雅思写作大作文犯罪类话题思路指导
浅谈雅思大作文犯罪话题-智课教育出国考试
智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料浅谈雅思大作文犯罪话题-智课教育出国考试在现实生活中，我们会时常听到或看到有关于犯罪方面的新闻。
这些内容，大家或多或少都会关注，但也许了解的不多。
不过，当这类话题出现在雅思写作考试中，考生就需要用心准备了，因为这类话题对于很多考生而言并不熟悉，想要拿高分势必会有些难度。
因此，本文智课教育小编就为大家浅谈雅思大作文犯罪话题，可供参考。
首先，我们通过几个历年的真题来看看犯罪话题具体有哪些方面的内容。
080112考题：Some people think the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentence. Others，however，think there are better alternative ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(一些人认为减少犯罪的最好的办法是判刑更长，然而其他人认为还有其他的方法减少犯罪，讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。
)080816考题：Detailed descriptions of crimes are often given in the newspaper or on TV. Some people think it has bad consequences on the society and so should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (犯罪的细节描述经常出现在报纸电视上。
一些人认为对社会有消极影响所以应该被限制。
多大程度同意不同意? )090613考题：After criminals are set free， some of them continue to commit crimes. Why do you think this is the case? Provide solutions.(有些罪犯被释放后继续犯罪。
【徐州朗阁英语】雅思写作难点解析之犯罪类话题
出国留学考雅思、新托福、备考大学四六级，就来徐州朗阁 雅思写作难点解析之犯罪类话题朗阁海外考试研究中心在雅思写作中，提到犯罪类的写作话题，很多学生会觉得其中的一些内容是十分陌生的，而且在面对这类写作话题时，会时常感到无从下手，不知从何谈起。
以下是与犯罪类有关的三大原则，考生如将这几大原则灵活地运用到自己的文章中去，即使再碰到类似话题，也不会措手不及了。
量刑原则1. Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Arguments for fixed punishment:1.固定惩罚可以确保公正性Fixed punishment is a sure measure to avoid any unfairness occurring in the court of law, guaranteeing the justice of laws, regardless of their gender, race, religion, social status, etc.2.固定惩罚可以起到震慑作用This kind of penalty exerts a deterring effect on the potential criminals,出国留学考雅思、新托福、备考大学四六级，就来徐州朗阁 i.e., if someone is inclined to commit some offenses, they would not make decisions easily.Arguments against fixed punishment:1.在一些特殊情况下的犯罪可以减刑Some offenders do not intend to do illegal deeds, but either are forced to do so or are for self-protection purposes.2.有些犯罪动机可以得到豁免Under such circumstances as natural disasters, many people steal some necessities in order to go through these difficulties, like stealing food from the grocery or markets or drugs from the hospital or clinic, which is fully justified for them to be exempt from these crimes.2. Can capital punishment (death penalty) ever be justified? Arguments against capital punishment:1. 死刑只是对罪犯的一种处罚，而并不能够将犯罪行为中受害者生命挽回，或者赔偿其所遭受的伤害。
Simon考官范文-雅思写作Task 2：Crime话题范文(一边倒的写法)
题目：Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree?有些人进了号子之后放出来就变乖了，一些人觉得他们这伙人是最适合去给懵懂少年现身说法的。
多大程度上同意还是不同意？考官范文：1.开头段：完全同意题目的观点It is true that ex-prisoners can become normal, productive members of society. I completely agree with the idea that allowing such people to speak to teenagers about their experiences is the best way to discourage them from breaking the law.讲真有犯罪前科的前科的人是可以变成有益于社会的。
我完全同意让他们去给懵懂少年现身说法的主意，这是一种警示他们不要触犯法律的好办法。
2.主体段：(第一个理由)：犯人可以告诉青少年他们真实的犯罪经历。
年轻人会相信并被这些真实的故事所震慑，然后举例子In my opinion, teenagers are more likely to accept advice from someone who can speak from experience. Reformed offenders can tell young people about how they became involved in crime, the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is really like. They can also dispel any ideas that teenagers may have about criminals leading glamorous lives. While adolescents are often indifferent to the guidance given by older people, I imagine that most of them would be extremely keen to hear the stories of an ex-offender. The vivid and perhaps shocking nature of these stories is likely to have a powerful impact.在我看来，骚年们更喜欢接受有实践经历的人来讲道理。
英语考试作文-雅思写作素材之犯罪类
英语考试作文雅思写作素材之犯罪类雅思写作素材之犯罪类为大家带来雅思作文中有关犯罪类型题目的一些地道短语表达、专业词汇及可以活用的句型和写作观点。
犯罪类的雅思大作文是高频出题话题之一，其中有关青少年犯罪类的话题又是犯罪类内部的高频话题。
今天我们就一起来看一看。
1.先来说说犯罪份子该如何表达criminals 名词，罪犯（值得注意的是，该词有形容词性）。
offenders 名词，罪犯，违法者。
convicts 名词，罪犯，囚徒（前段时间很红的一套书《囚徒健身》，“Convict Conditioning”）。
culprits 名词，犯人。
同时，本词可以指的是被指控犯罪的人。
outlaws 名词，罪犯，暴徒。
也有动词词性，并且为及物动词，译为宣布某事为不合法。
suspect （criminal suspect）名词，犯罪嫌疑人。
其实，在法庭最终宣判之前，我们口中的罪犯多数情况下应该用这个词表达，更为严谨。
prisoner 名词，犯人，囚犯。
juvenile criminals 名词，青少年罪犯。
minor criminals 名词，未成年罪犯。
juvenile delinquent / juvenile offender 名词，少年犯，或行为不端的青少年值得注意的是，其实在雅思写作犯罪类的话题中，未成年人犯罪往往是常见话题。
因此后面几个词汇，需要大家重点掌握。
2.来说说犯罪这件事该如何表达，要注意词性标注commit a crime (commit crimes) 动宾，犯罪violate the law / break the law 动宾，犯罪，违法offend against the law 动宾，违法violent crimes / non-violent crimes 形容词+名词，暴力犯罪/非暴力犯罪delinquent behaviors / illegal acts / lawless behaviors 形容词+名词，不法的行为juvenile delinquency 名词，特指青少年的不法行为illegality 名词，泛指所有违法行为。
英语考试作文-雅思写作高分范文：关于年轻罪犯刑罚的话题及其解题思路
英语考试作文雅思写作高分范文：关于年轻罪犯刑罚的话题及其解题思路雅思写作高分范文能够让考生有效学习遣词造句的技巧，还能扩展词汇量。
对于基础薄弱的考生而言，背诵高分范文也是一个不错的选择。
除了能够快速提高语法的运用能力之外，还能积累大量的好词好句。
今天小站君为大家带来关于年轻罪犯刑罚的雅思写作高分范文和解题思路。
希望能够帮助到大家。
雅思写作题目：Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?雅思写作题目讲解：1.Introduction：先反着想——为什么青少年受到的处罚比成人轻?因为他们年幼无知。
所以为了反驳次论点我们说青少年现在接受的关于法律的教育很多或很深刻，犯罪时他们是知道自己要面对的后果的。
当然严重的惩罚也会对他人有个警示的作用。
3.negative sides：大家需要把重点放在“年轻”二字上。
设身处地的想想如果你是十七八岁的少年，受到这么严重的处罚会是何等心情?4. Conclusion：表达自己的观点，并总结一下自己不同意的观点及解决方案。
雅思写作范文：Crimes can be detestable, while minor offenders and their crimes are from time to time treated with leniency. Thus, some argue that laws should not discriminate, and equally punish minor criminals—an opinion that this essay is against.犯罪可以是可憎的，而未成年犯及其犯罪则往往是宽大处理。
因此，有人认为法律不应该歧视和平等惩罚未成年罪犯这篇文章反对的观点。
雅思写作大作文话题思路指导：犯罪类
雅思写作大作文话题思路指导：犯罪类每到临近雅思考试前一天，考生们就开始焦虑，写作总计1小时，时间转瞬即逝，留给考生规划写作思路的时间不多，想要迅速进入笔落惊风雨下笔如有神的境界?台前幕后功夫少不了，最重要的还是提前准备好写作思路。
本期小编就为大家带来雅思写作大作文犯罪类话题的相关写作思路指导。
雅思写作大作文话题思路指导：犯罪类首先我们来看一下关于犯罪类写作话题有哪些，主要有分析犯罪的原因，青少年犯罪问题以及如何降低犯罪。
话题题目如下：The news about violent crimes may frighten people or, on contrary, encourage them to commit a crime. Therefore, some believe that these types of news should not be reported in newspapers or on TV. To what extend do you agree or disagree?In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How should these young criminals be punished?In many countries crime is increasing. What are the main reasons for this? What can be done to improve the situation?下面我们就一一分析一下。
首先：关于犯罪的成因。
无论是青少年犯罪或者成年人犯罪，首先应该想到的是经济问题，经济问题会影响社会的稳定，如失业率的提升，失学、食物匮乏、家庭负担加重甚至破产，这时就会滋生犯罪。
雅思大作文真题分析与范文欣赏：青少年的犯罪问题
雅思大作文真题分析与范文欣赏：青少年的犯罪问题
对于准备考雅思的同学来说，现在对于雅思作文有没有把握呢？今天就和店铺一起来了解一下雅思大作文真题分析与范文欣赏：青少年的犯罪问题。
（图片转自百度）
Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults.
To what extent do you agree or disagree？（2013年11月9日真题）犯严重罪行的年轻人应该受到和成年人一样的惩罚。
你在多大程度上同意或不同意？
题型：辩论型
类别：犯罪类话题
题目解释：年轻人犯了重罪是否应该和成人接受的惩罚是一样的？
分段解析：
1.oduction
大家首先需要想想为什么会有这种建议。
不难看出主要的原因就是为了减少青少年的犯罪率，所以我们可以在第一段里写现在青少年犯罪率攀升（crime rate），为了遏制这种情况有人提出题目里说的东西（大家要改题哦。
最简单的方式就是把动词punish改称名词punishment）。
注意：大家在写开头段时不需要想一些无聊的套句，如随着社会的发展等等。
2.tive sides
思路：先反着想——为什么青少年受到的处罚比成人轻？因为他们年幼无知。
所以为了反驳次论点我们说青少年现在接受的关于法律的教育很多或很深刻，犯罪时他们是知道自己要面对的后果的。
当然严重的惩罚也会对他人有个警示的作用。
关键词句。
8大题材雅思写作范文-犯罪与法律
题目：青少年犯罪的根源Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem?思路：青少年犯罪的根源1：媒体暴力的误导，让他们对于暴力产生崇拜，错误地认为通过犯罪来获取财富是合适的。
青少年犯罪的根源2：在经济萧条的大背景下，就业变得十分困难，很多年轻人被迫选择犯罪来谋生，或是报复社会。
解决之道：对于出版物进行审查和分类，这能把那些不良的信息过滤掉。
还有就是免费的就业培训，这能让年轻人获取实际的技能，帮助他们在找工作中获得优势。
范文（Band 9）：Nowadays, it has been reported that there has been an increasing number of crimes committed by youngsters in major cities all over the world. What causes this phenomenon and what people could do to resolve the problem have been widely discussed. In this essay, I would investigate the reasons and suggest some possible solutions accordingly.There are two main reasons why this kind of crimes is on the increase. Firstly, violence on the internet, TV programs and video games is responsible for this situation. It is because youngsters, unlike adults, are lack of abilities to distinguish right from wrong. Therefore, too much violence in the virtual world could render young people aggressive. As a result, they, more often than not, consider violence as the main or even only way to solve problems, thereby leading to crimes. Secondly, low employment rate in many big cities around the world could be another major reason. Most countries are experiencing economic plateau or even backwards due to global economic crisis occurring a few years ago. Consequently, many businesses and factories have decided to cut off their staff or tend to employ experienced workers over young graduates. This means some youngsters become jobless spontaneously once they graduate. Some of them even turn to commit crimes to make a living or get revenge on society.In order to solve the problem, some main methods are advised accordingly. The first solution is to apply censorship and classification in issuing programs. Thismeans governments or non-governmental organizations should censor the violent and prostitute contents of programs and label them such as “adult only” or “viewers excluded below 14” be fore programs are publicized. This would help to keep youngsters from too much violence on programs away. Another method is to carry out free job training programs designed closely related to the demand of the job market. After training, youngsters, more often than not, can expect better chances of being employed. Other ways could include tax-reduction policy for university graduates self-employment, providing paid social service positions for youngsters, etc.To conclude, methods such as censorship on programs and free job training for youngsters are strongly recommended too much violence on programs and low employment.（370）题目2：青少年罪犯是否该像成年人那样判刑Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?思路：1. 应该，严肃的法律能起到一种威慑作用，让青少年们不敢再次犯罪。
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雅思写作大作文犯罪类话题思路指
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犯罪类话题出现频率不高，但考生平时写作备考中依然要重视这类话题的训练。
本期的写作思路指引就为大家分析，如何做好犯罪类话题的写作思路分析，下面就和大家分享雅思写作大作文话题思路指导，来欣赏一下吧。
雅思写作大作文话题思路指导：犯罪类
首先我们来看一下关于犯罪类写作话题有哪些，主要有分析犯罪的原因，青少年犯罪问题以及如何降低犯罪。
话题题目如下：The news about violent crimes may frighten people or, on contrary, encourage them to commit a crime. Therefore, some believe that these types of news should not be reported in newspapers or on TV. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How should these young criminals be punished?
In many countries crime is increasing. What are the main reasons for this? What can be done to improve the situation?
下面我们就一一分析一下。
首先：关于犯罪的成因。
无论是青少年犯罪或者成年人犯罪，首先应该想到的是经济问题，经济问题会影响社会的稳定，如失业率的提升，失学、食物匮乏、家庭负担加重甚至破产，这时就会滋生犯罪。
而贫穷落后地区的儿童往往面临失学问题，也是造成青少年犯罪的重要原因。
由经济层面进入教育层面，大部分暴力犯罪者的受教育程度比较低，他们因为贫穷过早的进入社会，或者失业导致流落街头，这类人群冲动易怒，易发生冲突。
心理健康问题，这是比较容易忽略的问题。
校园暴力者本身会存在心理问题，甚至场景是校园暴力，家庭暴力的受害者。
这里有一些特殊的犯罪比如网络诈骗、经济犯罪这些则是其他原因，要单独说。
由于信息技术发达，个人信息安全遭到窃取，给网络诈骗可乘之机。
还有就是一些机构腐败滋生。
高科技犯罪者本身的受教育程度可能很高，智商也高，这时候我们要转换思路，这类高科技犯罪背后的原因是法律意识淡薄。
犯罪情节由轻到重包括：校园暴力、盗窃、杀人，经济犯罪、网络诈骗等。
近年来青少年犯罪的相关新闻比较多见，建议考生多关注相关报道，新闻中会给出相关的事件分析。
分析完成因，后面就要考虑如何降低犯罪，按照情节的严重程度做不同的处理。
情节轻微的，小惩小戒，情节严重者就要毫不留情的处罚，甚至拘禁。
面对青少年犯罪，对于情节较轻的一般采取纠正引导。
情节严重的如盗窃、伤人，那么就需要采取一定处罚措施，情节严重到伤人的，则应该依法采取措施。
有严重暴力倾向，反人类的行为的青少年，建议采取心理治理和法律约束。
同时对被害人也需要进行心理治疗。
然而预防青少年犯罪才是从根本上减少或降低犯罪伤害的有效措施。
来自学校，管教所和家庭的教育很重要。
最后，为了避免再次误入歧途，视情况为青少年罪犯提供必要的帮助和就业指导等。
最后，如何有效地降低犯罪或抑制犯罪，当然是提高就业率和加强国家的安全意识。
关于反复犯罪，并不能完全依靠监狱解决，监狱能关住的只有严重暴力倾向的罪犯，而大部分初犯者，他们的人生还很长，需要社会的重新接纳。
雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their (15 to 18 year-old) teenage children.
Model Answer:
Parents are in most cases our first teachers and friends. From my everyday experience I have to agree with the statement that important decisions should be made by our parents or adult relatives. In the following paragraphs I will give my reasons to support this statement.
First of all, teenage children have the tendency to live in their own fantasies. They do not clearly understand the rules of a real life. When I was 18 years old I thought that the world was perfect and everything seemed to be simple. Teenagers are basically inexperienced; they aspire for independence and try to make their first steps towards freedom. I think that it is like starting to walk when a baby needs its parents for support. An independent life is a big and significant part in a persons life. So, my point is that it is very important to make this step right.
Second of all, I think that parents have right to interfere in their childrens lives. They need to know what kind of friends their children have and how children spend their spare time. For example I had an eighteen years old friend who got really angry with his。