高考英语作文：“概要写作(summarywriting)”初探课件(共18张)
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高考英语写作——summary-writing(共29张PPT)
She brought home a lot of books and magazines to read during the vacation.
Summary Writing
Ⅰ. Definition A summary is a brief
restatement of essential thought of a longer composition.
--- omit the details. --- reduce the examples. --- simplify the descriptions. --- eliminate all repetitions.
高 考 英 语 写 作—— summar y-writ ing(共 29张PP T)
He was very brave in battle.
高 考 英 语 写 作—— summar y-writ ing(共 29张PP T)
高 考 英 语 写 作—— summar y-writ ing(共 29张PP T)
The account the witness gave of the incident made everyone that heard it laugh.
高 考 英 语 写 作—— summar y-writ ing(共 29张PP T)
10. (continuing) --- Use general words instead of specific
words e.g. She brought home several Chinese and
English novels, and some textbooks. She intended to read all of them during the winter vacation. → She brought home a lot of books to read during the vacation.
概要写作Summary writing技巧课件
Paraphrase the main idea(换表达)
Weave the sentences to a passage (连全文)
Scan the passage，analyse the structure （览全文,析结构,定框架）
1. What's the main idea of this passage?
2. A study showed that meat consumption is one of the main ways that humans can damage the environment.
Find out the key information,(找信息) Underline the key points(划要点) Para. 2 Then, how can eating meat have a negative effect on the environment? For a start, all farm animals such as cows, pigs, and sheep give off methane gas（沼气）by expelling（排出）wind from their bodies. One cow can produce up to 60 liters of methane each day. Methane gas is the second most common greenhouse gas after carbon dioxide. Many environmental experts now believe that it is more responsible for global warming than carbon dioxide.
Weave the sentences to a passage (连全文)
Scan the passage，analyse the structure （览全文,析结构,定框架）
1. What's the main idea of this passage?
2. A study showed that meat consumption is one of the main ways that humans can damage the environment.
Find out the key information,(找信息) Underline the key points(划要点) Para. 2 Then, how can eating meat have a negative effect on the environment? For a start, all farm animals such as cows, pigs, and sheep give off methane gas（沼气）by expelling（排出）wind from their bodies. One cow can produce up to 60 liters of methane each day. Methane gas is the second most common greenhouse gas after carbon dioxide. Many environmental experts now believe that it is more responsible for global warming than carbon dioxide.
高中英语概要写作课件Summary writing
Sadly, however, there is another side to the picture. The creativity of science has been employed in
Para 4. doing damage to mankind. The application of science and technology to the development and
Para 3. The continuation of such activities in the twenty-first century will result in even greater advantages
to human beings: in pure science-a wider and deeper knowledge in all fields of learning; in applied science-a more reasonable sharing of material benefits, and better protection of the environment.
Scientific research in physics and biology has vastly broadened our views. It has given us a deeper
Para 2. knowledge of the structure of matter and of the universe; it has brought us a better understanding of
for the worse; changes that brought a lot of benefits to human beings, changes that put man in danger. Many things caused the changes, but, in my opinion, the most important was the progress in science.
Para 4. doing damage to mankind. The application of science and technology to the development and
Para 3. The continuation of such activities in the twenty-first century will result in even greater advantages
to human beings: in pure science-a wider and deeper knowledge in all fields of learning; in applied science-a more reasonable sharing of material benefits, and better protection of the environment.
Scientific research in physics and biology has vastly broadened our views. It has given us a deeper
Para 2. knowledge of the structure of matter and of the universe; it has brought us a better understanding of
for the worse; changes that brought a lot of benefits to human beings, changes that put man in danger. Many things caused the changes, but, in my opinion, the most important was the progress in science.
高考英语写作辅导-写作概要writing--summary精品ppt课件
ummary writing for argumentation
1.Read
①topic:
There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt
② structure In what order does the passage develop to show the different “attitudes”?
⑤ 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面， 评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 ⑥ 如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档 次。
解读之内涵篇 概要写作：
提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文 写出一篇60词左右的内容概要
• 评分要点 • 1）理解准确，涵盖全部要点 • 2）准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 • 3）有效使用语句间的连接成分，结构紧凑 • 4）完全使用自己的语言
2.Explore （探究）
There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt supporting ideas
Find out the topic sentences of each paragraph
Para 2: In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirtEuropean in a friendly way. Henry Examples of some countries IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.
1.Read
①topic:
There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt
② structure In what order does the passage develop to show the different “attitudes”?
⑤ 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面， 评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 ⑥ 如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档 次。
解读之内涵篇 概要写作：
提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文 写出一篇60词左右的内容概要
• 评分要点 • 1）理解准确，涵盖全部要点 • 2）准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 • 3）有效使用语句间的连接成分，结构紧凑 • 4）完全使用自己的语言
2.Explore （探究）
There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt supporting ideas
Find out the topic sentences of each paragraph
Para 2: In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirtEuropean in a friendly way. Henry Examples of some countries IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.
最新高考英语写作专题概要写作PPT课件
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I went on to another grocery store, staying for
about five minutes while shopping for tomatoes,
onions and other vegetables. During that time,
the man managed to sit up and wave to passing
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第二步：阅读材料，回答以下两个问题。 (1) 谁做了什么？Sam got to a boarding school and he felt homesick.
(2) 结果如何？He got sick. He was angry with his parents and felt lonely.
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［例2］ (2011年广州一模) 阅读下面短文, 然后按要求写一篇150词左右 的英语短文。—内容略
［写作内容］ 1. 以约30个词概括这篇演讲稿的主要内容； 2. 然后以约120个词写一篇读后感, 说明“诚 信的重要性”。
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[解题过程] 第一步, 根据[写作内容2] , 快速获取大
意。[写作内容2]说明“诚信的重要性”， 扫读原文可以发现该文章是夹叙夹议的记 叙文, 那么我们可以形成概要框架: 作者讲 述了一个故事来说明诚信的重要性。这样, 就有了方向和思路了。
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第二步：阅读材料, 回答以下三个问题。 (1) 谁做了什么？The writer tells a story of an overseas Chinese student. The student had been caught without a ticket in the subway three times.
高考英语之概要写作(精选课件)
高考英语之概要写作概要写作(Ｓummaｒy ｗriting），被称为“小作文".概要写作分值占据１5分，考查的是考生阅读和写作的综合能力。
概要写作所给定的语篇一般在2００—25０字，内容丰富多样，包含故事、时政、科普等，体裁以记叙文、说明文为主，字数一般要求在50—60字,答案尽量符合“Key pｏiｎｔs oｆ a sｕmmａrｙ”的要求。
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浙江新高考英语概要写作初探(整理稿)(黄岩中学 杨谢友)【优质PPT】29页PPT
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30、意志是一个强壮的盲人，倚靠在明眼的跛子肩上。——叔本华
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浙江新高考英语概要写作初探(整理 稿)(黄岩中学 杨谢友)【优质PPT】
16、自己选择的路、跪着也要把它走 完。 17、一般情况下)不想三年以后的事， 只想现 在的事 。现在 有成就 ，以后 才能更 辉煌。
18、敢于向黑暗宣战的人，心里必须 充满光 明。 19、学习的关键--重复。
20、懦弱的人只会裹足不前，莽撞的 人只能 引为烧 身，只 有真正 勇敢的 人才能 所向披 靡。
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26、要使整个人生都过得舒适、愉快，这是不可能的，因为人类必须具备一种能应付逆化为上进的力量，才是成功的保证。——罗曼·罗兰
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28、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。——孔子
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29、勇猛、大胆和坚定的决心能够抵得上武器的精良。——达·芬奇
最新高考作文概要写作Summary-Writing(必修三第四单元课文)精品ppt课件
Para 3-water
Topic Sentence: Water made life develop possibly
Tips: 补充说明第二段水的作用，可以作为次要点 放在第三段结合处理。
Para 4
Topic Sentence: None points:plants in water, shellfish, fish, plants on land land animals, forest, reptiles,dinosaurs,mammals.
It is a brief, thorough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.
读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、 体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章 的主要内容和观点。
not look after the earth well. the earth may be too hot to liveon , whether ...depend on
Main idea: Fianlly, Humans rule the earth but the time of their existence is uncertain.
高考作文概要写作SummaryWriting(必修三第四单元课文)
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What is a summary?
A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details 《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》
Unit 4 Astronomy: the science of the stars