高考应用文写作之建议信

应用文写作之建议信

我们文章出现的问题：

1.审题

2.用词，句法

3.语气

◇写作点拨◇

建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构。信的内容要包括写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力

通常的写作框架:

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第一段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，注意语气。(较好的学生范例如下：)范例一：Beautiful as the latest cellphones are, I’m afraid that it’s not suitable for you to change the cellphones

frequently.

范例二：As far as I know, you are always showing great interest in the fashionable cellphones and changing them frequently.

第二段：写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。

范例一：As a consumer, it’s expensive for us to buy the new product, which will add stress to our more, not only will playing cellphone take up most of your time to make you can not fix your mind on study,but also it will be harmful to your health.

What I want to emphasise is that you should not be addicted to changing cellphons but use it is high time that you should stop interesting in it.

范例二：In my opinion, the latest style cellphones are expensive and

changing them too often can cause a large expense for your family (will be a financial /economic burden on your family).What’s more, new cellphones will take you too much that case, you won’t focus on your study.

第三段：对提出的建议进行总结。要注意有礼貌，使读者容易接受。

I hope what I said can help you.

范文：Some teenagers think it’s cool to own a latest style , you can’t benefit more from it because it’s just a tool of communication or I think you should pay more attention to your study and life. )

◇词句模板◇

1．段首常用语：

(1)I am writing to express my views concerning…

(2)You have asked for my advice about…and I will try to make some suggestions.

2．表达“建议”常用语：

(1)I think the most suitable…for you is…

(2)I would like to suggest that…

(3)You'd better…/It's better to…

(4)As far as I am concerned…/In my opinion…

(5)For one thing…，for another…

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(6)If I we re you, I would…

(7)It seems to me that you could…

(8)I feel that it would be beneficial if …

(9)I would recommend that …

(10)You may consider doing …

(11)It would seem to me that you could …3．段尾常用语：

(1)I think it would be more beneficial if you could…

(2)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.

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(3)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions

practical/useful/helpful.