2020届高考英语 考前冲刺精品复习讲义写作(十六) 北师大版
2020届高考英语 考前冲刺精品复习讲义写作(二十七) 北师大版
2020;2020届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义（北师大版）：写作（二十七）ABC公司准备招聘程序设计员。
条件是：外语好、有创造能力和协作精神。
请以“李明”为名，写一封自荐信。
学生习作·外教批改Dear Sir/Madam,1I am writing to apply for the position of programmer in your ABC company as advertised inyesterday’s newspaper.2My name is Li Ming.3 I will graduate from university in two months.My major iscomputerscience.I am very good at English，especially spoken and written4 English and writing.Incollege，I often come up with new ideas or imagination.5 and am known for my activeimagination，always I am eager to create new things.Anyone who works with me will findme a nice man because I am6 easygoing and friendly，able to work independently or aspart of a team.7I am interested in your company simply8 because your company enjoys a high of its goodreputation for quality products and good excellent aftersalesservice aftersales service.Thecompany offers a good prospect for me if I can work there.9I am ready to work hard and achieve more success for the company.I would welcome anopportunity to discuss this application at interview. I am looking10 Look forward tohearingfrom you soon.Sincerely yours11Yours faithfully，Li Ming旁批1．如果不知道收信人的名字，要这样写。
高考英语一轮复习 提能训练(16)Unit 16 Stories(含解析)北师大版-北师大版高三全册
Unit 16 StoriesⅠ.阅读理解AWhen I met him, I had a lot of anger inside of me. I've lived my whole life in Spanish Harlem, but in my neighborhood, there are shootups all the time. I know kids who have been shot or beaten up. I have friends who were barred in prison. I could have ended up that way, too, but Mr. Clark wouldn't let that happen.Mr. Clark worked long hours, making sure I did my work. My grades rose. In fact, the scores of our whole class rose. One day, he took our class to see The Phantom of the Opera, and it was the first time some kids had ever been out of Harlem. Before the show, he treated us to dinner at a restaurant and taught us not to talk with our mouths full. We did not want to let him down.Mr. Clark was selected as Disney's 2000 Teacher of the Year. He said he would draw three names out of a hat; those students would go with him to Los Angeles to get the award. But when the time came to draw names, Mr. Clark said，“You're all going.〞On graduation day, there were a lot of tears. We didn't want his class to end. In 2001, he moved to Atlanta, but he always kept in touch. He started giving lectures about education, and wrote a bestselling book based on his classroom rules, The Essential 55. In 2003, Mr. Clark took some of us on a trip to South Africa to deliver school supplies and visit orphanages. It was the most amazing experience of my life. It's now my dream to one day start a group of women's clubs, helping people from all backgrounds.文章大意：本文是一篇写人记叙文。
2020版高考英语精准备考一轮北师大版讲义+练习：Book 6 Unit 16 含答案
基础知识默写(学生用书301～304页)[默写(一)]1.abandon v t.放弃，遗弃n.放任，放纵→abandoned adj.被抛弃的；废弃的；放荡的，堕落的2.occur v i.发生→occurrence n.发生3.particularly ad v.特别地；特定地→particular adj.特别的4.loss n.遗失，丢失→lose v t.使沉溺于；使迷路；遗失5.gather v i.& v t.聚集6.sorrow n.悲伤，难过7.sympathy n.同情→sympathetic adj.同情的8.burst v i.爆炸；闯，冲9.witness v.目击n.目击者10.tremble v i.颤抖，发抖11.authentic adj.原作的；真正的12.characteristic adj.典型的13.specific adj.详细的；特定的→specifically ad v.特别地；明确地14.significance n.重要性；意义→significant adj.重要的；重大的；显著的15.abnormal adj.反常的，不正常的→normal(反) adj.正常的，通常的→normally ad v.通常，一般16.vivid adj.生动的，逼真的→vividly ad v.生动地；强烈地17.origin n.起源，开端；出身→original adj.最初的；原先的18.admirable adj.令人钦佩的→admire v t.佩服，称赞→admiration n.佩服，称赞19.severe adj.严重的；严厉的20.restriction n.限制，约束→restrict v t.限制，约束e into view出现22.knock sb. over撞倒某人23.once upon a time从前24.block out堵住；挡住(光线)；忘掉，抹去25.in a way从某种程度上说26.on one’s side侧身27.split up (使)解散；决裂28.on the way to在去……的路上29.pay rise增加工资30.Now that Helen understood the key to language，she was very eager to learn more and use it as much as she could.既然海伦理解了语言之谜，她非常渴望学习更多的词语并且尽可能多地使用它们。
2020版北师大版高考英语总复习：第1部分 6 unit 16 stories
1．victim n．受害者2．criteria n．(pl.) (评判的)标准3．architecture n. 建筑4．authentic adj. 原作的，真正的5．monument n. 纪念碑，纪念堂6．sorrow n. 悲伤，难过7．vivid adj. 生动的，逼真的8．hardship n. 艰苦，困苦9．tease vt. 嘲笑，取笑10．superb adj. 出色的，卓越的11．former adj. 以前的12．precious adj. 宝贵的，珍贵的13．sweetness n. 甜蜜，温柔14．tense adj. 紧张的15．clumsy adj. 笨拙的；不得体的1．abandon vt. 放弃，遗弃2．witness v. 目击3．tremble vi. 颤抖，发抖4．loss n. 遗失，失去，丢失5．awesome adj. 令人敬畏的6．sympathy n. 同情7．burst vi. 爆炸；冲，闯8．specific adj. 详细的；特定的9．origin n. 起源，开端；出身10．severe adj. 严重的；严厉的11．stubborn adj. 倔强的，固执的12．complex adj. 复杂的13．breakthrough n. 突破，重大发现14．uncertain adj. 不确定的15．awkward adj. 笨拙的；令人不舒服的16．gather vi. & vt. 聚集1．preserve vt.保护，保存→preservation n．保护，保存2．occur vi.发生→occurrence n．发生3．particularly adv.特别地；特定地→particular adj.特别的；特定的；特有的4．significance n．重要性，意义→significant adj.重要的，重大的；影响深远的5．discourage vt.使泄气，使灰心→discouraging adj.令人沮丧的→discouraged adj.失去信心的→discouragement n．泄气→encouragement n．鼓励(反义词)6．suffering n．痛苦，困难→suffer v．遭受；患(某种病)7．admirable adj.令人钦佩的，极佳的→admire vt.佩服，称赞→admiration n．佩服，称赞8．restriction n．限制，约束→restrict vt.限制，约束→restricted adj.有限的，受限制的→restrictive adj.受限的9．unbearable adj.不能忍受的→bearable adj.可忍受的(反义词)→bear v．忍耐10．eager adj.渴望的，热衷的→eagerly adv.渴望地→eagerness n．渴望11．expand v．扩大，扩充→expansion n．扩大；膨胀12．warmth n．温暖→warm adj.温暖的→warmly adv.温暖地13．abnormal adj.反常的，不正常的→normal adj.正常的，通常的(反义词)→normally adv.通常，一般14．applaud vi. & vt.鼓掌→applause n．鼓掌15．apparent adj.明显的，显而易见的→apparently adv.显然地[用所给词的适当形式填空]1．She is not rich, but she is particular about her clothes. She likes red coats particularly．(particular)2．Please give a warm welcome to our guests.If we say “Hello”to them warmly，they will sense the warmthfrom our smile.(warm)3．The girl is eager to know something about the star.Now she is waiting eagerly outside the hall，from whose face we can see the eagerness．(eager)4．We should give the students much encouragement，for they will get discouraged when criticized too often.But now we should focus on discouraging them from smoking.(discourage)5．It’s hard to try to work in such a restricted space and the conditions restrict the children’s chances for play，so many people think life here is too restrictive．(restrict)1．come__into__view 出现2．knock__sb.over 撞倒某人3．once__upon__a__time 从前4．block__out 堵住5．in__a__way 从某种程度上说6．on__one’s__side 侧身7．split__up (使)解散；决裂8．name...after 以……的名字给某人/某物命名9．come__across 偶然遇见，偶然发现10．hold__up 支撑起；延误，推迟11．count__on 依靠12．figure__out 理解13．end__up 以……结束，以……告终14．put__up__with 容忍，忍受15．in__particular 特别，尤其16．refer__to 查阅；提到；涉及；提交17．on__the__way__to 在去……的路上18．pay__rise 增加工资[选用上面的短语填空]The other day I was walking in the street when I 1.came__across an old woman，who was lying on the ground.I came up to her and 2.figured__out that she had lost her way.It seemed that she couldn’t 3.put__up__with hunger，on such a cold morning 4.in__particular.She told me that she had no family and no person to 5.count__on．I decided to help her，so I took her to my home.1．as if引导表语从句Another man，lying on his side，looks as if he is trying to get up.【仿写】他在那里大声说着，他好像对世界上的事情无所不知。
北师大版2020高考英语一轮复习写作讲义【词汇营造亮点】
北师大版2020高考英语一轮复习写作讲义【词汇营造亮点】要想作文得高分，首先要让作文的亮点飞。
如果作文没有一点萤萤亮点，那作文只能在基础等级徘徊。
如何营造些许亮点，本部分从两大方面词汇、句式、18个角度给予细化讲解。
第一讲词汇营造亮点4角度扮亮词汇(一) 特别的爱给特别的你——名词名词属于实词，名词表示人、事物、地点或抽象概念的名称，名词同时也分为专有名词和普通名词。
名词用得好更能出众脱俗，让阅卷老师眼前一亮。
名词的种类：普通名词专有名词可数名词不可数名词专门指代某一人、物、地点等的名词个体名词集体名词物质名词抽象名词[典题1] (一般词)Now we have a chance to develop a greater understanding of each other.(高级词)Now we have an opportunity to develop a greater understanding of each other.现在我们有一个好机会，可以大大增进对彼此的了解。
[典题2] (一般词)There are four basic choices; they are described briefly below.(高级词)There are four basic alternatives; they are described briefly below.有四个基本的选择，简述如下。
高中阶段常见的名词及名词短语类写作高级词汇①机会 chance→opportunity②选择 choice→alternative③课程 course→curriculum④影响 effect→influence/impact⑤后果 result→consequence⑥缺点 shortcoming→drawback⑦方法way→approach⑧职业career→profession⑨建议advice→guidance⑩老人old people→the old/the elderly/the aged/senior citizens⑪青少年young people→youngsters/youths/adolescents⑫几天前a few days ago→the other day⑬一个表现好的孩子a child who behaves in a proper way→a wellbehaved child[专题过关训练]先用所给的词补全句子，然后对该词进行升级1．因此，我没有足够的时间去锻炼。
北师大版2020高考英语一轮复习写作讲义【扩展句子,充实文章】
北师大版 2020 高考英语一轮复习写作讲义【扩展句子，充实文章】不是不会写，而是不知写什么，尤其是面对越来越开放化的写作要点时，考生不善想象，不会发散，导致语句表达干瘪无物，直译要点，搜肠刮肚也凑不够词数，一脸窘态。
如何合理想象、扩充句式，让写作有血有肉，本部分从 4 个方面给予指导。
扩充策略 ( 一) 不走寻常路，靓句带你飞——追加成分高考英语书面表达不仅规定了写作内容，还明确规定了词数，并在评分标准中指出，如果“词数少于 80 和多于 120 的，从总分中减去 2 分”。
但在实际阅卷过程中，如果词数过少，扣掉的不止是 2 分。
因为篇幅过短，不能吸引阅卷老师细看以便查找诸如“高级词汇”“较高级结构”等“加分点”，自然影响得分档次。
在试题“注意”中有明确规定：“ 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯”。
这里既规定了词数，又指定了充实文章的方法，即“适当增加细节”。
“适当增加细节”其中很重要的一个方法就是——追加成分。
目的扩展句子，充实文章在要点句基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语(从句)、状语 ( 从句 )( 如目的、条件、原因、结果、方式等 ) 、非谓语结构、方法独立主格结构、举例等，使表达更丰满，内容更充实，主题更突出特色结构多变，句式多样[ 典例观摩悟法 ]1． ( 提醒演讲参赛选手) 要守时、讲卫生、守纪律。
Please arrive on time, keep quiet and don't litter around.→ Please arrive there on time,for whoever is latewon't be allowed to enter.It's badmanners to litter around.And always keep quietwhile waiting for your turn.[ 分析 ]原句虽然没有直译所给要点，且灵活化解了难点，但过于直白、语气较为生硬；而改写后的句子则进行了拓展，具体明确。
2020年北师大版高考英语知识点汇编
2020北师大版英语高考知识点集合手册目录2020北师大版英语高考知识点集合手册 (1)第一部分词法篇-动词 (2)专题1 动词的时态和语态 (7)专题2 非谓语动词 (21)专题3 情态动词和虚拟语气 (33)第二部分词法篇-名词、形容词和副词 (48)专题1 名词 (51)专题2 形容词和副词 (58)第三部分词法篇-代词、冠词和介词 (70)专题1 代词 (74)专题2 冠词 (84)专题3 介词 (91)第四部分句法篇-从句和句式 (105)专题1 定语从句 (109)专题2 名词性从句 (116)专题3 并列句和状语从句 (124)专题4 主谓一致和特殊句式 (133)附录构词法 (146)第一部分词法篇-动词考点一动词的时态和语态Ⅰ.语法填空考点聚焦考向1 一般时的主动语态考向2 被动语态Ⅱ.短文改错考点聚焦(每小题1处错误)考向1 文中前后时态不一致考向2 谓语动词的结构形式错误考点二非谓语动词Ⅰ.语法填空考点聚焦考向1 作定语考向2 作主语、宾语(补足语)或表语考向3 作状语考向4 祈使句及其他固定句式结构Ⅱ.短文改错考点聚焦(每小题1处错误)考向1 主动与被动的混用考向2 形容词化的现在分词与过去分词之间的混用考向3 固定结构以及平行结构中非谓语动词的形式错误考点三情态动词和虚拟语气Ⅰ.语法填空考点聚焦考向1 常见情态动词Ⅱ.短文改错考点聚焦(每小题1处错误)考向1 情态动词后动词形式的错用考向2 虚拟语气中情态动词或谓语动词形式的错用一、动词在语法填空中的考查在语法填空中，动词的考查主要考虑时态、语态、非谓语动词、语气、主谓一致等。
近三年全国卷最常考的谓语动词是一般过去时或者主语是第三人称单数的一般现在时，并会涉及到主谓一致与虚拟语气的考查，情态动词还未考过；被动语态常会涉及一般现在时或一般过去时的被动语态；而非谓语动词主要考查其基本形式：to do(即to＋原形)，doing(即ing形式)，done(即ed形式)。
2020届高考英语 考前冲刺精品复习讲义写作(七) 北师大版
2020;2020届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义（北师大版）：写作（七）典例请根据以下要点，适当发挥，写一篇不少于120词的英语说明文。
标题： Shopping on the Internet (网上购物)要点：1.网上购物已很普遍；2.网上购物的好处；3.网上购物的缺点。
【写作策略】1.仔细审题：(1)体裁：提纲式作文 (2)时态：一般现在时 (3)人称：第三人称。
2.确定结构：(1)概括网上购物现状—普遍。
(2)文章主体:——网上购物的好处与缺点。
3.筛选词汇：(shopping，advantages，on the Internet，with the development of 等)4.句型搜索：(All they need to do is...；The first...is that...等。
)5.组句成篇：(常用The first，the second等。
)【范文赏析】Shopping on the Internet①With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers，shopping on the Internet has become more and more common in our daily life. Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages，②of which the most important is perhaps its convenience.③People don’t have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.This is especially desirable to the old，the sick andthe busy people who cannot go to the shops in person.④All they need to do is to sit in front of the computer and click the mouse.⑤The goods they order will be delivered to them immediately.⑥However，shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages.⑦The first disadvantage is that the consumers cannot see the goods or try them on in person.Sometimes，the real goods may not be the same as what have been seen on the computer.⑧The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered.They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you.Once cheated，you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.【名师点评】★①开篇引出话题，比较级的叠用表明网上购物的发展趋势。
2020版北师大版高考英语总复习：第1部分 6 unit 16 stories
1．victim n．受害者2．criteria n．(pl.) (评判的)标准3．architecture n. 建筑4．authentic adj. 原作的，真正的5．monument n. 纪念碑，纪念堂6．sorrow n. 悲伤，难过7．vivid adj. 生动的，逼真的8．hardship n. 艰苦，困苦9．tease vt. 嘲笑，取笑10．superb adj. 出色的，卓越的11．former adj. 以前的12．precious adj. 宝贵的，珍贵的13．sweetness n. 甜蜜，温柔14．tense adj. 紧张的15．clumsy adj. 笨拙的；不得体的1．abandon vt. 放弃，遗弃2．witness v. 目击3．tremble vi. 颤抖，发抖4．loss n. 遗失，失去，丢失5．awesome adj. 令人敬畏的6．sympathy n. 同情7．burst vi. 爆炸；冲，闯8．specific adj. 详细的；特定的9．origin n. 起源，开端；出身10．severe adj. 严重的；严厉的11．stubborn adj. 倔强的，固执的12．complex adj. 复杂的13．breakthrough n. 突破，重大发现14．uncertain adj. 不确定的15．awkward adj. 笨拙的；令人不舒服的16．gather vi. & vt. 聚集1．preserve vt.保护，保存→preservation n．保护，保存2．occur vi.发生→occurrence n．发生3．particularly adv.特别地；特定地→particular adj.特别的；特定的；特有的4．significance n．重要性，意义→significant adj.重要的，重大的；影响深远的5．discourage vt.使泄气，使灰心→discouraging adj.令人沮丧的→discouraged adj.失去信心的→discouragement n．泄气→encouragement n．鼓励(反义词)6．suffering n．痛苦，困难→suffer v．遭受；患(某种病)7．admirable adj.令人钦佩的，极佳的→admire vt.佩服，称赞→admiration n．佩服，称赞8．restriction n．限制，约束→restrict vt.限制，约束→restricted adj.有限的，受限制的→restrictive adj.受限的9．unbearable adj.不能忍受的→bearable adj.可忍受的(反义词)→bear v．忍耐10．eager adj.渴望的，热衷的→eagerly adv.渴望地→eagerness n．渴望11．expand v．扩大，扩充→expansion n．扩大；膨胀12．warmth n．温暖→warm adj.温暖的→warmly adv.温暖地13．abnormal adj.反常的，不正常的→normal adj.正常的，通常的(反义词)→normally adv.通常，一般14．applaud vi. & vt.鼓掌→applause n．鼓掌15．apparent adj.明显的，显而易见的→apparently adv.显然地[用所给词的适当形式填空]1．She is not rich, but she is particular about her clothes. She likes red coats particularly．(particular)2．Please give a warm welcome to our guests.If we say “Hello”to them warmly，they will sense the warmthfrom our smile.(warm)3．The girl is eager to know something about the star.Now she is waiting eagerly outside the hall，from whose face we can see the eagerness．(eager)4．We should give the students much encouragement，for they will get discouraged when criticized too often.But now we should focus on discouraging them from smoking.(discourage)5．It’s hard to try to work in such a restricted space and the conditions restrict the children’s chances for play，so many people think life here is too restrictive．(restrict)1．come__into__view 出现2．knock__sb.over 撞倒某人3．once__upon__a__time 从前4．block__out 堵住5．in__a__way 从某种程度上说6．on__one’s__side 侧身7．split__up (使)解散；决裂8．name...after 以……的名字给某人/某物命名9．come__across 偶然遇见，偶然发现10．hold__up 支撑起；延误，推迟11．count__on 依靠12．figure__out 理解13．end__up 以……结束，以……告终14．put__up__with 容忍，忍受15．in__particular 特别，尤其16．refer__to 查阅；提到；涉及；提交17．on__the__way__to 在去……的路上18．pay__rise 增加工资[选用上面的短语填空]The other day I was walking in the street when I 1.came__across an old woman，who was lying on the ground.I came up to her and 2.figured__out that she had lost her way.It seemed that she couldn’t 3.put__up__with hunger，on such a cold morning 4.in__particular.She told me that she had no family and no person to 5.count__on．I decided to help her，so I took her to my home.1．as if引导表语从句Another man，lying on his side，looks as if he is trying to get up.【仿写】他在那里大声说着，他好像对世界上的事情无所不知。
高考英语 考前冲刺精品复习讲义写作(十六) 北师大版
高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义写作（十六）北师大版去年寒假我同父亲去乡下看望奶奶，我多年未回家乡，看到那儿发生了很大的变化。
这次故乡之行使我学到了不少东西。
我打算今后每两年回去一次。
学生习作·外教批改During my last winter holiday，I went to the1countryside with my father to visit my grandma with_my_father.2I found a_large_change great changes there.The first time I came_back3 returned，theyare_live4 were all living in dirty homes with dogs and ducks and any5 otheanimals.Now，6 But last winter when I returned, they hada_big_house_to_birth_chickens.7 They also have8 had some polesin_which_it_has9_some_fish fishponds.Every year，they sell it_and_have the fish for alot of money.A lot of villagers in my grandma’s village have10 had twostoreyed houses，evidencingthat their life11 lives becoming better_and_better12 had improved.I felt very happy. During my trip，I found they_are13 all the villagers friendly and hardworking.I think these characteristics are worth of learning.At the end of my trip，I told my father that I had_planned14 that_I_would_come_back planned to return every two years.He admitted15 agreed that it was a good idea., 旁批1．country或countryside前要加定冠词the。
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2020;2020届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义（北师大版）：写作（十
六）
去年寒假我同父亲去乡下看望奶奶，我多年未回家乡，看到那儿发生了很大的变化。
这次故乡之行使我学到了不少东西。
我打算今后每两年回去一次。
学生习作·外教批改
During my last winter holiday，I went to the1countryside with my father to visit my
grandma with_my_father.2
I found a_large_change great changes there.The first time I came_back3 returned，they
are_live4 were all living in dirty homes with dogs and ducks and any5 otheanimals.Now，6 But last winter when I returned, they had
a_big_house_to_birth_chickens.7 They also have8 had some poles
in_which_it_has9_some_fish fishponds.Every year，they sell it_and_have the fish for a
lot of money.
A lot of villagers in my grandma’s village have10 had twostoreyed houses，evidencing
that their life11 lives becoming better_and_better12 had improved.I felt very happy.
During my trip，I found they_are13 all the villagers friendly and hardworking.I think
these characteristics are worth of learning.
At the end of my trip，I told my father that I had_planned14 that_I_would_come_back
planned to return every two years.He admitted15 agreed that it was a good idea.
, 旁批
1．country或countryside前要加定冠词the。
2．注意词序。
要保证你的句子不会产生歧义。
原句的意思是你拜访与你父亲住在一起的祖母。
3．如果用come，就表示作者写此文时仍在家乡。
4．原句中的they are live是一个常见的错误，不符合英语的语法。
这里应该用过去进行时态。
5．你不是在说明数量，所以不必用any。
6．不是现在(now)，是去年冬天(last winter)。
7．这句的意思很不清楚，所以无法进行修改。
“他们有一幢大的房子养鸡”还是“他们造了一间很大的鸡舍让鸡住”？
8．注意保持时态一致！
9．这不是英语，是按中文字面翻译的。
参见改写后的句子。
10．虽然这个情况可能现在仍是真实的，但故事发生在去年冬天，所以要用过去时态。
11．你谈到的是村民们，而不只是一个人，所以life需要用复数形式。
12．使用更直接的语言。
improve比better and better更好。
高中水平还使用better and better
这个词组不合适。
13．改写后使宾语更清楚。
动词find的结构是：find someone＋形容词。
14．如果用过去完成时态(had planned)就意味着作者不再打算这样做了。
这里的打算发生
在告诉父亲的同时，所以只要用一般过去时态即可。
15．在这里用admit不正确。
它的意思是不情愿地同意某事是真实的。
参见改写后的句子。
虽然文章组织得当，题目要求也都在内容中体现出来，但词汇量不足以及时态的混淆降低了作文的等级。
为避免这些错误，写你知道的东西。
如果你不知道表达某种观点的词汇，就不要提到它。
想想其他可写的东西。
例如在这篇作文中，作者不应该提到池塘和鸡舍，因为他/她不清楚这些词的英文表达。
他应该挑自己熟悉的东西写，或者写一些更平常的东西。
高分作文秘诀之九：使用恰当的过渡语。
例如：
表示转折关系的过渡语：however，nevertheless，on the other hand，on the contrary，conversely表示递进关系的过渡语：in addition，besides，moreover，furthermore，what’s more，what’s worse，to make matters worse，the most important of all，worst of all，especially，in particular，on top of that 表示结果关系的过渡语：therefore，thus，consequently，as a result，that’s why...
表示顺序关系的过渡语：firstly，secondly，thirdly，lastly/finally/eventually，last but not least，to begin with，after that，meanwhile
表示总结的过渡语：in conclusion，in brief，in short，in a word，on the whole，to sum up
表示个人观点的过渡语：in my opinion，as far as I’m concerned，personally，as for me，to be frank
表示他人观点的过渡语：It is widely accepted that...；A commonly held idea is that...；It is taken for granted that...
最近，你和父母回到家乡。
你看到了家乡新建的一所学校，发现它与影集中父亲的母校的照片有很大的差别。
请你根据下面的一组图画，描述这两所学校的不同情况，并谈谈你的感想。
注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
The two pictures show how greatly my father’s hometown has changed in the past twenty years.
In the past，my father’s school was a big yard with a row of old houses.There was a flag pole standing alone in the yard.Several trees were planted around the houses.There was little sports equipment in it.The new school in my fat her’s hometown consists of a tall building and a large playground.All kinds of sports facilities can be seen on the playground.With trees and flowers in the school yard，it looks like a big garden.
It is clear that the living conditions in our country have changed greatly and so has children’s learning environment.。