(英语)高三英语作文句型写作指导

高三英语作文句型写作指导(1)句子多样性各种句型：1．松散句（即主句在前）Misunderstanding is likely to exist in students' daily life, which will lead to argument and conflicts. （+定语从句）Students who are selfish, indifferent and not out-going tend to stay alone, resulting in a lack of communication with classmates and gaining a poor friendship. （+非谓语）We need to be open-minded and warm-hearted first, if we want to be popular with others. （+状语从句）Every day I have to work my way through piles of homework, tired and stressed out.（+形容词作状语）Every day I will run and play with my friends happily, in order to release our stress.（+状语）2．圆周句（即主句在后）During the daily life, we learn to accept and tolerate others despite heavy stress from study.（介词词组+）Due to the exam-oriented education, teachers and parents tend to ignore children's problems of getting on with others, which results in poorer relationship.（介词词组+定语从句）Although conflicts are unavoidable, we persuaded ourselves to keep calm, which is quite useful to solve problems．（状语从句+）Immature and self-centred, many of them fail to stand in others' shoes and understand their feelings．（形容词作状语+）Having finished my trip, I will return to China and find a part-time job to earn enough money for my college life．（非谓语+）3．there be 句型There are various reasons why middle school students fail to get along well with each other.4．祈使句Keep in mind that we should be active and positive to show ourselves.5．倒装句Seldom do they have time to play or talk together since every student spends most of their time in studying.6．强调句It is the lack of communication skills that makes matters worse.7．平行结构When I am in trouble, my friends will immediately come to me comfort me and help me pull through.By finishing our homework, we can practice the concepts taught in class. build good study habits and reflect on our own learning, thus developing our learning skills and academic grades.8．It 作形式主语的句型It is essential for us to put ourselves into others' shoes, which helps improve the relationship and leave a better impression on others.9．省略句When faced with difficulties in study or daily life, I can turn to them for help and comfort.其他手段还有：1．恰当变换句子的主语如佛二模基础写作中：My last destination is Brazil,at which I plan to watch 8 football matches of the World Cup and get to know more about the local culture,（用物作主语，而不是总是用人做主语）又如：Besides, the lack of communication skills and enough social experience often causes them a lot of trouble when they deal with the conflicts with others.2．适当使用被动语态招聘广告，通知类文章里经常使用到被动语态。

（可参考二轮书P137 兼职小记者那篇，P133 世界环境日那篇）如：Extraordinary reporters with excellent performances will be awarded an“Outstanding Young Reporer” certificate.The results will be announced online before June 31st.P149 1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968.P133 评奖一等奖3名，二等奖6名，三等奖12名Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest, including three first prizes, six second and twelve third ones. /Three first prizes, six second and twelve third ones will be awarded to those excellent students.举例:The reasons why middle school students have a poor relationship are as follows. It is mainly determined by their characters. Some are selfish and mean. These people have never shared good things with others. Others are demanding. They get annoyed easily because they can not bear such a little mistake.Revised（修改）：... It is mainly determined by their characters. Some are selfish and mean. Theyare never willing to share good thing with others, so they are less likely to gain popularity among others. Others are demanding. Because they can not bear even a slight mistake, they tend to get annoyed easily and lose temper.Or: ...It is mainly determined by their characters. Unwilling to share good things with others, those selfish and mean students are less likely to gain popularity among others. Meanwhile, for those demanding and critical ones, they tend to get annoyed easily and lose temper, because they can not bear even a slight mistake.句型/结构雷同：1．I think there are two reasons causing bad relationship of middle school students. Firstly, the students concentrate so much on study that they ignore others' feelings, just doing what is good to academic performance. Secondly, nowadays students lack an awareness of empathy, which leads to selfishness.Revised: I think there are two reasons causing bad relationship of middle school students. Firstly, the students concentrate so much on study that they ignore others' feelings, just doing what is good to academic performance. Secondly, without an awareness of empathy, they tend to be selfish and thus they are not welcome among others.2．With overprotection from parents, students are always self-centred and they always do what to do without permission, ignoring other students' feelings. Besides, without enough social experience, they are always lacking in ability of communication.Revised:Besides, the lack of communication skills and enough social experience often causes them a lot of trouble when they deal with the conflicts with others.参考：Besides, they are not mature and skilful enough to cope with tiny misunderstanding, which may grow into major conflict and exchange of bitter words.陈立之Besides, the lack of maturity and skills to tackle problems also contribute to the poor relationship. Not mature enough to deal with conflicts, they tend to quarrel over trifles or even fight against each other.严天月3．Some students who don't take their responsibility on their duty easily annoy their classmates. Additionally, the ones who always tell lies are not welcomed by others.Revised: Some students will easily annoy their classmates when they don't take their responsibility on their duty. Additionally, the ones who always tell lies are not welcomed by others.（个人看法：我会选择改动第一句，而保留第二句，因为第一句有点头重脚轻。