雅思写作模板 雅思写作高分词汇犯罪类 青少年犯罪.doc
雅思写作模板雅思写作高分词汇犯罪类青少年犯罪
今天我们雅思写作的相关文章来研究犯罪类话题，即如何使青少年远离犯罪。跟之前一样，小编会给出相应的题目，话题下的雅思写作高分词汇，以及大致的汉语思路。
题目
Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
雅思写作高分词汇-犯罪类
productive members of society 富有生产力的社会成员
discourage them from breaking the law 阻碍他们破坏法律
accept advice from someone who can speak from experience 接受从自身经验出发的人的建议
reformed offenders 改过自新的犯罪分子
dispel any ideas 驱散任何观念
leading glamorous lives 过着迷人的生活
adolescents are often indifferent to the guidance given by…未成年人经常对来自…的指导无动于衷
the vivid and perhaps shocking nature of these stories 这些故事鲜活或者令人震惊的本质
have a powerful impact 有强有力的影响
informing teens about what happens to lawbreakers 告知青少年犯罪分子会发生什么
reluctant to take advice from figures of authority 不愿意接受来自权威人物的意见
credible sources of information 信息的可靠来源
opportunity for young people to interact 年轻人有机会互动
turned their lives around 彻底改变他们的生活
serving a prison sentence 服刑
deter teenagers from committing crimes 阻止青少年犯罪
雅思写作思路-犯罪类
开头段
1. 事实如此，之前的罪犯可能变成正常，富有生产力的社会成员。
2. 我完全同意这一观点，即允许这些人对青少年讲他们的经历是组织他们破坏法律最好的方式。
主体段一
3. 在我看来，青少年更可能接受可以从自身经验出发的人的建议。
4. 改过自新的犯罪分子可以告诉年轻人他们如何卷入犯罪，罪犯生活方式的危险性，以及监狱生活的真实模样。
5. 他们也可以驱散青少年关于犯罪分子过着迷人生活的想法。
6. 虽然未成年人经常对来人所给的知道无动于衷，但我想他来自雅思们中的大多数都会极其热衷于听犯罪分子的故事。
7. 这些故事生动或者令人震惊的本事可能有着强有力的影响。
主体段二
8. 其他替代手段不会像使用改过自新的犯罪分子那样有效。
9. 一个选择是请警察来学校与年轻人交谈。
10. 这在告知青少年犯罪分子被捕之后会发生什么方面可能有用，但年轻人通常不愿意接受权威人物的意见。
11. 第二个选择是由学校老师来跟学生讨论犯罪，但我认为学生会质疑老师在这方面的可靠性。
12. 最终，带有教育目的的电影可能有用，但这样一来，年轻人没有机会进行互动或者
问问题。
结论
13. 总的来说，我完全支持这一看法，即服刑之后改过自新的人能够帮助阻止青少年犯罪。
其他雅思写作模板与高分词汇
犯罪与法律类雅思写作话题解析
犯罪与法律类雅思写作话题解析 本文为大家解析的是犯罪与法律类雅思写作话题，希望大家通过对母题和衍生子题的分析，更好把握雅思写作话题的出题和答题思路，从而对大家的涂鸦之路有所帮助。 1. 青少年犯罪 母题：In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing morecrimes. Why is this case happening? How should children or teenagers bepunished? (100804) 提示：青少年犯罪juvenile delinquency 产生的原因及其解决方法。可从家庭、社会、媒体三个角度分析。 子题：很多年轻人有一种反社会行为，原因是什么，如何解决?犯罪是人类本性，还是可以预防的? 2. 犯罪预防 母题：Unlike in most other countries, police in the UK do not commonly carryguns. Some people think it leaves citizens unprotected. But others think itreduces the overall violence in our society. Discuss both sides of the view andgive your opinion. (040320, 040619)
提示：这道题目当之无愧地成为母题，因为这道话题自从2010年9月起已经成为了雅思口语话题中的题目。11年8月20日，这道题目以变题的形式再一次出现在雅思写作中。 子题：是否应该严惩违反交规者?城市中采取预防犯罪的措施，利大于弊吗？个人如果为所欲为，社会就无法运转，你同意吗？犯罪是世界问题，无法预防，你同意吗？ 3. 罪犯惩处 母题：Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with https://www.360docs.net/doc/19552832.html,cation and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree ordisagree? (050618, 080918) 提示：其实囚禁imprisonment和再教育都是一种让囚犯改造rehabilitate 的方法。还有communityservice对于轻犯和初犯都是一种不错的惩处方式。 子题：监狱除了惩罚犯罪，还有什么功能?降低犯罪的最佳方法是延长监狱星期吗?刑满释放人员再犯罪率很高，为什么，如何解决?你认为罪犯应该送到监狱还是应该做一些社区工作或学习一些技能？
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雅思写作Task2范文：对电影中的暴力的讨论
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雅思写作-犯罪类话题词汇资料
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雅思写作大作文犯罪类话题思路指导
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