件最精彩之处开始,回头再叙述经过.此法最吸引人例:「卖报!卖报!」街角又传来熟悉的声音.今天的消息非常好哇!一份八块钱.他今天叫声似乎特别凄楚,我眼前那瘦小的身影在我脑中盘绕,久久不去.(第二段)每天早上我上学时常在街上遇到他.....2 观感开头法:由作者对整个事件的主观意见开始,然后再记叙事件.此法在记叙的笔法中夹带论说抒情,使其富变化,然开头的观感需精简,否则文体就不统一了.例:在这错综复杂的社会上,有各种不同境遇的人:有的孩子生长在富裕的家庭里,每天挥霍无度,不知道奋勉向上;有的孩子虽然处在贫穷的环境中,却能赚钱贴补家用,这种精神实在感人.每天早上我经常在街头上遇到的那个报童,就是个坚强向上,孝心感人的孩子.3 顺序记叙法:从事件发生的第一步开始记叙,或事物的逻辑自然顺序描写.此法最容易但易流於呆板.例:每天早晨我去上学时,总会在街上遇到一个卖报的孩子.他穿著破旧的衣服,赤著脚,披著头,一边走,一边叫,很可怜的样子.本来我很少买报纸的,可是今天听到那凄的声音,实在可怜,就向他买了一份报,而且和他谈了一阵子.结尾的写法:1 观感结尾法:就最精彩的部份抒发自己主观的感受,议论或抒情.例:「吃得苦中苦,方为人上人.」对那个报童,我由同情变为无限的钦敬.他虽是一副弱小可怜的样子,但在精神上却是个击不倒的巨人.我想他将来的成功是可以预期的.2 含蓄结尾法:不明白表示自己的观感,而含蓄的回味方式表出,最耐人寻味. 例:目送那报童瘦小的身影逐渐远去,终於消失,我兴起无限的感想,宛然觉得他的身影像参天的巨人,面对著他,我觉得藐小惭愧.要是我们将记叙文加以科学化的分析:那麼记载人和各种事物的活动变化的文章,可称之为动态的记叙文 ;记载人和各种事物的形状,性质,效用的文章,可称之为静态的记叙文 .不管那些句子是动态,那些句子是静态,它们是可以同时放在一篇记叙文里或一段文字里;甚至上一句是静态记叙文 ,下一句是动态记叙文也可以.动态和静态虽然不同,但却统一在记叙文之下的.因为每一种事物都有它的动态和静态;而记叙文因为是要记叙所有的事物,自然便包括动态和静态的记叙了.回忆和建筑对记叙文的整体把握，不由得让我思索什么是记叙文呢？记叙文的意义何在，不由得想起了两个字：回忆和建筑。