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美国留学申请PS范文

美国留学申请PS范文

美国留学申请:PS范文(机械工程专业) 2010-09-27 17:14:20 来源:留学E路通字号:大 | 中 | 小范文1:Mechanical engineering is the foundation of industry. It plays a key role in the national economy.It’s broad field including general engineering, aeronautical, chemical and nuclear engineering, etc. Provides a sufficient room of choices for me to realize the dream of becoming a scientist or a mechanical engineer. It was with this fact in mind that I decided to choose mechanical engineering as the major field of study for both undergraduate and graduate career at Tsinghua University.During nearly eight years of study at Tsinghua University, I completed a total of 47 courses in undergraduate study, 14 courses in graduate study. The major courses that interested me most included: Theoretical Mechanics, Strength of Materials, Elasticity and Plasticity Mechanical Analysis of Plastic Deformation Processes, Theory of Metal Forming, Computer Language and Programming, Mechanical Design, etc… After graduation, I entered the First Heaby Machinery Works (in northeast of China). During this period, I became familiar with the design and manufacturing of some heavy machines, thus furthering my interest in mechanical engineering. At the same time, I found that many good ideas of design could not be put into existence because of the backwardness in raw material quality and processing techniques. This fact impelled the related areas and me to concentrate my research interest on materials science and processing. Through careful survey, I selected a subject about the quality control of heavy disc forging and took it as my research subject for master degree. After over tow years of investigation, I finally made a great innovation in the forging process, making the end product rate increase from 50% to 90%. In the course of investigation and my later working after graduate study, I also found some problems that are common in mechanical industry. For example, how do cracks in products during hot metal working generate anddevelop? How to avoid cracks? How do non-metallic inclusions affect the properties of materials? How to control the content, shape and distribution of inclusions in final products? Solution to these problems will improve the quality of many kinds of products. But they are often difficult to be solved because they include knowledge of many disciplines and require many new research methods. I feel that what I have learned is far from sufficient to tackle all the problems. Thus I have decided to continue my education by pursuing a doctoral degree in mechanical engineering in a highly industrialized country like the United States.I plan to complete my degree objective I 3 to 5 year and hope that I will be able to further my knowledge I areas including Solid Mechanics, Materials Scien ce and Processes, CAD/CAM, etc… After completing my graduate study, I will return to contribute my learning to my country.I plan to work as a researcher of a teacher at an institute or a university. 范文2:An experienced engineer of security printing with China’s Central Bank, I now would like to scale higher intellectual heights by pursuing Ph. D. studies in mechanical engineering at your university. I believe that my strong background in CAD has adequately prepared me to embark(从事) on this endeavor(努力).I have been wonk(用功的学生) of China, a Chinese version of the Federal Reserve, at its unique research institute of security printing, with the responsibility of designing the Chinese currency and the machinery to produce it. By engaging me in a variety of projects, the job afforded me ample exposure to cutting-edge developments in computer technologies, particularly in CAD software. I have, for example, recently redeveloped a purchased CAD (Computer Aided Design) software to make it more suitable for our own purposes. By adding our own part/subassembly to the database and make our own drawing criteria, we have achieved dramatically better efficiency.My job performance, which has won me professional respect from all of my colleagues, was achieved thanks to the strong background I acquiredas a student in computer science. My undergraduate GPA ranked first among the 63 students of classmates in mechanical department, for which I was awarded first-class and second-class prizes many times. My graduate GPA ranked among the top 4% of the 105 students in my year, which won me the “San Hao” scholarship every year during the three years of my graduate studies.Unlike many other Chinese students, who are content with performing well in exams, I made a point of learning through my own hands-on experiences. In the Master’s program at the Beijing Institute of Printing, I gained an in-depth understanding of artificial intelligence, including expert system and genetic algorithm, especially in neural network. For my thesis, I programmed a multi-level BP neural network with C language to analyze my mathematical model, and applied much of my knowledge in optimization. I thus became able to program with a host of different computer languages, especially C++, with which I helped my graduate advisor to design a paper-cutting machine. To analyze the mechanism statically and dynamically, I programmed a software system to analyze and emulate it on screen. In undergraduate studies, I had often programmed with Fortran77 and the Basic language.Upon the completion of my Master’s studies, I easily passed the doctoral record examination in CAD/CAM of Beijing University, one f the top universities in China. But I gave up the opportunity in order to gain more practical experience in the industry. The decision proved to be right, as it guaranteed me better access to sophisticated facilities, such as state-of-the-art personal computers. With the People’s Bank of China, I have thus accumulated solid expertise in many kinds of operating and application software systems, particularly in CAD. I now have a firm grip on the latest developments in computer science in China.The challenges I met and the successes I achieved at the People’s Bank have not only endowed me with confidence but also fired off my desire to further improve myself. I have enjoyed high-quality and efficient production with the use of a kind of PC-based CAD software, MDT, developedby Autodesk Corporation. I now have a dream: some day, every person can design his favorite product with some sort of CAD software, and then search for an ideal factory over high-speed internet its production; and the factory will put specifications of the product, as it has received them via the high-speed internet into its CIMS, and out pops the product, as designed, at the end of the factory’s production line. It is a beautiful dream for every engineer, but many difficulties the speed of data-transfer and how to manage the product data among CAD, CAM, CAPP and CAE systems. These questions are fascinating, and I would like to come up with my own answers to them.To prepare myself for advanced studies in your country, I have persisted in improving my English proficiency. As demonstrated by my score of 700 (96%) in the verbal section of GRE, I now have an adequate command of English for undertaking graduate studies in your program.。

哈佛大学个人陈述PS三篇优秀范文示例

哈佛大学个人陈述PS三篇优秀范文示例

哈佛大学个人陈述PS三篇优秀范文示例撰写留学文书最难的部分是personal statement(PS),我们可以通过以下三篇优秀的哈佛大学优秀essay来了解下,如何撰写高质量的文章。

第一篇申请美国哈佛大学的Essay范文,以音乐才能为主题,采用的是场景描述式来制造戏剧冲突,引起读者注意。

Essay题材类型为talent。

Essay短文讲述了作者的才能:Music。

"A special Performance"I stood behind the curtains listening to the applause to the previous act. I exhaled, realizing that this was a moment that fulfilled my childhood wish. Tonight was special because instead of an alto aria or a jazz lick, I had prepared a song unique to my identity. I curled my fingers around the microphone and waited impatiently as the curtains opened.My love for performance stemmed from my appreciation of music as a child. In the city in China where I spent the first ten years of my life, I never found a choir to join and never laid eyes on a grand piano. Nonetheless, I treasured my passion for song and sought ways to bring music into my life. I sang with our old record player when I was barely tall enough to reach it. On certain afternoons, my best friend and I would tape bed sheets to the ceiling as curtains and invite neighbors to come listen. There, we sang in duet, danced, and bowed while clasping each other's hands. Captured in our own musical sanctuary, we never noticed the hours that passed by.Music evokes in me the emotions that words and pictures cannot. I also revel in the intellectual challenges that music offers. I find it thrilling to tackle difficult, delicious repertoire, and I enjoy composing my own melodies. Through music, I can share and celebrate my past. When I was asked to share my cultural talents at my high school, I looked for a song that my mother sang when I was young, but I could not find the sheet music. A week before tonight, I sat down by the old piano in the practice room at school. With only the old tune ringing faintly in my mind, my hands soon took a life of their own and experimented with chords, arpeggios, and trills. I superimposed these on the original melody and composed variations. My voice, too, frolicked with the piano as I sang the tune repeatedly. I was lost in another musical paradise. I felt like a child again, tucked under the covers, listening to my mother's song as I drifted away to dreams.Now, dressed in an old Chinese dress that my mother had worn in her youth, I stepped onto the empty stage illuminated by pale blue light. I held the microphone up to my lips and smiled before starting. Then, I brought to life the beautiful ballad that had brightened my childhood in China. My mind overflowed with warm memories of that faraway city as I lulled the audience with my melody. When I caught my mother's face in the audience, I knew she nestled in the same air of nostalgia.Music allows me to present my native culture and contribute to the diversity in my community. It has stimulated my mind and provided an outlet for my creativity. To me, nothing is more pleasurable than being imaginative. Carrying my childhood love of music through my teenage years has been a gratifying experience, and I look forward to continuing in my undergraduate years.哈佛大学Essay申请范文分析与点评AnalysisThe beauty of this student's essay is that she opens herself up to us, the readers. She starts with a catchy opening, explaining in rich detail how she is standing behind the curtain and why the night is especially meaningful to her. We can feel what she feels as she stands there. She gives a detailed visual description and explains her thoughts as well.The author then explains the roots of her interest in music. By sharing her childhood experience, she demonstrates how this has been a lifelong passion for her. We can imagine her as a child with her friend, putting on performances for the neighbors. Knowing how an author's interest in a given field of study began can add depth and dimension to the reader's overall characterization of the student.In the third paragraph, our musician shares what goes through her mind. This is valuable to admissions officers because they can see her ability to analyze her thoughts and her level of self awareness. Self refection demonstrates maturity and the capability to take a step back from a situation and see the deeper meaning of it. She explains why she is so tied to music and why it is an intellectual experience for her to recall her childhood song from memory and slowly piece it together.Through her essay, we understand why this specific performance holds such great meaning. We see the connection to her past and to her mother. She makes several accomplishments through her writing—sharing an extracurricular interest, touching on her childhood growing up in China, revealing the intellectual side of her talent, and showing the connection that she has to her heritage and her family. After reading this essay, the admissions officers probably felt that they had a deeper understanding of who this student was and that she was someone they'd like to get to know better.My Heart is BigWhoever meets me the first time shows sy mpathy to my appearance. I am 5, 6” tall but just 80 pounds. Even my parents are concerned with my emaciation. My mom always told people when I was bom I was only three poundsand I was diagnosed with a severe heart problem. Nobody expected I could survive long. It seems that the fact I have turned 18 is nothing but a miracle of God. At home, my parents tried to prevent me from any heavy labor but they were wrong. Yes, I am very thin but I am okay. In reality, I often surprise people who belittle me. I might look emaciated, but my heart had been big and I am strong now.On the basketball courtBoys, especially on the basketball court, would pay a big price for their misjudging of me. One day I was playing basketball by myself. A group of boys came to me and asked me to clear the court for them. “ Why should I do that? I came first and I am still playing,” I refused their request. “Are you kidding me? You play basketball?” All of them started laughing at me. u Hey, you, do you dare to take a one-on-one with me?” Provoked by the boys, I picked the tallest one to be my opponent. Changing the speed, breaking through, and then a perfect hook shot, out of theirexpectations, I got one point easily. This is me, thin but not weak.As the monitorTeachers would show sympathy to my emaciated image. In the first day of senior year, nobody wanted to be the class monitor considering the heavy work load at this critical moment. When our new teacher was trying to find out what to do, I raised my hand, and said, “I want to be the monitor and I am confident I will do a great job.” After I volunteered to take the responsibility, the class fell into silence. I could see from my teacher’ s eyes that she doubted whether I was capable to do this job. “Give me three months prob ation period. If I fail, you could choose someone else,” I said to my teacher in a firm tone. It turned out that everyone’ s doubt was eliminated in the following three months because I kept everything in great order and our class was far ahead others in the evaluation of the whole grade. This is me, thin but not weak. As the child of my parentsBelieve it or not even my parents were always underestimating my strength. In 9th grade, I was selected to be an exchange student in Singapore TanjongKatong Secondary School. Excited at the news, I told my parents immediately but they did not feel happy about it at all. Repeatedly they tried to persuade me out of this because they were worried about my health and they did not want me to go abroad a lone. “Mom and Dad, you cannot protect me all the time. I can take care of myself. I promise. ” With great effort, I got their permission and spent a week alone in Singapore.I made friends with local students and I really enjoyed my life there. This is me, thin but not weak.Facing my futureWhen I decided to further my study in the United States, to my surprise my parents did not say “ no ” ; instead, they said that now they were convinced that their daughter was thin but not weak. I felt really grateful that my parents eventually saw the big heart in me. I don,t want to prove anything, but I don,t want to be belittled either. What I want to do is to be regarded as a normal person to share the same responsibilities and enjoy the same days.文章翻译:我的心很大每个人第一次见到我都会露出一副怜惜的神情。

出国ps范文

出国ps范文

出国ps范文1. 美国留学文书PS怎样写才能更好的体现本人晓得大家很忙,所以先供应个摘要,假如感爱好,可以再看具体内容。

[ 摘要 ]1. PS三大准绳a. 不说废话b. 突出重点c. 规律严密2. PS三大境界a. 摆现实b. 讲道理c. 更高境界大家在刚开头写美国留学ps时,确定都有不晓得该写啥的感觉,然后在写完PS后还有不清晰该怎样改的经受。

为此信任许多人花了不少冤枉时间,其实假如本人对衡量一篇PS的标准有所熟悉的话,这些都完全可以避开,同时大大提高本人在预备申请材料时的工作效率。

下面总结个人在修改众多PS后的一些心得体会。

A.Rule of Thumb 下面具体引见各个准绳。

1.不说废话许多人的美国留学ps读起来不爽就是由于写了许多废话。

看完后总结一下没讲什么内容,废话还不少。

这样给人的印象是你的文章特别空洞,次要观点没有得到强有力的支持,让老外觉得你这个人不擅长抓住问题本质。

而且,废话多了,本人出错的机会也增多了,一旦PS里有几句话没表达清晰的话,读者可能就看不下去了(人家又不是在做阅读理解),这样对我们非常不利。

我们原来就不是native speakers,语法错误要尽量避开,语言表达要尽量地道,废话要尽量不说!所以建议大家在修改本人PS时,认真分析每一句话,假如该话存在与不存在对文章本身没有什么大的影响的话,那这句话很有可能就是废话。

2.突出重点许多人在写PS 时都不清晰本人究竟要写啥,不晓得怎样开头,不晓得怎样结尾,想尽方法怎样讲个故事好吸引老外,等等一大堆想法。

有想法当然很好,但发觉本人想法越多,越不晓得怎样下手,结果写出来的PS掺杂了众多特色元素,搞得五花八门的,没讲一点实质内容。

这里,我得提示大家一点,我们写PS的首要目的是要展现本人,让老外能在扫你PS的30秒内尽可能地了解你这个人。

所以怎样把你本人引见清晰了怎样来。

许多人刚开头写PS时期望太高,恨不得本人写出一篇千古奇文,结果发觉花了几个小时,甚至几天就写了几句或几段,结果还不太尽人意。

美国留学 计算机专业PS范文

美国留学 计算机专业PS范文

美国留学计算机专业PS范文在美国留学申请中,留学文书起着重要的作用,特别是在硬件条件不是很突出的情况下,留学文书可能起着决定性的作用。

美国研究生申请文书包括个人陈述、推荐信、简历、Essay以及Writing Sample等,而个人陈述(PS)所占的比重更大,因而个人陈述的撰写更需慎重,需要全面考虑。

计算机是美国留学申请的热门专业之一,小编特为大家整理了一篇计算机专业PS范文,以供大家参考。

计算机专业ps 范文Computer Science Personal StatementComputing and its applications have always fascinated me and for this reason I have found my A-level courses extremely interesting. This also has maintained my long-term interest in computer-related careers.I have studied mathematics, physics and computing to A-level and also during the first year at Hills Road Sixth Form College I re-took my GCSE English.Last year and this year I have been improving my self-learning, and developing many skills with the help of the key skills qualifications and A-level General Studies. My sincerest desire is to become a computer scientist. Specifically, I am interested in exploring how problems can be modeled and solved using artificial intelligence.I also want to learn about human cognition and machine intelligence. I have been studying the online debate over whether machines will ever become "intelligent" given the current course of research and reading about such issues as whether a machine can acquire "common sense" (as discussed in Hubert Dreyfus's book “What Computers Still Can't Do”). I have been exploring many different areas within the domain of artificial intelligence (such as neural networks, genetic algorithms, and natural language processing). The bottom line is that I want to be a part of this exciting field.Over the summer I traveled to Russia, and thoroughly enjoyed exploring a very different part of the world. My other interests include current affairs and sports, such as football, tennis and general fitness. Ever since the start of sixth form I have been a successful member of the college football team. I have played basketball as an enrichment activity because it was a new sport to me at the beginning of sixth form. I also participated in a 5-a-side indoor football tournament at the college. In addition to pursuing my academic studies I would like to continue some of these sports at university.以上就是美国留学计算机专业的PS范文,希望对大家有所帮助。

美国留学个人陈述管理学专业PS

美国留学个人陈述管理学专业PS

美国留学个人陈述管理学专业PS第一篇:美国留学个人陈述管理学专业PSUs1cm美国留学个人陈述管理学专业PS范文在美国留学申请中,个人陈述的重要性不言而喻,下面是美国留学管理学专业的优秀个人陈述范文,希望对大家有帮助。

Management Personal StatementI would like to apply to do a Management degree.Having acted as Managing Director on a Young Enterprise Team whilst doing my ‘AS' levels, I came up with innovative ideas that made a very successful company.Having held management positions within Human Resources, Operations, and Finance, I quickly realised that pursuing a management degree at university would be ideal for me.After my GCSE's, I held a temporary job as a junior in an Insolvency practice, in order to gain work experience.Having to work to tight deadlines taught me how to work independently as part of a professional team.I learnt that in business, if one person lacks productivity, then everyone else can suffer, and also how to motivate others as a means of preventing such issues.I used the skills learnt to enhance my role as the Managing Director of my young Enterprise company, particularly methods of motivation and delegation, and the significance of being accountable for others.Having spent nearly three years working part time in a Health food shop alongside my studies, I developed my communication skills, with both colleagues and customers, and proved to be a trustworthy employee.Being appointed as Deputy Head Boy in the sixth form was a great honour to me.My skills were greatly enhanced by holding this position, as I would often have to listen, and respond to issues brought up by fellow prefects, and students lower down theschool.Through activities such as Lunch duty, I learnt the worth of different leadership skills, and that it is important to treat everyone as an individual in order to get results.I was always keen to stay into the evening to help out at school events.Socialising is very important to me, and I am always keen to meet new people.I enjoy trying new foods to increase my knowledge of different cultures, and my culinary skills will prove very useful in independent university life.I enjoy travelling, and learning about modern history.Having recently returned from Prague, I visited a concentration camp.This was a moving experience for me, and something I will never forget.Music is one of my biggest hobbies, and I use music to help me unwind and reflect on things.I use the internet to keep up with current affairs and sports news.I have always been a keen sportsman, representing my school in many sporting activities.I enjoy running, particularly competing in sprint races, but also long distance running as a means of keeping fit.I always try to go for a run every evening, during breaks between my A Level studies.I represented my school as a keen member of the district and Maccabi Great Britain athletics teams, particularly in the relay.I formally played tennis and table tennis in national competitions, and more recently I have played in football, rugby, and cricket leagues outside of school.I believe that my experiences have prepared me for independent university life.My social skills together with my ambition to succeed in life prove me to be good candidate for a Management Degree.第二篇:留学美国个人陈述个人陈述:重点(每一个段落都要有一个主题,第一句话是主题,下面以此来展开,支持第一句。

美国化学工程专业的申请文书PS范文

美国化学工程专业的申请文书PS范文

人的进步需要有榜样的激励,而我一路走来,幸得楷模的陪伴使自己走的更远更踏实。

我最早的楷模就是身边的我父母,他们都从事化工方面的工作,我从小此耳濡目染,对化工就有浓厚的兴趣。

之后到了大学我接触了科研并且跟随名师做研究,除了收获了专业知识技能知识,我更看到了导师在科研上的勤奋敬业和不遗余力。

在导师的影响下,我意识到想要在科学方面有所建树的人都需要有这样一种思维,那就是严谨和务实。

其次,想要在一个领域中成为最优秀的人,要长时间地保持兴趣和激情,对专业的最前沿的进展保持持续的关注,同时要有持之以恒的努力。

最后,还要淡看过程中的成功与失败。

我觉得这不仅是在这个专业方面获得成功关键,也是在人生之中获得成功的关键。

随着自己进入大学学习,专业学习的层次越往上,越是能够体会到专业的魅力,也越渴望去学习、体会、创造。

为了进一步提升自己,我将大学期间的学习生活安排得紧张而充实,除了认真学习理论知识之外,我也积极参与专业方面的研究实践活动中。

由于学校优秀的师资和实验室配置,同时加上自己积极找老师沟通主动寻找机会,我很早就参与了到实验室项目中去。

然而通过多次参与实验室研究,我不仅仅丰富收获了自己的研究经历,也锻炼了自己所渴求的精神——严谨务实,坚持不懈。

回顾自己一路的研究活动,对我最重要的研究就是长达一年的可见光作用下的绿色有机合成。

我主动担任了组长的职责,带领小组进行一系列的实验。

该实验主要目的是制备出纳米级别的可见光光催化剂,实现其在绿色环境下的对苯甲醇到苯甲醛的催化作用。

小组原本的构想是制备出Fe3O4@TiO2@Pt这种具有核壳模型的纳米粒子,但是经过多次试验发现这个反应很复杂,中间环节需要长时间保持恒温过程,而整个制备过程长达一个星期,也会用到如氯铂酸等等极其贵重的试剂。

我们经过几个月的尝试,虽然成功了两次,但是转化率不是很高,只能达到30%左右,因此我们小组及时决定放弃原先的方案,改用新的模型TiO2/GSs。

留学申请 - PS范文(金融工程硕士专业)

留学申请 - PS范文(金融工程硕士专业)

美国留学文书 金融工程硕士专业PS样本Personal StatementHaving a flair for Economics and accounting I have decided that I want a degree in Accounting and Finance or_ Management. The many brilliant representatives of the management community around the world have strengthened that resolve.When I worked in my school as a tutor of English as a Second Language for students from a community school in Muscat, I realized the importance of a strong leader who could organize, command respect, and be able to work well with others. These ideas were further enforced by my month long internship at Novartis Pharmaceutical (Accounts and Finance Department and Human Resources Department).I attended the Harvard Model Congress in Paris and won the Award of Distinction. One skill in particular that contributed to this award was my confident public speaking.The last 4 months have been crucial in my learning of real world business and economics. For my IB Extended Essay, titled “To What Extent Does Subway in Oman Operate as an Oligopoly”, I set out to prove the oligopolistic structure of the fast food market in Oman. In this effort, I have come across many real life complexities in pricing behaviour, profit making and other aspects of the Theory of the Firm. While。

sop和ps中文范文

sop和ps中文范文

sop和ps中文范文SOP(Statement of Purpose)和PS(Personal Statement)是申请留学或者申请奖学金时需要提交的重要文件。

下面是一篇关于SOP和PS的中文范文:亲爱的招生委员会:我非常荣幸能有机会向您申请XX大学的XX专业。

我对这个专业有着浓厚的兴趣,并且相信我有能力在这个领域取得优秀的成绩。

通过这封信和我的申请材料,我希望能向您展示我为什么对该专业感兴趣以及我为什么是一个合适的候选人。

我想谈谈我对该专业的兴趣和热情。

从我还是一个孩子的时候,我就对科学和技术产生了浓厚的兴趣。

我喜欢探索新的知识和解决问题的过程。

在高中时,我选择了学习数学和物理作为我的主修科目,并且在这两个领域取得了优异的成绩。

通过学习这些科目,我开始对计算机科学产生了浓厚的兴趣,我热衷于了解计算机科学对现代社会的重要性以及它在不同领域的应用。

我想强调我的学术背景和个人经历。

我在本科阶段选择了计算机科学作为我的专业,并且在这个领域取得了良好的成绩。

我参与了几个软件开发项目,并且通过这些项目锻炼了我的编程和解决问题的能力。

我还参加了一些与计算机科学相关的学术会议和研讨会,积极与其他专业人士交流和学习。

这些经历不仅提高了我的专业知识水平,也培养了我的团队合作和领导能力。

我想谈谈我为什么选择申请XX大学。

我对XX大学的卓越教学和研究声誉非常着迷。

我相信在这个学术环境中学习将会给我提供丰富的学习资源和机会,以及与优秀的教授和同学们互动的机会。

我还对该大学的实践和实习机会非常感兴趣,我相信这些机会将为我提供宝贵的实践经验,并帮助我将理论知识应用于实际问题。

我对XX专业的兴趣和热情,以及我的学术背景和个人经历,使我相信我是一个合适的候选人。

我期待着在XX大学学习并为这个专业做出贡献。

谢谢您对我的关注和考虑。

此致敬礼。

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美国留学申请:PS范文(机械工程专业) 2010-09-27 17:14:20 来源:留学E路通字号: | | 范文1:Mechanical engineering is the foundation of industry. It plays a key role in the national economy.It’s broad field including general engineering, aeronautical, chemical and nuclear engineering, etc. Provides a sufficient room of choices for me to realize the dream of becoming a scientist or a mechanical engineer. It was with this fact in mind that I decided to choose mechanical engineering as the major field of study for both undergraduate and graduate career at Tsinghua University.During nearly eight years of study at Tsinghua University, I completed a total of 47 courses in undergraduate study, 14 courses in graduate study. The major courses that interested me most included: Theoretical Mechanics, Strength of Materials, Elasticity and Plasticity Mechanical Analysis of Plastic Deformation Processes, Theory of Metal Forming, Computer Language and Programming, Mechanical Design, etc… After graduation, I entered the First Heaby Machinery Works (in northeast of China). During this period, I became familiar with the design and manufacturing of some heavy machines, thus furthering my interest in mechanical engineering. At the same time, I found that many good ideas of design could not be put into existence because of the backwardness in raw material quality and processing techniques. This fact impelled the related areas and me to concentrate my research interest on materials science and processing. Through careful survey, I selected a subject about the quality control of heavy disc forging and took it as my research subject for master degree. After over tow years of investigation, I finally made a great innovation in the forging process, making the end product rate increase from 50% to 90%. In the course of investigation and my later working after graduate study, I also found some problems that are common in mechanical industry. For example, how do cracks in products during hot metal working generate anddevelop? How to avoid cracks? How do non-metallic inclusions affect the properties of materials? How to control the content, shape and distribution of inclusions in final products? Solution to these problems will improve the quality of many kinds of products. But they are often difficult to be solved because they include knowledge of many disciplines and require many new research methods. I feel that what I have learned is far from sufficient to tackle all the problems. Thus I have decided to continue my education by pursuing a doctoral degree in mechanical engineering in a highly industrialized country like the United States.I plan to complete my degree objective I 3 to 5 year and hope that I will be able to further my knowledge I areas including Solid Mechanics, Materials Science and Proce sses, CAD/CAM, etc… After completing my graduate study, I will return to contribute my learning to my country.I plan to work as a researcher of a teacher at an institute or a university. 范文2:An experienced engineer of security printing with China’s Cen tral Bank, I now would like to scale higher intellectual heights by pursuing Ph. D. studies in mechanical engineering at your university. I believe that my strong background in CAD has adequately prepared me to embark(从事) on this endeavor(努力).I have been wonk(用功的学生) of China, a Chinese version of the Federal Reserve, at its unique research institute of security printing, with the responsibility of designing the Chinese currency and the machinery to produce it. By engaging me in a variety of projects, the job afforded me ample exposure to cutting-edge developments in computer technologies, particularly in CAD software. I have, for example, recently redeveloped a purchased CAD (Computer Aided Design) software to make it more suitable for our own purposes. By adding our own part/subassembly to the database and make our own drawing criteria, we have achieved dramatically better efficiency.My job performance, which has won me professional respect from all of my colleagues, was achieved thanks to the strong background I acquiredas a student in computer science. My undergraduate GPA ranked first among the 63 students of classmates in mechanical department, for which I was awarded first-class and second-class prizes many times. My graduate GPA ranked among the top 4% of the 105 students in my year, which won me the “San Hao” scholarship every year during the three years of my graduate studies.Unlike many other Chinese students, who are content with performing well in exams, I made a point of learning through my own hands-on experiences. In the Master’s program at the Beijing Institute of Printing, I gained an in-depth understanding of artificial intelligence, including expert system and genetic algorithm, especially in neural network. For my thesis, I programmed a multi-level BP neural network with C language to analyze my mathematical model, and applied much of my knowledge in optimization. I thus became able to program with a host of different computer languages, especially C++, with which I helped my graduate advisor to design a paper-cutting machine. To analyze the mechanism statically and dynamically, I programmed a software system to analyze and emulate it on screen. In undergraduate studies, I had often programmed with Fortran77 and the Basic language.Upon the completion of my Master’s studies, I easily passed the doctoral record examination in CAD/CAM of Beijing University, one f the top universities in China. But I gave up the opportunity in order to gain more practical experience in the industry. The decision proved to be right, as it guaranteed me better access to sophisticated facilities, such as state-of-the-art personal computers. With the People’s Bank of China, I have thus accumulated solid expertise in many kinds of operating and application software systems, particularly in CAD. I now have a firm grip on the latest developments in computer science in China.The challenges I met and the successes I achieved at the People’s Bank have not only endowed me with confidence but also fired off my desire to further improve myself. I have enjoyed high-quality and efficient production with the use of a kind of PC-based CAD software, MDT, developedby Autodesk Corporation. I now have a dream: some day, every person can design his favorite product with some sort of CAD software, and then search for an ideal factory over high-speed internet its production; and the factory will put specifications of the product, as it has received them via the high-speed internet into its CIMS, and out pops the product, as de signed, at the end of the factory’s production line. It is a beautiful dream for every engineer, but many difficulties the speed of data-transfer and how to manage the product data among CAD, CAM, CAPP and CAE systems. These questions are fascinating, and I would like to come up with my own answers to them.To prepare myself for advanced studies in your country, I have persisted in improving my English proficiency. As demonstrated by my score of 700 (96%) in the verbal section of GRE, I now have an adequate command of English for undertaking graduate studies in your program.。

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