2021年德国留学申请书准备指南

关键点1、你大学读这个专业为什么选择目前申请专业？2、你父母做什么工作对你申请专业有什么影响？3、你对目前申请专业领域的问题如何看待，比如申请金融，现在国家允许银行倒闭的问题你如何看待？4、你有什么和招生办公室老师们分享的事情吗？5、你有什么团队协助的案例吗？6、你是怎么样计划到这个国家或者地区度过1-2年的研究生生活？7、你毕业后的2-3年计划到什么样的单位做什么样的工作呢？8、你为什么选择这个国家而不是其它国家呢？9、你为什么选择这个国家的这个大学的这个专业而不是其它专业呢？写作技巧一、突出重点，主线明确清楚有力地表达您的求学动机，和学习学术能力。

在国内有一种错误的观点，要“煽情”才能有效果。

有的留学申请人就通过描述不相干活动展示“独特”的性格，或是学术上感觉没有什么可写的，就写自己考试时克服了重重困难，如何考取了好成绩！这是根本不着边际的写法，会让录取者发掘不到你的特点。

要知道，你是要在很短的时间内，清楚地用几百字告诉招生教授你是入学（奖学金）非常合格的人选，盲目“煽情”完全不需要。

二、结构简单，衔接紧密留学文书其实是你个人的广告！要重点突出，形象鲜明。

仔细想想，留下深刻印象的广告哪个不是简明而富有创意的？许多申请人往往想把自己的全部优点都写出来告诉教授，觉得这样才能全面的展现自己。

但是：“Simple is the best ”，试想一下，招生教授天天都要做大量的教学工作，还要抽出时间阅读数量可观的留学申请资料，只有那种简单有力的文章才能HIT THE TARGET，让人印象深刻！我们的理念是简明而富有创意的！三、符合西方思维习惯文化的差异导致东西方在什么是美德和优缺点的看法上不尽相同。

我们在以往的经历中发现，有些留学申请人表达出来的“优点”实际上在西方看来是缺点，反映申请人对学术问题毫无主见；而有些申请人认为不好的东西恰恰是西方人所欣赏的，认为这些能表现出申请人布满个性。

所以申请人要了解如何以西方的思维方式取舍你的申请素材，把有益的亮点有选择性地挑选出来，在适当地篇幅里展示出来。

英文范文Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies， economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its global position. Though more and more companies built，management of companies cannot catch up with the development of the companies. Management is a burgeoning field in China， so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management in England.The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to my childhood. My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modern entrepreneurs. As a young girl， it was inspirational hearing about his business ventures， and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. My mother was also involved in business as an accountant，helping him with simple calculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I， also， would someday be able to enter the realm of business.With the time of growing up， I preferred reading books to satisfy my curiosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I encountered. Subjects on business and management became a special fascination to me and my knowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasing rapidly.As a high school student in China， I had to concentrate on the College Entrance Examination （CEE）， even so， books not related to the exams were never excluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June， 2001，I was so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in the department of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional Chinese Medicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be a failure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms， I realized that I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At that moment， I lost my direction and objectives.My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter of fact， I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American，and some books about management by Peter ker. I began to notice somethinginteresting： Why some companies can produce more than others？ Why some company can sell more than others？ Why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing the same difficulties？With the questions in my mind， I started to read many relevant books.I was lucky to read the book “J ack：Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch，in Which John A. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for a company. When I was a junior， I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. I should manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shop even made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the run the shop. From this， my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business has been greatly developed， definitely I was increasingly interested in what I was doing. By December， 2003， I had finally determined to take business management as my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge， I strived to gain more practical work experience in some big companies.Fortunately， as a senior， I began by conducting an internship in the Architecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months， I worked as an assistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the different departments in this company and to draft some management system，which broadened my perspective of management conditions and business performance in different industries. The experience showed me that management is much more important than that of I thought in big companies. After graduation， I continued my work in this company. In May， 2005，the company offered me an opportunity to participate in an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depth discussions with teachers and students in the classes， they all encouraged me to pursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual ability and the brand new ideas I mentioned.During the short period of training， I realized that pursuing a higher degree in management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster， with its excellence in management， represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challenging environment， I can build the required foundation of knowledge related to management to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission will be my first step of success. With this in mind，I hereby submit my application， and await your favorable reply.。