(完整)高考英语短文改错练习题及答案
高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)
高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇（附答案及解析）短文改错（每篇文章共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
（1）Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.（2）Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine（3）Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now wheneverI am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.（4）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.（5）Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua（6）Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll meet you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John（7）Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class Six, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are notsatisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with some effectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance.Thank you.Yours,Wang Min（8）Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.（9）Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may also get others confusing.（10）Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.（11）I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.（12）We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!（13）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.（14）Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua（15）You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on,"Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first.I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time，I woke up and found me still in bed!（16）It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. It isso a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly，I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.（17）I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner（执业者）. One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course”I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they offered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.（18）Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.（19）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.（20）I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.（21）When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had studied atall at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test.I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.（22）I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class.Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.（23）Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told the artist he didn’t want to any shadows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.（24）I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..（25）I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.（26）This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy,the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.”（27）Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market．After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital．After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death．As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures．Nor do they care about which happens to consumers．They shall be charged by law．Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua（28）Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua（29）Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best.Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping（30）Dear Lucy,I am very excited to learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet（31）Abby，How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes，Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold towards me. Many time, I wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone！I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family．But when my cousin was born，everyone pays more attention to her．So I disliked her and couldn’t get along well with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time．I tried to find a proper time to apologize．When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago，I took my cousin to play outside．In the way to the playground．I bought much snacks for her．Then we began chat．When we talked about their childhood，suddenly，I said“sorry”gently．She was silently，so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly．But after while she said：“Don’t say that．In my memory，you are always friendly．”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popular, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)V olunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday，the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas．Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should be responsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好，常见类型要记牢。
(完整版)高考英语专题短文改错二十篇1-20(附答案)
1. Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 miles per hour，we passed over a car。
It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road。
My friend slows down, and pulled behind the other car。
He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn't so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself. I thought my friend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing，but I won't forget his good nature or character。
2. Dear Brad，I’m very glad to hear from you。
In your last letter you ask about the post—80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford。
高考英语短文改错训练3,共5篇,含答案
2020届高二英语专题：短文改错（三）1.短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
）划掉。
修改：修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
后的词。
Good morning, everyone. It’s great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun, born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influenced by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and sports. I’m easy-going, get along well with my classmates.It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream constantly that I, along with mine classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.1.Good morning, everyone. It’s ∧ great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun,a born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influencedboth 或去掉all by them, I read widely during my early age, but by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and I’ve developed a great interest in arts andand sports. I’m easy sports. I’m easy-going, -going, ∧get along well with my classmates.and 或get 改为getting It is this personality which It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also helpthathelps me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your to university has always been a beautiful dream for me.university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream I dream constantly that I, along with minemy classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swimhappily freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.dreams2.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
高考英语改错题及答案
高考英语改错题及答案【篇一：高考英语短文改错练习及答案】s=txt>(1)my parents live in the country. they keep a dog calling ah fu. one day my parent went to work in the fields taking my little sister with ah fu along. while they working, my sister walked to the river nearby. ah fu followed her there. she was trying topick a flower while she fell into the river. ah fu barked and jumped to the water immediate. when my parents heard ah fu barking they ran to the river. they saw ah fu swimming towards the bank carried my little sister. my parents praised ah fu warm. it was our brave ah fu who had saved my little sister.(2)may i have your attention, please? i have an announcement make.the student union is going to hold a party in saturday evening, august 15, to welcome my friends from the united states. the party will be hold in the roof garden of the main building. it will begin at 7:30 p.m. there will have music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gift. everybody may bring a small gift on this purpose. remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wish.don?t forget: 7:30, saturday evening, roof garden, main building. there is sure to be a lot of fun. everybody is welcomed.(3)dear peter,were so glad youre coming to join us on sunday. here is what you can find us. well have our picnics in the peoples park. you know where that is, isnt you? after you entered the park by the main gate, walk straightly on till you come to a stream. cross the stream and turning right. after walking in a while youll come to a hill. walk around to other side of the hill. there youll see a lake. well have our picnic here in the small wood by the lake. im sure youll have no trouble finding us. do come!yours.(4)a few days before my brother and i went to the cinema by bicycle. my brother was riding with me seating on the seat behind. as we came to the crossroad, a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. ?weve found you long last,? they said. and we dont know them. point to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, ?he stopped us about half hour ago and made us to catch the next offender. so come on, stand here. hoping you dont have to wait as long as we did . good luck.?may 3rd, sunday fine(5)dear mr smith,i was so please to hear from you and im writing to tell you something about my school. you are right, quite few changes have been taken place. on the one side of the road, there has a new classroom building. on the other side which a playground used to be now stand another new building, our library. in it there are all kind of books, newspapers or magazines. the playground is now in front of school. weve also plant a lot of trees in and around the school. i hope you come and see for yourself some days.best wishes!yours,(6)li hua my name is li hua. i was born in dalian, liaoning province on february 1977. i started school in 1984 while i was seven. i studied in guangming primary school 1984 to 1990. after that i went to no.6 middle school of dalian and graduate this summer. the main subjects i studied at school including chinese, maths, english, physics, chemical and computer. i like english and computer best but i am very good at them. last year i had won first prize in the school computer competition. in my spare time i enjoy listening to popular music and collect stamps. my favourite sport are swimming in summer and skating in winter.(7)dear dick,how nice to hear from you again! you want to know what is going on in schools in china. in short, things have begun to improve since we called on school to reduce learning load. idon?t know about the others, but i used to have to do works even on weekends by doing endless homework and attending classes as well. now, i have more free time. i can follow my own interests, such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. in the evenings, i can watch news on tv or read newspapers. what?s more, i can go to bed earlier. as far as i know, everyone is happy about the new arrangement of things.best wishes!yours.(8)almost all of us heard the story “here comes the wolf” when we are little kids. what we can learn from the story is we must be honest. therefore, there?re lots of phenomenon of dishonesty nowadays.being honest does great harm not only to other people and also to yourself. take the case of fake milk powder for an example. after drinking this kind of milk, the babyhad big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, what badly affected their health. to my great relief, the producers got accused and punished net all the serious consequences in the end.(9)dear bob,i?m so glad to learn that you are come in september. i found a place for you. it?s a small flat of 25 square metre, with a bedroom, a bathroom or a kitchen. in the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and the chair. the rent is 500 yuans per month. the flat is in a building on fangcao street, it is not far from jianxin chinese school. bus no. 11 can take you straightly to the school. in fact, it?s only one stop way. do you think you?d like it? if so , i can try and find another place for you. just let me know.yours.(10)it is well-known that we exist in the dynamic world with various difficulties. when we are faced them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. with confidence, we can find sometime the question is not as “huge”so we imagine.take most of our for example, the entrance exam to college seem to be a horrible monster. according, some people give up, some persist. in my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as good as full preparation, try and exert your strength, but then we will overcome all problems and challenges. on the whole, i believe we youngster should facethe difficulties in right manner. and nothing is impossible,brave it out and just do it![（1）答案]【解析】1. 此处是过去分词作短语作定语，因此，将calling 改为called。
(完整版)高考英语短文改错专项训练30篇及答案解析
《高考短文改错——专项训练30篇——及答案解析》1. 短文改错1. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Peter,As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples.One of the most popular words are Dianzan, which is often use when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing. When we say somebody is Renxing, you mean that they will do whatever they liked. The phrase Miaosha first came on online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before other. But now it's wide used when you achieve your purpose in very short time. If you will describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning, you'll know more about our language and culture.All the best!Yours,Li Hua1.______2.______3.______4.______5.______6.______7.______8.______9.______ 10.______2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线（________），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．In my village a lot of children have left school for many different reasorn．Some families are so poor to send their children to school，so their kids have to earn money to support their families．There are also many parents do not think it useless to send their children to school．They prefer to have their children do something else rather than to let them go to school．I feel worried this．I think every children should havethe opportunity to receive education．And it is necessary of Us to care about the children，because one day they will play important part in the construction of our country．So ways must be found to prevent children from leave off their sttldies．3.51.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
高考英语改错题及答案
高考英语改错题及答案【篇一：高考英语短文改错练习及答案】s=txt>(1)my parents live in the country. they keep a dog calling ah fu. one day my parent went to work in the fields taking my little sister with ah fu along. while they working, my sister walked to the river nearby. ah fu followed her there. she was trying topick a flower while she fell into the river. ah fu barked and jumped to the water immediate. when my parents heard ah fu barking they ran to the river. they saw ah fu swimming towards the bank carried my little sister. my parents praised ah fu warm. it was our brave ah fu who had saved my little sister.(2)may i have your attention, please? i have an announcement make.the student union is going to hold a party in saturday evening, august 15, to welcome my friends from the united states. the party will be hold in the roof garden of the main building. it will begin at 7:30 p.m. there will have music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gift. everybody may bring a small gift on this purpose. remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wish.don?t forget: 7:30, saturday evening, roof garden, main building. there is sure to be a lot of fun. everybody is welcomed.(3)dear peter,were so glad youre coming to join us on sunday. here is what you can find us. well have our picnics in the peoples park. you know where that is, isnt you? after you entered the park by the main gate, walk straightly on till you come to a stream. cross the stream and turning right. after walking in a while youll come to a hill. walk around to other side of the hill. there youll see a lake. well have our picnic here in the small wood by the lake. im sure youll have no trouble finding us. do come!yours.(4)a few days before my brother and i went to the cinema by bicycle. my brother was riding with me seating on the seat behind. as we came to the crossroad, a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. ?weve found you long last,? they said. and we dont know them. point to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, ?he stopped us about half hour ago and made us to catch the next offender. so come on, stand here. hoping you dont have to wait as long as we did . good luck.?may 3rd, sunday fine(5)dear mr smith,i was so please to hear from you and im writing to tell you something about my school. you are right, quite few changes have been taken place. on the one side of the road, there has a new classroom building. on the other side which a playground used to be now stand another new building, our library. in it there are all kind of books, newspapers or magazines. the playground is now in front of school. weve also plant a lot of trees in and around the school. i hope you come and see for yourself some days.best wishes!yours,(6)li hua my name is li hua. i was born in dalian, liaoning province on february 1977. i started school in 1984 while i was seven. i studied in guangming primary school 1984 to 1990. after that i went to no.6 middle school of dalian and graduate this summer. the main subjects i studied at school including chinese, maths, english, physics, chemical and computer. i like english and computer best but i am very good at them. last year i had won first prize in the school computer competition. in my spare time i enjoy listening to popular music and collect stamps. my favourite sport are swimming in summer and skating in winter.(7)dear dick,how nice to hear from you again! you want to know what is going on in schools in china. in short, things have begun to improve since we called on school to reduce learning load. idon?t know about the others, but i used to have to do works even on weekends by doing endless homework and attending classes as well. now, i have more free time. i can follow my own interests, such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. in the evenings, i can watch news on tv or read newspapers. what?s more, i can go to bed earlier. as far as i know, everyone is happy about the new arrangement of things.best wishes!yours.(8)almost all of us heard the story “here comes the wolf” when we are little kids. what we can learn from the story is we must be honest. therefore, there?re lots of phenomenon of dishonesty nowadays.being honest does great harm not only to other people and also to yourself. take the case of fake milk powder for an example. after drinking this kind of milk, the babyhad big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, what badly affected their health. to my great relief, the producers got accused and punished net all the serious consequences in the end.(9)dear bob,i?m so glad to learn that you are come in september. i found a place for you. it?s a small flat of 25 square metre, with a bedroom, a bathroom or a kitchen. in the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and the chair. the rent is 500 yuans per month. the flat is in a building on fangcao street, it is not far from jianxin chinese school. bus no. 11 can take you straightly to the school. in fact, it?s only one stop way. do you think you?d like it? if so , i can try and find another place for you. just let me know.yours.(10)it is well-known that we exist in the dynamic world with various difficulties. when we are faced them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. with confidence, we can find sometime the question is not as “huge”so we imagine.take most of our for example, the entrance exam to college seem to be a horrible monster. according, some people give up, some persist. in my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as good as full preparation, try and exert your strength, but then we will overcome all problems and challenges. on the whole, i believe we youngster should facethe difficulties in right manner. and nothing is impossible,brave it out and just do it![（1）答案]【解析】1. 此处是过去分词作短语作定语，因此，将calling 改为called。
英语高考短文改错精选和答案详解(25篇)
高考短文改错精选及答案详解(25篇)1.Friendship is importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all 76.our lives we can’t live without friendship just like we can’t77.live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on 78.well with one another to go ahead under different kind of 79. difficulties in front of us. But real friendship is easy to 80.come by, True friendship must be sincerely and be based 81.on understand each other but not on benefits of each 82.other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us. 83.By his advice we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore 84.more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves. 85.2.Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over 91. _______ the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since 92. _______ long ago , many adults and children called their friends together 93. _______to spend hours , even days play games . One of the reasons why people 94. _______like to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other words, 95. _______they help to keep people strongly and feeling good . When people are 96. _______playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities 97. _______for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy. 98. _______Many people enjoy sports by watch the others play. In American 99. _______big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 100 _______3.Last week life didn’t look very well for heart transplant patient.76. Barry Brooks from London. He was told six month ago that he would 77. need the operation if he is to survive. He immediately planned to make 78. the across Atlantic journey to the hospital in Chicago to have the 79. operation on. While he was in transit（中转）at JFK airport in New York, 80. he received the news that his new heart had accidentally transported 81. to other hospital. Barry then had to get on a different plane to 82. convey him to the other hospital, there the operation was carried. 83. out in time. Barry is now gradually recovering from the transplant. 84. but he told us,“ I feel like being a new man-this new heart has”85. changed my life.”4.Have you ever asked you why children 76.go to school? You’ll probably say that they 77.go to learn their native languages and other 78.languages, physics, geography, history or all 79.the other subject. That’s quite true, but 80.why they learn these things? And are these 81.things all what they learn at school? 82.There is much in school education than 83.just learning knowledge. We go school, above 84.all, to learn how to learn, so that when we’ll 85.finish school, we can continue to learn.5.The Chinese diet is the healthy in the world. 61.It contains lots of fruit and green vegetables. 62.It's high at fibre and low in sugar and fat. 63.But the western diet contains too many 64.fat and sugar in form of creams, cakes and so on. 65.Because this, westerners very easily 66.put to weight. As a result, scores of people 67.die from heart illness, some suffer from 68.bad teeth. So the doctor suggests us not 69.to do that. We'd better to eat our healthy food. 70.6.Dear classmates ,Now I’d like to tell you why I learn English. 1. __I often read English aloud and try learn something 2. __ important by hearts , which helps me remember it easily and 3. __ form the good habit of thinking in English 4. __I listen to a lot and talk with others in English . 5. __In this way , I was improved both my hearing 6. _ and my spoken English. I keep a diary in English every day but my 7. ___ spoken English is becoming better and better. 8. ___ I also try my best to master the necessary grammarknowledge. By this means , I can express itself 9. ___ in English correct . That’s the way I have been learnin g 10. __ English . I hope it will be useful to you .That’s all . Thank you.7．Dear Mr. Smith,I am writing to tell you a piece of excited news: 76.___________I won first place in the Spoken English Competition of 77.___________ our city . The achievement that I made it is due to your 78.___________ kind help. You spent so much time help me with my spoken 79.___________English that I made rapid progress, I remember you advice 80.___________" Speak slowly and clearly. " Thank you very much all your time 81.___________and advice . I heard that you and your wife will visit 82.___________our school before long. I'm very glad and look forward to 83.___________see you. I sent you a telescope as a small gift. 84.___________Please check the mail and I hope you will like them. 85.___________Yours Li Ming8．Nowadays more and more people, specially schoolboys and schoolgirls, are 76_____ give to video games. Many of them spend all of their spare time 77_____ to the games, and some even stay at the game machines all day 78_____ long. The reason is that they can enrich their lives as well as 79_____ knowledge by playing video games. But it’s a good way of relaxing 80_____ after a day’s work and study , as video games can bring a fun to 81_____ people’s life. However, on the other hand , play video games too 82_____ much can waste time and money, and has an ill effect on 83_____ people’s eyesight and healthy .So, video games, like coins, have two sides. 84_____ The key point is that we should make of the games properly. 85_____9Henry Royce did not like his car, that ran badly and often 76.broke down. So he decided to make a best car himself, 77.and in 1904 he produced his first new model. Charles Rolls, 78.a car maker, was very interested in Royce' s car, but soon 79.Rolls and Royce go into business together. One of their first 80.model was the Silver Ghost. In 1907, a Silver Ghost broke the 81.world’s record by drive 14,371 miles without breaking down 82.once. After the drive, it was cost just over ￡2 to put the car 83.back into perfect condition. This is not surprising that the Silver 84.Ghost was regarded “the best car in the world”. 85.10．Most families in China hoped their single children will 61. ______have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 62. ______So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 63. ______homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. 64. ______The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 65. ______wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 66. ______attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people 67. ______already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 68. ______Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our 69. ______government is carry out a plan to solve the education problems. 70. ______11One day, on her way school, Li Lan found a small bag 76.________near a bus station. She opened it and found a lot of money 77.________as soon as a calling card inside. From the calling card, she 78.________ invented the owner’s address and his telephone number. 79.________She thought the owner must very worried. So she went 80.________to the public telephones and called the owner. Then she 81.________ waited for the bus station. The owner came by taxi very 82.________ soon, and Li Lan gave the bag to him. The owner is so grateful 83._________to her that he took out from 100 yuan to reward Li Lan, 84._________ But Li Lan polite refused it and went on to school. 85._________12Fishing is my favorite sport. I often fished for 76.________________hour without catching anything, but this doesn’t worry 77. ________________me. Some fishermen are unlucky. Instead catching fish, 78. ________________they catch old boots and rubbish. I’m even less luck. I 79.________________never catch everything—even old boots after having 80. ________________spent a whole morning on the river. So I always go home 81. ________________with empty bag. “Y ou should give up fishing,” my friends 82. ________________say, “It’s a waste time.” But they don’t realize one 83. ________________ important thing. I’m not real interested in fishing. I’m 84. ________________only interested in sitting in a boat and do nothing at all. 85. ________________13．Life is made up from success and failure. No 76. ______ one is always success and also no one is always a 77.______ failure. So it doesn’t make much different 78.______ whether you are successful or not. The most 79._-____ important thing is simply that you do before your success 80.______ or failure. If you lost heart when you fail 81.______ or show proud when you succeed, you will 82.______ never succeed. Instead, you should face to it 83.______ bravely and keep up with your courage when you 84.______ success, and then your failure can be changed into success. 85._______14．I went to the Summer Palace last week. At the gateI happened to meet some American tourists. I greeted to 76.______them in English and then we began to chat. I got know 77.______that they were college students travel in China. Most of 78.______them were found of Chinese medicine. They are busy taking 79.______pictures and were much impressed with the changes that 80.______had been taken place in the past few years as well. After 81.______that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time. 82.______We exchanged our email address so that we could write to 83.______each other in future. They thanked us again and again. I 84.______was very glad to have a chance to practicing my oral English. 85._______15．Tom and Dick are next door neighbor who both 76. ____work in same office. They often walk together to and 77. ____from work. Once they were walking to home together 78. ____while it suddenly started to rain. Tom quickly opened 79. ____his umbrella and said proud, “My wife really was great80. ____ foresight. She said this morning it would rain and tell 81. ____me to carry my umbrella.” Dick smiled and walked 82. ____up to him under the protection of the umbrella, said, 83. ____“Mine has even great foresight. She didn’t let me84. ____carry one as she knew you’d share yours with you.”85. ____16．Before he was a teacher , Bob told me what he 76 ___________ would like to be a lawyer when he was at school . 77 ___________ He worked very hard in his lessons and tried to 78___________ enter into a famous university , but something unhappy 79 ___________ happened in his family , which make necessary for him 80___________ to make for a living . As a young man , he had been a 81___________ bus driver ,a dustman and a salesman .But he spends his 82 ___________ spare time studying and finally becoming a college 83___________ teacher . “Young people,” he often said ,“full of wishes 84 ___________ and dream s before they step into the society” 85 ___________17．As is known , that is interesting to teach children to 76__________ swim while they are still babies . Most the large towns in 77 __________ Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for 78__________ babies . The idea has quickly spread to Europe from where, 79__________in several countries , special courses are now offered to 80 __________the children who are from 7 to 24 month old . 81 __________The first step is to have child get rid of fear of 82 __________ water . Next , he is teaching to float in water . Once he 83__________can do that naturally and can swim with fear , the child can 84__________ master the technique and push him forward through the water. 85__________18．At a party, it is quite normal of someone to have 1. ____a short conversation with you and then go on to talking 2. ____to other people! Don’t think they dislike you or they 3. ____are impolite. It has the custom at many parties 4. ____in Britain, particularly there people are standing up rather 5. ____than sitting down. Here are two ways of finishing conversation 6. ____at a party. "Excuse me. I think I’ll go and get another drinking. 7. ____See you later, perhaps?" "Oh. Excuse me. I’ve just seen 8. ____Mary Jennings over here. I’ve got to discuss a meeting we 9. ____are been having on Thursday. Would you excuse me for a moment?"" 10. ____19．There are advantage for students to work while 76. __________studying at school. One of them was that 77. __________they can earn money. For the most part, 78. __________students working to earn money for their own 79. __________use. Earning their own money allow them 80. __________to spend on anything as if they please. 81. __________They would have to ask their parents for 82. __________money or for permission to do things by 83. __________the money. Some students may also to save 84. __________up for our college or future use. 85. __________20My sister found a bird on the roadside. We named himJack and keep him for about three years. He would greet us 76.________ in a tree outside our bedroom, calling "Hello" as we lay in 77.________ bed in a morning. He also passed "Hello" to the cats when 78._______ they came into the room. We often played a trick on himself. 79._______ We'd throw a coin as far as possibly. Jack would fly away 80._______ and bring it back for us throw again. He would also catch 81._______ the food throwing to him from the other side of the room and 82._______ sing happily. But for the most wonderful thing about Jack 83.________ were his musical ability. Leaving him at home all day, we 84._______ would return at night to hear that he'd picked up from the 85._______ radio in the day21．My car just wouldn’t move any further .It was complete 76．________ dead, and I was a few miles far away from anywhere on a cold, 77．_______wet night .I decided walk around a little before accepting I’d 78．_______have to spend the night in the car .Maybe I can find a 79．________ telephone .Actually ,I didn’t have to walk far before I 80．________ found a small house standing on a field with a light 81．________ shone from the sitting room .I knocked at the door and 82．________ was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the 83．________ door but listened to my story carefully .He said he had 84．________no t elephone, and it wasn’t’ one within walking distance, 85．________but offered to come and look at my car.22You can find all kinds information in just 76. __________a few minute on the Internet. It’s like going to a77. __________huge library without have to walk around to find 78. __________your books. Recently even though, many people 79. __________have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. 80. __________They have been reports in America about people 81. __________trying to steal person information for bad purposes. 82. __________Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all 83. __________ information are good to society. For example, you 84. __________can find such information like how to kill people. 85. __________The problem will become more serious in the future.23．I often dream of a teacher , I dream of standing on the 76．platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys 77．and girls . I teach them , play with them , but watch them 78．growing up . I am always young when I was staying 79．with them . I know there is not easy to be a teacher . Y ou 80．have to learn in order to teach . Without enough knowledge, 81．you can never learn well .What is more , you have to 82．be friends with your pupils and take good care of him . 83．Only in this way can you be a good teacher and win 84．respect from them . Though I am a student now , I willwork as very hard to make my dream come true . 85．24．When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handingin the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had not studied 76. _____________at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. 77. _____________I went through the test for many times but I could only answer 78. _____________ three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail 79. _____________ the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it 80. _____________ and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't 81. _____________ looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand 82. _____________ on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't 83. _____________ know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not push for 84._____________ cheating but instead gave me a second chance. 85. _____________ 25．Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 76. __________ describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 77. __________it seems always difficult for roe to do things well as 78. __________ them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as 79. __________a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 80. __________Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they 81. __________don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 82. __________very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 83. __________ once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t 84. __________seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 85. __________Yours,Tom答案1．76. important; 前加of 77. like--as 78. get 79. kinds 80. easy前加not 81. sincere 82. understanding 83. 正确84. persueded 85. more前加the 2．76. and －but 77. woman－women 78. called前加had 79. play- playing 80．正确81. feel-feeling 82. how-why 83. make-makes 84.watch+ing 85. sell-buy3．76. well-good/fine/nice/ok 77.month-months 78.is—was79.the—a 80.on 去掉81.had ∧been82.other—another 83.there—where 84.正确85.but—and4．76. 第二个you改为yourself。
高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)
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（1）Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burs t into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.（2）Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine（3）Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.（4）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.（5）Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua（6）Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll me et you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John（7）Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class S ix, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with someeffectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance. Thank you.Yours,Wang Min（8）Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighter s will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.（9）Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may al so get others confusing.（10）Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.（11）I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.（12）We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!（13）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.（14）Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua（15）You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on, "Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time，I woke up and found me still in bed!（16）It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. Itis so a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly，I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.（17）I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner（执业者）. One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course” I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they of fered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.（18）Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.（19）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many home work. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.（20）I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.（21）When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I hadstudied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.（22）I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.（23）Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told t he artist he didn’t want to any sha dows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.（24）I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..（25）I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.（26）This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for s everal month.”（27）Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market．After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital．After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death．As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures．Nor do they care about which happens to consumers．They shall be charged by law．Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua（28）Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua（29）Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping（30）Dear Lucy,I am very excited t o learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet（31）Abby，How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to stu dy in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes，Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold t owards me. Many time, Iwanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone！I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family．But when my cousin was born，everyone pays more attention to her．So I disliked her and could n’t get along well with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time．I tried to find a proper time to apologize．When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago，I took my cousin to play outside．In the way to the playground．I bought much snacks for her．Then we began chat．When we talked about their childhood，suddenly，I said“sorry”gently．She was silently，so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly．But after while she said：“Don’t say that．In my memory，you are always friendly．”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popu lar, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)Volunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday，the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas．Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should beresponsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好，常见类型要记牢。
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Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As every one knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busytaking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain.The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleepat the moment my head touched the pillow.（二）Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people.According to studies, many children spend more time watching televisionthan they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may notbe develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worriesmuch about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can bevery noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials.On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, allplanned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.（三）I’m the captain o f our school team so with my fellow playerswe’ve won sever al games. There will an important game next month.But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’tplay basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more timepreparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him.But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sportsand college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend hadno choice. He wanted to make their parents happy.(四)When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties .The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese andtried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised meto keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paperas I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrotea little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much andreads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their wordwere a great encouragement to me.（五）Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself asshy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for meto do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me asa fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends.I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talkedto each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger atonce. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’tseem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do?Yours,Xiao WeiOn Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend.I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museumand some parks. But I have spent lot my money, so I cannot even goout of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. Yes, a concert can be very excited.You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a concertcost so much. I may just listen to music, I have some records giving to meas birthday gifts. If I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend money.All right. That’s how I' m going to do.（七）Dear Susan,I’m very glad to hear about you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won’t find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bu s leaves every30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My class willbe over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together toa hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we’ll talk with our plan for the weekendover dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.Yours,Zhang Ming(八)You can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the Internet.It’s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books. Recently even though, many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. They have been reports in America about people trying to steal person Informations for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all information are good to society. For example, you can find such informationlike how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future.（九）Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby whichis both interested and fun. And every year more and more people starta stamp collection of your own and discover an interest which caneven last lifetime . Starting your collection of stamps are easy becausethey are nowhere. Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and lettersfrom friends can all provide you for stamps from all over the world. So onceyou’ve started collecting seriously, you will probably want to join in theStamp Collectors’Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection.（十）Though a great progress has been made in science these years, thereare still many people live in poor conditions. They make their livesby collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to schoolbecause they have not enough money to send their children to there.Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?The answer lies on the population explosion. A presidentof a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blame forthe poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit.”Although this few words sound simple enough, they haveclear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.（1）第一行：two-days 改为two-day 第二行：mountain 前加a第三行：noon后加when 第四行：them改为us第五行：visiting 改为visited 第六行：pictures；passed第七行：去down 第八行：and改为but 第九行：去at（2）第一行：with改为on 第二行：many改为some 第三行：because of第四行：删去be；read改为reading 第五行：programs第六行：noisy第七行：On改为In 第八行：去掉want前的to；real改为really(3)第一行：so改为and第二行：will后加be第三行：player 改为players；then改为now第四行：once改为any；删去in第五行：to改为for第六行：go改为going；第七行：was改为is第八行：their改为his(4)第一行：write后加in 第二行：去掉第一个in 第三行：anything改为everything第四行：my改为a；去掉should 第五行：talk改为talking 第六行：me改为myself 第七行：showed 后加it 第八行：reads改为read；word改为words(5)第一行：of改为from 第二行：quietly改为quiet 第三行：well 后加as；to改为at第四行：happy改为unhappy/sad 第五行：that改为why；talked改为talk第六行：stranger改为strangers 第七行：since改为but 第八行：去掉about (6)第一行：划掉myself ；a 改为the 第二行：visit 改为visiting 第三行：my前加of第四行：excited 改为exciting 第五行：So改为But第六行：cost改为costs；giving改为given 第七行：are改为is第八行：how改为what （7）第一行：去掉about；去掉the 第二行：although改为because / as第三行：find 后加it 第四行：minute 改为minutes；rightly 改为right第五行：or 改为and ；去掉together；第六行：with 改为about第七行：Having 改为Have（8）第一行：kinds 改为kinds of ；minute改为minutes 第二行：have改为having第三行：去掉even 第四行：They改为There ；person改为personal第五行：informations改为information；easily改为easy第六行：are改为is 第七行：what改为how（9）第一行：age改为ages 第二行：interested改为interesting第三行：your改为their；what改为which/that第四行：lifetime前加a；are改为is 第五行：nowhere改为everywhere第六行：for改为with；So改为But 第七行：去掉in第八行：exist改为exists（10）第一行：去掉a 第二行：live改为living 第三行：thing改为things第四行：去掉第二个to 第五行：在you前加do 第六行：on改为in第七行：us改为we 第八行：child改为children 第九行：tthis----these第十行：clear改为clearly。